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Em nào post bài lên cái.Mà sao mãi chỉ có 5 bài writing thía! Hết hạn post bài rùi mà. Sorry ko tham gia discuss với mọi người được, mình đang ốm.

hix xin lỗi mọi người em gửi bài muộn hix mí hum nay bài vở nhiều quá. bài vít hơi ngớ ngẩn, em vừa viết xong gửi luôn . Tiện thể xin lỗi em Li hum nay chị không đi được. em ơi học gì share cho mợi người với.
Mong mọi người sửa hộ bài ạ. em cám ơn
bó tay ngồi đọc lại bài em Li mới bít mình nhìn nhầm cột. hị hị. thui ngại sửa lại nên hix........................
The graph shows the changes of GDP (gross domestic Product) contribution and employment distribution within three main industry sectors- Natural resources, Industry and Services in a developing country. According to the graph, Services sector has largest number of employment, 58 percents. The second is natural resources with 19.2 percents, less than twice times in comparison with services sector. The rest ones are contributed to Industry and other. Nowadays, many employments are involved in services sector because people have more disposal income so that they tend to use services to satisfy their need. Thus, this caused the different in employment distribution . Besides achieving the largest employment distribution, services sector also contribute the biggest part in GDP, it is more than the contribution number of Natural resources and industry sector plus together. However, there was a slightly fall in the percentage of services contribution in the graph. Although industry has lowest contribution in GDP, its percentage still increased slightly and become higher than natural resources sector from mid-1994. The natural resources sector has second rank in GDP distribution from 1986 to mid-1994. However its percentages changed fluctuate from 1992 to 1995 and tend to decrease.
Được fiona_fung sửa chữa / chuyển vào 21:57 ngày 26/01/2007
Được fiona_fung sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:18 ngày 26/01/2007

bài của mí người còn lại em thấy đã được sửa kĩ rùi ạ
em thì từ trước đến nay đốt nhất là bài tìm và sửa lỗi sai nên có gì sai sót mọi người bỏ qua nhé
1:speaking literature
2:smt''''''''''''''''s strange, maybe need "''''''''''''''''s"
3: maybe don''''''''''''''''t need "for"
4:can''''''''''''''''t understand
5:s
6:
7:natural resources and services can''''''''''''''''t be decline to about 17% and 55%
hết ạ
mà sao tình hình là câu dài quá anh ạ chả thấy chấm đâu
Được fiona_fung sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:57 ngày 26/01/2007
Được fiona_fung sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:02 ngày 26/01/2007
Được fiona_fung sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:03 ngày 26/01/2007

here is the topic for this MONDAY :
" now you can choose one from the two subjects (or both) to prepare at home and then share your thoughts in the class .
* describe the happinest person you know .
YOu should say :
- who he ( she )is ?
- how do you know him (her)?
-how long have you known him (her)? ANd explain why he ( she ) is the happinest person you know .
* [b]What makes a good friend ?[/b]
You should say in your opinion)
- When does a friendship start ?
- WHat is the most important thing to make an endurable friendship ?
- Describe your best friend .
Được liebedu sửa chữa / chuyển vào 10:22 ngày 27/01/2007

em xin sẵn sàng trả lời câu hỏi của chị Lan , , hôm wa là bvuổi học ngữ pháp và chữa bài reading ( có cả games ) nữa ..hìhì... but vui lém . anh Hoàng hôm wa làm em cả mọi người được trận cười suýt sập cả phòng của bác bảo vệ rùi !!! . học ngữ pháp thì các anh ý cứ mải nhìn "cô xinh xinh " nói english trong CLip thế là chẳng vít lách đựơc chút jì cả (bó tay các anh ý mất thui ), chữa bài đọc thì ....(bí mật ) .còn một vấn đề nữa nhưng thui để anh Hoàng thông báo tiếp ạ ....okie? tại vấn đề này anh Hoàng có vẻ tâm huyết lắm ạ !

... Chasing ... chasing... up up!

How to avoid making mistakes in English
Learners make mistakes and reinforce them because they produce sentences 1) too carelessly or 2) too early. You will avoid mistakes if you follow a couple of rules:
Rules of error-free speaking and writing
1. Use simple language. Some beginners try to build very complicated sentences with things like the present perfect tense or con***ionals. They make horrible mistakes. Don''''t do this! If you''''ve just started to speak or write in English, you should say what you can say (simple sentences that you have seen many times) ?" not what you want to say (complicated sentences). You may feel you''''re talking like a child or that you are not expressing your thoughts, but don''''t worry about it. Right now, your task is not to express your thoughts freely; your task is to learn the language.
2. Be slow and careful. In the beginning, you should write very slowly. If you need 2 hours to write an e-mail message with 10 correct sentences, that''''s okay. That''''s how long it should take if you''''re just starting to write.
Why should it take so long? Because you should read your sentences many times, looking for mistakes. You should correct your own sentences frequently. You should check if your sentences are correct by using a dictionary and the Web. And you should look for example sentences to imitate.
When you''''re speaking, it''''s okay to build a sentence for some time in your head before you open your mouth.
3. If you''''re not sure how to say something, don''''t say it. If you can''''t say something correctly, it''''s almost always better not to say it. You don''''t want to teach yourself the wrong way to say it. You can try to look for the correct sentence in a dictionary or on the Web (see next point), but when speaking, usually you don''''t have time for that. So it''''s a good idea to say something else ?" something that you know is correct. It can even be something on a different subject.
4. When writing, always look things up. Whenever you''''re not sure how to use a word, look it up in a good dictionary to find example sentences with it. When you''''ve written something, and you are not sure if it''''s correct, search for it on the Web with Google. If many pages contain your phrase, then it is probably correct. Dictionaries and Google should be your everyday tools, and you should use them even many times in one sentence (especially if you''''ve just begun writing in English). See this forum topic for more information on using Google when writing.
5. Know where you can screw up. Sometimes learners don''''t even realize how different English is from their native language. When speaking, they translate word for word from their native language, and they think their sentences are okay.
When reading or listening in English, pay close attention to things like word order, articles, prepositions, and tenses. Compare sentences in English with equivalent sentences in your native language. Notice the differences in words and in word order. This will make you more careful when speaking in the foreign language, because you will realize which parts of your sentences can be wrong and should be double-checked.
"Will I ever be fluent if I speak so slowly and carefully?"
Don''''t worry about fluency. Fluency is easy to achieve by simply talking. If you practice speaking, you will be able to speak faster and faster. In high school, Tom achieved pretty good fluency in a month by talking to his English teacher (a native speaker) about two hours a week. That''''s only 8 hours of talking.
In our opinion, it is much better to be slow and correct than be fluent and make a lot of mistakes. Why? Because if you are slow and correct, you can easily improve your speed and become fluent and correct. But if you are fluent and make a lot of mistakes, it is not so easy to remove your mistakes and become fluent and correct.
Tom''''s experience with error-free writing
I recently started learning German. I wanted to start writing e-mails in German as soon as possible, but I didn''''t want to make mistakes and teach myself bad habits. I wrote my first e-mails in German after reading just one short (40-page) book for learners written in simple German, a few e-mail messages from a German friend, and after using my very small SuperMemo collection for a few months. And my e-mails in German had almost no mistakes.
How was that possible ?" writing correct sentences after getting so little input? First, my e-mails contained very simple sentences. But the most important thing was my research: I looked for example sentences on the Web and in dictionaries.
For example, I knew that the German word for use was benutzen, but I didn''''t know how to use it in a sentence like "Which program do you use to copy CDs?". Often, I had an idea how something might be done in German, but I wasn''''t sure if my idea was correct. In such situations, I looked for the answer on the Web or in my dictionaries.
I spent a lot of time on each sentence. It took me more than an hour to write my first message, which contained only a few German sentences.
The writing process was long and it took much effort, but it was fun. The experience was very motivating and it made me even more interested in German. Perhaps one of the reasons why it was so enjoyable was that I knew I was building correct sentences. Don''''t speak or write too early
If you follow the above rules and still make a lot of mistakes when speaking (= more than 1 mistake every 3 sentences), you should probably switch to writing for a while. Consider the following guidelines:
1. First write, then speak. Writing is easier than speaking because: 1) you don''''t need to have good pronunciation (but you need good spelling), 2) you can write very slowly and nobody will mind, 3) you can use dictionaries, the Web, etc. So, it''''s a good idea to practice writing first until you can build correct sentences quickly enough for speaking.
2. Don''''t speak until you''''ve learned to pronounce English sounds. You need to be able to pronounce all the English vowels and consonants in a clear way before you speak. If you don''''t, you will get used to bad pronunciation.
3. Don''''t say a word if you don''''t know how to pronounce it. In other words, you need to know the pronunciation of all the words that you use. If you don''''t, you will be making pronunciation mistakes and teaching yourself bad habits.
If you make more than 1 mistake every 3 sentences when writing in the slow and careful way described above, you should probably stop writing for some time and concentrate on reading and listening.
Remember that you should first get lots of English sentences into your head, then build your own sentences. Your main activity should be reading and listening to English ?" and the reason is that you need good examples to follow before you can build your own sentences. The more sentences your brain absorbs, the more you can express in English. If you don''''t see/hear enough correct, natural English sentences, you will not know how to say things in English. So you will be inventing your own language. And you will be making mistakes.


Được liebedu sửa chữa / chuyển vào 10:06 ngày 28/01/2007

writing test 3 - SAMPLE ANSWER
The first graph shows the percentage of people employed in different sectors of the economy in 1992 . and the percentage of GDP which they produced . The main economic sectors are natural resources , industry and services . The second graph shows movements between 1986 and 1995 .
The first graph reveals that although 77.4% of the population worked in natural resources in 1992 .they produced only 19.2% of GDP. However the 3.6% of the population who worked in industry produced 15.4% of GDP , and the 15.2 % who worked in the service sector produced 58% of GDP .
The second graph shows that services as a percentage of GDP have been falling steadily . In 1986 natural resources provided more than 25% of GDP , but this declined to less than 20% in 1992 , recovered in 1993 but fell below 20% in 1995 . Industry earned less than 10% of GDP in 1986 , but rose almost to 20% in 1995 .
The two graphs reveal that GDP is earned primarily by service sector .
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I see that the passage above is not correct completely.
Because they give us the advice that we have to think carefully before speaking. That idea contrary to almost VN teachers'' idea: "let''s talk! Dont worry about your mistakes! " What do u think, Lie?