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In writing''s body, you should devide into 2 paragraphs :
- Which country (region) had the biggest number of tourists, which one had the least ? How many times was the biggest number more than the least ?
- How was the trend of tourists'' number in each country (region) ? How did it increase ? (enormously or gradually...)

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This table above shows the number of tourists from five countries visited Australia in five different years from 1991 to 1999. Acording the table, there?Ts a trend that the number of tourists visitting Australia is increasing through these years.
The numbers of tourists visited Australia in each country are not the same, included 2 groups. Group 1 includes 3 countries had the big number of tourists came to Australia: US, UK and other Europe. Group 2 are 2 countries with the smaller one: Canada and Germany. UK has the biggest number of tourists came to Australia, in 1999, it?Ts 2 times than itself in 1991. The country has smallest number of tourists came to Australia is Canada, in 1991, It is less approximately 5 times than UK?Ts one, but in 1999, it?Ts less nearly 6.7 times than UK?Ts one.
The number of tourists visited Au from UK increases frequently in each 2 years with a big amount. Especially in 1999, this number increase significantly with the rate nearly 31.2% . The number of people visited Au from Germany increases slowly both at the increasing rate and the amount of tourists. The number of tourists from other coutries increasing quite stably through this years. With many advantages as beeautiful sceneries, romantic beaches, multi-culture? tourists will countine to visit this place more and more next years.
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Đây là lần đầu tiên tớ viết bài như thế này, chưa học viết bao giờ cả!Trình độ tớ đang ở sau A, mong mọi người vào correct it giùm tớ. Thanks!

This table above shows the number of tourists from five countries visited Australia in five different years from 1991 to 1999. Acording to the table, there?Ts a trend that the number of tourists visitting Australia iswas increasing through these years.
The numbers of tourists visited Australia in each country arewere not the same (but "differ" is clearer), included 2 groups. Group 1 includes 3 countries had the big number of tourists came to Australia: US, UK and other Europe. Group 2 are 2 countries with the smaller one: Canada and Germany. UK has(had) the biggest number of tourists came to Australia, in 1999, it?Ts 2 times (more) than itself in 1991. The country has(had) the smallest number of tourists came to Australia is Canada, in 1991, It is(was) less approximately 5 times than UK?Ts one, but in 1999, it?Ts less nearly 6.7 7 (no need to point out exactly) times than UK?Ts one.
The number of tourists visited Au from UK increases(increased) frequently in each 2 years with a(n) big amount. Especially in 1999, this number increase(d) significantly with the rate nearly 31.2% [blue](this sentence is not clear!) . The number of people visited Au from Germany increases(d) slowly both at the increasing rate and the (an) amount of tourists. The number of tourists from other coutries increasing(increased) quite stably through this(these) years. With many advantages as (having many) beeautiful sceneries, romantic beaches, multi-culture? tourists will countine (have continued) to visit this place more and more next years.
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Đây là lần đầu tiên tớ viết bài như thế này, chưa học viết bao giờ cả!Trình độ tớ đang ở sau A, mong mọi người vào correct it giùm tớ. Thanks!

Thank you vinamilk!Tớ đã sửa và tiếp thu những lỗi trển!. Đề nghị chủ topic cho bài nữa để tớ tập vẽ.

You should learn how to write a paragraph before writing some tasks like this.
Được chicken_fund sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:22 ngày 17/03/2007