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Topic: There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What form do these problems take? Do problems of using mobile phones outweigh the benefits?

It is for a fact that having a mobile phone nowadays is a sort of a necessity and it is an inevitable truth that mobile industry is taking everyone by a storm. As this technology has become rife, its drawbacks, which can be seen from social, medical and technical perspectives, deserve people's greatest attention.
No doubt, similar to many other hi-tech products, such as computers, mobile phones have their equal negative side on users' health. For example, people just contact through phones and become too lazy meeting outside people as well as spend less time bonding with there family and friends. Moreover, long-time heavy phone users are more prone to be damaged on their brains and also getting certain types of cancers by mobile phone’s waves. Another lethal health concern is the link between mobile phones and dangerous distractions. Because of losing control of the vehicle when driving and talking on the phone simultaneously, userd are easy to become targets for thieves and road accidents.
Inspite of considerable convenience of mobile phones, it is argued that mobile phones can cause normous disturbance. That's why mobile phones can be a problem in some public places, such as libraries, theatres, hospitals and even transports, such as trains, buses and aircrafts and they have been prohibited. The reason is users always speak at increased volume so that they seem to be impolite. For instance, mobile phone can interrupt other students in the class it is required to switch off before the class begins.
Beside many disadvantages of mobile phones, it can be denied that the mobile phone has itself a lot of strong points in modem life. It has revolutionized the way people all over the world communicate. Furthermore, the users enjoy the variety of mobile phone’s functions such as call-text messages, surfing the internet, taking photos, listening to music and so forth. In order to satisfy a high numbers of customers, manufactories have expected to make mobile phones low-cost personal items as technical advances.
In conclusion, although including considerable weak points in social, medical and technical perspectives, the mobile phone has played an important role as a key social tool in modern society and it is suggested to continue to perform its advantages more and more.

Em Nam Sơn - E53
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[FONT=&quot]Topic 18: Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?[/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
Undeniably, nowadays, the development of technology has been spreading all over corner in the world, therefore, that is reason why many peoples concerned that out leisure time has been shrinking as a result of the tremendous advance in modern technology. From my own perspective, i really believe that the doubts about the negative effects of the modern technology are not well-grounded, thanks to development of technology, people now enjoy greater well-being than ever before.
Before computers and the Internet were created, most working people struggled with a lack of leisure time and the balance between family life and work life. They were fully occupied by employment and various chores. With the advance of modern technology, people can make inquires by phone, instead of travelling long distances or internet access makes it possible for one to perform various tasks without leaving their offices. Modern transport networks reduce the amount of time people spend on commutes, so that people have more time to relax and enjoy many things that modern technology brought to. For instance, just with few hours, people now can access wherever destination without tired and stress by long moving, so they can immerse in their valuable time with family.
The popularity of network technology, together with the expansion of the software industry, has given today's entertainment seekers many new experiences. In the past, people could only played chess, cards, or other similar games with their friends. Now they can challenge other players via the internet, or there are many easy ways that always available for you to recreational such as listen to many kinds of music, watch movies made by high technology. One thing that the previous generation probably had never ever dreamed about is that someday they could transaction all work at home but nowadays, it’s really come true and no strange with modern people. By working at home, employees can manage their time on their own and strike a balance between work and rest.
Nevertheless, it should be highlighted that accompanied by technological development, there are some problems that people should prevent such as using internet too much may lead to many diseases and sedentary lifestyle.Besides this, people might have to accept frequent intrusions as a by-product of convenient modern technology.
As indicated above, modern technology has many advantages that make our leisure time has become more and more comfortable, however, there are still some inevitable negative effects on the user, so the important thing is that people should work out methods to prevent the problems that bring back.

Em Thu Phương - E53 nộp bài Writing task 2

Topic 18: Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before?

As one of the most important inventions of the 20th century, technology has a wide application in all aspects of our lives. It could be said that technology bring us a modern era when we can live in higher life standards than before. It can be denied that one of its biggest advantages is providing us much more leisure time.
The reason that can be seen by every person is that there are many technology products helping us feel the life more comfortable and the one which play an important role of course is home appliances. Nowadays, few people have to manage their selves with a mess of dirty clothes, the washing machines will do it. To add to this, all of those machines such as: coffee maker, dish washer,… support us in a beneficial way to deal with a lot of houseworks. As a result, we no longer need to spend to much time for all of those things and have more free time for our selves.
However there is a fact that tecnology brings us more leisure time but in contrast it is the reason makes us have less free time. Technology grows up lead to the appearance of many entertainment product and people spend the more leisure time they have for them instead of something more useful. For example, many people especially the youth become an addict to computer game, TV,… which make them less creative, depressed and lack of communication with other people. Therefore, they lost their free time by their selves and some people even always feel they do not have enough time.
All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that technology have both good and bad side in the relationship with leisure time. But the key of the problem belong to us. Technology brings the more leisure time however the way we use it make it become the real free time or waste time.

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Topic 20 :It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid development of telecommunications technology and travel industry, has negative effects on individuals, nations and the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the rapid evolution of telecommunications technology and travel industry. It is a particular concern that the pace of everyday life is becoming faster, resulting from the development of car technology and Internet. This trend bringing us a majority of benefits but also contains some problems.
There are many reasons supporting my view. On the positive side the advance in telecommunication mobile phones makes everybody closer as well as makes it more convenient to communicate. In the past the either relationship or communication between the people is mainly limited by geographical factor nevertheless nowadays with a mobile phone everybody is able to talk even see each other with a long distance of thousands miles.
Furthermore our daily life resulting from development of Internet. In present days , Internet makes it possible for the everyone to buy goods or shopping and do various tasks without leaving either their home or their office.
On the negative side , the fast-paced lifestyle impacts on the relationship of the people especially with the members in a family. The development of telecommunication also brings some cons. For instance , the mobile phones sometimes make the member in a family few opportunity to communicate directly to share or to exchange problem in each member ‘s life
From what has been discussed above, I may finally draw the conclusion that the development of technology contains the advantage and disadvantage with our daily life therefore we have to know and regconize them in order to live better.

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The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of mass media like television, internet, mobile phones, etc. While some still hold to the conservative view that these new technologies are better performed than a universal medium - radio broadcasting, it is my personal belief thatsuch pessimism is ungrounded.
First of all, the most important advantage radio offers is its ability to reach specific audiences through specialized programming. A report showed that at least 90% drivers listen to VOV transportation when they are driving to and from work since it updates information during rush hours to help people travel smoothly through traffic jams, while young people often reach Xone-FM for the favorite songs and musical news.
Secondly and more importantly, radio gives us a full source of information, such as social – economic news, weather forecast, music, advertisements or football matches from different parts of country at different times of the day. People who are too busy to watch TV, read newspaper or surf the net can listen to the radio via an electronic devices, such as MP3, MP4 players, even their mobile phones. Hence, it is undoubted that radio is one of the most convenient and effective means of taking full advantage of time and gaining the latest information.
Finally, radio may be the least expensive of all media for both producer and listener. To the producer, setting up a print or TV shoot can be expensive because both TV and print are visual media while radio can paint a picture in the listener’s mind through the magic of sound effects and music. To the listener, they can get all information easily without paying any fee. In fact, radio has been considered as an excellent supporting medium due to its low cost and high reach of selected groups.
As indicated above, radio broadcasting has many advantages that are scarcely found in other mass media, either electronic or print. With the developments in technology that enable radio to perform more functions and become more widely available, radio broadcasting will continue to form a very large segment of the mass media in the future. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;}

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Topic 17: There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What form do these problems take? Do problems of using mobile phones outweigh the benefits?


In today’s global environment, technology is very important to all of us. As one of the most important inventions of the 20th century,mobile phone has a wide application in all aspects of our lives. In recent years, a range of problems led by mobile phones appear gradually. However, in my point of view, these disadvantages will not outweigh the advantages brought by mobile phones.

Health of the people using mobile phones is becoming a growing issue. Mobile phones are held near the head when in use, therefore, many scientists believe that they might cause or contribute to brain cancer. There is no scientific evidence proving that radiofrequency energy from this device may pose a potential health risk, however, it is still under research and there is no official announcement. It is also worth mentioning that overusing of a phone may lead to ear damage and high frequency hearing loss. According to research presented at the American Academy of Otolaryngology-Head and Neck Surgery Foundation's Annual Meeting & OTO EXPO in Washington, DC, people who used their phones for more than 60 minutes a day had a worse hearing threshold than those with less use.

In ad***ion, mobile phones can be big distractions. For example, a teacher is teaching in the classroom when a student’s phone rings or people speak loudly in public places. Some users lose the sense of deciding when and where they can talk on the cell phone and where they can’t. It might also be noted that when the mobile phone has brought considerable convenience, some people especially teens get so much addicted to it talking, video, messaging, games, etc. that they forget the real purpose of the phone and waste large part of their time. Furthermore, it increasingly is becoming cause of accidents when driving and talking on the phone because it deviates the attention of a driver.

On the other hand, mobile phone is an efficient and wonderful communications device. It helps people remain connected with the world from wherever they are. It is one of the most used tools for supplying immediate help at the time of emergencies. Mobile phones also provide us with facilities like messaging, camera, recording and especially internet, thus, they boost the studying and working efficiency dramatically. Beside, mobile phones also serve as entertainment tools as many games and FM radio connection.

In conclusion, everything has a good side and a bad side and mobile phone is no exception. Although mobile phone has a number of problems that should be well handled, it definitely has brought a revolution and changed the way to work, to socialize and to entertain. Hence, people should be more wise and responsible in using it.

Em Kim Thoa E53
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[FONT=&quot]Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the role of mobile phone in modern life. To a certain extent I agree that it offers some drawbacks, which can be seen from social, medical and technical prospective. Nevertheless, I also think that the advantages of using mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Three of problems are social, medical and technological aspects which are the result of mobile phone in human life. Firstly, people should notice that the main problem on social is mobile phone can be a problem in some public place. For example, ringing phones cause disturbance in cinemas or schools. Moreover, mobile phone can also be a dangerous distraction such as a target for thieves or using a phone while driving reduces the driver’s concentration. Secondly, the other problem can be seen in medical aspect is that using mobile phone to much lead to damages to people’ health. In truly, their wave could result in damage to our brain as well as ears. Finally, the other effect of mobile phone problem on technical is that it is also interfere with electronic equipments such as radio or television.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Albeit mobile phone offers some disadvantages, people can deny that it have revolutionized the way people communicate. Everybody can be aware that the mobile telephone is the most popular gadget on the world in recent years. The first and most important point is that mobile telephones are very convenient. In fact, people can stay in touch with family, friends and colleagues wherever we are. In ad***ion, mobile telephones are very useful because users can send text messages, surf the Internet, take photos and listen to music. Furthermore, mobile telephones have also become fashion accessories as well as show off the position of owner its. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]In conclusion, although mobile telephones provide many drawbacks as not good for people, they bring many greatest benefits. My belief is that they play a vital role in people life, as a result, the advantages of using mobile phones in the good way and not dependent on it outweigh its drawbacks.[/FONT]

Em Thủy E53 nộp bài ạ
Group2: Topic 21: Nowadays people can carry out tasks such as shopping and banking even business transactions without meeting each other face to face. What are the effects on individuals and the society?

As one of the most important inventions of the 20th century, internet has a wide application in all aspects of our lives such as entertainment,business,education and culture…etc.Many people now keen on going shopping online or do business transactions via internet.This trend is more and more effective to people and all the society in both positive and negative way.I do strongly support the idea that nowadays,doing business online tendency has more disadvantage than advantage.

It is not deny that with the development of technology,making people change their habits in the past when dealing with their business transactions,shopping online or do banking online.These can save time for people in travelling up and down,especially people who live far from destinations.People can stay at home,access the internet and choose everything they want with a suitable price or finish transactions with bank or another people without meeting them.Thanks to the internet doing as an excellent tool in modern life,people do not lose their track of time,save money.Morover it is the best solution to to traffic congestion, the urban air pollution and petrol use.

However,the positive things we gained seems to be less than negative one.One of the most negative aspects is,for example,doing business without leaving home alters their social behavior and their habits.It is expected that people can be addicted to the internet use and become loneliness,poor social skills,seriously they become insensitive to everyone.People become accustomed to sedentary lifestyle,spend lillte in leisure time,reactional activitive instead of spending hours on front of computer screens.As a result,they suffer for their health as back pain,myopia,obese…etc

The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that dealing with business ,shopping online may bring troubles to people.Without meeting face to face,people do not know exactly quality of goods they buy,they can not check the products by hands and easy to get bad product.It is as serious as when they do banking on the internet,sometimes it occurs some faults while doing transaction and they can easy to loss money,not completely finish the transactions…etc.In ad***ion,searching information on the internet is challenging because not everything online is reliable,people can be a target for hi-tech crime steal people’money via transaction,hack their account softly without any obstacles.Many companies have websites allowed people doing transaction online and depend their business on internet completely may destroyed and risk a lot of money with many problems on the internet above.It’s not only harmful individual but also all the society about economic,brandname and important is belief in people in life.

From what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusionnline shopping or banking have both immediate and long-term impacts on people’s health,lifestyles,behavior and their money.Althought gaining some benefits from technology brings to modernlife,people should take efforts to cut down the negative impacts,beginning with changing their online habits suitable.

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Writing task 2: TOPIC 3: THERE IS A DISAGREEMENT ON THE IMPACT OF INCREASED BUSINESS AND CULTURE CONTACT BETWEEN COUNTRIES ON A COUNTRY’S IDENTITY. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

With the advance of the human civilization,there are an increasing number of people who have raised doubts about whether the connection between countries of culture and economic sides have affected on countries’s identities.This problem should be viewed from various ideas.

Firstly,thank to globalization,business is become increasingly international,multinational companies can do their business around the world example as Unilever–a famous multinational commestic company having hundereds branches in many countries.Ad***ional,goods are produced in one country and sold in many countries,moreover,it created opportunities for employment seeking a good jobs and help the economic of each countries developed.Beside this,culture exchange activities and tourism make people in all country can learn the identities of each other such as Bengian’s chocolate,Italian fashion,French perfume,Japannese tea culture,Viet Nam with “Ao Dai”…etc,make countries closer.It leads countries to have to find the way to keep their cultures and identities themselves.Because only the different between countries or another saying the special of each countries can make another ones visiting,investing and help them develop.

Outside of this viewpoint,there is a further more subtle point we must consider that the connection between countries have ruined countries identities.It seems that in some countries,some components such as tra***ional,customs and the standard of culture have assimilating into another countries which have a huge impact on these countries.For example,two decades ago,*** was a taboo subject in almost Asian countries,they felt embarrassed to talk openly about it,taking ***y clothes was not accept there, Over the time,the Western lifestyle has introduced to Asia,Asian people have broken manytime-honour identities .Ad***ional,a development of economy,technology make a morden life but they have eclipsed the tra***ional values of countries.It is happening all over the world day by day.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that everything has more than one face and the increasingly connection of culture and business between all countries has no except.Nowaday,in the intergration and development,globalization trend like as double-edged sword for each countries.Requesting countries have methods to catch new trend development but do not kill their identities.

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[FONT=&quot]TOPIC 6: THE ADVANTAGES OF THE SPREAD OF ENGLISH AS A GLOBAL LANGUAGE WILL CONTINUE TO OUTWEIGH ITS DISADVANTAGES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?[/FONT]

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[FONT=&quot]Firstly, English is easier to learn than any other language. Unlike Chinese, for example, English has only 26 alphabets which are combined to make words and sentences. It is easy even for non-native speakers to read written English. In ad***ion, a number of English words have been borrowed from many other languages, and many English words have been adopted by many languages and are used as part of their own languages. Therefore, many people in different countries already know some of the English. So, it could be the easiest language to learn. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Furthermore, it is the language of global business and also jobs. It is the language of technology. You can make the best use of internet if you know English as many websites are written in English. Knowledge of English makes travel easier. There would also be no need of expensive translations. Finally, English will be the most promising language. Since English is used in many fields such as economics, politics, and academics, more and more people will study English in the future. If you have an international meeting in any field, it will probably be done in English. The demand of English will never stop. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]As every garden has weeds, there would be some disadvantages also. Many people fear that local languages would die out and with that, local cultures would die out because language and culture are inter-related. Moreover, it is bound to be divided into dialects. [/FONT]
*****m up, my opinion resembles those who support the wide use of English. Its popularity and demand will increase more and more in the future.