English for FRIENDS _ Friends 'club

Ờ nhể! Sao thế nhể, chẳng lẽ là do mình ko sờ pam à? Có lẽ sửa bài bác cheva cho vui vậy!

hi mọi người (1), now i m sitting at a wifi cafe shop near my home. I think(2) i like this cafe , it have a (3)calm space with symphony music, peole(spelling) sit down(delete) in (on) the ground on a square pillow(4). It is very good with(5) suffing internet by your laptop.The air is comfortable (6) cause of its cool degree (7) . Drink is good with herb tea.I wish i can spend my all day here suffing web(8), down load (download) everything, enjoy music in a cool air, with only a cup of tea, thought (though)its price is not low, 16k VND, but i think it still be cheap for me (giàu thế!(hic, cuống quá nói tiếng Việt, lộ tẩy rồi!)). i hope that i will have chance to invite my future girl friend (what''s happen with present GF?) to here (who is she , i havent known ), and we will chatting, suffing web, hearing music, enjoy drink, and ... , a lot of thing (things), it is still in future and now i have to leave here to have lunch with my family , bye bye , see u, have a crazy sunday night
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1: What''s language?
2: Why do u think? don''t u know what u like?
3: space is uncountable noun, is not it? I see this sentence seem not all right. I think using "there is" is better.
4: not fluent
5: with => *****rf. But i think the meaning of this sentence is not quite good because of word "good". u can exchange it to decribe more effect of ur feelings.
6:"The air is comfortable"? i have not ever seen "comfortable" using with obj yet. Pls show me!
7: like HL6, seem Vietnamese talking type. Pls debate!
8: not connect with this sentence
U1: from surffing. If u want to list some action, u should use the same word type as: all r noun, all r ajd, or all r verb. "Download", "enjoy" r V so "surffing" => "surf", moreover, u use "to" before "surf" to link

@ cheva: Let check again and argue if i was wrong.

1: What''''s language?
2: Why do u think? don''''t u know what u like?
3: space is uncountable noun, is not it? I see this sentence seem not all right. I think using "there is" is better.
4: not fluent
5: with => *****rf. But i think the meaning of this sentence is not quite good because of word "good". u can exchange it to decribe more effect of ur feelings.
6:"The air is comfortable"? i have not ever seen "comfortable" using with obj yet. Pls show me!
7: like HL6, seem Vietnamese talking type. Pls debate!
8: not connect with this sentence
U1: from surffing. If u want to list some action, u should use the same word type as: all r noun, all r ajd, or all r verb. "Download", "enjoy" r V so "surffing" => "surf", moreover, u use "to" before "surf" to link

@ cheva: Let check again and argue if i was wrong.
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ok.thank u, lovemeet

Anh tin chứ hihi nhất là vào ngày 1/4 hihi. Cả nhà đâu rồi hào hứng nên nhỉ hay là hôm nào làm phát off cho khuấy động phong trào đi

Nói dối! Nói dối!

1: What?s language? - cái này là "Language là gì?" phải chuyển sang What language hay Which language thì ok.
2: Why do u think? don?t u know what u like? - Cái này là văn phong người Anh , hoàn toàn ổn.
3: space is uncountable noun, is not it? I see this sentence seem not all right. I think using "there is" is better. Lạm dụng từ seem và thiếu "s", "there is" thay vào thì vẫn tối nghĩa như thế. Có thể nói: It is very quiet ..... sẽ đơn giản và sáng nghĩa.
4: not fluent không phải "not fluent" mà là sai đã "people" (số nhiều) mà lại ngồi trên "a pillow" , thế ra là cả quán ngồi lên một cái gối hả?
5: with => *****rf. But i think the meaning of this sentence is not quite good because of word "good". u can exchange it to decribe more effect of ur feelings. - change thôi, exchange là trao đổi vậy trao đổi cái gì? - describe - dùng từ phức tạp, tối nghĩa chỉ cần "more about your feelings" là đủ .
6:"The air is comfortable"? i have not ever seen "comfortable" using with obj yet. Pls show me!. - Hoàn toàn có thể. VD: the bed is comfortable, the car is comfortable... - không sai. Tuy nhiên the air thì lại không được -> tối nghĩa. Có thể thay bằng: It?s very comfortable hay "the atmosphere is comfortable..." . Air chỉ mang nghĩa không khí theo dạng vật chất , không hơn.
7: like HL6, seem Vietnamese talking type. Pls debate! - không có cool degree - chưa nghe qua bao giờ mà chắc là cũng sẽ không có
8: not connect with this sentence ?" Có gì về connect ở đây nhỉ?
U1: from surffing. If u want to list some action, u should use the same word type as: all r noun, all r ajd, or all r verb. "Download", "enjoy" r V so "surffing" => "surf", moreover, u use "to" before "surf" to link ?" Không đúng rồi! Chỉ có thể là V-ing ở đây thôi vì cấu trúc Spend time doing smt mà! Có thể có spend time to do smt vì có thể hiểu nhưng thường dùng spend time doing smt, in v-ing hay on smt... , to thấy hiếm lắm.
- In a cool air?? Hình như không có "an air" thì phải? chỗ này có thể dịch là "...trong một cái kẹo cool air..."
9. Đã Will rồi thì không V- ing bác nhé.
Người ta không nói Hear music mà người ta nói listen to? bác ah.
Surf webs nhé!
P/s: Em mà có bạn gái không đời nào em rủ bạn gái em ra hàng cafe ngồi chat qua mạng cả! Em xin thề....XIN THỀ ... XIN THỀ!!!
@ cheva: Let check again and argue if i was wrong.
Được cyp sửa chữa / chuyển vào 11:23 ngày 03/04/2007

Me too!
@Cyp:Thế chứ! Sáng ra bao nhiêu! Thanks nhá!
Được lovemit sửa chữa / chuyển vào 12:14 ngày 03/04/2007

quá lố.
hahhahhah

i know why , , a lot of thing to do but surfing web

everybody has the different way to show their love for the partner.
but they have some common : find anychange to keep distance with the partner,
show their love for, and make her to falling in love quickly.
everyone know what the female cat to do when she want to love.
she try to make the noise to call the partner.
yes ahhh she has to try herself to shout at "oaoa ..... oaoa .... oaoao"
do you know why the cat have to make the big sound ???
because she want to define this place have or not have the cats.
if not have she will change another place to save the time.
"yes the time is gold" ...
"be not waste the time" this is the message from cat to every young girl
the same cat when the women falling in love .
+ they want to know your information
(your phone number,your address,your email, your office ...)
+ they will try to stay near you
(appear in front of you, go around you , want to talk with you
and show the best their beautiful for you)
+ She''''''''''''''''ll usually all of a sudden get louder or quieter when you
come around. ohhhh dont belive ... she make new charater to close your eyes.
the boys !!!! carefully please ...it is easy for you to get mistake, and no chance for you to repair it
The male chickens have another way to call the partner.
first he find the food and then call the partner "cuh cuh cud " come on ... come on!!!
there are many food for you " come on ... the food for you ,
but remember to give your love for me please" the chicken said.
likely the chicken when the man want the girl falling in love. he usally invite her to go to the restaurant, go to the coffee,
go to the cinema ... he want to show for the girl , he is very strong and rich.
if he is lucky he will receive the love from the partner.
unlucky he will get a zero number ..... so carefully ... because sometime , some girls who does not come alone ,
they invite some their girl friends to come. after have food they run away quickly.
let you stay alone with the big bill on your hand... "OOHHHH SO SADDDDD"
you will cry ??? oohhh no in this situation keep calm , dont get angry ,
accept it as the lesson you have to learn in the school ... learn and learn ...it is never late
and you will have a big chance in the future. hope for you and me !!! hahaahhahahaah
. which the animal do you want ??? cat or chicken ???
. which their character do you like ???

. i dont like the sound of the cat, but i like the way to save the time of the cat"
. i dont like the way to bring the food for the partner of the chicken,but i like the way to talk to the partner of the chicken.
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