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one thing ! feel free to correct any of my mistake ! I always have my essay fulled of teachers'' spelling correction .

Thanks alot little casper for correcting my mistake. That''s why I posted here so someone can correct it for me.
English is not our first language so of course we make mistake and learn from it.
Have a nice day

Today is really bad day, in spite of no more happiness when read that news. Perhaps what wil be, it wil be...think much lots and feeling never change anymore. Obviously, that''s my big failure. I only blame myself.

I don''t know why people are becoming more and more selfish, they only know about themself and try to blame everybody for their bad things. Sadly. They call them "*********" even this is the first time they come to Vietnam to be a new director, they hate everybody and don''t want to share something fun with them, never pay something for others or invite them to your home to eat something and tell them with bad words, and if somebody pay something, they just think he is very rich or get a lot of money to forget that because of their love to everybody...In my office there is a guy like this, I hate that guy and feel poor to him, **** that guy.
English is a polite language that I cannot express how much I hate him.

A long day has been just over, like a leaf passed by outside the window, such a cold, rainy day in July. Its so strange why in July still cold, gloomy, cloudy, rainy all days long. The cold air outside holds our lazy legs in our house. And I''ve buried myself in this boring room all day with a tired, exhausted deep in my mind. In few moments I''ve thought of u, missed u for a while but been sure you haven''t know that.
Anyway does it matter? July in one country, far far from home, in the furtherest place, near the north sea, oh I just feel being lonely as if I exit alone in this small earth. I always know that thousand km long to the eastern is my homeland where my family, my best friends, all of them always hope the best things for me. Tomorrow will come soon and all my trouble will be over. Im really looking to coming back home. Goodnight

This is the first time I join the English club, and I was very surprised because there is much confidence here. I think it''s a good way to improve our ability of English. I''m going to work in a foreign company so I have to learn so much in this period. Hope every Vietnamese has a high English skill to get great job because there are much opportunities in our time.

Come on, no one could be better without making mistakes. Just pay attention in using Much and Many, much for uncountable nouns and Many for countable nouns. Best regard.
Ps: At the beginning if u used the present tense, it would have sounded better if u had used the next sentence also in the present tense, just my own opinion.

Thank you very much for all your help, I very appreciate for it. This is really a useful topic, I''m very staking a lot on writing diary every day, and I combine with learning English on BBC website. I think it''s a good way to learning E, too. I am too bad on listening E, many simple words in E but I can''t understand when they speak too fast. The cause is may be I was lazied before. My great ambition is get enough IELTS score to learn abroad, and my favourite country is Australia. Because my career is architect, so I think going abroad is very necessary for my enterprise.I known It''s very difficult to do, but all of us should belive in the future, and go as far as we can. I''m waitting for some one can help me corect my mistake, thank you very much

Thank you again my friend, you''re really enthusiastic. The structure of that sentence I just learn form the BBC learning English website recently. Here is the quote of it:
staking a lot on
expecting and hoping that it will help it to be successful against other aeroplane makers
You can visit to the website and learn more about it. Each its article explains difficult sentences or idioms, you can listen online or download mp3 files to your computer and using for many times. Here is the website address: http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2007/07/070709_dreamliner.shtml
Hope you interest in it, I''m always waiting for your amendment