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I feel so tired, desperate and idle. I don''''t want to do anything, don''''t want to fight with anything, just want to go far away ....
I''''m really really exhausted, I couldn''''t deal with anything more. I couldn''''t find any motivations now, I am out of control now... If ever tears could dry away all of my desperation, my anger, my misaction and my weakness. Please!
I''m deep into troubles and the worst thing ever is that I just don''t even care to take my feet out of troubles, I feel like that I couldn''t stand up even to try or maybe do I like troubles?
Được bluethorn sửa chữa / chuyển vào 00:11 ngày 26/02/2007

I am like you sometimes (maybe most of the time) but I don''t give up on anything because I understand the nature of life. Things don''t always turn out the way we want them to be. All of us know life is hard to handle sometimes. Death is never a solution, only a trouble for your family and friends. If you feel stressful, find someone you can trust and talk to them. If you need a listener, you can always chat with me via Yahoo Messenger (ID: nktvnvn). I''d like to help.

Hello everybody!
I''''m very bad in English. In the last term, I recieved many bad points. So, I want to improve my English. I tried to write diary by English, translate some passages to English or Vietnamese, study with CD,... but I need a person who can help me with repairing my exercises and I want to see my mistakes.
Well... Can you repair this paragraph?
Thanks!
Được ojwama sửa chữa / chuyển vào 00:52 ngày 28/02/2007

thank you, kiku_hana!
I think I can use ''in'' in this sentence '' I''m very bad in English''. If I''m wrong, can you tell me why it was wrong.

"I''m very bad at English" - this sentence is correct.
It''s structure...that''''s the way it is....it''''s a rule of "adjective + preposition"
Normally they say "last term " more usual than in the last term.
Shouldn''''t start a sentence by "so"
Được lovecactus sửa chữa / chuyển vào 21:01 ngày 28/02/2007

Thì dĩ nhiên là đúng roài. Tớ correct như thế mà.
So hay thus hay therefore...phụ thuộc vào văn gì thôi. Informal thì vẫn dùng tuốt

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