Help to correct the letter of application (cover letter)

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[FONT=&quot]This is a form of “cover letter” or “letter of application”. I have written this letter due to the job descriptions and job requirements of the employer. Please help me to correct this letter. By the way, if there is someone helps me to correct this, please pay attention on the order of the ideas in the context. As soon as your help come to me, I am happy to wait for you.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Regards[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Kim Sa[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Dear Mr Hansen:[/FONT]
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Your advertisement for .NET developer of the Company’s Internet/Intranet applications development, listed on the Xaloraovat Website (http://raovat.xalo.vn/2009-10-16fil...2881b5/NET-Developer---SpiralEdge-Co-Ltd.html) immediately caught my attention because my specialized knowledge and skills are appropriate with your needs. In ad***ion, your company is a growing company at Vietnam in the field of Cloud Computing Services. In the near future, your company will be an ideal working environment for me.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]In December, I will graduate from Houston Community College with an Associate in Applied Science degree in Applications Development Using Microsoft C#. Currently, I am studying the last three subjects on my schedule of the AAS degree. In this last course I would pursue a development website for the school with Dr. Nguyen Cong Vu, a great doctor at the Houston Community College.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]By the time I pursue the development of school’s website, I have a strong understanding of Intranet and Internet applications and the software development cycle. In ad***ion, because the school’s website is developed on ASP.NET and C # with database storage using MS SQL, so I have a lot of knowledge on these computer-aided software engineering tools. Besides, my hoppy is creating a website by myself. I already possess a private web site using ASP.NET with the domain name is “abc.com”. Moreover, by learning many subjects relative to information technology in school, I am also good at web protocols, IIS, and programming requirements. Specially, I have reached advanced understanding of MS SQL 2005 database (Developer Fundamentals) when I study this subject at my school; my score was on top this subject. Ad***ionally, my school is American School, so English is one of my other specific skills. Finally, these experiences make me have a good deal with your requirements, and my abilities and skills will satisfy your needs as your employee.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]I believe that you will find ad***ional information about my education and work experience in the attached resume that further demonstrates my capacity for performing the role of Web Developer.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]In December, I will attend the graduate celebration and ready for taking a job. Please call at the number 01245779933 or send me an email at abc@yahoo.com to arrange an interview so that we may discuss how my ability to work with diverse groups and projects would contribute to the Company’s Internet/Intranet applications. I look forward to hearing from you.[/FONT]
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Sincerely yours, [/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Nguyen Van A

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