giúp em với,em có 1 đề tài tiếng anh ! vote ***** cho ai tham gia!

giúp em với,em có 1 đề tài tiếng anh ! vote ***** cho ai tham gia!

" what are the advantages and disadvantages of working part-time job for a student "
đề tài của em đây ạ . em không giỏi tiếng anh lắm . mỗi bác giúp em 1 ý để em ghép thành 1 bài . thanks các bác nhiều . em vote ***** ngay cho các bác .

outline:
advantages:
- earn money
- get more experience
disadvantages
- being exhausted [both studying and working] --->stress
- lack time for studying

đã vote 5* cho bác,bác viết cả câu cho em nhé.

advantages: relationships,friends
dis~: lừa đảo, cám dỗ...

Anh tặng chú cả bài hoàn chỉnh luôn. Nhớ Vote cho anh nhé.
Được điểm cao nhớ mời anh cafe đấy nhé.
As the call for the quality-oriented education mounts up, college students are getting to realize the importance of practical experiences ?" school studies are not enough for their future development. Nowadays, more and more college students are seeking part-time jobs.
Part-time jobs can provide college students a lot of useful experience. First, it helps them put what they have learned into practice. Working part time offers them the chance to develop real-world skills. They will learn how to interact with other people in company, how to work with other people. As a result, their interpersonal skills, teamwork skills will be improved. From this, their working skills and abilities get developed. Second, while coping with different kinds of people, they can form better character, which is also a good way for them to settle down more easily in their future job. On the other hand, with their enthusiastic practice, our society will surely get fresh influence, although it may be very slight. What?Ts more, part-time jobs practice can help solve the financial problems of some of the students.
However, we?Td better be aware that part-time jobs sometimes may also pull us back. With a part of time and energy put into jobs, our studies may be affected. We will have less time for extra-curriculum activities. It may detain our self-improvement to some extend.
What we have to do is to try to keep balance between our study and the ability practice. It goes without saying that we will get all-round development if we do it well.

Được luu_vinh82 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:34 ngày 07/09/2007

bác đã có 5* , thanks bác nhiều nhé.

bác cũng có 5*

em vẫn cần thêm các ý kiến khác.

advantages:-Know how to arrange the time table(work-study-relax...)
disadvantages: theo tôi nghĩ thì các đặc điểm trên đã đủ.....

Disadvantages: rigi***y of performing, time-consuming of making it, more stresses, and very ineffective to a bad timetable (a dead duck is even worse than no)