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Hi, teacher.I am Beo con_3st June _Toefl IBT-5cnYou must say your name???21. The possible contaminating effects of the studentsõ?Ts laziness may obscure the meaning of learning English.22. The Respondentsõ?Ts self-reports permit the computation of many relevant events, which helps researchers gain much more insight into how accurate their assumption is.23. Many significant omissions from old versions have been added to form a new version widely-used.24. The new book is more easily used because there is an extra section, tailored to comment just for contemporary readers.25. We now have ample evidence that neurotic patients have a tendency to recall more sadness and despair than others.26. The assumption constituting the correlation between the old strategy and the improved one seemed to be inaccurate and ambigousambiguous.27. It is prudent to view the accident occurred last night as a political matter rather than a mere accident.28. Stress of hard working and joblessness are considered to generate suicide frequently happened in Japan- the 2st big country on economy in the world.29. My cousinõ?Ts courageous action saving the babyõ?Ts life merited praise.30.There are a variety of ways to decrease air population such as planting trees, cleaning the streets,õ?Ư Gỏằưi lúc 13:56, 11/06/08
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I''''''''m Nguyỏằ.n Viỏằ?t CặặĂng-Ielts26-this''''''''s my writing task of C1T1W1: (11/06)Results of an adult educationõ?Ts survey are described in the charts below. The study decisionõ?Ts causes are listed in the bar chart and the opinions of study fees sharing are drawn in the pie chart.From the bar chart, you can see that meeting people was the lowest reason with the rate of only 9 percents. Meanwhile, 40 percents of total answers, about interesting in subject, were the most frequent reason to study among adults. With only 2 percents lower than the top, gaining qualification was the second reason for adults to decide to have more education. Having the same level around 20 to 22 percents was three different tends of thinking. They were that finding out helpful for current job, improving prospects of promotion and learning enjoyment. And the last reason, reaching ability of changing jobs, was only 3 percents higher than the lowest one.Next in the pie chart, it was clear that only two fifth of total education costs were thought to be paid by individual. And the other part should be shared successively 25 percents to taxpayer and 35 percents to employer. ĐặỏằÊc cuongpharma sỏằưa chỏằa / chuyỏằfn vào 13:58 ngày 11/06/2008

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Dear Sir,
I am the Queen of Banana land!
I send to u first 10 sentences of week 2nd in June -" children''''s thinking"
Pls check and correct them.
1. The essence of recent high inflation is not based on weak finance forecast, but actually is caused by weak adjusting of Government.
2.The Zimbabwean Government claimed that they could not control the cash valuation and decided floating it.
3. A eminent person is who always definites his targets in clear segments and try his best to reach the goals.
4. Women usually are more interested in deductive than men.
5. The people who have perplexing thinking about urgent issues, always get confusion and make decision wrongly.
6.Studying too much and not enough vocation at primary school, stolen childhood time and growing nature of children.
7.Children world is absolutely different for adult world, in which a full house means: have a pet, flowers, parents, how many foots to go to other children''''s house, but in rest one, a rich house means: it cost million $, have a car and full furnitures.
8.Three year- old is the best period for starting language and communication, when the brain is wider and wider, easily get signals from outside without carefully sifting.
9. the swapping spheres of seniors in a international company is served as important meaning, that give them more chances to show their-selves and perform their capabilities in administration.
10. in sciences such as: math, physic, chemic, or so on, are not familiar with deductive reasoning, indeed they prefer accurate and clear result.
Em viet voi khi di hoc ve de luyen lai tu, nen cau khong duoc dai va nhieu y.
Goodnight!
Vua cu chuoi
Được vuacuchuoi sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:06 ngày 13/06/2008

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Trần Loan IELTS 26
8th 9/6-15/6
Task 2 Test 1 Cam 1
Topic
There are many different types music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the tra***ional music of a coutry more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music has always been a source of happiness to all men on the earth. Nowadays, many different types of music are existing in the wourld, such as rap, rock, ballad, pop and so on.
Without music, the world would indeed be a dull place. Even nature is full of music. There is music in the movement of the wild, the sea, as well as the trees. Music is very important for people?Ts happiness, that is hard to deny. Music appeases people?Ts sadness and fills them with gladness. It is for reason that music is played even in hospitals to encourage patients?Ts spirit. Because music has the abilities to make people happy, it contributes greatly important part in the humans?Ts success in life. A happy man is a good and hard worker. He works happily among people and always earns thr good_will of everybody. People like to make friends with him and to employ him in all kinds of work. Thus his life always happy and succeed. Music has greatly value in humans?Ts happiness, so we need music.
The tra***ional music has a greatly important lacation in a country. Those are creams, which are conserved and summarized from far, far away. We can say that the development on tra***ional music is cornerstone of the development of culture, music in each country. Culturally, the tra***ional music of a country is more important than the international music. But nowadays, with the process of integration, the tra***ional music has more and more few listeners, especially young people. They can?Tt stand to watch a play, but they can listen the international music wherever and whenever. The enjoying music depends on hobbies, enthusiasms and even levels of different people. Beside the development of international music, the cultural managers and people also need to preserve the tra***ional music and to develop it, so as *****it the modern life.
Music isn?Tt purely for relaxation because it is culture. Music is the ?omagic? medicine to treat almost of spirit and body wounds. Both the tra***ional music and the international music are very important while humans?Ts life is materializing.
Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 00:07 ngày 14/06/2008
Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 00:09 ngày 14/06/2008

Đăng Lam Sơn toefl 5cn 2 week 2
1.The much-anticipated expansion of the western Hanoi capital is unfolding in accordance with demands of developing industry.
2.It is openinng up to enhance the prospects and square of 1000 years of culture capital.
3.Long preserve of handicraft, Hanoi capital became a treasury of tourism and trade in late 20th and early 21st centuries.
4.As early 2007, Vinaconex(one of the largest construction groups in VietNam) blasting through the abudant area of eastern Hanoi to build many corporative houses.
5.They discoveried many vestiges of 15th century in the vicinity of Red river.
6.As widely planting creal and cash crop for agriculture developed, Red river delta became the largest rice producer in pacific area.
7.The building a lot of houses there led to discovery of old vestiges around xyz and attractived reasearcher to find them.
8.although operations of researcher was enduring, but they did not get many evidences to prove that it is vestige of 15th.
9. Archaeologier and other researcher form all parts of Vietnam flocked to the xyz to find tract of Le King.
10.At the height of this finding in 2007, the previous people went to there were about 100 researchers, and more than half of them was concentrated in the newly built house of Shiro.

Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL_5cn
Pan for gold
Everyday, many boats carried a lot of people to there to pan for gold along Lam River in Nghe An. This fact influenced on the environment and the human life.
Panning for gold made the river transfigured, led to changes of flow (specifically, the water flow was faster and faster). Thereby, giving rise to large lands crumbled, even influenced on traffic. Although it''s the area that is under public ownership and control, but there are no little individuals and groups to pan without permit. In some cases, it along with the giving a hand of local administration made the fact more terrible.
The noise from panning areas impacted on daily life of people who living alongside the river. Especially at the height of panning for gold, they can work all day. More dangerous, the using toxic chemicals to keep out sediments, made polluted the water as well as the air, and was the reason of breathing diseases.
Increasing gold price that was a much-anticipated phenomenon in recent time made gold one of the most wanted metal and stimulated much people to take part in panning. It became increasingly attractive them than ever. So, the local administration of Nghe An increased the control in an effort to manage the exploitations and ward off the harmful effects on the environment and the human.
Được ngoctu259 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:27 ngày 14/06/2008

14/6
Chao Thay, Em la Tung. Em gui hai bai luan. Thay sua giup em.
1) W1T4C1
The map shows the development of Chorleywood, a village near London, with the increased population since the middle of the 19th century.
Firstly, from the late of the 1860 to 1883, Chorleywood?T population was only a small group, living near the main road. There were 2 main roads, running across the village, yet the residence of people was only in a small area, which was far from the upper road.
In the period spanning from 1883 to 1922, a new railroad was built and taken into working in 1909. This new railroad lied seemly in the south of the town, near the old residents?T area. As a result, the population widened to the south, forming a larger community, living near the Chorleywood station. Before the modern motorway was built, from 1922 to 1970, Chorleywood?Ts population continued to broaden more. Their home concentrated along with the railroad and this broadening took place in 2 directions on one side of this railroad.
Lastly, from 1970 to 1994, when the modern motorway was constructed, the size of Chorleywood?Ts community have a surge and people tended to move near this new way to live. They stayed not only in one side, but in both sides of the motorway.
In conclusion, due to the arrangement of many kinds of road, the village of Chorleywood has developed significantly in the size of their living area.
2) W2T4C1
While the idea of having a single career is seemly an old fashion, the new idea of having several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be continued through life become more fashioning. Each of these views has its own justification.
On the one hand, having a single career with a job, and sometimes in a single company is certainly conventional and has its own majority. Indeed, people, taking only one job, have a lot of time, concentrating on this one. They will have to train themselves to be better qualified in one subject and prove that they are appropriate for only one work, so it sounds much easier than the counterparts who want to have many jobs at the same time. Moreover, when the more-is-better culture remains popular in many corporate and a worker?Ts contribution to a firm is measured through the amount of working time, a hardworking worker will be more profitable in having working promotion.
On the other hand, there are many arguments, proving that having several careers and education should be continue through life is much better. Nowadays, people seem to have a more general education because of the development of science and economy. So, people apparently have more choices. While information becomes easily to obtain through the internet, people today can study at their home with a single computer. This helps him widen his knowledge and find it more easily to know his ability. Rather, people now do not have to go to the company to finish their works. Using the latest technology like computer, mobile-phone, he can easily make contact with client, send and receive stock information or finish his work at home and then, send them to his firm quickly and safely. Time, lost for traffic jam, moving and so on will be minimal. Moreover, when people has many jobs, he tends to improve his quality and so full-life education is a certain thing, essential for all people who want to increase their level of knowledge.
In conclusion, I find that having single career or multiple one belong to each onê?Ts ability or mind. The harder the worker is, the more knowledge he wants to obtain and so that, education through life will become more common in our population.
Em thank.

Thay xem lai cho em. Hinh nhu bai 2/6 em chua duoc sua. Em cam on.
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Em LE TUNG, lop IELTS26. Gui bai ngay 2/6.
10 sentences for W2P3C1:
1. Bad news, such as: crimes, disaster, are these days more considerable social phenomena than most people have thought of in the previous day.
2. On the face of reporting events, there could not be a more profitable method of using hot news like starsâ?T daily activities.
3. Since new directors have had significant difficulties, attracting the audiences, it might be easier for them to use latest news, bought from paparazzi with certain fees.
4. Finding it difficult in accounting for such imposing events, some directors go back to a simpler way of choosing issues to report, that is, making use of the papersâ?T area for advertisements.
5. Indeed, because there is always interesting news, parallel with boring one, good information, along with bad one, the role of a good director is to control what news will be reported for highest incomes.
6. Sometimes, a certain newspaper is famous for reporting bizarre and strange actions of stars, which happen to be defined as deviant in our society.
7. An experienced director has an ability of presupposing both the positive and negative responses from his audiences to quickly adjust his newspaper system.
8. Director relationships arise from both the scrambling for the audiences and incorporating to catch up with the latest events in a balance between fame and wealth.
9. A right journalist by definition has a mission to reflect objectively the reality of social life, but this simple idea is affected by many factors like the readersâ?T hobbies.
10. A substantial proportion of the population of modern society enjoys hard-core news, forgetting the deep truth that they are in a part of a huge communication system, which sometimes does not care about the reality of life.
Wait, a short text for W1P1C1:
The two charts describe the results of an education survey of the adult. While the first gives some reasons of studying, the second graph reveals that in what way education cost should be shared, according to general ideas of people.
For reason to study, the largest part of adult of about 40% think of the subject interest or being better qualified. In contrast, only around 10% of people, surveyed suggest that it is a chance to meet new people or to change their existing jobs with exact figures of 9% and 12%, respectively. Lastly, three medium sized groups of just above 20% share their ideas of studying in different reasons: being useful for their current jobs, improving the view of promotion or simply enjoying learning.
The second pie chart show the idea of adult of how their education cost should be shared. A majority of 40% think that it belongs to each personâ?Ts responsibility, that is, in individualistic method. Exactly a quarter of all suggest that the costs should be imposed into tax fees, paid by taxpayers. The rest of the totals of one third think of their employersâ?T responsibilities.
In conclusion, although there are significant differences among the reasons for study and ways that course costs should be shared, most adult think that they study for their own and they themselves can manage to pay studying fee.
That''''s all.
Nho thay sua giup em. Em cam on.
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G9, teacher. This is my 1st writing in week from 13th to 19th June.
Topic: two ways of education.
It could be said that development bases on education. Education, serving as the biggest problem of all societies, however, is proceeded in some different ways.
Some educators teaches students the most clear and particular method which is popular and useful in practice. It?Ts the shortest way so as to reach a goal and also efficiently saving money and time. However, the students are incapable of reasoning.
The developed societies know that essence of education lies in teaching the general way to do something instead of particular and specific one. It means that capable of reasoning is the most important intention of teaching. It appears to waste time on teaching and learning them. Yet the reason is that fundamental principles are always true although anything changes.
Indeed, everything is changing day by day so if you?Tre good at only one method, you?Tll soon have difficulties.
According to the recent manual survey in labour market, employees who trained general ways have spent more time than someone taught specific approaches and skills. But they?Tre more flexible in handling problem thus more successful in their careers.
After all, most of educators conclude that they are to teach crucial knowledge. Before this comes to life, managers suggest an efficient way to manage that employees with fundamental knowledge are given the novel task of working, and others are given other normal works.
Được lurang sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:32 ngày 14/06/2008