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  1. zerocool_destiny

    zerocool_destiny Thành viên quen thuộc

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    what is the definition and what do you think about it??

    mess with the best
    die with the rest
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  2. emgaionline

    emgaionline Thành viên quen thuộc

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    What is the definition of independence ? uhm .. I don't know .
    In my oppinion , nobody can be independent absolutely . I say this b/c we live in the community . You and me can live lonely on the world . In addtion , we cannot do something sucessfully if noone help or supply you . In fact , the person are talent ussually don't make the important decision alone . First , the reason is " people know you well know what good things for you " .Second , if you do that , you can have the benefit of their perspective and experience .
    However , it dosn't mean you always are affected by people arround you . You just hear and think what good things for you . Only you can decide that . The experiences from people only will make you do the decision more correctly and easily . Don't forget , always asking the helping from people will make them annoy .
    Conclusion , people are independent can choose and do the good things from the advices of people arround them .
    Được emgaionline sửa chữa / chuyển vào 16:41 ngày 07/06/2003
  3. HTung

    HTung Thành viên quen thuộc

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    ...... would you mind if I correct some mistakes in your articles, embeonline?
    First, the phrase "live on the world", I don't think it's correct, instead, we use "live in the world". Remember, English is very diffrent from Vietnamese in adverb.
    Second, I think person is used in singular meaning, and people is used in plural meaning <-- I'm not sure on this, coorect me if I'm wrong
    And the last, the word "arround", I think you type an extra r <-- you want to emphasize you idea, don't you? :)]
    Don't be upset if I make you sad, OK? I just want to get us better and better in English!!!!!!
    Sincerely Yours!
    To live is to learn, to play, to interest and to love!
  4. zerocool_destiny

    zerocool_destiny Thành viên quen thuộc

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    ho ho person is used in both plural and singular . people is , too.
    mess with the best
    die with the rest
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  5. emgaionline

    emgaionline Thành viên quen thuộc

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    I'm sorry . I typed so fast , so i made some mistakes . ( B/c the Internet fee is expensive ) Thank you !
    I read it again . I must change this sentence
    -You and me can live lonely on the world . ---> You and me cannot live lonely in the world .
    People have two meanings in English - singular and plural . It depends on the meaning of the sentence and the situation . Yes , maybe the 'people " in my paragraph means singular . However I think people - the talent persons means a lot of people , , not you , not me and not only ones . I dont' know who they are . So i used people in plural meaning .
    I don't know it exactly . I will ask my teacher ( maybe I'm wrong ) . Don't worry when you change my mistakes . I'm just a student and now I'm studying Eng . Ofcouse , i will do some problems .
    Nobody can do everything exactly in throught their life . ( I think this sentence have some problems , pls change it for me ) Thank you again .
  6. emgaionline

    emgaionline Thành viên quen thuộc

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    I'm not dissapointed . I had just a little wrong in grammar . In my essay , I had a lot of mistakes ( don't remember how much ? )
    Được emgaionline sửa chữa / chuyển vào 16:40 ngày 09/06/2003
  7. rainbow11

    rainbow11 Thành viên mới

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    First we should have indepent thoughts, oki ? I dont think it's easy. Though I've tried my best , I'm always affected by others' opinions. Pls help me.
    It is love, not time , that heals all the wounds

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