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Em là Minh Đức e48. Em xin nộp bài writing
Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;} Nowadays, TV and internet become the important communication facilities. They are very useful for work, entertainment, etc. We can’t deny their benefits in modern life. But everything has a good side and a bad side, and they are no exception. In many countries parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using internet.

I absolutely agree with this idea. In fact, the young people spend too much their time for TV, games online, etc. Firstly, the major cause of this problem is there are too many kind of fascinating entertainment. The children can do many things through they don’t go anywhere. They can watch the movie, buy something online or play games on their computer. They also make some friend on Facebook, a popular social network on internet. Or they can chat through Skype, a software allow people contact with each others easily.

Secondly, in my personal opinion, it’s parent’s control. The modern life is so fast and busy which mean that parents don’t have much time *****pervise their children. Besides, the information explosion and the development of multimedia systems make many convenient con***ions to reach. The young people can watch TV and use the internet as much as they want. As the result, they spend more and more free time on their computer or in front of their TV.

In my opinion, parents need concerned more about this problem because it will affect their children’s education and health. They must spend more time for the children to talk or play with them. Sometimes, they can go out together.

Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the children are spending so many times for TV and internet. We need to solve this problem clearly.

chị ơi em Diệu Linh E48 nộp bài ạ

In many countries parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using the internet.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Along with the development of society , more and more problems are bought to our attention, one of which is that the parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using the internet. There are many reasons that can verify this. In this essay, I will give some reasons and few solutions to solve this problem.

From my own perspective, the main reasons of this is that they worry about the harmful effects of the media bring to them as affecting health and learning time of their children.In fact, scientists of Pittsburgh School of Medicine(USA) also concluded that boys watch more television and playing computer games face a high risk of depression when they reach adulthood.Because if you spend much time in watching television or the internet ,the time for social activities,sports and intellect will be shorter.For example, the famous newspaper names dantri.com.vn reports that children age 2 watch television too much ,resulting in impairing learning in later,especially in math,they have low average scores.

After careful consideration of the above reasons,I suggest some solutions to settle this problem.For instance, you limit the time using television and the internet of children such as writing up the table notes that the children only watch television after the the completion of exercises and some work classifieds in home.In ad***ion to this, you should encourage children to read books ,explore the natural environment, sports,music,painting,etc to promote creativity and imagination, and also help reduce the need of using television or the internet.

From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that the parents need to manage time in using television or the internet appropriately to their children can develop in all aspects in the best way.

UPDATE bài cho lớp E49 thứ 2 (15.08.11) & thứ 3 (16.08.11):
Thứ 2: Lớp học bài Writing Unit 3 - lớp mang quyển IELTS SKILLS
Thứ 3: Học tiếp bài Unit 4 IELTS SKILLS (Task 1) - chữa loạt Gap-filling & học bài 1-10 IELTS LISTENING [r2)]

UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 09/2011:​

[r32)][r32)][r32)]LỚP KĨ NĂNG TỔNG QUÁT + pre. IELTS:<FONT class=imageattach face=[/IMG]ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
@} Giúp bạn lấy lại từ gốc rễ kiến thức Ngữ pháp – Phát âm – Từ vựng – Thao tác dịch thuật cơ bản trong tiếng Anh
@} Là khóa học chuẩn mẫu cho đối tượng ôn thi Cao học & Nghiên cứu sinh
@} Là khóa học kĩ năng dìu dắt những người bắt đầu học ôn IELTS
@} Là khóa học hiệu quả, học viên sẽ học dưới sự nghiêm khắc của GV kiểm tra, đôn đốc, thu bài vở hàng ngày, kết hợp học và chữa bài online

Trong quý 3/2011, Mrs. Thuy_ED có dự kiến khai giảng lớp SKILLS + pre.IELTS mã số E54 & E55 với lịch như sau:

[r32)] Lớp mã E54
* Thời gian học: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 3; 5.30-7.00pm thứ 4; 7.30-9.00pm thứ 6
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 20/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 4,5 tháng
* Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 4,5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

[r32)] Lớp mã E55
* Thời gian học: 2.00-4.00pm thứ 7 & Chủ nhật
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 24/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
* Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

[r32)][r32)][r32)] Lớp IELTS TARGET BAND 7 + (Mã: E53)

ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
@} GV cung cấp tất cả kĩ năng làm bài thi từng kĩ năng thành phần trong kì thi IELTS
@} GV luyện tập cho HV nói trôi chảy, phát âm chuẩn, như phong cách người bản xứ
@} GV cùng HVthực nghiệm, chia sẻbài viết IELTS
@} GV cùng HV luyện tập làm các đề thi IELTS cập nhật nhất
@} GV cung cấp cho HV theo yêu cầu nguồn tài liệu ôn thi IELTS dồi dào, phong phú nhất

[r32)]Lớp mã E53:
* Thời gian học: 3 buổi 1 tuần gồm: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 4 và 8.00 - 9.30am Chủ nhật + buổi học Speaking nhóm nhỏ HV được chọn giờ khi đăng kí: 5.30pm thứ 5 hoặc 10am thứ 7 (lưu ý: giờ chọn ưu tiên cho những HV đăng kí sớm nhất, trong trường hợp thời điểm bạn đăng kí, 1 ngày học lựa chọn đã full, bạn phải chấp nhận ngày còn lại)
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 07/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
*Học phí: 9.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

ĐỂ GHI DANH VÀO LỚP HỌC:
Các bạn vui lòng qua đóng học phí trực tiếpvới GV: Mrs. Thuy_ED tại địa chỉ lớp học: 103-khu 18- Ngõ 108 Lò Đúc – HN (trước khi qua các bạn hẹn trước qua ĐT để tránh vào giờ dạy của GV)
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Chú ý: Tất cả các lớp nhận những học viên đăng kí = đóng học phí sớm nhất và không nhận thêm khi lớp đã đủ sĩ số.
Cảm ơn sự quan tâm theo dõi của các bạn! Hy vọng được học cùng các bạn với tinh thần hợp tác [r2)][r2)][r2)]

Em Nga lớp E48 nộp bài writing

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[FONT=&quot]Perhaps this is because of the simple fact that, nowaday, the Internet is developing faster and faster. It brings a number of uses for people. For example, you can chat or talk with everyone on the global, or you can update information about what is happening around your life, or you can relax by playing a huge of game onlines or listening music. Besides, many kinds of TV programme is generated, which attract children who like something is new, violent and strange. As a results, children use their time to watch TV or online. It is not good for them because they do not have enough time to do other activities. They watch TV and use the Internet all times instead of learning or taking part in the outdoor activities. Moreover, children who easily is affected by enviroment surrounding will react and repeat which they see and listen. It is obvious that watching TV or using the Internet much is harmful for the growth of children.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]From my own perspective, all of most parents must advice their children not spend much time for TV or the Internet. Children should take more time learning or helping their parents house working.Sport and outdoor activities also help children to grow healthily.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]From what has been dicussed, one can reach only this conclusion that children must be brought up all aspects , not only spend time watching TV or using the Internet.[/FONT]

Em Phạm Hải Liên- E48 nộp bài writing task 2 ạ, chị chữa hộ em chị nhé

Among with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that children are spending much amount of their free time on watching TV or using the internet. What are causes of this problem and what should parents do to prevent their children from this? There are questions that we will discuss in the essay below.
From my perspective, one of the primary cause is that parents are too busy at work earning money *****pport their family so they have no much time looking after their children and playing with them. Further more, the other cause of this also is shorting of the helpful guideline of parents to take part in various outdoor activities. As a result of this pressure, their children spend all day long sitting in front of wide screen watching cartoon films or playing games.
In order to prevent those things, personally I think that parents should give suitable solutions, such as limited watching time of their children to no more than 2 hours per day and let them have a break after every thirty minutes watching TV or surfing the Internet. In ad***ion to this, the parents should encourage children to attend different outside activities, which are good for their health, for instance visiting parks, walking, playing soccer or badminton with friends or family’s members and mental activities like chess and puzzle.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that if parents pay much more attention to guide for their children the way using reasonable “screen time”, those children will be living more healthy both mentally and physically.

Hic dạo này e lười biếng và bị một số chuyện ảnh hưởng đến học tập nên nghỉ học nhiều và sao nhãng nhiều, bắt đầu từ hum nay e sẽ lại tập trung và đi học đầy đủ ạ. Hì, [r32)]

E Vũ Ngọc E48 nộp bài ạ!!!
Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that in many countries, children spend most of their time watching TV and using the Internet. In fact, parents very worry about it. There are many reasons that can verify this.
The first of all, Games online have become a must have for many of today’s children. The games can be very exciting and are highly entertaining. Unfortunately, if children spend most of their time sitting in front of a computer or TV playing games, then they rarely develop good communication skills or learn how to interact with others in real life.
The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that the children glued to their television or computer screen will cause adverse effects such as obesity, myopia or other refractive disorders, autism, do not know how to communicate with society ... Besides the risk of formation of personality, because children see the violence of the film on television will be aggressive gestures ... and children can be a nightmare, bad influences to sleep. Some acts of protest on television and internet education that children can imitate such as smoking, drinking, drug use, violence, war, fiction ... that the child does not know the difference between truth and virtual, good and bad. The ***ual act like characters in movies can lead to early *** and unwanted pregnancies in their teens.
From my own perspective, watching TV and using the Internet have many useful for children if children spent logical time for them. Television and internet helps a child to extent his or her range of interests. Children can find out many new things and make many exiting discoveries for themselves. In ad***ion to these practical benefits television improves children's vocabulary, their memory and gives them the opportunity to gain more knowledge. It is very essential for a child. I think that in our modern world, children must learn faster and use all contemporary technology in order *****cceed.
From what has been discussed above, we can see that watching television and using internet are useful for children, parents should note that the selection of educational programs, not violent and ***ually. Parents should be watching TV with children to explain and comment on the strengths and weaknesses of the characters in the program. In ad***ion to the time watching television, electronic games, video, internet, parents should encourage children to read books, explore the natural environment, sports, music, art activities, crafts, assembled with games to promote creativity and imagination of children.


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Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that in many countries, children spend most of their time watching TV and using the Internet. In fact, parents very worry about it. There are many reasons that can verify this.
The first of all, Games online have become a must have for many of today’s children. The games can be very exciting and are highly entertaining. Unfortunately, if children spend most of their time sitting in front of a computer or TV playing games, then they rarely develop good communication skills or learn how to interact with others in real life.
The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that the children glued to their television or computer screen will cause adverse effects such as obesity, myopia or other refractive disorders, autism, do not know how to communicate with society ... Besides the risk of formation of personality, because children see the violence of the film on television will be aggressive gestures ... and children can be a nightmare, bad influences to sleep. Some acts of protest on television and internet education that children can imitate such as smoking, drinking, drug use, violence, war, fiction ... that the child does not know the difference between truth and virtual, good and bad. The ***ual act like characters in movies can lead to early *** and unwanted pregnancies in their teens.
From my own perspective, watching TV and using the Internet have many useful for children if children spent logical time for them. Television and internet helps a child to extent his or her range of interests. Children can find out many new things and make many exiting discoveries for themselves. In ad***ion to these practical benefits television improves children's vocabulary, their memory and gives them the opportunity to gain more knowledge. It is very essential for a child. I think that in our modern world, children must learn faster and use all contemporary technology in order *****cceed.
From what has been discussed above, we can see that watching television and using internet are useful for children, parents should note that the selection of educational programs, not violent and ***ually. Parents should be watching TV with children to explain and comment on the strengths and weaknesses of the characters in the program. In ad***ion to the time watching television, electronic games, video, internet, parents should encourage children to read books, explore the natural environment, sports, music, art activities, crafts, assembled with games to promote creativity and imagination of children.

Chị ơi, e là Hà E 51. sao trong cả 2 file chữa speaking e đều k thấy bài e đâu ca

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In many countries parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using Internet.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest ?

- Television and Internet are as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school, studies consistently show that the average child spends almost as much time watching TV and using Internet as they does in school. The reasons are given blow.
- First and fore most , television & internet, with is wide availability and rich media with image and sound, it often requires our full attention or it more attraction to us than are our daily lives .It difficult to ignore and even seductive in it appeal. Secondly, the best influence on tour children is that television and internet reduce stress. It can give they a broader window on the world. Watching films, they can escape our own problem for a little while. Also, sometime movie show positive ways to resolve problems we all face. While TV and movie shouldn’t be way to hide from life, sometime they can help children cope.
- Some solutions to these problems :
There is many ways of amusement for children to select after the working time nowadays. You can select to meet your friends, to accompany your parents or take part in some sports activities. Watching TV at home is simple one way to live. It is too narrowly to regard TV as one main reason to damage relationship among friends and family just because some people has spent a lot of time on it. Scientists say that a child should not watch TV more then 40 minutes successively. For example, parents should always made us have a break after watching TV more then half an hour and let our eyes rest for several minutes before turning on the TV again. Maybe it is the best solution. Parents and their children need to spend time together in order to enhance family relationship and close family ties. This is the most compelling reason on why should parents spend time with their children. Also, parents are the most immediate individuals to whom the children learn the essential values and perspectives towards growing and life as a whole.
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Em Trung Quân E 48 nộp bài

In many countries parents worry about the amount of time their children spend watching TV and using Internet.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest ?

- Television and Internet are as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school, studies consistently show that the average child spends almost as much time watching TV and using Internet as they does in school. The reasons are given blow.
- First and fore most , television & internet, with is wide availability and rich media with image and sound, it often requires our full attention or it more attraction to us than are our daily lives .It difficult to ignore and even seductive in it appeal. Secondly, the best influence on tour children is that television and internet reduce stress. It can give they a broader window on the world. Watching films, they can escape our own problem for a little while. Also, sometime movie show positive ways to resolve problems we all face. While TV and movie shouldn’t be way to hide from life, sometime they can help children cope.
- Some solutions to these problems :
There is many ways of amusement for children to select after the working time nowadays. You can select to meet your friends, to accompany your parents or take part in some sports activities. Watching TV at home is simple one way to live. It is too narrowly to regard TV as one main reason to damage relationship among friends and family just because some people has spent a lot of time on it. Scientists say that a child should not watch TV more then 40 minutes successively. For example, parents should always made us have a break after watching TV more then half an hour and let our eyes rest for several minutes before turning on the TV again. Maybe it is the best solution. Parents and their children need to spend time together in order to enhance family relationship and close family ties. This is the most compelling reason on why should parents spend time with their children. Also, parents are the most immediate individuals to whom the children learn the essential values and perspectives towards growing and life as a whole.

em thành lớp e48
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[FONT=&quot]From my own respective I think all parents want their children to have a good health, both mental and physical health. Firstly, it is difficult to have a strong boy if he sat all day to use the internet and to watch TV. Nowadays, many young people do not have time to play sport, they spend so much time to play game online or to watch movies on the TV. It maybe causes many health’s problem like obesity because they lack activities. Secondly, parents also worry about their children’s mental health. The truth is that, many children have mental problem because of using the internet so much, especially playing game online. Doctor Nguyen Minh Tuan, Vice President of Vietnam National institute of Mental Health, said that “ the children who addicted to game online always have violent behavior, stress and loss attention to study”.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Both mental and physical problem can become more serious if we do not have a necessary method to resolve it. In my opinion, we can help the children to spend more time for outdoor activities and sports. Moreover , the school need some program to help them to know the disadvantages of using the internet and TV so much. Beside, parents need spend more and more time to play with their children, sometimes the parents do not have time to their children.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]In summary, parents concerned about this problem because it will affect their children’s health, both mentally and physically. Thus, we need some method that can help them to avoid bad effects.[/FONT]

em hải anh lớp E48 nộp bài ạ
Nowadays, children spend lots of time watching television and using internet instead of participating in real life activities which worries many parents. If I were a mother, I would be worry about this too because of two main reasons. Firstly, I believe that children should have a balance schedule of studying and physical exercise. It is true that children can learn a lot from television and internet but lacking of physical exercise is not acceptable. Those activities can be very helpful for children because they are placed in teams and trained to get good and healthy lifestyle. By working in a sport team, children will get to know about teamwork and improve their communication skill which cannot be acquired by interacting with computer. Secondly, children probably will get some bad habits if they spend a lot of time for television and computer. For example, my cousin has a habit of eating junk food and becomes very lazy after hours of watching TV. He won’t be fit if he continues to practice these in future. In my opinion, the main reason for this issue is lacking of care from the parents. Parents these days are very busy with their jobs, some of them only aim to earn a lot of money so they can afford a better life for their children. I strongly disagree with this mindset because I think that children need direct guidance from their parents in order to develop into responsible adults. Money can be used to buy technology gears but not moral and precious experience. Therefore, I encourage parents to balance the time between working and guiding their children. Those growing seeds will be greatly benefited from having time with their parents in comparison to playing computer games or surfing internet.