Bạn ơi Anh_Mi khac Anh_Anh ở những điểm nào nhỉ?

các bác xem em co sai gi trong những câu này không hộ cái nhở,:
) thou shall not very worry neddlessly about mistakes.You aren't unworhtly or incapable just because you made some mistakes ,remember that mistakes are necessary for growth.
2)thou shall not control things.your way is not always the best way , remain open-minded , and don't worry if things don't go as expected.
3)thou shall not blame other,don't make others respnsible for your happiness you are in control of your happiness and you can choose to make the day a positive one
4)thou shall not worry .don't worry about the things that you can't change or have no control over,have faith that storms never last long and tomorrow will be brighter.
5)thou shall neve surrender,you must try to climb that hill even when it seems too steep,no matter how difficult to tasks seems , it's better to try than to wonder if you could have succeeded
6)thou you grow,never think that you have to stay where you are in life, everynewday offers an opportunity for change
7)thou shall not judfge others hashly,try to accept other people for who they are,just because someone is different from you, doesn'tmean they are inferior,everyone was created in god's image
8)thou shall not fret over others opinions not everyone will like you and some people will critize you but you must not feel unworthy ,you need no one's approval to be you
9)thou shall not doubt your ability,you should always have faith in yourself,refuse to give the nagative voice in your head an aucidence
10)thou shall not fix the world,it's good to help others , but remember that you can't fix everyone's problems
Everything can change but change!

Since HaPhuong insisted this is from a true blue English text from England I will try to identify which sentence is British (B) and which is American (A) . If I cannot, I will write what I think the way Americans normally write.
1) - It looks a lovely evening (B) & 2) - It looks to be a lovely evening (A)
3) - He practises the piano,but not as often as he might do (B)& 4) - He practises the piano,but not as often as he might(A)
Americans never write ??o Practisê??, ??opracticê?? instead .
I would write ??oHe practices the piano, but not as often as he should.
5) - Let's not invite them(A) & 6) - Don't let's invite them.(B)
7) - You'll just have to try harder,won't you?(B) & 8) - You'll have to try harder,right?(A)
9) - We haven't got much time (A)& 10) - We haven't much time(B)
11) - Your driving has got better(A) & 12) - Your driving has gotten better(B)
You driving is getting better (sounds better to me.)
13) - I've just met an old friend (B)& 14) - I just met an old friend(A)(not sure)
Have you ever seen St Paul's Cathedral? (A)& - Did you ever see the Empire State Building?(B)
(American would say: ??o Did you see the ESBuilding?)
15) - Shall I meet you at the entrance?(B) & 16) - Should I meet you at the entrance?(A)
17) - Do we dare to ask? (A)&18) - Dare we ask?(B)
19) - A careers adviser (B)& 20) - A career counselor(A)
21) - John is in hospital but his sister is at university(B) & 22) - John is in the hospital but his sister is at the university(A)
23) - One must consider one's legal position(B) & 24) - You must consider your legal position(A)(Americans rarely use ??oonê??)
25) - Two hundred and fifty(B) & 26) - Two hundred fifty(A)
27) - July the fourth(B) & 28) - July fourth(A) ( or The Fourth of July when you refer to the holiday)
29) - That was really nice of her (A)& 30) - That was real nice of her(B)
31) - Let's go out somewhere(A) & 32) - Let's go out someplace(B)
Let??Ts go somewhere(?)
33) - She is looking out of the windows (B)& 34) - She is looking out the windows(A)
35) - He likes going round/around the park (B)& 36) - He likes going around the park(A) (? same sentence)
37) - I'm all right now, except for a headache(A) & 38) - I'm all right now, aside from a headache(B)
39) - They will stay in New York through April(B) & 40) - They will stay in London till April(A)
41) - Monday to Friday inclusive(B) & 42) - Moday through Friday(A)
43) - In Oxford Street(B) & 44) - On Fifth Avenue(A)
45) - A player in the team(B) & 46) - A player on a team(A)
47) - Talk to somebody (A)& 48) - Talk with somebody(B)
49) - Ten to three(A) & 50) - Ten of three(B)(? very strange, must be Bristish)
51) - Go and take a look outside(B) & 52) - Go take a look outside(A)(either way is correct)
53) - Go quitely in case anyone hears you(A) & 54) - Go quitely lest anyone hear you(B)

Despair is not Hopeless!​

Em thì em không sao đồng ý với đồng chí HaPhuong được bác Despi ạ. Những câu như dưới đây là sai toét toè loe rồi còn gì... em chẳng hiểu sách của bạn Phuong kiếm đâu ra nữa.
It looks a lovely evening (B) & 2) - It looks to be a lovely evening (A
6) - Don't let's invite them
50) - Ten of three(B
Em còn không đồng ý với bác cái này. Bác bảo:
(Americans rarely use ??oone???)
là sai bác ạ. One được dùng để viết là chính... you được dùng trong khi nói. Em thấy nói chung viết luận hay dùng 'one' lắm.. phải cái là dùng nhiều thì thành rối.
BE YOUR SELF AS THOSE WHO MATTER DONT CARE AND THOSE WHO CARE DONT MATTER

Hì, cái bài trên có phải của đồng chí Ha Phuong viết không nhỉ
Được sửa chữa bởi - longatum vào 06/02/2002 04:13

Mấy cái viết trên đây là bắt chước theo cái Ten Commandments... bây giờ nhiều sách dậy tiếng Anh bắt chước theo kiểu viết này... đọc lần đầu thì thấy có vẻ sophisticated... đọc nhiều quá thấy phát nhàm.
Tớ nghĩ là không có gì sai cả, có sai thì chỉ là typo thôi... mà typo thì chắc là lỗi của đc HaPhuong rồi.
BE YOUR SELF AS THOSE WHO MATTER DONT CARE AND THOSE WHO CARE DONT MATTER

HaPhương mần ơn cho cái dấu cách (space) ngay sau chấm & phết dùm tui một chút nghen. (từ nay trở đi Milou viết giọng miền Nam)

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Thou là you trong tiếng Anh cổ nhể ?
Thế thì em nghĩ là thou shalt chứ không phải thou shall.
Chịu chả biết thế nào đợi các bác cao thủ chỉ giáo.

Thou shall not với Thou shalt thì cũng là một thôi bác ạ. Nhưng mà ở trong 10 Commandments thì đúng phải là Shalt.
Thou: You trong (you, I...)
Thy: your
Thee: you trong (you, me...)
đúng là tiếng anh cổ, cực kỳ cổ...
BE YOUR SELF AS THOSE WHO MATTER DONT CARE AND THOSE WHO CARE DONT MATTER

Since I promise HaPhuong Iâ?Tll take a look at essay.
Dear my friends,
We strive to promote communication to link our hearts and to creat[CREATE] a domain for everyone to gather together. We can build the road to [A] better tomorrow... Even though the stars and breeze(?) have faded, our friendship is shinning brightly as ever.Time can never change my deep and lasting wish(?) for you. I'm always beside you to share your joys and sadness and to laze(?Strange word, unnatural usage) around with you. Of all the friends I've met, you are the one I'll never forget. I'm very happy because of [HAPPY FOR] having a friend like you, it's you [WHO] make langitude and lanitude [LONGITUDES & LATITUDES](?)of the earth.You are [A] magical spark in a world that sometimes seems dark. Your light never fails to touch my heart[ ]and soul[,] leaving behind a feeling of peace and an acsurance [AND ASSURANCE] that goodness truly exists[this sentence can stop here]in the world. Let's pray for peace on earth, for love and good will do [GOOD WILL TO] all. There's no season to .... (?)when we're surrounded by so much beauty and light. We can all do our parts,[. WE] we can care and quite shedding wasted tears[WE CARE AND SHED TEARS] long enough to spread love and hope [. (can stop here)]everywhere. It's not so difficult to forget our urger[URGE?] and strife (? donâ??t understand what you want to say)if we remember the miracle [THAT]God gave us called life. Every god [GOOD]and perfect gift is from aboves [ABOVE] coming down[strange sentence], from the Father of heavenly lights. I'm sending you these words today[THAT] is just some age_old [AGE-OLD]wisdom told in a different way. But if these words raise your spirit and make you woes depart, then I'll be glad to know that they're touched your heart. I just wanted to remind you that there's someone up above[SOMEONE UP THERE WATCHING OVER YOU]. Who's always watching over you and sending you his love! And like our Father in heaven, I'm always here for you, to send a bit sunshine when you are lost and blue[from ABBAâ?Ts Happy New Year? YOU SHOULD NEVER COPY OTHERSâ?T WORKS, THAT IS PLAGIARISM, YOU COULD RECEIVE A â?o0â?? FOR COPIED WORKS].We are different, but we were meant to be friends. There's [THERE IS]something special about you and that touches my heart again and again.I can't fathom[, (strange usage)] I simply can't begin to image life without you. Whatever you do, remember that you have a friend [WHO WILL BE ALWAYS] in me that will be always be true.There's no worth thing in thw wear of winning[?, Donâ?Tt understand what you want to write] ,but laughter and [LOVE]the love of friendship and I believe in it perfectly[still donâ?Tt understand what you mean].
All things [EVERYTHING STARTS] start with a [COMING] new year coming. [strange sentence] May great joys be your company, may good luck be your partner[strange usage][I donâ?Tt want to continue, despi], may all happiness and gladness surround you from this moment, may your new year be filled with the happiest days and all days with brightest promise , may every wishes you're wishing and every dream comes true.I wish a HAPPY NEW YEAR to you real.Thanks everyone and thanks angain and again for your help.

Despair is not Hopeless!​

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