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Pls don''t cry!
Today I''ll talk to u a little bit about sth relating to "childhood". Thinking about childhood is so peacefull for us but consternated for many trafficked women.
Opening to the World, VN hs become one of most wanted destinations of traffickers!!! Many thousands of " fresh flowers" have been kidnapped, married and "exported" to China n Cambodia, n from there to neighboring countries for prostitution purposes. Also, Prostituted girls, most of them aged 15 to18 years of age, are found lively in red-light streets of Europe, China, Cambodia, Singapore and Macau etc. Looking at their eyes, found childhood moments n existing lives can drive V.nese to different thinking ways
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Pls continue. How an important and serious problem it is!

Those highlights above consist of some mistakes. Look carefully and think of them.
The writing style is so Vietnamese.
Good luck!

- sugested --> suggested
- form-teacher --> former teacher
- pratising --> practising (however the use of "practise" is not correct)

- graduate from somewhere.
- earn for living --> earn my living
 

Hey, it seems to me that there''re more and more replies.
To chungtm2000: You''ve posted constructive comments. We all easily make mistakes, but it''s often very hard for us to spot them. It''s kind of you to point out some spelling errors as well as wrong word usage. By the way, I don''t know how to mark words or sentences as you did. It would be nice if you could tell me how to do so. Thanks a lot in advance!
To all: Don''t feel bad when you have a grammatical or spelling error. We learn by making mistakes.

Oạch! R u kiding?

@chungtm: It is clearly that u read all carefully. Many thankx for ur concerns. Hope u will continue more frequently to develop our topic better and better!
@ Have a nice week!

For English only

01 June, 2006: Save children and give them all the best we have!
@all: For U
The Salty Coffee.
He met her on a party, she was so outstanding, many guys chasing after her, while he was so normal, nobody paid attention to him. At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him. She was surprised, but as he was polite, she promised. They sat in a nice coffee shop, he was too nervous to say anything, She felt uncomfortable, she thought, "please, let me back home".
Suddenly he asked the waiter: would you please give me some salt? I''d like to put it in my coffee. Everybody stared at him, so strange! His face turned red, but still, he put the salt in his coffee and drank it.She asked him curiously: why you have this hobby? He replied: when I was a little boy, I was living near the sea, I liked playing in the sea, I could feel the taste of the sea, salty and bite, just like the taste of the salty coffee. Now every time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood, think of my hometown, I miss my hometown so much, I miss my parents who are still living there. While saying that, tears filled his eyes. She was deeply touched. That''s his true feeling, from the bottom of his heart.A man who can tell out his homesick, he must be a man who loves home, cares about home, has responsibility of home. Then she also started to speak, spoke about her faraway hometown, her childhood, her family.
That was a really nice talk, also a beautiful beginning of their story.
They continued to date. She found actually he was a man who meets all her demands: he had tolerance, was kind hearted, warm, careful...he was such a good person but she almost missed him! Thanks to his salty coffee! Then the story was just like every beautiful love story: the princess married to the prince, then they were living the happy life... And, every time she made coffee for him, she put some salt in the coffee as she knew that''s the way he liked it.
After 40 years, he passed away, left her a letter which said: "My dearest, please forgive me, forgive my whole life lie. This was the only lie I said to you----the salty coffee. Remember the first time we dated? I was so nervous at that time, actually I wanted some sugar, but I said salt. It was hard for me to change so I just went ahead. I never thought that could be the start of our communication! I tried to tell you the truth many times in my life, but I was too afraid to do that, as I have promised not to lie to you for anything. Now I''m dying, I afraid of nothing so I tell you the truth: I don''t like the salty coffee, what a strange bad taste. But I have the salty coffee for my whole life since I knew you, I never feel sorry for anything I do for you. Having you with me is my biggest happiness for my whole life. If I can live for the second time, I still want to know you and have you for my whole life, even though I have to drink the salty coffee again." Her tears made the letter totally wet. Someday, someone asked her: what''s the taste of salty coffee? It''s sweet. She replied.
SOMETIMES YOU FEEL YOU KNOW THE PERSON MORE THAN ANYBODY ELSE... BUT ONLY TO REALISE THAT YOUR OPINION ABOUT THE PERSON WERE NOT AS YOU DESCRIBED. JUST LIKE THE INCIDENT OF THE SALTY COFFEE... LOVE MORE AND HATE LESSER... CAUSE'' SOMETIMES SALT TASTES BETTER THAN SUGAR...

Được sutubienbong sửa chữa / chuyển vào 13:50 ngày 01/06/2006