Chia sẻ kinh nghiệm IELTS (tiếp)

Phần reading cũng tuỳ, ko thể nói là dễ được. Lại càng ko thể nói là ''dễ lắm" được. Dễ hay ko tuỳ thuộc vào sự chăm chỉ và khả năng của bản thân mình thôi. Bạn cứ học đi sẽ thấy phần đọc của IELTS nhiều khi ko hề đơn giản đâu.

Chủ nhật rỗi rãi viết thử một bài essay với cái đề thi hôm 21/3. Các bạn cho tớ nhận xét với, thế này thì đi thi được khoảng bao nhiêu điểm nhỉ
Task 2: Should goverments spend public fund on preventation diseases or treat the pepole when they are ill?
Essay:
In recent years, the question of whether taxpayers?T money should be used in disease treatment or prevention has become an issue of public concern. Supporters of each health care system can provide us with some considerable explanations for their viewpoints. However, on both medical and economic ground, it is likely that medical prevention will bring more benefits to our society.
Firstly, one remarkable advantage of prior disease diagnosis is that it is more possible to save the lives of patients. Until modern times, there are still some disorders in human body that scientists have yet to discover an effective process of treatment. For example, doctors can totally detect various kinds of avian flu, but are not able to monitor the transform of these viruses every year. Accordingly, hospitals are not the best place for our health care. Instead, it is responsibility of individuals to take care of their own well-being.
Besides the probability of early saving human lives, the disease prevention also costs less expensively than the therapy. This is very apparent in terms of serious diseases such as cancer, HIV-AIDS or urine impairs. The curing expen***ure for these sicknesses is at the amount of money that not everyone can afford, specifically in poor developing countries. Furthermore, people can protect their strength just by some normal measurements. By eating healthy food, having safe *** life or exercising, it is clear that many diseases will be prevented.
In conclusion, governments should spend public funds in the way of preventing illnesses rather than treating people. This method, both medically and economically, leads to enormous advantages for our lives. In some nations where human still dies from avoidable diseases, more attentions in health care system are needed to ensure the healthiness for every citizen.
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Được tuananh441987 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 13:43 ngày 28/03/2009

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Your essay is really good and convincing. Congratulations! You''ve made enormous efforts !

Vì mình thấy có 1 số bạn hỏi về chủ đề speaking nên hôm nay mình post lại để mọi người tham khảo nhé. (nguồn esolasia.com).
1. Introduce yourself.
2. Describe your hometown. What is special about it?
3. Compare your hometown with another town.
4. Describe your country''s education system. What is your attitude
toward this system? Do you think it''s effective?
5. Describe the organization you work for. Where is it? What does it
do? What is your job function?
6. Describe the process of taking a job in your country.
7. Compare the role of men and women in your country.
8. What is Brain drain? What are the causes and effects of it?
9. Discuss why you would like to visit a particular country. When are
you going to visit
it and why?
10. Discuss the factors affecting people to have more or less children
in your country.
11. Describe a tra***ional dish in your country. What are the ingredients?
12. Describe the tra***ional Architecture of your country. Is there
something special about
it?
13. Compare tra***ional houses with modern houses in your country.
14. Discuss why you like a special kind of book, music, sports, or film.
15. Give reasons why the divorce rate has or has not increased in your country.
16. Describe a tra***ional instrument in your country.
17. Describe an important festival in Iran. When is it? What do people do then?
18. Describe the ethnic mix in your country.
19. Describe a tra***ional garment in your country.
20. What is your favourite colour? Why? What is the relationship
between the colour of
clothes and the personality of people? What is the relationship with mood?
21. Describe a historical place in your country. Where is it? What is
special about it?
22. Talk about mass media. Newspapers and their attractions for you.
23. Describe a tra***ional /children''s/international/card game.
24. Why do people play games?
25. What is your greatest wish/ one of your wishes?
26. What don''t you know about your future?
27. Why do people collect things? Do you collect anything?
28. Describe an invention before or after computer. Should the
governments support
inventors? Why do inventors invent?
29. What is fashion? Do you follow fashion? Why do people follow fashion? How do
people in your country follow fashion?
30. What is the process of obtaining a driving license/passport/etc.
in your country?
31. Describe one of your photos. Where, when and with whom did you take it?

chán quá mọi người ạ đăng kí 18/4 thìkhông còn chỗ. Giờ mình phải chạy sô sang mùng 4, có nghĩa là còn ...2 ngày nữa để chuẩn bị
Cuộc đời thật là ngang trái

Không biết nói gì hơn ngoài good luck. Có kết quả nhớ thông báo nhé.

Hi everyone
Ghé qua box mình thấy vui quá ha. Mình đang học năm 3, còn 2 năm nữa ra trường, muốn tranh thủ hè này được nghỉ dài dài đầu tư ôn luyện tiếng Anh thật nghiêm túc,. Mình rất mong được các bạn giúp đỡ. Cảm ơn các bạn rất nhiều.
Nik YM của mình là : Minzy_vn.

Tình hình là mình đang gặp vấn đề trầm trọng về ideas. Mình rất kém trong khoản brainstorming ideas để triển khai viết.
Nên nó cứ luẩn quẩn. và đôi khi nghĩ ra những cái ý rất dở hơi chẳng ra đâu với đâu cả.
Có cách nào để khắc phục việc này ko các bạn ơi.