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  1. mynguyen3103

    mynguyen3103 Thành viên mới

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    Dear Mr.Vui
    I am My of ielts 26. Pls checks for me. thanks very much

    W1T2C1

    The diagram shows up-to-the-minute weather information collecting process of the Australia Bureau of Meteorology to give true weather forecasts. There are 4 stages: collecting information, analyzing and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and broadcasting.
    In the first stage, incoming information comes from satellite on air, radar on land and drifting buoy at sea. In the second stage, satellite produces satellite photos and helps draw synoptic chart, which is also created from data of drifting buoy and radar. Weather con***ion is also showed through radar signals of radar screen. At this stage, this incoming information will be analyzed to give weather forecasts. In the next stage, thanks to computer, this forecast will be combined to prepare the broadcast. At last, weather forecast is broadcasted widely through TV, radio or recorded announcement.
    *****m up, giving a reliable weather forecast is a complicated process which demands a lot of modern technologies and good cooperation among these steps.
    W2T2C1
    Because of unequal distribution of wealth, rich countries have far more advanced living con***ions than poor ones. Whether or not rich nations are required to share their wealth among poorer ones is a complex and divisive question. To my way of thinking, poor nations, which have such low income that they are lack of food and education, should be supported by wealthy nations for following reasons.
    Firstly, poor countries now have to face up *****ch many big problems that they can not solve themselves. Famine, which causes death of millions of people, takes place every year in Africa. In ad***ion to that, poor countries in Asia and Africa lag behind developed countries in every way such as technology, education system, health services,õ?ƯWhilst investment capital flows into poor nations in small scale, they need more and more supports from rich ones by being provided such things as food, education, health care,õ?Ư
    Secondly, economic prosperity of most of wealthy nations has been historically provenance of poorer nationsõ?T resources, which rich countries exploited without paying during wars. So, it is reasonable for poor nations, which were dispossessed of their resources to get a part of benefit from rich nations.
    Thirdly, helping poorer nations to develop is a way of helping well-to-do nations to broaden business markets and their influence all over the world.
    However, it is highly necessary for the governments of poorer nations to understand that they should not rely too much on rich countriesõ?T wealth share to develop. Inner resources of poor nations are the most important things to get through tough time. Passive role of poor nationsõ?T governments in taking care of their citizens will hold back economic development.
    In conclusion, on the one hand wealthy nations should be responsible of distributing their wealth among poorer ones, but on the other hand poorer nations should take the initiative to look after their citizens.
  2. hanchan

    hanchan Thành viên mới

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    thua thay ,em la Dao Thuy Hang ,o lop ielts47
    Day la phan dat cau cua em:
    a spark, a flint : how fire leapt to life
    1.the discovery of computer was the greatest step in science and life .
    2.humanity?Ts invention are all of technology towards a life-enhancing.
    3.The control of fire became more efficient after invention of matchs.
    4.Fire lighting by gas is popularized but extremely dangerous.
    5.19th century industry was revolutionised by machine inventions.
    6.Paper date back to several years before Christian era in chine.
    7.Nile was a devine river of primitive Egyptian.
    8.Chocopie maker marketed them product as ?ochocopie-you and mê?.
    9.Vietnam was lagged behind the world in culture,economy,science and technology in several centuries.
    10.The quest for a new style-can attract listener- is difficult for modern mucsic bands.
    Zoo conservation programmers
    1.One of Dan tri?Ts recent newspaper caused me some irritation,so patently did it writer rather mediocre.
    2.Ho Chi Minh ,all of His life ,devoted for the VietNam racê?Tfreedom.
    3.She persuaded her husband to given smoke.
    4.She might not be forgiven for being slightly skeptical about dubios activities of her husband.
    5.My parents put fully faith into me.
    6.A series of parks is created as place of entertainment.
    7.Even without futher extremely investment you might as well study English well.
    8.Today,?lovê? become the pupil ?~s buzzword.
    9.He isn?Tt aware of his behavior when murder.
    10.Foreign universitys held meeting on subject:award when go on a study tour.
    Right and left handness in human
    1.Human ,virtually alone among all animal species ,are aware of themselves.
    2.Neither handness nor display distint of another animal ,but human.
    3.Brain enables body to active.
    4.Parents?Ts advices must be at work with their childrens.
    5.Children are involve behaviour?Ts their parents.
    6.Press is towards freedom of speech.
    7.Human,for century,lived in a world designed *****it male.
    8.It should be no surprise that children ?"lost parents ?~s love-will be bad.
    9.Today,human forced to live in bad enviroment.
    10.Activity of industrial factories affect enviroment.
  3. Himmler

    Himmler Thành viên mới

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    Thầy sửa giúp em với
    1. Production status and consumption of compost in Vietnam.
    The composting is to effectively reprocess the potential organic wastes into the non-pollution products fertilizing the soil. This process increases the recovery rate of recyclable materials and more effectually contributes to the municipal solid wastes management. In Vietnam, some facilities are currently being operated, but assessment data on their expense of production as well as performance is not available. The materials for these facilities in some areas such as Caudien (Hanoi city, capacity of 140 tons/day), Hocmon (HCMC, 240 tons/day), and Thuyphuong (Hue city, 159 tons/day) mainly include the un-classified municipal solid wastes; therefore, their products are difficult to be sellable because they usually contain bits of glass and metals
    2. Surveying Bac Ninh compost market
    The compost market survey is targeted to collect data for designing Phu Lang Solid Waste Treatment and Landfill Zone. The survey of compost consumption will be useful to calculate suitable capacity of the plant as well as primarily assess the financial resources and readiness for buying of the inhabitants in the project area. Selected objects are people, groups, and agencies or organizations that have directly used the compost or have had a lot of experience in waste treatment in general and the compost processing in particular. Those comprise: (i) the farmers; (ii) the farmer societies/co-operatives; (iii) the agriculture management agencies; (iv) Public park and greenery Co., ltd; (v) the scientists and scholars.
    The study method is deeply interviewing method through the questionnaire. Time for interview is about 15-20 min.
    Study area is Bacninh province. Commencement time is July, 2008.
    3. The Study?Ts results
    The consultancy interviewed 5 groups of objects by 50 questionnaires, with 10 questionnaires for each group. The questionnaires were suitably complied for each object, and the collected information focused on major affairs including: assessment of the most apposite compost technology in Vietnam?Ts con***ion; the compost demand in Bacninh province and the surrounding areas; the potential of the compost market.
    The aerobic-composting, SERAPHIN, and ASC technology are considered to be the most suitable for the Bacninh solid waste treatment and compost processing factory. The results showed dominant advantages and high compatibilities with Vietnam con***ions of the technologies mentioned above.
    While evaluating the current consumption of compost, most of interviewed objects straightforwardly conceded the high demand for compost in the Red River Delta and Bacninh in particular. In fact, the compost?Ts quality is not high because presence of a lot of impurities remains in the final products, and product marketing is very slow and ineffective; as consequence, the people still don?Tt realize environmental usefulness of these products, which leads sale to be unprogressive. However, most of interviewed scientists estimated the actual compost consumption was about 20,000 to 50,000tons a year; for this reason, the sale of these products is very satisfactory.
    It?Ts necessary that the compost?Ts quality needs to be strengthened; and the products also needs to be fostered more drastically. As for improvement of the quality, the suggestions emphasized classification of solid wastes should be originally intensified to limit presence of impurities such as metals, glass, porcelain which could lower product quality. In ad***ion, classification also reduces pollutants and heavy metals and increases the compost?Ts capacity of humi***y keeping and thus to amplify compost absorbability of the plant.
    For the product marketing, advertisement of these products has not been cared fully until now. The objects pointed out the strict requirement for environmental protection and sustainable development tended increasingly, so the compost would be potential product replacing the current chemical fertilizer. Moreover, the compost doesn?Tt adversely impact on environment, and it contributes the ad***ional solution to treatment of solid waste which is difficult to settle at present. The propaganda toward the inhabitants for environmental advantage of the product is very important. If improvement of product quality and marketing are conducted simultaneously, then they are willing to pay for these products.
    Bài 2
    After two months of post-graduation, Miss. Yen, the ex-student of Vietnam National Economy University, held the record for the shortest working-time in her company. The first working day, she attended the company?Ts meeting whose subject matter was to inform everybody about the difficult con***ions the company is facing now, so each department will cut down at least one staff. Although the company has just two staffs, it fired seven. In the current bad situation, Hai Yen?Ts case is not occasional. Many people who are fresh from school meet difficulties in finding jobs for them. Others are working with the anxious mentality, for they couldn?Tt know when they will be fired. FPT has decided to cut down 10 % of their workforce that is equal to 1000 people lately. DongNai XYZ Company also intends to cut back more than 2000 people in year of 2008.The office of a large constructional company in Ha Noi effectuated flexible working-time policy, so each staff will work alternately day by day. At other Hanoi construction and design company, its leadership plans to lower the salary in circumstance of goods?Ts price be getting higher and higher?
    Được himmler sửa chữa / chuyển vào 16:25 ngày 12/09/2008
  4. nganxuanan

    nganxuanan Thành viên mới

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    1. You must been a lexicographer , whenever I visit your home I always see you at a desk with weighty tomes , nothing can make you stop poring over it .
    2. If you want to be a fortune-teller ,you have to make pronoucement on things that can happen in future.
    3. To know the finer nuances of meaning , It takes too long time and a long process , some what this work will drive you become a bespectacled person.
    4. I donâ?Tt know a lot of him , but he gives me a feel for how he is being trusted at here .
    5. The incorporating morden life into novels its is no surprising.
    6. Hoa shows me how to open this computer without complaints.
    7. Hoa shows me how she is good at convincing others.

  5. mynguyen3103

    mynguyen3103 Thành viên mới

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    Em chào thầy!!
    Em là Nguyen Trà My, ielts 26.
    Lần trước em có gửi 2 bài viết, thầy đã gửi vào hòm thư của lớp trang 46b nhưng em thấy không có sự thay đổi nào so với bản gốc.Thầy xem lại hộ em nhé. Thầy sửa giúp em bài viết này với ạ. Em cảm ơn thầy.
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    The chart and the graph below show us a few sets of data about British consumption of fast foods, which comprise hamburgers, fish and chips, pizza.
    The chart gives information about expense on fast foods per week by income groups. High income people spend the greatest expenses on hamburgers and pizza among 3 income groups with about 40 pence and 20 pence respectively. Fish and chips cost this group the least with 15 pence. Although average income group?Ts expen***ure on hamburgers is at the peak point of over 30 pence among fast foods, fish and chips which rank second cost the most among income groups with 25 pence. We can see that expen***ure on fast foods goes down with the decrease of income. Apart from fish and chips with expense of approximately 19 pence, low income group spends half in comparison with high income one.----<Em đang băn khoăn không biết nên dùng thì hiện tại hay quá khứ ở đây>---
    Consumption of fast foods during 1970 and 1990 is illustrated on the graph. In 1970, the largest quantity of fast foods consumed was 300 grams of fish and chips. Hamburgers and pizza ranked second and third respectively. But from 1970 onward, fish and chips?T consumption went down gradually to 200 grams in the year 1985.Then, from 1985, there was an increasing tendency for this kind of fast food. In contrast to that, hamburgers?T consumed grams grew quickly from under 100 in 1970 to over 500 in 1990. And pizza?Ts eaten amount rose more slowly to about 300 grams in 1990, far below from the levels of hamburgers.
    From the chart and the graph, we can see that hamburgers are taking the lead both in expen***ure and consumption among fast foods.
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    ttb1988 Thành viên mới

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    thầy ơi sắp tới có lớp ielts nào sắp mở không?em muốn cải thiện ỉình độ tiếng anh bê bết của mình quá.
  7. nganxuanan

    nganxuanan Thành viên mới

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    From Kim ngân ielts47 to thầy Vui
    1. Approximately , a quarter to ten pm, when I came into Nam?Ts house he was leaving in there a wallet with full money.
    2. Hoa looks very big . Her weight ups to 90 pounds . She was poor girl .
    3. Searching for a word by looking up in a dictionary is waste time . Today, professor advise us to use a computer database .
    4. After the sifting out process they described you as the best candidate . They allow you to choose an appropriate job *****it for your capacity.
    5. The length of Hoa?Ts fields was 12 times the depth of this pool. It showed people who want to proposal her how rich Hoa?Ts was. By intuitively think , I guessed that Hung , an ugly man has never dared to ask her for marrying him . Moreover his rank interfered him to approach Hoa . So, he returned to flirt with the other girls . His is not worth a penny . And this is a sign to warn girls had better descreetly with all of young boy .
    6. Existing writen corpus often are collected by bespectacled people who love to pore over weighty tomes .
    7. Workers often strike to irritate bosses and drive them return the negotiating table .
    8. The centrifugal force threw me out of the motorbike because I had driven too fast . I could not control myself . Finally, I am still living.
    9. I prevented you from eating this meal , It did not mean I hated you , It is just only thing that I must have made sure you did not died.
    10. Many professors found out that an UFO has cropped up over and over again . But we can not access it . people made pronouncement on it as if an extreme large stone
  8. TranNgocVui

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    Trang số 46b, 50, thầy đã sửa xong và chuyển vào hòm thư của 4 lớp. Mọi thành viên trong lớp nên tải bài về đọc để rút kinh nghiệm.
    Trong hòm thư của lớp có chương trình du lịch đi Cố Viên Lầu.
    Mọi người đọc tham khảo nhé.
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    CHƯƠNG TRÌNH DU LỊCH HÀ NỘI ?" NINH BÌNH ?" HÀ NỘI
    Dành cho học viên các lớp TOEFL & IELTS
    (Thời gian: 20 & 21/09/2008)

    Ngày 01 (20/09)
    Sáng: 5:00 xe khởi hành từ Hà Nội đi Ninh Bình. Tr ên đ ư ờng d ừng ở Ph ủ L ý - H à Nam đ ể ăn s áng.
    Du thuyền tham quan Khu du lịch Tràng An - một quần thể hang động vốn được mệnh danh là "Hạ Long cạn"(Xem KDL Tràng An: http://www.ninhbinhtourism.com.vn/modules.php?name=News&op=viewst&sid=293 )
    Ăn trưa tại nhà hàng.
    Chiều: 13:30 đi tham quan chùa Bái Đính ?" ngôi chùa lớn nhất Việt nam hiện đang được xây dựng (Xem chùa Bái Đính: . Xe đưa đến Khu du lịch Cố Viên Lầu ?" nơi quy tụ 22 căn nhà cổ đến từ khắp các làng quê thuộc đb Bắc Bộ (Xem Cố Viên Lầu: http://www.ninhbinhtourism.com.vn/modules.php?name=News&op=viewst&sid=494 )
    Nhận nhà nghỉ. Ăn tối.
    Tối: đốt lửa trại và tham gia chương trình game show sôi động tại Cố Viên Lầu.

    Ngày 02 (21/09)
    Sáng: 6:30 ăn sáng. Du thuyền đi tham quan Tam Cốc ?" Bích Động - vốn được mệnh danh là "Nam thiên đệ nhị động"(Xem Tam Cốc - Bích Động: http://www.ninhbinhtourism.com.vn/modules.php?name=News&op=viewst&sid=83 )
    Ăn trưa tại Cố Viên Lầu.
    Chiều: 13:00 xe đưa về Hà Nội.
    Trên đường về ghé thăm Nhà thờ đá Phát Diệm - một quần thể kiến trúc kiểu đình chùa Phương Đông kết hợp với lối kiến trúc Gôtic của nhà thờ Phương Tây (Xem nhà thờ : http://www.sucsongmoi.com.vn/dulich/vanhoalichsu/nhathodaphatdiem/SSMTVShow_view
    18:00 xe về đến Hà Nội. Kết thúc chương trình du lịch.

    ------------------***--------------------

    CHI PHÍ: 400 k/người, bao gồm:
    - Phương tiện vận chuyển (xe ô tô chất lượng cao, thuyền tham quan)
    - Lưu trú: 70k/người (2- 3 người/nhà cổ, ở khu Cố Viên Lầu)
    - Ăn uống: 50k/bữa x 3 bữa = 150k (c ó c ác m ón đ ặc s ản th ịt d ê n ổi ti ếng c ủa Ninh B ình)
    - Vé tham quan.
    - Bảo hiểm du lịch.
    - Đốt lửa trại và game show.

    LƯU Ý:
    Chi phí tăng từ 350k lên 400k vì trong giá cũ chưa bao gồm chi phí xe cộ. Chi phí đóng góp có thể thay đổi một chút tùy thuộc vào số lượng người đăng ký. Càng đông, càng rẻ. Tuy nhiên, chương trình của chúng ta bao gồm tất cả các điểm hấp dẫn nhất của Ninh Bình nên bạn yên tâm vì đây là mức giá rẻ nhất có thể rùi.
    Nếu bạn có băn khoăn gì về độ hấp dẫn của các điểm mình sẽ khám phá, hãy via các đường link ở trên?=> Well, how excellent they are!
    Bạn có thể "mang" theo 01 người thân yêu hay bạn bè và chỉ cần số tiền bạn đóng góp là double. Nhưng nếu đi một mình, bạn sẽ có nhiều cơ hội để làm quen với những beautiful girls và handsome boys hơn.
    Trong suốt cuộc hành trình sẽ có nhiều chương trình game show lý thú, sôi động với nhiều quà tặng hấp dẫn. Vì vậy, bạn nhớ phải chuẩn bị sức khỏe tốt và tinh thần dồi dào để tham gia. Với English, bạn đã học hết sức; thì với Game show hãy chơi hết mình bạn nhé.
    Về 2 bữa ăn sáng tự túc: bạn có thể thưởng thức những đặc sản bánh cuốn Phủ Lý và của khu Cố Viên Lầu; hay tự chuẩn bị trước. Tùy bạn chọn lựa. Nước uống thì thầy Vui nói sẽ tài trợ.
    Chương trình sẽ bao gồm các hoạt động leo núi và khám phá hang động. Vì vậy, bạn nhớ chuẩn bị trang phục và giày dép hợp lý.
    Mình đang cần một bạn nam làm MC đồng dẫn trong Game Show, khuấy động phong trào. Bạn nào đủ năng nổ, nhiệt tình hãy đăng ký với mình ngay nhé.


    *** N ẾU B ẠN TRẺ, NĂNG ĐỘNG, THÍCH KHÁM PHÁ, GIAO LƯU?TH Ì?BẠN CÒN CHỜ GÌ NỮA! HÃY MAU ĐĂNG KÍ ĐỂ "XÍ" CHỖ TRÊN XE NÀO***

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    *Hạn cuối cùng đăng ký là thứ 2, ngày 15/09. Hạn chót nộp tiền là thứ 5, ngày 18/09.

    *Các thông tin đăng ký gồm:
    - Họ tên (đầy đủ)
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    - Lớp TOEFL? IELTS?
  10. concut

    concut Thành viên mới

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    Em là Nguyễn Phương Thảo lớp IELTS 38-47, thầy sửa hộ em với ạ:
    1. One of television?Ts recent service messages advertisement caused me some irritation.
    2. Bejing Olympic 2008 openning ceremony distorted patently reality that the child singed mainly was faked.
    3. Headline: ?o Let?Ts protect our enviroment? was bordered with illustrations of many forests destroyed.
    4. Many journalists still go on to extol the prizes that Michal Phels won in the Beijing Olympic.
    5. The rather mediocre record on rose?Ts essential oil didn?Tt prove how to extract it in industry con***ion.
    6. Customers are sometime slightly sceptical about the quality and prices of petrol in filling station.
    7. Dance hall were originally created as places of entertainment, however they were also places that concentrated many social evils.
    8. VietNam?Ts inflation rate didn?Tt seriously arise until the economic recession in America.
    9. This year, a series of world conferences about global problems took place.
    10. The phrase ?o 8X and 9X generation? became the young?Ts buzzword.
    11. The term?document procedure? has been clearly defined in ISO 9000: 2000.
    12. Her mother estimates that there are about 100 clothes in her wardrobe.
    13. If you buy the Television Magazine, you?Tll capable of participating in ?o To choose an accurate price? program.
    14. I believe that 1000 $ is a serious underestimate of his salary.
    15. Yesterday, police found a number of places masquerading as karaoke bar.
    16. In 5 years of studying in Hanoi, he discovered fresh motel on almost a weekly.
    17. The case of Thai Ha?Ts Religious sect occurred by exploiting the naïve faith of followers.
    18. These chickens have been carefully examined before being sold in the supper market.
    19. The criterion for appearing on interview shortlist might merely be that candidates must speak English influently.
    20. Working on the premise that the 135 capital resource must be used fairly but again the fact don?Tt support the theory.
    21. The using pavements to carry on business for years was protected by the local councils.
    22. One is obliged to reflect upon the food safety standard before selling to customers.
    23. I have to persuade my parents to improve my financial situation.
    24. The helmet wearing policy can hardly be looked upon as resounding successes.
    25. Viet Nam?Ts recent football situation without professional manegement, this is pretty slow progress, and along way of Southeast Asia champion target.

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