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E Phiduong - E32

My momery!
I own a bike, it is the gift of my parents when I parked the high school . when my second school I used to go for a walk . However I saw some my friends owing a very nice bike, I desired that I also had. My parents knew that, so told me " If I you pass on the high school, I would buy a new mini Japanese bike for you" .Ultimately my desire was the trueth. I could not forget the day that I owned a private bike. The bike is yellow , two shining rim wheels. When the bike stopp, it sound ?oro rô? very mellowly and the knoll sound "kinh coong". Two handles is mounted with two butterflies with wings of gold, sometimes a flower stem, or a weather**** . I really enjoy using it and I always feel proud. I take care it very carefully. Each afternoon, I usually cleaned it , and when it has problem I will help my father fix . Now I have studied at university, but the bike is always been sticking with me and even though, later I can not use it again, I''ll still keep it as a memory

Trọng Minh E30
Writing a challenged thing
The best time in my life
I have never forgotten a wonderful time playing football in the first official match at my high school when I was 17. I liked to play football very much, and so lucky I had a chance to join in my class football. I have still remembered my competitor was D7 class ?" a fair strong club, so we had have several discussions and played with together to find the best way to win. With the rule out directly, I really felt nervous because of only one mistake you might not have a chance to repair. That day, I got up very early, went to my school immediately in order to relax before the match. I had received many encouragements, but at the beginning time, my feet were trembled. However with the cheer loudly from my class mates, and especially after having a good action to defend the striker, I felt better and more self-confident my ability. I defended almost the strikes of competitor and our goalkeeper had a fair leisure match. And the break happiness came when our strikes took 2 goals in the second half. We passed the first round and it is one of the happiest time in my high school life.
2. We ate a wonderful meal.
There were many delicious foods with sweet smells and great colors. And everyone ate and talked to together in the friendly air.
3. The flower garden was delightful.
In the morning, colorful flowers bloom and the garden was surrounded by the scent of many kinds of flowers.
4. The alley had not been taken care of for many years and it was in bad shape.
Whenever I cross here, my vehicle is shaken very bad. Sometimes I was fallen and I had several injuries because my vehicle was interrupted with many pot-holes.
5. My father taught me to swim in a river behind our house.
First, because of my nerve all my limbs could not action. But following my father?Ts guide, my feet and hands co-ordinate fairly rhythm.
6. My mother?Ts kitchen was everyone?Ts favorite room.
You could see colorful flowers in here. There were several birds in next the room, so you could hear the great twitters.

lanchi E28
Use emotional details *****pport the following sentences
1. I would like to forget my first job interview.
- I was crashed by a men when I was crossing street in that morning, and he was one of recruiters. At time I saw him, I couldn?Tt believe in my eyes and I shouted, I was really shy.
2. I met my girlfriend on the Internet.
- My heart palpitated and I couldn?Tt stop smile.
3. At first, I did not like the new puppy, but after awhile I changed my mind.
- I liked to stock his thick and soft fur, he always licks my foots when I feel tired.
4. I began to walk down the aisle towards my future husband.
- I felt shacking and my legs couldn?Tt step, even though I couldn?Tt breath.
5. I walked into the cold dark ****.
- I start to felt nervous, I couldn?Tt take flashlight or anything, my shirt was soaked sweat
6. The test was over, and I had earned the highest score.
- My face went to red and I felt so very happy that I jumped.
It was my beautiful memory
When I was the first student at High school, I and my classmates danced in shouts of encouragement of everybody. We practiced through 10 days for teacher?Ts day. My class hadn?Tt person who could sang well, so we chosen dancing. I selected members and directed steps for everybody to practice. We stayed at school after learn time and practiced hardly day by day. Sometime we fight about steps or music which we chosen, but it wasn?Tt big problem. We helped together and became to closer. When important day came, we was so nervous, my friends was worry and I was too, but I said to everybody that ?oit?Ts easy, don?Tt worry, we can do it?. I looked like confident and calm but I even couldn?Tt breath normal, I continuously watched clock. When we stood on the stage, I felt stress and when music was played, I forgot any steps which I must do. At that time, I was fearful. My friend beside me hold my hand and whisper: ?owe can?. So I tried to focus to listen music. Sweat made my shirt soaked, but I didn?Tt wrong in any steps and finished perfect. When the music was turned off, everybody shouted ?obravô?, it?Ts wonderful. We hold together and smile, I hadn?Tt felt nervous, instead I felt comfortable and happy. Until now, I can?Tt do anything like that, dance in front of many people.
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thanh tú - E30
When I was the first year student, my close friend persuaded me go to the cinema near my house with her. Firstly, I had?Tt wanted to go because it was a horror film. Moreover I am chicken-hearted . But my curiousness made me to agree to go with her. It tell a story about Cassey who is 18 years old. She was obsessed by a spirit because of a vow. The spirit was a boy was embodiment of a devil about 8 years old. The boy appeared everywhere especially in glasses in her house. The devil caused her boyfriend?Ts death. He was killed very terriblely because wanted to help Cassey. This film?Ts background usually was showed at midnight with many awful images. I was very frightened so I didn?Tt want to see what happed before my eyes. Some scenes had caused me and many audiences screamed because of scares. It made me couldn?Tt sleep this night. All night I had pictured the boy with blood everywhere. It had challenged my calm. I reminded me that it was a film and everything was only my imagination. It is the most creepy film I have ever seen before. I want to forget it forever.
2. We ate a wonderful meal
It was a Japanese meal and each dish was cooked very meticulously.
3. The flower garden was delightful
It had many different flowers for example rose is red, orchid is white, sunflower is yellow.
4. The alley had not been taken care of for many years and it was in bad shape.
Many pot-holes in the surface of the road which hadn?Tt been repaired over the past the 20 years.
5. My father taught me to swim in a river behind our house.
We started to swim the crawl, breast stroke and butterfly at 5.am every day
6. My mother?Ts kitchen was everyone?Ts favorite room
It was very clean, sweet-smelling but the important thing we like most was many prepared fresh fruits in refrigerator.

Name: Ngô Minh Hà
Class: E29
Narative paragraph
The special scholarship of mine at university
When I was a third-year student, I got a special scholarship from Cargill Company supported to my faculty. At that time, a lot of students are candidates for the scholarship but there were only two grants for who achieved the highest study results. Besides, in order to get it you have to pass an English exam held by the company. The exam made me nervous and always thought what can be made in the test even in the class or at home. Since I received that information, I studied harder than usual especially spending much time for English subject. On the day the oral English test was taken, I was a first candidate, who had passed the paper test before, being called for the interview. I came to the company very early because I want myself to be more confident in front of the interview. In the interview, I felt very happy when she said I was a candidate got the highest score in the paper test. Then, in spite of that, I still felt shaking when facing with examiner so I could not speak fluently and express my opinion about the issues were given. I also could not dare to look the examiner straight in the eye. After the interview, the examiner advised me to be more confident in front of any interview which I would have in the future. I felt very disappointed after getting out of the interview room. When I came home, I thought that I failed the exam but luckily I got an announcement that I was one of two students gained Cargill scholarship. I was extremely happy and made a party with my friends. Finally, I realized that the most important interview experience is confident in any situation.
Exercise 5: Practicing with emotional details
1. I would like to forget my first job interview.
I was so nervous my hands were wet, and so was my shirt.
2. I met my girlfriend on the internet.
I felt so happy when I have not met her for a long time so I chatted with her for 2 hours.
3. At first, I did not like the new puppy, but after awhile I changed my mind.
The puppy did not make me feel good but I still had to use it because of having any other choices.
4. I began to walk down the aisle towards my future husband.
I felt both nervous and glad when he is going to be the most wonderful husband in my life.
5. I walked into the cold dark ****.
It made me shaking and afraid of the quick change weather.
6. The test was over, and I had earned the highest score.
The highest score which I got made me extremely cheerful because I would receive a big reward from my father on Christmas day.

NGUYEN THU HUONG
E32
When western style clothing first reached Vietnam over a hundred years ago, Vietnamese men an woman wore the â?oAo Daiâ? in all aspects of the lives. But, in modern times, the Ao Dai have become a tra***ional costume to be worn on holidays such as New Yearâ?Ts day or weddings. Colors of the Ao Dai have been changed according to the current of the times. However, the most popular color has always been white. The reason why white color is preferred by Vietnamese is its affinity with purity and innocence, which are considered to be Vietnamese characteristic traits. In comparison to the lines of western-style clothing, the beauty of Ao Dai lies in its charm. The dress splits into a front and back panel from the waist down. Comfort has not been forgotten at the expense of fashion and beauty. The cut allows the wearer freedom of movement and despite covering the whole body, it is cool to wear. Whether overweight or slim, these clothes will adjust to your body from naturally. Now the updated version of tra***ional Vietnamese clothes has been on the market for some time and is appealing to the public.

Hồng Trang _ E29
Emotional:
1. I was so happy to met her again, we wasn''t met long ago
2. At first, I was a bit afraid it, so then I see it very lovely
3. When to walk down the aisle towards my future husband, I''m very nervous, my heart started fast beating and my face went red. I''m really very happy when he next.
4. I was very afraid and that creepy, it''s dark, cold and wet.
5. I am very happy and excited about own test.
My challenge
I''m a quite coward girl. I''m very afraid of ghosts, devil and thrilling stories. I never watch thriller because horrified and amazed images make me scared stiff and I can lacking of sleep several nights. However, the challenge that I have experienced has made me really scared, although it''s easy thing for many people. That''s when I ride the park with classmates. We were played a lot of games. When a different play area, everyone see "nha ma". They''re really interested and curious, they pull together to play. I was really nervous , not know there really scary as what I imagine but everyone were agreed to play so I also play with them. I was also shy when everyone think I''m a coward. I went with a boy classmate to less than feared. When I step in, the thrilling sounds was began emitting, the crying, the moaning. I close one''s eyes, earlock and shouted from when in to when out in order to not hear and see thrilling sounds and images. Sometimes, I open eyes to seeing, oh! the thrilling images. I still shouted when come out. My friends see them as normal dummies decorated to make people scared. They ''re really brave. I will never watch things again.

HO THI HAI THUY - E29
1. Have you ever done something that challenged you?
When I was 10 years old, there is a memory that I have never forgotten, my father helped me take the bike in the football stadium near my house. I am very afraid of height. Therefore, cycling is very difficult for me. I do not keep the balance and I feel unsafe when I sat in the bicycle. Someday, my parents also took me to school and pick me. One day, my father decided to file for my bicycle. He encouraged me and shown me how to cycling. When I was proficient some basic acts, my father kept his hand behind and I cycled myself. Beginning, the mood is worry, I cycled tottering steps. Some days later, I cycled better but my father still have to keep his hand behind. When I went to a long section, my father in the back shouted:" I have been cycling". I turned and saw that my father is far away. Meanwhile, I am extremely happy because finally. I would have done thing that I fear this long. That evening, I was thinking and I realized one thing, if you are patient. you will overcome all difficulties.
2. Practicing with sensory details.
1. We ate a wonderful meal
Lobster is very fragrant and nutritious.
2. The flower garden was delightful.
Roses is vermilion, they are very nice but there are many thorns.
3. The alley had not been taken care of for many years and it was in bad shape.
Some people lack awareness painted many depraved pictures in wall of the alley.
4. My father taught me to swim in a river behind our house.
I dive under the water, I feel happy like in the ocean.
5. My mother''s kitchen was everyone''s favorite room.
We can enjoy delicious dishes by hand of my mother.

Vũ Phượng - E30
Narrative paragraph

The wonderful sound
When I was a little girl, I traveled Sam Son with my family and I had a unforgettable memory. When we arrived the beach, my mother took me to rent the swimsuit. After I had changed, I didn''t see my mother. Before my eyes is a sea of people and I started feel panic-stricken. I only wanted to cry but I thought if I cry, I can be kidnaped. So I tried to dominate my emotion. I run to find my mother everywhere and my legs was tremble. When my head was embarrassed and troubled, suddenly, I listened my mother''s voice. Properly it''s a wonderful sound. Then I was reprove but I felt very happy because I found my mother.
Sensory details
2. We ate a wonderful meal.
It''s off-taste, sweet-smelling and very tasty.
3. The flower garden was delightful.
There are many flowews such as rose, daisy, lily,.. All of them are bright and fragrant.
4. The alley had not been taken care of for many years and it was in bad shape.
It''s dark, full of garbage and dusty.
5. My father taught me to swim in a river beside our house.
He taught me hold one''s breath, float on the water surface and move arms ang legs.
6. My mother'' kitchen was everyone''s favorite room.
It''s a place where members in family group and talk cheerfully in meals.

em Nga - E32
I think most people had a bike when we were pupils. I was too, and it is really meant to me. At that time, I was the fifth grade, and I always went to school, back home on foot although my home was rarely far. That day, it rained dog and cat, the street was flooded. I was small but I dared to wade to come back home. I went slowly and thought the road was so long. Until I lost my sandal, I felt truly cold and scared. I only stayed there and cried. It was late and I wasnâ?Tt home so my parents went to find me and took me home. A following day, I had a yellow bike, very remarkable. I knew my parents were very worry, they thought a bike was necessary. Currently I donâ?Tt use the bike, it belongs to my little sister but every time I see it, I feel happy because of the love of my parents for me.