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Em Vịnh-e53 nộp writing task 1 :

Topic : The pie chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie chart shows the data about the number of Coca-cola bottle sold in five different markets and the line graph share price of Coca-cola from 1996 to 2001.
It is clear from the chart, North America accounted for the highest number of 30.4 billions bottle sold, followed by Latin America with 25.7 billions. Next to is Europian and Asian markets with 20.5 and 16.4 billions bottles respectively. Lastly, the lowest number was constituted by Africa and Middle East with 7.0 billions.
Besisdes, as can be seen from the graph, there was a slightly increase in share price of Coca-Cola. In 1996 the share price of Coca-cola was at the bottom with about 37$. However, in the next year, it rose around two times in 1998 and reached to under 70$ in 1997 before decrease slowly to 55$. In contrast, in 1998 the share price hit a top at about 82$. After that it declined to 55 in 2001.
This end my report here.

Em Thái Anh E53 - Group 1 nộp bài Writing Task 1 - No.2

Given is some information about Coca-Cola’s sale, include a pie chart which is compare the consumption of Cola’s bottles in 5 difference areas in 2000 and a chart shows the fizzling of Cola’s share price in period from 1996 to 2001.
In 2000, the total sale of Coca-Cola’s bottles reached 17.1 billion all over the world. From the pie chart, it can obviously see that in the North American, the Cola’s consumption was the highest which appropriate 30.4% all sold bottles worldwide, while the number of Africa and Middle East, which was the lowest, makes up only 7.0%. In ad***ion, there was an approximation of this number in the other areas. Namely, in Latin American, Europe and Asia, the consumers are 25.7%, 20.5%, 16.4% of the total volume was purchased respectively.
It can be clearly seen that there was a fluctuation of share prices for Coca-Cola since 1996. In that year, price was valued at approximately 35$, and rose slightly in next over one year. In the mid of 1997, there was a little drop, but then it was reached a peak about 80$ in the mid 1998. Since that time, the prices had a tendency to go down and finally achieved 55$ in the end of 2001.
This is end my report here.

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Group 2:
Writing task 1: In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was trialed in a large country town on females only
The graphs provide information about the number of victims from flu, the percentages of females received new vaccine groups most at risk and the flu rates for males and females in a large country town in 1996
Firstly, from the bar graph, it can be obviously seen that during the period March to May, there was only 1 female died of flu. However, there were 4 females death, in comparison with 2 males death.
Take a look at the pie chart, it is clearly seen that females who were over 65 years old had highest risk up to 35%. There were 28% females who didn’t take part in trial, while 24% were babies and children, and 13% were hospitalized.
It can be clearly seen in the line graph that the new vaccine had a positive effect on flu rate for female. There were just around 1,000 cases reported in March, which surged dramatically to reach a peak of 3,500 cases in June. After that, the number of cases dipped slightly then maintained at 2,500 from December on. For males, the figures were lower but showed a similar trend.
This ends my report here.

ch ơi, em Khánh Linh - E53 nộp bài Writing task 1, group 2 ah em ốm bết xê lết quá bh mới lên gửi bài được , may mà vẫn trước deadline

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From the first chart, it can be clearly seen that between March and May, only one woman died from flu whilst no man suffered from it. Meanwhile, from June to August, the number of deaths jumped up to 4 cases in females and 1 case in male.[/FONT][FONT=&quot]
Followed by these figures, 72% of women who are most at risk were given this new vaccine, comprising 35% of aged recipients (over 65 years old), 24% of babies and children, and 13% of hospitalized females; compared to approximately one third of women were not vaccinated.[/FONT][FONT=&quot]
According to the line graph, it is evident that the new vaccine created a positive impact on females. The number of cases dramatically soared from the very beginning, before reaching a peak of 3500 in June. After being applied, the vaccine immediately shows its effect with an erratic dive to 2500 cases in September, and stayed steadily in the remaining months. Although women were received new vaccine, their statistic in flu cases was higher than men’s, which presented a similar trend in this graph.[/FONT][FONT=&quot]
This ends my report here. [/FONT]

Em N.Q.Son lop E53- Nhom 1 nop bai a

The pie chart compares the distribution of worldwide sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices from year 1996 to year 2001.
In the year 2000, the overall consumption of Coca-cola was 17.1 billion cases of their drink product all over the world. In the pie chart, it can be clearly seen that the largest consumer was North America, where 30.4 percent of the total volume was purchased. The second was Latin America with 25.7 percent meanwhile Europe and Asia bought 20.5 and 16.4 percent respectively. Africa and Middle East remained a very small part of total volume of sales with 7 percent.
At the first glance, we can see in the graph that since 1996, share prices of Coca-cola had a fluctuated trend. In 1996, it started at this lowest point at about 35$ and increased to approximately 70$ in 1997 and reached the peak in 1998 with nearly 80$ with each share. After that it decreased significantly in 1999 and 2000 but there was a slight rise in 2001.

The graphs provide information about the number of peope died of flu and the proportion of woman who may be face with dangerous after receiving a new flu vaccine in big country town in 1996.
As we can see, the first bar chart shows the number of man and woman died of flu from in 2006.It is clear from the graphs, the number of woman were died of flu much more than man.Even there were no men in this town was died from the March to May. Specially, this number increased rapidly from 1 to 4 and appeared 2 man was died by flu in the period between June to August.
Meanwhile,the line chart indicated the trend of cases of flu change in 1996. It is clear that the number of woman was flu is higher than man. In February, both man and woman has no people are flu. After that, the number is increased rapidly and had a peak of 3500 with man and more 2500 with woman. Fortunately, this number had trend decrease to 2500 of man and more 1560 of woman and they nearly remained steady to December. We can realise that although woman used vaccine but the rate of woman were flu still higher than man.
The pie chart suggested that after receving a new flu vaccine, only female being mostly dangerous. There were 28% woman who did not take part in the trial. In 72% people take part in, 35% are over 65 years, 24% were babies and children.
*****mmary, we can see the number of man and woman had been flu and died because this disease and the rate of woman may be dangerous when inject new flu in their bodies.This ends my report here.

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Em Huyền trang lớp E53 nộp bài, group 2:
The graphs provide information about the number of peope died of flu and the proportion of woman who may be face with dangerous after receiving a new flu vaccine in big country town in 1996.
As we can see, the first bar chart shows the number of man and woman died of flu from in 2006.It is clear from the graphs, the number of woman were died of flu much more than man.Even there were no men in this town was died from the March to May. Specially, this number increased rapidly from 1 to 4 and appeared 2 man was died by flu in the period between June to August.<FONT face=[/IMG]Meanwhile,the line chart indicated the trend of cases of flu change in 1996. It is clear that the number of woman was flu is higher than man. In February, both man and woman has no people are flu. After that, the number is increased rapidly and had a peak of 3500 with man and more 2500 with woman. Fortunately, this number had trend decrease to 2500 of man and more 1560 of woman and they nearly remained steady to December. We can realise that although woman used vaccine but the rate of woman were flu still higher than man.
The pie chart suggested that after receving a new flu vaccine, only female being mostly dangerous. There were 28% woman who did not take part in the trial. In 72% people take part in, 35% are over 65 years, 24% were babies and children.
*****mmary, we can see the number of man and woman had been flu and died because this disease and the rate of woman may be dangerous when inject new flu in their bodies.This ends my report here.

Em Thuỷ E53 nộp bài ạ ^^

The pie chart and line graph illustrate how the share prices have changed from 1996 to 2000 and the purchases have differ in 2000 of Coca-Cola.

In term of the line graph,it provides a variation in Coca-Cola’s stock prices.In1996,Coca-Cola had the lowest price at nearly 40 dollars per share and climb up to nearly 70 dollars per share at the middle of 1997.Followed by the first middle of 1998,this brand reached the peak at 80 dollars per share.Then after the share prices felt in a downward period from this to 2000 and stabilized around 50 dollars per share.

From the pie chart,it shows clearly the market share of Coca-Cola over the world in 2000.The major regions are represented as percentages of the total cases.North America had the highest percentage of 30,4% in total 17,1 billion cases while Africa and Middle East had the lowest rate-7,0%.It evident that North America was twice as many as Asia(16.4% in total).On the other hand ,percentage of purchases in Latin America and Europe had the nearly equal market share with over 20% .The pie chart suggests that market share has impacted on share prices because of the difference about sales in each regions.This is end of my report.

Em Nguyễn Hồng Hạnh E53 nộp bài ạ

The bar chart illustrates the number of CO2 emissions per passenger kilometre in various branches of transport in the European Union and the pie chart explains what type of transports European Union’s people perfer to invest.

Looking at the bar chart first, it is clear that using air transports products the most CO2 emissions in the six different transports in the survey. The number of CO2 emissions of air which is over 380 grams approximately three times as much as passenger cars which the second highest CO2’s producers of transport. Trains and ships produce about 50 grams, while buses produce haft of passenger cars. Coaches which CO2 emissions per passenger kilometer from Coaches are half of buses are the cleanest form of transport.

Meanwhile, the pie chart give information about what kinds of transport are spent European Union funds on. The largest proportion of expen***ure is on road which 52 per cent of the total volume is spent. The second largest invest is on railways with trains. Roads and public transports are invested 31 and 10 per cent respectively, while airports and others are remained fairly small funds at 7 per cent of the total volume of funds
This ends my report here.

chị ơi, Luyến E53 nộp bài WT1 - pie chart nhé

"The column chart illustrates the number of grams of CO2 per passenger kilometer for six kinds of transport means in the European Union. Meanwhile, the pie chart compares the proportion of European Union funds pouring into eight categories of transport.

It is clear that flying by air produces by far the greatest CO2 emissions, up to 380 grams per passenger. It is equal to passengers of the remaining five categories, approximately three times as much as passenger cars which are the second largest producers. In contrast, there is 1 percent of the European Union’s budget spending on air travel while roads make up more than half of this fund.

As can be seen, emissions of CO2 per passenger kilometer from maritime is 50 grams, as much as from rail. However, nearly a thirt of EU transport funds are spent on railways, while only further one percent in spent on waterways.

On the other hand, coaches are the cleanest type of transport means, it emits about 40 grams of CO2 per passenger kilometer, less than two times as much as buses. The European Union spends 10 percent of it transport budget on public transport, such as buses and coaches.

This is the end of the report."

Ôi trời ơi, em làm từ 5h sáng đến giờ mới xong, tổng cộng hết 5 tiếng, cái đề này thật là kinh khủng. Đến mình có con rồi còn k bít xử lý nào. Chị cho em gửi bài
Em Quỳnh E49

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In the near times, people can easy view clips to turning pupils to beat or read news about mass murder pupils or they bring weapons to school, etc. That mentions is level violent to be increasing strong, attack objects include pupil and teacher. According to a statistical has 5.7 percent pupils bring weapons to school, boys’rate have more three than girls. Following the US government research, 12.4 percent pupils have been enjoy to fight. In British, in 2007, teacher union had statistic having 16% teachers was being attacked by their pupils in two years ago. Few years, Viet Nam occur constantly school violent and school and parents have not plan remedy yet.


In parallet with the preventable and intervenient activities of government, parents should teach child not to hit back at bullies cause they don’t want child to ratalite and beat more. I think this action is a temporary measure. In the long term, parents should spent more time for child their child to listen these difficultly problems and support them timely. Keep an eye on children- parents should keep an eye on children and if their children are doing any kind of suspicious activity. They shoul advice and interpret about consequences of negative behavior. Parents should their child learn martial to guard themselves in necessary case. In case, your child are subject violent, Cure by love- love is the best medicine. If you are providing proper love, affection, care and compassion to the child then the child will not incur violent behavior.


In short, school violent is serious social problem. Preventing and reducing it to need to coordinate of three parties: school, Parents and Government.