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Lên trang rồi, thế chứ!
Thôi chúc các bác cố gắng làm bài tập cho em nhờ. Viết nhiều còn thảo luận nữa các bác nhé! Ko thì fí điểm Viết lắm, vì em nghe bảo là dù sao điểm viết vẫn dễ ăn điểm!
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em: default = đi học.
Nếu nghỉ, em luôn báo trước mấy ngày.
à mai em nộp phạt tiền ko làm bài tập luôn ( nộp cả tháng có đc giảm ko nhỉ ?).

This is my writing Task 1.
The table shows the way that the unemployed in UK spent their time everyday in the year 1982. According to the table, they spent almost time to do the in-door activities such as: housework, shopping and job hunting.
Looking at the data of the unemployed women, housework is the activity they spent much time to do, 49% in the morning and 21% in the afternoon. However, they did not spent much time for drinking and playing sport, just 1% for drinking and especially no time for playing sport in the afternoon.
The data of the unemployed men reported that they spent a biggest time for Job hunting in the morning and TV in the afternoon with 22% and 14%. Like the women, they just spent around 3% for drinking or playing sport.
I am going to be punished for my writing task 2.

I have much time in my office as well as at home. In ad***ion, I have spent much time on doing writing tasks. But, in fact, I couldnõ?Tt complete them. My God, I donõ?Tt know how to write them correctly. May be I am lack of structure and vocabulary. I didnõ?Tt catch anything from what I learned.
As a result, I was fined 10k at this afternoon class. Poor me! If you know Iõ?Tm out of my pocket.
I think I have to imitate from my friends. Letõ?Ts start õ?Ư
Tast 1 of Mr Vuong.
The table below show the way that the UK unemployed spent their time in the year 1982.
As can be seen, men did their housework, went shopping and hunted job in the morning. Women were too. Especially with housework, the percentage of women did it up to 49%. However, there are 14% of men worked in the garden and 10% of women used the time in the morning to visit friends or relatives. Some other works which both men and women did to spent their time such as decorating, walking, nothing, sitting around, visiting town or drinking.
In the afternoon, men used most of their time to hunt job, visit friends or relatives, work in the garden and watch TV. In contrast, women did the same work in the morning, like as do housework, go shopping, hunt job and visit friends or relatives. In other hand, women use their time to watch TV and reading. And women did never stay in bed or play sport.
All day, both of men and women were spent their time in works relative to their family.

Please check error for Mr Vuong!

Task 2 ?" Test 2 ?" Lovemit
Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified? Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation?

For a long time, people have known experimentation on animals for scientific. There were many achievements that protect human in the past, in present and in the future. In fact, experimentation is a great process at the moment and it is necessary to justify. In my opinion, there is alternative to animal experimentation such as protection of natural purposes.

For scientific purposes, animal experimentation is so useful. That work make scientists find out many ways to protect people living without diseases and cure patience. Scientists experiment on animals first, if they are successful, they use that result to doctor human. Because they have to test many ways, with many rates of part of medicine so that, the rates of success in first time is quite less. Therefore, they try again until they have the best result. Achievements brought are wonderful when day-by-day; people search many kind of medicine, many processes to cure people. However, Human has *****stain with some diseases that has not found out curing yet. Thus, people still use animals to test.

Animals not only used in scientific purposes but also they are experimentation for protect them. Such as, people discover how the dolphins live. They find out where do they come, when do they bear, what do they eat and how do they protect and live each other. Therefore, they have to test this some dolphins; they catch them and sign on them. Then, they release and follow them. After a long time, they understand activity of dolphins; they will have the method of protection. By many other ways, people help much kind of animals without reducing quantity, even extinction.

In conclusion, experimentation on animals is still important for scientific and protection of natural purposes. We need to explore this process more effectively to protect the world. (301 words)
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