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CHI VIET
The table shows consumer preferences for the futures ( features)of automatic washing machine(s) in four countries:United kingdom, Germany, France and Sweden.
Preferences of consumer(s) in United kingdom is(are) the same with France and(drop out) Germany is the same (as) Sweden by some points.The first point to note is english(English)(of the UK) and french(French), as a group, enjoy choosing washing machines which are 34? in height and narrow(in width), has capacity is 5 kilos, while german and swedish, as the second group, enjoy wider machines, has capicity is 6 kilos. About drum material and washing action, everyone in the first group selected enamel, agitator and the second group selected stainless steel and tumble. Automatic washing machines in the UK is load on top, but in Germany, France and Sweden are load in front. English(in the UK) gives answer ?oyes? and german, french, swedish give answer ?ono? with water heating system. Differences between four countries is (are)spin speed of washing machine, in France is 600, in the UK is 700, in Sweden is 800 and in Germany is 850 rpm(?). In ad***ion, styling features in the UK is(be) inconspicuous appearance, in France is elegant appearance while in Germany is indestructible appearance and in Sweden is strong appearance.
về bài của chị Việt em thấy cách diễn đạt có vài chỗ chưa được chuẩn lắm , but không sao đâu chị ạ , KHÔNG CÓ VIỆC JÌ KHÓ CHỈ SỢ LÒNG KHÔNG BỀN thui , đúng không ạ?
ANH HOANG`
The table shows each nation?Ts trend in automatic washing machine. Look at the table we can divide those 4 nations into 2 main groups. The pragmatic group contains Germany and Sweden, and the formalistic group including the last two: France and United Kingdom. The first group more concentrates on the works done and the durability of the automatic washing machine. They want it to be big for the bigger capacity while UK and France want their washing machine to be smaller (34?&wide in comparison with 34?snarrow). The 1st group also pays more attention to the material in order to have a durable product and more replaceable. They like their drum material to be made by stainless steel which is cheaper and lighter than the enamel drum. The German and the Swedish seem to be cleaner than the british and the French. They prefer their washing machine doing the tumbleling at a higher spin speed. That would crease the clothes. ??..
ANH LAM
The table shows the situation of using automatic washing machines in various countries as following: United Kingdom, Germany, France, Sweden.
Germany and Sweden are almost similar to each other. However, German did not care about (care for )water heating system but Swiss was opposite. Swiss liked the washing machines with strong style but German prefered indestructable appearance. No country liked spin speed of washing machines as Germany with 850 rpm.
UK and France liked narrow width but Germany and Sweden prefer wide width. Only UK used washing machines with loading on top, other countries chose loading in front. Then, UK and France used enamel at drum material feature. But stainless steel is chose(n) by both of Germany and Sweden. UK and France are similar to each other when they made their choice agitator at washing action feature. Germany and Sweden used tumble in automatic washing machines.
In genaral(general), there are not different much more (?)between various countries above. (156 words)
CHI PHUONG
The table shows the differences of choosing automatic washing machine features in four countries. They are United Kingdom, Germany, France and Sweden.
The feature which is firstly considered is shell dimensions. Most consumers like 34? height washing machine( the washing machines with 34?T?T in height ). However, UK and France consumers like narrow shell dimension while Germany and Sweden like wide ones. In comparison, German and Sweden consumers have many similarities in choosing a washing machine. Such as they all like Stainless steel in drum material, loading front, 6kgs capacity, and tumble action. However(lap rui) Sweden consumers like water heating system and strong appearance in comparison with no heating system and indestructible appearance of Germany consumer?Ts favo(u)rite. Both France and UK consumers chose enamel drum, 5 kilos capacity, agitator washing action. However, when these three countries choose front loading, UK people prefer top loading, they also chose water heating system while France does not. UK consumers tend to choose inconspicuous appearance in comparison with elegant appearance of French?Ts choice. The most different feature which each country chooses for their washing machine is spin speed. It?Ts various from 600rpm to 850rpm
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Được liebedu sửa chữa / chuyển vào 12:25 ngày 05/02/2007

Writing test 4
The table shows consumer preferences in four different European countries .
In the United Kingdom (UK) and France consumers prefer 34â?Tâ?T and narrow shells , in Germany and Sweden 34â?Tâ?T and wide shells .
The load capacity varies slightly between 5 and 6 kilos . the preferred spin speed ranges from 850 rpm (UK) to 600 rpm (France).
The preferred frum material is enamel in the UK and France ., stainless steel in the other countries . consumers in every country except the UK prefer front loading to top loading machines . the british and the Swedes want a water heating system , but this is not so elsewhere .
Each country has a different preference for styling features , the British favouring an inconspicuous appearance , the Germans requiring a machine which looks indestructible , the French an elegant machine and the Swedes a strong â?"looking machine . The final feature , the washing action , sees a division between the UK and France where consumers prefer an agitor , and the other countries where a tumble action is preferred .
(170 words )

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In the graph , we can see the table showing some different consumer preferences for the features of automatic washing machines from 4 vary (động từ mà?) countries : United Kingdom , German , France , Sweden . Arcording(according) to the graph , it?Ts possible(đừng dùng mẫu này trong task 1sửa thành there are two...) to divide into two main groups . The first group, the one its washing action is Agitator (sao lại viết hoa) , are United Kingdom and France . The other one is Tumble , from German and Sweden .. (2 câu cuối này nên xem lại, anh chưa hiểu ý)
IN the first group (nhắc lại. em có thể cho chúng vào 1 paragraph), they have the same Shell dimensions (34?T?T & narrow), same (bỏ)Drum material( Enamel) , same Capacity( 5 kilos). In the other hand, as for their qualifications ,we can see some differences , something like: the styling features of United Kingdom ?~s maschine is inconspicious , but in France they are elegant . For their water systems and the loadings are also different .
The second group is the same features as : Shell dimensions(34?T?T & wide) , Drum material (Stainless steel ) , Loading (front), capacity (6 kilos ). And the the differences are from styling features ( indestructable for Germans , strong for Swedens ), from water heating system , and from spin speed. Câu cuối này nói hơi tổng quát, đúng là khác nhau nhưng chẳng biết khác ntn?
In brife (gì nhỉ), two groups are different .
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