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When man first looked at the bird flying in the sky and wandering away into the unknown regions of the earth, he at onve felt the urge to travel is still so strong that people everywhere are always going to other lands to satisfy the urge.
That travel improves the mind and adds to person's knowledge cannot be denied. When a person travels he visits people of all races and places. He meets people whose customs and habits are not the same as his. He passes through areas of different climates and regions where even the plants and animals are different from those found in his own country. As he sees all these things he begins to realise how different the people and places are in different parts of the world. He alsi begins to learn that the struggles and occupations of the people in all parts of the earth are not the same. The work of the people of a country is influenced by geographical factors and reliegious beliefs.
The traveller also learns that though the people of the world do not follow the same customs and do the same kind of work everywhere, yet their feelings, hopes and desires are the same everywhere. A man in the North Pole has the same feelings of love, sympathy and desperation as in another distant part of the earth. They both laugh at and fight and struggle for the same things such as, food, love and security for their families and themselves. They also have the same hopes and desires. Knowlegde of all these things improves the mind of the traveller to a great extent. He ceases *****spect strangers and becomes more friendly with people who are not pf the same race, religion and customs as he is.
Finally, travel helps one to know about the geographical differences of the various coutries of the world. One sees with one's own eyes and remembers things which are not written about in any book. Such knowlegde broadens one's mind and makes one a better and more reasonable person. The value of travel is therefore not diffcult to realise.


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Một đặc điểm quan trọng trong bài luận là "sự chuyển tiếp" hay thủ thuật chuyển ý từ đoạn này sang đoạn tiếp theo. Người viết không nên nhảy từ ý này sang ý khác mà không rõ sự liên hệ của đoạn sau với đoạn trước. Phần cuối của một đoạn là chuẩn bị cho đoạn là chuẩn bị cho đoạn kế tiếp. Đôi khi cần viết một câu ở cuối đoạn chỉ đơn thuần cho thấy sự liên hệ với những gì tiếp sau và không phải cung cấp thêm thông tin.
Trong một bài luận cần phải chú trọng đến những điểm sau:
1, Ngữ pháp
2, Trật tự chính xác của từ
3, Dấu chấm
4, Biến đổi chiều dài và hình thức câu văn
5, Sự trong sáng
Nên tránh những điều sau:
1, Từ lóng
2, từ viết ngoại trừ những từ được chấp nhận như "Mr"
3, sử dụng thường xuyên từ "tôi"
4, Ngôn ngữ giả tạo
Cuối cùng, sau khi đã viết xong bài luận nên đọc lại cẩn thẩn. Cần sửa và bổ sung những chỗ cần thiết.
Hy vọng những thông tin này sẽ giúp ích.
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My most favourite subject
My most favourite subject is English which is today one of the most important languages in the world. It is spoken and understood in all parts of the earth.
English has become an international language for a variety of reasons. One of the most important is that the English people have been well-known for their knowledge of science, medicine, engineering, goverment and all other matters that are useful for the progress of the human race. It í because of the scientists of England that the motorengine has become the thimost important manchine in the world today.
In the same way, English scholars(1) have studied the past and discovered many things of great value to the peoples of the world. Some of the things which were useful to men in the early days were later forgotten by others. Such things are now being used, owing to the work of English scholars.
The insatiable thirst(2) for knowledge of the English scholars has contributed to the progress of man in almost all fields of his activity. Thousands of books have been written by such scholars on almost every subject that one can think of. Thus, people whose native tongue(3) is not English have learnt English with great interest as a means of all human affairs.
As a result of this interest English is used almost everywhere in the world. It is used in all the important meetings and conferences and debates(4) such as, in all the United Nations. It is also used in all the leading Universities in the world and in international trade and commerce(5). As it is used so widely, English has indeed become a very rich language. People of all the coutries of the world have contributed new ideas and thoughts to this language. Thus, more and more new words are being coined(6) to make this language more and more useful for the communication of ideas and information among the people of the world.
It is for all these reasons that I like to study the English language.
New words: 1, scholar(n) học giả.
2, insatiable thirst(n) sự khát khao (hiểu biết)
3, native tongue(n) tiếng mẹ đẻ.
]4, debate(n)cuộc thảo luận.
5, commerce(n) thương nghiệp.
6, coin(v) tạo ra, sáng chế. [/right]
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Từ bài này, ddana sẽ post kèm theo các nghĩa của 1 số từ khó để cho tiện đọc và hiểu. Tiếp theo hai bài luận ở trên sẽ là 1 chủ đề để bạn có thể tham khảo viết trong thi (là một số chủ đề thường gặp).
TOPIC : Some people believe that a college or univesity education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with ? Explain why.

An important goal of education is to learn about yourself. Once are separated(tách khỏi) from your parents, you are on your own. You are forced(bắt buộc) to deal with all different kinds of people and issuses(kết quả). You make an investment(đầu tư) in yourself and in your future.
I can understand why some people would think that a college or university education is very expensive. It might seem like a waste of money to send someone to college who might not be able to handle the course work. Higher education is also a big investment of time. Maybe it would make more sense for a mediocre(thường) student to use that time getting a job and starting to earn money. Also, there are trade schools for the students who aren't academically inclined(hướng vào đại học). Here they can learn a trade and a way to earn a living. Why should they go to college or university? Besides, if they go to college and fail, this will discourage(làm mất can đảm) them and make them feel interior(hạ thấp).
I don't agree with this position. I think a college or university education should be available to all students. I think every student should have the opportunity to at least try his hand at college classes. Yes, higher education is expensive, but it is worth it. Yes, higher education is a big investment of time, but it is valuable investment. If a student finds out he or she can't handle the work, there's plenty of time after that to go to trade school or find a job. Failing at college or university might be hard on a student's self-image, but learn how to handle failure is one of the bard lessons of life.
I think every students should be given a chance to see hơ far she can go. Students who were got mediocre grades in secondary school might do very well in a different environment. College is more than just going to class. It's a time to meet different people, separate from parents, begin to define yourself as a person. I think that's an experience every student should have.
Note: các nghĩa của từ chỉ phù hợp với hoàn cảnh trong văn bản.[/blue]
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TOPIC: People attend college or university for may different reasons (for example, new experiences, carrer preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples *****pport your answer.
People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a carrer, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Carrer preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, preparing for a carrer in a competitive job market is the primary reason to go to college. At college, it's possible to learn new skill for carrers with a lot of oppotunites. This means carrers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their home towns. For most students, going to college is the first time they're been away from home by themselves. Being independent like this means having to make decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self_knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subject they find interesting. For many, this will be[ last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn't have to their career.
I would recommend that people not to be so focused on career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn as much as they can about themselves and the world they live in.
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Cảm ơn mọi ng` ủng hộ và nếu ai có quan tâm đến quyển sách đó thì có thể tìm ở hiệu sách đều có hết. Tiêu đề của quyển sách là : 136 bài luận mẫu hay nhất_ by Milon Nandy. Nếu ai mua thì có thể tìm mua ở phố Đinh Lễ cắt Nguyễn Xí ở đó bán rẻ hơn trong hiệu sách(đi vào chiều tối sau 17h hoặc ngày nghỉ bất cứ lúc nào).
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Topic: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change ? Use reasons and specific examples *****pport your answer.
If I could change one thing about my hometown I think it would be the fact that there's no sense of community here. People don't feel connected, they don't look out for each other, and they don't get to know their neighbors.
People come and go a lot here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don't put down roots in the community. They don't join community organizations, and they're not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don't feel it has anything to do with them. They don't get involved in improving the schools because they don't think the quality of
education is important to their lives. They don't see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.
People don't try *****pport others around them. They don't keep a friendly eye on their children, or check in on older folks if they don't see them for a few days. They're not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. There's not a lot of community support for individuals.
Neighbors don't get to know each other. Again, this is because people come and do within a few years. So when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house. No one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. When neighbors' children are cutting across someone's lawn on their bikes, there's no friendly way of casually mentioning the problem. People mmediately act as if it's a major property disagreement.
My hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nicer if we had that sense of community.
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The value of music in the happiness of man
Music has always been a source of hapiness to all men on the earth. From their primitive days, men's love of music has led them to make instruments of all descriptions to produce beautiful music for their enjoyment and hapiness.
Without music the world would indeed be a very dull place to live in. Even nature is full of music. There is music in the movements of the winds, the sea, as well as the trees; there is music in the calls of the birds, flies and insects and also in the flight of the birds and animals. It is from all these things that men have learnt to appreciat the value of music. The same things have also taught men how to produce music from the simplest of things such as, sticks, bamboos, and animal horns. Men make many kinds of flutes with bamboos which produce beautiful music.
That music is very important for men's happiness is hard to deny. Music removes men's depression and fills them with gladness. It is for this reason that music is played even in hospitals to cheer up the sick people.
As music has the capacity to make men happy, it contributes greatly to men's sucess in life. a happy man is a good and hard worker. He works happily amongs people and earns the good-will of all around. People like to associate with him and to employ him in all kinds of work. Thus, he leads a happy and sucessful life.
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War and peace
Since the time men learned to live in communities, in the remote past, wars have always been fought at regular intervals in various part of the world. In fact, the history of the human race is mainly a record of the battle and wars fought in the past between communities and nations.
Wars are caused mainly by human greed and ambition In the early days of menâ?Ts existence, many communities lived a very hard life, owing perhaps to the lack of geographical advantages or intellectual ability. As a result, the prosperity of other communities aroused their greed and envy, and wars between communities became inevitable. One side fought to conquer the prosperous communities in order to gain control of the means of prosperity, and the other side fought to defend its independence and way of life. With the passage of time, the communities developed into nations, and wars were fought on a bigger scale, but the basic causes of war remained the same. It was only occasionally that battles were fought with other aim such as, the capture of a woman to satisfy the ***ual lust of a conqueror or ruler.
However, success in wars stirred the ambitions of many nations. Wars were then fought for domination and extension of power. Several small nations soon came under the dominion of a powerful country, which the developed into an Empire. The Roman Empire, for example, was created mainly by conquest. Even the personal ambitions of some individuals have been the cause of wars at times. The ambitions of Napoleon and Hitler for world conquest caused many battles, in which millions of people, young and old, gave their lives.
The devastation caused by wars, however, has always aroused the conscience of several nations, and attempts have been made by such nations to prevent wars in the future. Their leaders have met at various times, in the course of history, to discuss peace and to find a way of removing the causes of war. It is this urge that led to the creation of the United Nations, after the failure of the League of Nations, which today is doing its utmost to maintain peace between nations.
But the desire peace has instead led to further wars, for peace often demands the destruction of the ambitions of those who begin wars. The wars begun by Napoleon and Hitler could be ended only by fighting further wars to destroy these men, who have been responsible for the greatest sufferings in the history of the world. Human ambitions, however, is indifferent to the lessons of history. In times of wars, men seek for peace, but when there is peace, there are attempts to begin wars. Once a war is begun, however, those responsible for it are crushed in the end. Yet ambitious countries and individuals are still trying to extend their power, but they are being opposed by those who love peace. Thus, wars will continue to exist, while at the same time, attempts will be made to attain peace in the world.


Forever trust in who you are




And nothing else matter!

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