CONTEST OF TRANSLATION

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hey!
it's really cool !! guys...you are both worth to receive the 1st price.....keep it up, you're doing welll....
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MeoHoang

hey!
it's really cool !! guys...you are both worth to receive the 1st price.....keep it up, you're doing welll....
Congratulation....!!! Cheer buddies...!!
MeoHoang

THIS IS THE 2ND TEST :
Translate this wonderful song into Vietnamese :
SAVE THE BEST FOR LAST
Sometimes the snow comes down in June
Sometimes the sun goes round the moon
I see the passion in your eyes
Sometimes it's all a big surprises
'Cause there was a time when all I did was wish
You'd tell me this was love
It's not the way I hope or how I planned
But somehow it's enough
And now we're standing face to face
Isn't this world a crazy place
Just when I thought our chance had passed
You go and save the best for last
All of the nights you came to me
When some silly girls had set you free
You wondered how you'd make it through
I wondered what was wrong with you
'Cause how could you give your love to someone else
And share your dream with me
Sometimes the very things you're looking for
Is the one thing you can't see.
(Singer : Vanessa Williams)


Dirosemimi

THIS IS THE 2ND TEST :
Translate this wonderful song into Vietnamese :
SAVE THE BEST FOR LAST
Sometimes the snow comes down in June
Sometimes the sun goes round the moon
I see the passion in your eyes
Sometimes it's all a big surprises
'Cause there was a time when all I did was wish
You'd tell me this was love
It's not the way I hope or how I planned
But somehow it's enough
And now we're standing face to face
Isn't this world a crazy place
Just when I thought our chance had passed
You go and save the best for last
All of the nights you came to me
When some silly girls had set you free
You wondered how you'd make it through
I wondered what was wrong with you
'Cause how could you give your love to someone else
And share your dream with me
Sometimes the very things you're looking for
Is the one thing you can't see.
(Singer : Vanessa Williams)


Dirosemimi

Too difficult! I surrender!
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Học, học nữa, học mãi, hộc máu

Too difficult! I surrender!
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Học, học nữa, học mãi, hộc máu

Hi everybody,
I hope everybody has fun reading my translation.
First of all,i want to make clearly that i do not have any grude with the singers singing the song.I do not want to smear and sully their fame certainly.
Something like my translation can be used as some materilal like "the mistakes usually are found in translating english into vietnamese"

Để dành
Đôi khi tháng sáu tuyết rơi
Ông trăng đứng lặn, ông trời xoay quanh
Đam mê chỉ thoáng mắt anh
Vậy mà em cũng tan tành ruột gan.
Chắc em chỉ biết mơ màng
Nên anh tưởng bở nói càng anh yêu
Dù rằng chẳng được bao nhiêu
Nhưng sao cũng được một điều coi sao.
Bây giờ ta đứng bên nhau
Ngạc nhiên thế giới phải nào chạm dây?
Cơ hội ràng ràng là đây
Anh đi anh kiếm thứ này nơi nao?
Phải chăng những tối gần nhau
Là anh "rãnh rổi" em nào ngơ anh
Anh thấy anh thiệt là lanh
Nhưng em lại thấy tanh bành anh tiêu
Vì anh đã nói anh yêu
Với em nào khác mà liều kể em
Đôi khi ngẫm nghĩ mà xem
Điều anh không thấy điều anh đi tìm.

Laughing for fun.
I think this song should be a poem rather than a song.When i saw this song,i found thi song in the net.
The way people sing is for a typical poem( la ta la ta....or weak strong weak strong..... ).
I lost everything when i translated this song:meaning,timeline(my vietnamese is too poor to keep timeline( tense)),rhythm,something about phrase-reinforcing(can be understand as "lặp từ","cũng ngữ" such as "sometimes" words (three times in the song)).
Anyway,this is just for fun.Accually i wrote it last night when i had notthing to do("nhàn cư vi bất thiện").But it was too late to send.
Thank you everybody.



Tao_lao

Hi everybody,
I hope everybody has fun reading my translation.
First of all,i want to make clearly that i do not have any grude with the singers singing the song.I do not want to smear and sully their fame certainly.
Something like my translation can be used as some materilal like "the mistakes usually are found in translating english into vietnamese"

Để dành
Đôi khi tháng sáu tuyết rơi
Ông trăng đứng lặn, ông trời xoay quanh
Đam mê chỉ thoáng mắt anh
Vậy mà em cũng tan tành ruột gan.
Chắc em chỉ biết mơ màng
Nên anh tưởng bở nói càng anh yêu
Dù rằng chẳng được bao nhiêu
Nhưng sao cũng được một điều coi sao.
Bây giờ ta đứng bên nhau
Ngạc nhiên thế giới phải nào chạm dây?
Cơ hội ràng ràng là đây
Anh đi anh kiếm thứ này nơi nao?
Phải chăng những tối gần nhau
Là anh "rãnh rổi" em nào ngơ anh
Anh thấy anh thiệt là lanh
Nhưng em lại thấy tanh bành anh tiêu
Vì anh đã nói anh yêu
Với em nào khác mà liều kể em
Đôi khi ngẫm nghĩ mà xem
Điều anh không thấy điều anh đi tìm.

Laughing for fun.
I think this song should be a poem rather than a song.When i saw this song,i found thi song in the net.
The way people sing is for a typical poem( la ta la ta....or weak strong weak strong..... ).
I lost everything when i translated this song:meaning,timeline(my vietnamese is too poor to keep timeline( tense)),rhythm,something about phrase-reinforcing(can be understand as "lặp từ","cũng ngữ" such as "sometimes" words (three times in the song)).
Anyway,this is just for fun.Accually i wrote it last night when i had notthing to do("nhàn cư vi bất thiện").But it was too late to send.
Thank you everybody.



Tao_lao

Wow... ông này viết được cả thơ nữa chứ... hấp dẫn nhe. Tui hông dám tham gia lần này đâu hi`hi`... chưa bao giờ Văn trên 5 điểm, làm sao dịch ra tiếng Việt cho hay được với lại bài này khó quá hihihi
Hi guys...
Please, listen...
Listen.....
Hey Punks, SHUT UP and LISTEN
Good !!!