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dear beautiful girls
I''''''''''''''''ve just written a writing topic. The topic is :
Should a child be brought up in a big city or a village ??
And I''''''''''''''''d like to ask you to correct mistakes for me
If you have free time, help me plzzz !!
If possible,you can give me some advices when writing a topic.
Big thanks to you
Should a child be brought up in a big city or a village ??
City is better environment for bringing up a child, because
he will have better con***ions to grown up comprehensively.
They can enjoy the best con***ions for study. A big city with a good education system will help their study be ensured. All of school in city are equiped carefully for them to study best. They have more opportunity to approach modern technology. Meanwhile most schools in the countryside don''''''''''''''''t have enough basic equipment for them . Teachers in cities are also better at teaching than in the countryside. There are many doubts about teaching skills of teachers in the countryside are mentioned much some recent days.Unlike in the countryside, Children in city don''''''''''''''''t have to care about anything, except their study. So they have more time to study. In study, city is also the more competitive environment than countryside. It makes them have more awareness in study. Many people think that big cities with many entertainment games and social problems can prevent their study and make them debauch. But it depends on education of their family. If their parents take care about them much, there won''''''''''''''''t be any troubles happen with them. They also have more chance to communicate with many people who come from many countries in the worlds. It helps them have an open knowledge.
Growing up in a big city is also better for their health than in the countryside. When they have any health problems, they will be taken care by the best health services in big hospitals. With advices of doctors, parents will know what is the best for their growth. In big cities, children also enjoy many entertainment services when they feel tired after study hard. It makes a balance between study and relaxing for them. Some people claim that the air pollution in big cities extremely harm their health. In reality, it is not serious like they think. The modern life with many modern equipments, like air-con***ioners, will help them to enjoy fresh air whenever they want.
In summarize, I want my children to be brought up in a big city
Thank for reading !!!!
In my English class, I had a chance to talk about this problem. But I haven''''''''''''''''t written it before. After reading the topic on forum, I would like to write it. My writing skills is not so good. If there are any mistakes in my passage, please correct them for me !!!
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Được pippo_nguyen sửa chữa / chuyển vào 17:07 ngày 13/05/2008
Được pippo_nguyen sửa chữa / chuyển vào 11:52 ngày 12/05/2008

Thank very much for your comments
It''s really helpful for me.
My teacher taught me some things like that. But I still see that it''s so đifficult to write.
I don''t know how to give a topic sentence contains all of main ideas.
I don''t know how to end my writing either. However I just add a conclusion to my writing hehe
Maybe my Englist ''s still so bad, and I must try much more
Many thanks !!!!!!!!!!
For my mistakes, if you have free time, correct them for me !! Now I can''t read my writing again hix hix. Oh my god, reading English is not simple like I think. I hoa hết cả mắt roài T__T

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Được pippo_nguyen sửa chữa / chuyển vào 20:41 ngày 13/05/2008

Have a nice day,HDEC,

Who prepare topic for this week ? Please post topic on forum. Wish that next friday, it will be rain so I have a unforgetable meeting

Hello everyone, hdec''s mem!!! How r u?
As U know, I said that the topic " Blog vs Tra***ional diary" would be discussed next Friday.
However, I''m very sorry to say that I''ll be absent from club for 2 weeks coming.
Following it, I can not carry out my task as I promised., Hence, I have 2 solutions to this issue:
1. Sb will take it over from me
2. We''ll discuss this topic later.

LET''''''''S IMAGINE YOUR FAMILY IN THE FUTURE
All of us know that Love is always beautiful and romantic. Topics about love always interest many people too. You will never feel bored when someone tells you about his ( or her ) love stories. And Love is also the main reason lead to marriage. But it''''''''s not the same meaning with '''''''' all of marriage make a happy family ''''''''. There are many changes and differences between before and after marriage. So What could we do to keep our family be always happy ?
Questions for dicussing :
1. Tell us about the standards of your wife ( or your husband ). How is your dream lover, dream family ???
2. What will you do if your wife (or your husband) differs widely from herself (or himself ) before marriage ?????
Or what will you do if after marriage you find out many things new of her ( or him ) that you don''''''''t like at all ???
For example :
+ ( for men ) : your wife has some bad habit that you don''''''''t like at all :
-She often snores so loud, gets up very very late.
- She likes cooking but she cooks so badly. You can''''''''t eat any food she cookes
- Even she is quite dirty. She''''s lazy to have a bath hix
- She spends all your salary on shopping, jewelry while she doesn''''''''t earn at all.
.........etc.......
+ ( for women ) : you are disappointed in your husband.
- He is too weak.
- He doesn''''''''t have a good job with high salary while he waste a lot of money
- He drinks and smokes a lot. Even sometime he is angry with you.
- Or he is so miserly with family.
............
Maybe you will be angry and unconfortable with your wife''''''''s ( or your husband )behaviours. What will you do to keep your family be happy.
3. What''''''''s your opinion about a happy family ???????
Warmly welcome all of you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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