Ghost again

Actually, I dare not to post because my English is so bad, but my love of writing English has won.
I'm here to learn, so I wish that I will get help from those such as Nha que, Ha Phuong, Longatum, HHV, Milou, Despi...
Please! if you don't, I cannot find out where I'm wrong ?
You should rewrite if it's neccesary

I've ever posted a mysterious story about the fallow-three-floor nursery in the collective quarter where I'm living. This following story is the second

His name's Minh, He ought to spend an amount coming from selling six ceiling fans if he didn't see an extraodinary sense in the nursery.
One day, Minh discovered that there was six ceiling fans that had been still hanging on the nursery's third floor, and he decided to wait for the night to steal them. He thought that it could be easy to bring the ceiling fans through the front door after climbing upto third floor along the drain pip. Then, night came, he climbed quietly up to the third floor, pierced a hole on the roof and sat on the beam to start slaughtering the firt one. While he was taking down the fan he saw a bird that was shuttling around the room. "a bat, normally" he said in his mind, and continued working. But, for a while, he found out that the bird flied unnaturally, it seemed to be bound by a string. Through the moonlight, Minh saw at the other end of the string was a kid who was around the age of five or six. "Ghost, sure" he thought. But Minh is a man of a firm stuff, he didn't want to give up his result. But he thought he couldn't take down the remaining fans while the kid and the bird were playing their game. And he dared not go out through the front door so he accepted go out through the hole on the roof with only one ceiling fan. However, the fan is too heavy to climb down along the drain pip so he droped it into the roof laying beside the nursery. Of course, Minh was arrested by the terrible noise caused by droping the ceiling fan into the roof, it woke up almost whole of the collective quarter.

His name's [IS] Minh, He ought to spend an amount coming from selling six ceiling fans if he didn't see an extraodinary sense[scene] in the nursery.[?, I have to read more to e*** this sentence][still cannot e***]
One day, Minh discovered that there was [WERE] six ceiling fans that had been still hanging [WERE HUNG] on the nursery's third floor [THE CEILING OF THE NURSERY IN THE THIRD FLOOR],[NEW SENTENCE, NO "AND"] and he decided to wait for the night [UNTIL NIGHT FELL] to steal them. He thought that it could [WOULD] be easy to bring the ceiling fans through the front door after climbing [HE CLIMBED] upto [UP TO THE]third floor along the drain pip[DRAINING PIPES (GUTTER)]. Then, night came, [WHEN NIGHT FELL] he climbed quietly up [QUIETLY CLIMBED UP]to the third floor, pierced a hole on the roof and sat on the [A] beam to start slaughtering the firt one [TO DISCONNECT THE FIRST FAN]. While he was taking down the fan he saw a bird that was shuttling [FLYING] around the room. "a bat, normally"[IT' MUST BE A BAT] he said in his mind [HE THOUGHT], and continued working. But, for a while, [BUT AFTER A WHILE] he found out [SAW] that the bird flied [WAS FLYING] unnaturally, it seemed to be bound by a string. Through [WITH] the moonlight, Minh saw at [no "AT"]the other end of the string was a kid who was around the age of five or six [MING SAW A KID AROUNG THE AGE OF SIX HOLDING THE OTHER END OF THE STRING]. "[A] Ghost, [FOR] sure" he thought. But Minh is a man of a firm stuff[?, A STRONG MAN] , he didn't want to give up his result [HIS WORK]. But he thought he couldn't take down the remaining [REST OF THE] fans while the kid and the bird were playing their game. And he dared not go out through the front door so he accepted [HAD TO] go out through the hole on the roof with only one ceiling fan. However, the fan is [WAS] too heavy [FOR HIM TO CARRY DOWN THE PIPE] to climb down along the drain pip so[AND] he droped [DROPPED]it into the roof laying beside the nursery[ ?, I don't understand]. Of course,[STRANGE USAGE][LATER] Minh was arrested by the terrible noise caused by droping [THE DROPPING OF]the ceiling fan into the roof, it woke up [WOKE] almost [EVERYBOBY IN THE APPARTMENT BUILDING] whole of the collective quarter.

Cung Chúc Tân Xuân​

Great!, thanks, the essay have been better after you corrected it. There were still somewhere you haven't done such as : "He ought to spend an amount coming from selling six ceiling fans if he didn't see an extraodinary scence in the nursery".
Câu này em định trình bày rằng : "Anh ta đáng ra đã tiêu một khoản tiền từ việc bán sáu cái quạt trần nếu anh ta không nhìn thấy một cảnh tượng khác thường trong cái nhà trẻ".
Em mong bác sửa dùm em với. Cho em cám ơn trước

He should have pocketed and spent the money collected from selling the stolen fans.

Anti-Dallas Bovine Control Officers ​