Lớp học tiếng Anh cô giáo PHƯƠNG THÙY (cô Thùy_ED Lò Đúc) - Lớp học TA lâu đời nhất trên TTVNOL từ 2

@.@ it looks like writing task 2 and task 1 having the same words count????

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Writing task 1_ tes2.

The bar chart illustrates the information about Heat Attacks by gender for age groups ranging from 29 to 65+ years in USA.
On the whole, as can be seen that there was just roughly 120 thousand males in the 29 to 44 year age group had heart attacks. In comparison, this data is considerably smaller than in the 45_to 64 year olds with well over 400 thousand people. The aged 65+ group shows the largest variation with the amount of men being under four times as large as the youngest group.
Surprisingly, the female in the over 65s constitutes the highest number with 375 thousand people, which under three times figure of women who had heart attacks in the 45+ age group with only 3 thousand people.
Overall, it can be seen that there is a significant difference in the number of people who had heart attacks in both ***ual. The number in male usually higher than this in others ***ual.



E con no 1 bai chi a,toi em gui not chi nhe (( em ko the post vi thay no stupid qua chi a...

Em nộp bài ss ạ, nhưng em viết ngu lắm í

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. And then, i don't know what happen to me?
Sometimes, I go to travel with my boy friend, both of us like it. We were on the beautiful beach which is near my hometown. It maybe the last holiday before our wedding. But that call gave me an awkward situation. It was JC's call. JC is my new colleague. I had dated with him for one month. That time, I was too tired of my boy friend to marry him. My boy friend is an independent man, he love me, but he is a cool man. He seem doesn't like some actions like hug, kiss.. JC doesn't like that. He is very warm, always make me smile with small gifts, small stories. He always try to make me happy. I didn't think it would be a long relationship because JC never thought about it due to his unstable career. Few days ago, my boy friend and his parents came to my home. So, I think our wedding will be soon announced. But JC called me and said he love me.. I was happy with him, but i was in love with my boy friend for a long time.. So, I don't know what can i do.. Can someone please give me an advise?

Em Hiệp E66 nộp bài Writing test 1

Dear Sam,
How are you? I’m fine .I will have a tour.I decided to ride a bicycle for the trip,but now I don’t have a bicycle.Because my bike was broken.Can you borrow me your bike?

Do you want to know why I choose a bicycle for this trip.Because the move by bike helps us in good health. Moreover it also helps to protect the environment better. And when I can bike to many places.I think traveling by bike is a great choice.

I plan my time to win the trip of 5 days.Trip will help me discover a lot of interesting things.After the trip ended I would return the bike back to you.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Nguyễn Quỳnh Trang - Lớp E66 - Writing PET Test 1

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang. It was my younger brother. He was frightened and informed to me that Betty was just dead. I was so shocked and I missed Betty very much. I remembered all the memories we had. Betty was my dear puppy and I adopted her right after she was born. She had white, soft fur and her face was very lovely. As I fed Betty, she waved her tail and hung on to me. When I complained about my unwanted things which happened in my work or confessed some small mistakes that I couldn't tell anyone, Betty had never judged me. I really did not accept this painful truth. Betty had gone because of a terrible accident. A drunk man drove a car and crashed into her last night while my brother took Betty go for a walk near my house. Then that man left without a word and my puppy lied solitarily on the street. I was not interested in enjoying this trip anymore and wanted to come back immediately. Betty has gone forever and I will soon find another pet to cover this sadness, I hope that ^^

Trần Tuấn Anh - Lớp E66 nộp bài Writing PET test 1

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang . I looked at the phone screen and that's my brother . And he said that at yesterday he made a sandwich. He made a sandwich for lunch. He made a turkey sandwich for lunch. He put two slices of bread in the toaster. He pushed down the toaster handle. He took some turkey out of the refrigerator. He sliced the turkey. He put it into the microwave. He sliced an onion. He sliced a tomato. He put the toast on a plate. He put the turkey on the toast. He put the onion on the toast. He put the tomato on the toast. He ate the sandwich. He washed the plate. He washed the knife. He looked at the kitchen floor. Water was on the kitchen floor. Something was leaking. He looked under the kitchen sink. He looked at the garbage disposal. Water was dripping from the garbage disposal. Water was dripping onto the kitchen floor. The garbage disposal was old. And he want me needed to replace it. I was not interested in enjoying this trip anymore and wanted to come back immediately , I feel very depressed and tired

Em là Bảo Lớp E66 nộp bài writting TEST 1

Dear Sam.
How is your education? Good? When I came to your house, you mum said that you had began to learn in Leeds High school in the neighbours district. I am in trouble and I need you to help me. I have a new girlfriend. Surprise! She is a girl who is new member in my club. I am absorbed in her soulful eyes, delicate face and dynamic style. But there is a problem that she like romantic. She want to go to school or somewhere with me by bicycle. Why? Because she want to hug from behind me and stroll unhurriedly on the street together. So I want to borrow your bicycle that you don’t use. I need it within a week or earlier until I buy other bicycle. May be on next Sunday. If you get mail, you will reply me. I hope you to agree.

Love
Bao​

Em la Thi lop E66 , em nop bai pet 1

Dear, Huong!
Long time to see you. How are you? I'm Ok. I just get married and we decied spend my honeymoon on Nha Trang beach. I think Nha Trang has nice views, delecious seafood, special a wonderful green beach... We want to go around Nha Trang city to see views and some another places.We want to ride bicyle than take a taxi because we want ride by ourselves and can see more beautiful. But we get a trouble, we don't have any vehicles in there. Suddenly, I think you can help me. Can you borrow your bicycle? We will be there from next Friday to Tuesday. If you have spare time on Friday, we'll enjoying a good dinner and taking nice photos.
Love you
Thi

Em Lưu Linh. Lớp E66. Nộp bài PET WRITTING TEST 1. Group 1.
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[FONT=&quot]How are you? I’m fine. We haven’t met each other for 3 months after graduation day. How is your job? I heard that if you had got a job in Citibank. Congratulation! Well, I’m working as an accountant in a company. It’s hard to face with the pressure of this work. Anyway, I have to move on. This weekend, my company is going to organise a picnic in the countryside. As you know, countryside is very quiet and beautiful place with small villages and large fields. We will also have many activities in here. And one of them is a bicycle race. I absolutely like it. I remember that you have a good bicycle and you won a race in the university. Can you lend me it this weekend? I will use it in 2 days. And I will give it back you next Monday. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Love, Linh
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Part 2: write an email to your English friend Sam
Dear Sam,
This holiday I go to beach, I take some photos for you. You can see them on my face-book. I think you are going to Tokyo next week. I wish I went it next holiday.
I find a gym near our house, this time they cut off 50% per person. It’s very nice and comfortable. After we finish this course, we can do it by our shelves. And the other reason is I want to lose weight this summer.
I had a problem with my bicycle, because it isn’t used for a long time I need to repair it before using. It’ll take two weeks. May I borrow it next week? I promise I’ll keep it carefully, and before I return, I’ll wash it. I hope when you come back you will enjoy it with me.
If you go to Japan, please take some photos and take note some nice places.
Nice to see you .


Nguyen Thi Thu Thuy E 66

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