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Lastweek we had an interesting part: make a story with expression, and below is our story. ( without logical ^^)

Pencil story​

i''''ve a nice,yellow pencil and i smile with pride (Feel very proud) it.
I always bring it every time even i sleep. (just a pencil, why keep like ur gold )
I really want to twist my best friend''s arm ( persuade or force somebody to do something) to buy a pencil like mine. (ugly friend )
When i up in arms (Very angry), i use it to hit my friend (So vilence ^^).
One night, i dreamt my body transformed a pencil like really mine, i was so afraid but i kept a cool head (Saty calm) to transform back (banana dream ).
One time, with my pencil and keeping a cool head, i helped my best friend to pass her exammination. ( Bad friend ).
When i lost my pencil, i get carried away (Be fooled) ( No comment with this guy).
i always think that when i collect 1 million pencils like mine, i will be on top of the world. (Very happy indeed) ( on your dream, baby ).
I drew a lot with my pencil and i feel on top of the world. ( Good man ).
Because of this dream, i have a dog-name "pencil man", i can''''t keep a cool head with it. ( i like your dog-name so much ).
My best always want my pencil so he twist my arm to give it to him, but i don''''t want ( mean frieand ).

The end​

Được hahuyhuan sửa chữa / chuyển vào 07:48 ngày 01/04/2010

U''r welcome!! i''m practising so hard to defeat GALEC team and hope that we will get winner beer from mr HOAN

i smell again this game so interesting, Mr Huan plz give me a sit in this game then we might be a team in that batle, ok, if u doubt check it out

i smell again this game so interesting, Mr Huan plz give me a sit in this game then we might be a team in that batle, ok, if u doubt check it out

Cho tớ chỉnh một tí nhé:
smile
twist my best friend''s arm.
carried chứ không phải carry. Get carried away không phải là be fooled mà bị xáo động tinh thần, bị kích động tinh thần, bị làm bực mình, xúc động bởi chuyện gì hoặc người nào.

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/carried

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/carried
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@tphat2009: Great! Thank u so much! .
Dạo này toàn thức đêm dậy sớm (để xem đá bóng ) nên đầu óc loạn hết rồi, toàn sai lỗi cơ bản

bó tay các bác nhà mình, cái chỗ "I have a dog named pencil" bác e*** kiểu j hết bùn cười r
mà bác jà cả hoa mắt thật r, sai chính tả với ngữ pháp lum tùm beng à, hic, bác đã cần nghỉ hưu chưa bác Huấn? Tội nghiệp, thế này mọi người lại tưởng club mình học ngữ pháp gà thì chết

um`, it sound not good,

why why why? except the errors of grammar, it''s funny in my opinion

Câu này đâu có sai chỗ nào đâu bác ?