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    have fun, all !
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    I dont believe in my eyes when I look at this sentence my hear is out of control and my mind is running wildly
    p/s :
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    Wow! Should this be a big big topic? ^^
    a Khánh, I have some small comments for your topic...
    1- once day => one day
    2- a old man => an old man
    3-"What do you think about that?" => should it be " What do you think about that idea?"
    4- silence => silent (adj)
    5- nowaday => nowadays
    6- "Earth turns around Hotdog" => This sentence sounds strange, i''''''''m not so sure but there might be something wrong in the way you express your idea.. Can you change this into the other way?
    7- Everybody eat => everybody eats ( singular)
    8- waste of time preparing Food => waste time in preparing food
    ( waste something on somebody/something
    waste something in doing something
    waste something to do something )
    9-Even they eat hotdog while they are going to school or office" => They can eat hotdog even as they''''''''re on the way to school/ office .
    10- "You can''''''''t boil even a egg" => an egg (not a egg)

    11- "Fast food harm your life"=> fast food can harm your life/ fast food harms your life.
    12- a imaged story => an imaginable story (or imaginary story)?
    13-"what do you think about Vietnamese youngs born in 1990s?" => old and the old (plural); young and the young(plural)
    14- Have you ever had something make you regret because you didn''''''''t do it in the past?" => Have you ever regretted doing or not doing something in the past?
    15-without regret => without regrets/ without regretting
    16- "What will you do if everybody against it?"=> What will you do if everybody''''''''s against it (your plan)?
    However, your topic is very interesting, i would like to add some questions into your topic
    1- What kind of fast food/slow food do you like(dislike)?
    2- What do you think about Junk food? Why shouldn''''''''t you eat junk-food? What kind of Junk-food do you like?
    Được liebedu sửa chữa / chuyển vào 18:19 ngày 18/03/2008
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    "I''m all for you" means that "i agree with you, absolutely!"
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    1- once day => one day ---> no, once day is correct. it means " 1 ngày nọ" in vnese.
    2- a old man => an old man ---> yah ! thanks
    3-"What do you think about that?" => should it be " What do you think about that idea?" --->uhm, yr idea seams more clearly than i do !
    4- silence => silent (adj) ---> No ! both silence and silent is OK !
    5- nowaday => nowadays -- >yah ! thanks
    6- "Earth turns around Hotdog" => This sentence sounds strange, i''''''''''''''''m not so sure but there might be something wrong in the way you express your idea.. Can you change this into the other way? --> I just want to play words a litle to mention the power of Fastfood ! T_T
    7- Everybody eat => everybody eats ( singular) ---> yah ! thanks
    8- waste of time preparing Food => waste time in preparing food
    ( waste something on somebody/something
    waste something in doing something
    waste something to do something )
    ---> yah ! thanks
    9-Even they eat hotdog while they are going to school or office" => They can eat hotdog even as they''''''''''''''''re on the way to school/ office ---> yah. thax ! .
    10- "You can''''''''''''''''t boil even a egg" => an egg (not a egg) --> what a shame ! thanks

    11- "Fast food harm your life"=> fast food can harm your life/ fast food harms your life. ---> u'' re right !
    12- a imaged story => an imaginable story (or imaginary story)? ---> a story is imaged T_T. i think it''s quite right !
    13-"what do you think about Vietnamese youngs born in 1990s?" => old and the old (plural); young and the young(plural) ---> yah ! thax
    14- Have you ever had something make you regret because you didn''''''''''''''''t do it in the past?" => Have you ever regretted doing or not doing something in the past? --->uhm.u''re right again T_T
    15-without regret => without regrets/ without regretting ---> i think it''s ok !
    16- "What will you do if everybody against it?"=> What will you do if everybody''''''''''''''''s against it (your plan)?----> T_T "are there any hole here? " T_T thax
    However, your topic is very interesting, i would like to add some questions into your topic
    1- What kind of fast food/slow food do you like(dislike)?
    2- What do you think about Junk food? Why shouldn''''''''''''''''t you eat junk-food? What kind of Junk-food do you like?

    ---> you are welcomed !
    thanks for your usefull comment ! and next time, I will send u the sample of topic before showing it in the public !
    p/s : pls rewrite this topic and take it to our meeting ! this time, I''m busy
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    I''''m all for you, too !
    p/s : It''s first time I see someone use it to express the agreement ! T_T
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    p/s : pls rewrite this topic and take it to our meeting ! this time, I''''m busy
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    Ok.See u!
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    T_T Hóng ko thấy ai report, lần sau kiếm ai report nhá. để n ở nhà còn hóng !
    Dạo này bức bối, bực bội, mất cân bằng quá nên có n giới thiệu cho 1 cuốn sách , "suối nguồn" - " the fountainhead" ! nghe nói có nhiều cái đáng để đọc T_T
    link share : http://www.mediafire.com/?9bvodnqmji0 ( ebook english )
    ai có hứng thú đọc với tớ ko ? 1.200 trang T_T full text
    p/s : ai đi Mộc Châu 3 ngày/2đêm/cuối tuần này/ bằng xe máy ko ? T_T rời xa HN vài ngày cho đỡ khói bụi
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    Dân FC la?nh lắm chú ơi, ko pha?i phượt thu? đâu ma? ru? he he
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    phượt 1 mình đâu ! em bám càng mấy bác bên du lịch đấy chứ
    anh Đăng biết site nào có thể up nhạc lên để share = cách nghe trực tiếp ko ? đangh nghe bài "apologize " của và "give it to me" của Tim baland ! hay wé ...
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