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    I''m Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-15/06-this is my writing task 2 of cam1''s test 1:
    From the human?~s early ages, entertainment demands, paralleling with other essential activities, were formed and being developed, and music was one of them. Musical instruments made of stone, finding out in many archaeological discoveries around the world, were the most material proofs. That was, music brought to the ancients few moment of relaxing and took them away from their hourly dangerous lives. Time was up, but music always played an important role in almost human?Ts daily activities. That is cause of its community characteristic and of the entertainment purpose for which music was established. Music, not the random sound, is the rhythmical sound complex that makes people feel comfortable and interested. So that it has a high potential power bringing people closer together and erasing every barriers of difference of langue, races, religions and so on. It can heal the hurt and also is a medium for people, usually disadvantage one, to reflect their unrealistic aspirations to others having similar con***ions. In ad***ion, music can be played at any where and in any time so it itself become one of the most frequent entertainment type of both the rich and the poor. Cause of all these things, music becomes to an actually essential factor of human?Ts mental life.
    Music can be separated into two types: tra***ional one and modern one. Appearance of each is to serve apart of listeners adapted with its style and play a determined role in our lives so it?Ts impossible to say which one is more important that which one. Tra***ional music, in connection with other heritages, is really an invaluable divine immaterial estate of previous generations. It contributes the actual evidences for historians to study lives happening in the past. So given that, it disappears and there is only the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays, it will be really an extreme loss for our next generations. On the other hand, modern music, basing on fitting with the rapid lifestyle nowadays and helping from developed technology, becomes more and more popular. But it does not represent for all kind of music. Perhaps, co-operating these two different types into a new type, called modern music having tra***ional melody, is a good way for this issue and in reality, it has been happening.
    Được cuongpharma sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:14 ngày 15/06/2008
  2. eyaaye

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    Trần Loan IELTS 26
    1st 16/6-22/6
    Task 2 Test 2 Cam 1
    Topic
    Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
    The globalization process requires every countries in the world, that must to take advantages of all financial resources in order to develop economy, special poor countries. There are two kinds of resources, which are supplied by wealthy nations or even these poor nations.
    When wealthy nations share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education, we can say that is the international aid. The international aids play a important role in the development of economy-social policies construction of a country. The international aids can contribute to create or change deeply one economy industry or even all economy of one country. The purposes of international aids want to impulse long-term development, reduce poorness in the developing countries and strengthen strategic interests and short-term politics for sponsorial countries. The international aids are performed with many forms, in order to loan with interest, *****pply equipments, professors or material assistances. But beside that, along with the investable resources of foreign countries, may be there are backward technologies, which polluted environment, change life con***ions of citizens in these countries, where are received aids. On the other hand, the poor or developing countries will tied to developed countries?T economy, politics and will have debt burdens in the future. In short, we hard to deny greatly effects on international aids in the economy development process of each country. We can trust that, with the performance of economy innovation, Vietnam were and will received continuously the strong international aids from foreign funds and perform successfully the target ?oRich citizens, strong country, social equity, civilization?.
    The aids, the governments of poorer nations look after their citizens themselves, are the home sources. The government in these nations need to know the way in order to exploit all ready potentialities in their countries. The advantages of home sources don?Tt depend on foreign countries and also isn?Tt affected by the immeasurable displacement from outside. Because the home sources are properties of country so the responsibility in using sources rise, so as to bring about the effective projects which are invested. If a country, special poor country, only based on the home sources, it don?Tt have enough sources for invest and develop country, isn?Tt received new technologies from outside. That country will isolated about economy.
    Before 1986, Vietnam was a poor country, economy was the state economy, didn?Tt have exchange or trade with outside. But then, the government of Vietnam combined both the international aids and the home sources. After many innovatory years, Vietnam is becoming a confident partner of lot of nations in the world. If a country want to have a stable development economy, that country need to combine the help of foreign countries and also to promote abilities in its country
    Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 10:05 ngày 21/06/2008
  3. tieuca07

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    Em là N. N. Tú
    Lớp IELTS26
    Thầy sửa giùm em bài writing.
    C1,PT1,W2,p32
    There is no doubt that music, with many types, has a vital role in our life. It seems that music is played at
    any time and everywhere. From one or another ways, it has contributed to make the life more and more
    beautiful. From my point of view, I think there are many reasons to explain why do we need music? In
    this essay, I will analyze the role of music and tra***ional music.
    First of all, it seems we can not live without music. It is a product of brain, that contains all of the most
    soul and feeling of author. In ad***ion, feeling of people is depended by the system of social ideal in each
    ages.Therefore, music is not only mean of individual feeling, it also carries mean of lifestyles of this age.
    On the other hand, music is the best way to reducing stress after a day of tensions. When people are
    stressed, they usually prefer to listen to music at the quiet places. For example, I often listen to classical
    music of guitar in my room. In contrast, music is used as the background music cheer people up in each
    parties. Today, it is also used in medicine for proposes of cure.
    Finally, as I said above, each country has different features of music, that called the tra***ional music.
    This type of music is also played with tra***ional musical instrument, produced explicitly style of music.
    For instance, in my country, tra***ional music is known as province songs, are played with flute,
    monochord?Thus, in my opinion, the tra***ional music is the most important ,while international music,
    that is heard everywhere, can be used as resources for development of tra***ional music.
    In summary, I think that music is known as the most popular language that spreaded with breakneck pace.
    Especially, we can also feel melodies and feeling of the author of any international music from another
    countries, although we do not understand the language of those countries.
    Cám ơn thầy đã sửa bài!
    Được tieuca07 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 01:40 ngày 16/06/2008
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    I''m Ngoc Linh in ToefliBT5CN
    1.It should be obvious that cows give birth to live young.
    2.I and my brother cannot disguise our affinities with my grandparents.
    3.How was the gap between me and my brother bridge?
    4.It is not easy to envision what the first our ancestor look like.
    5.Very exciting discoveries about my family records have finally allowed me to reconstruct my standing.
    6.There were many species of mammals which could live both on land and at sea in past.
    7.My bag was filled with a dictionary, three books, a box of pen, a wallet and one clothes.
    8.My keys was found embedded in clothes.
    9.It has been suggested that Crocodile fed on meat in salt water.
    10.This ant is far too small *****pported a piece of bread on land.
    11.Traffic jam are experienced by all means of transport, how can we tell when traffic jam occur on road?
    12.It turns out that the traffic jam may be universal in many developping countries.
    13.Urbanizing in a quick rising way, as noted by Keyness in the eightheen century, may be a universal sign of traffic jam.
    14.As the originator of the theory of classic economics, Keyness believed that the universal sense of traffic participators would have survival value.
    15.Most economists concur that certain traffic jam suggest the same sense in all people in developping nations.
    16.Moreover, people in diverse economys are manifested other senses.
    17.In classic research Adam Smith indicated that traffic jam couldnâ?Tt stop until government intervened.
    18.So there are the traffic policemen system in every line in big cities in the rush hours to reduce traffic jam.
    19.In fact, various buses in the rush hours have been giving rise to certain traffic jam on road.
    20.On the other hand, Riding quickly and uncarefully of bus drivers also give danger to other means.
  5. teppi3000

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    Em Toàn Lớp IELTS 26 gửi bài viết này 16/6
    16. One of the most eminent of leader of Citigroup, Aland Holand claimed that Vietnam economic will be bad until the end of this years.
    17. The new concept of training is so complicated for all most of people
    18. Ministry of education and training is collecting suggestion for draft of reform primary education Project.
    19. One of the most eminent expert of UNDP claimed that primary education program of Viet Nam is heaver than other Asian country.
    20. Police Investigation department issued ad***ion investigation conclusion for case of smoke smuggle after 3 months. The conclusion showed that director of Thien Loi Hoa Company was accused to fake stamp of Hai Vien Company.
    21. Police Investigation department showed declaration?Ts report of Thien Loi Hoa?Ts staff to demonstrate for this conclusion.
    23. Lawyers defend the accused said that Police Investigation department didn?Tt support new evident.
    24. Director of Lao cai custom department, Dinh Ba An was accused to take bribes 200 million dong from inferior.
    25. Telegraph is one paper of England showed that, bitter failure of Hillary Cliton in Democratic Party?Ts primary election appeared hearsay about problem marriage with former President Cliton.
    26. Each people have to know that Protect environment is personal responsibility
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    Dear Sir, I send you my writing for children''s thinking.Pls check my mistakes and correct them.
    many thanks
    VUACUCHUOI
    The role of fatherhood and motherhood that is responsible for bringing children up.
    The good families are essences of the good societies. Actually, a good family is based on a happy pair who loves each other and really wanted to get married. The good children are who were born and grow up in these families. They naturally are taken by the responsibilities of both their father and mother. The fatherhood and the motherhood play the same role in having babies and taking responsibilities to them.
    In the nature of science, the fatherhood take part in building a new baby and the baby consist of his genes and part of vein, like belong to his apart. Its genes structure is based on genes XX of father and genes XY of mother. In one or other form, the baby surely is created by close relationship between a man and a woman, who can make a sense of reasoning and thinking. The father legally has to be in charge the action, what he has done. Any government contains family law and in which, they endorse clearly charging of fatherhood.
    On human rights site, the children are new generations and keep our existing continuous. The good buds are based of good communities, in which they are looked after by both father and mother. If only the mother take care of them and help them grow up, is a disadvantage in both mind and substance. For instance, they might meet curious glances, false rumours, and inferiority complex; also meet a lot of hurdles in communication with others and so on. In human rights legal, children are entitled under parents and communitiesâ?T care and help. And both fatherhood and motherhood have to pay attention in responsibilities of their developing and take part in creating personalities.
    In ad***ion, a baby plays a role as a bridge which connects the parents, and brings happiness to everyone in a family. In ethical, especial in Asia societies, they believe in cause and effect, it means that a good father has a good son and the way the father take care of his son as well as the way the son does. The motherhood is the root of human dignity and mind; the fatherhood is origin of characterize and lifestyle.
    In conclusion, the fatherhood and the motherhood are charged the same responsibility for bring a baby up. And there is no reason which using to defend the idea that only the motherhood has responsible for looking after the children. In the fact that, the children could not created if the fatherhood does not contribute in this process.

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    Good afternoon everyone :).
    I''m La Trang and this is my writing task 1 - test4 - page 91 - book1.
    The population in Chorleywood, a village near London, has increased steadily. This development of the village which has started since the middle of the nineteenth century is described in the map below.
    At the first time, there was only a small group in the right of one of two main roads. In 1883, it widen along the road to the south. The area which was double during about 50-year development then rose rapidly with two parts. One was in the right of the area and the other was in the left, separated by the main road. The new parts also went along the railway built in 1909.
    As a motorway paralleling with the main road and cutting the other one and the railway was built in 1970, the population grew dramatically. It developed largely around the two intersections. The increase in only about 25 year was bigger than ever before so that made Chorleywood crowded.
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    Em la Le Tung. Em nop 10 cau cho W2T4C1. Thay sua giup em. Em cam on.
    1. Having only one career through life is one of the most popular of working views that everyone has historically considered as a certainty.
    2. The essence of reasoning that one career is the best lies in old ideas of â?~more is betterâ?T, popular in the thinking and the understanding of many corporate, even of famous interviewers.
    3. Most of people, chasing for two aspirations, working for two or more companies, try their best so as to reach a goal that is the success in earning much money or having a creative life.
    4. Because everyone has to go through a two-stage sequence in their lives, those are: infancy, adult and agedness, the most essential intention of full-lived education is to provide suitable type of learning for each stage.
    5. A multiple-careers person will have to proceed to collect more information, self-study in more subjects, prove himself to be suitable to persuade more interviewers, those are some difficulties he has to face with in compare with a normal one-career employee must manage.
    6. Having many jobs seems to be strictly analogous to studying several subjects in a semester, the boss, indeed, is much like strict teacher, who always requires the serious and hard-working aspects of students.
    7. According to a survey, it turns out that return of firms, using part-time workers, sometimes overcome that of firms which only use full-time workers, so that more and more corporate are likely to hire the informal personnel, who has little bond with their companies for medical insurance or so.
    8. For many-careers workers, the difficulty lies not only in strict working regulations of law, but also in some subjective aspects, such as making use of time in an appropriate way to complete all work.
    9. The question of what job you will chose in the future is unimportant any more, in stead of this, you should ask yourself that what the first job you will do and apparently, the number of jobs that you will experience.
    10. The failure of some individuals, who appreciate themselves too high when applying for many jobs can not be taken as proof that having numerous careers is impossible.
  9. TranNgocVui

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    Trần Loan IELTS 265th 9/6-15/6Task 1The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Purpose of travel March 2002 June 2002 September 2002 December 2002Business 73% 29% 53% 34%Holiday 18% 54 % 31% 35%Visit family 6% 13% 11% 26%Other 3% 4% 5% 5% The results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip are described in the chart. The survey was conducted in four different months in 2002, march, June, September and December.The major reasons for traveling abroad are holidays, business, visits family. Indeed, there is a steady increase in the percentage of holidaymakers, while on March there was about 18% of the sample on June there were 54%, and from 31% on September to 35% on December. The percentage of traveling for visit family has also increased. Although there is not a big decrement 13% traveled on December compared with 11% on September. Beside, traveling abroad for business showed an abnormal decrease over the period March - December. While there were about 73% on March and on June the number fell to 29% but there rose 53% on September, then fell to 34% on December. The other purpose of travel also occupied small rate and only rose 2% from March to December.On March, the percentage of business was the highest, that was 73%, while on June, the number of travelers, who were on holiday, got the top of 54%. The two next months, business and holiday still held the highest situation on September and December accordingly.The percentage of traveling changed over months in the year. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào...Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 21:50 ngày 11/06/2008 Gửi lúc 21:35, 11/06/08
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    Trần Loan IELTS 266th 9/6-15/6Topic ?oHealth?Health is the total comfortable state of constitution, spirit and social and it not only includes the absence of diseases or illness, according to The world health organization. Having a best health is one of the basic rights of people, although whom come from different socials, economies, politics and religions.PracticalThe exercise is the practical movement in order to develope and maintain the constitution and complete health. Regular exercise is an important thing, which would help people to prevent disease and illness.The exercise as a whole is divided in 3 groups:+ The muscles exercises, such as acrobatics, in order to take care muscles and joints. The aerobics exercises for example walk and run, concentrate on stand of circulatory system. The aerobics exercises, such as jerk and sprint, increase strength of muscles in short time.+ The vitality and spirit exercises, for instance respiration and breath practical, look after vitality movement function, relaxation and concentration. The teakwood, Qi gong, yoga exercises intensify vitality human blood circulation. These increase concentration function and mental gymnastics.NutritionThe nutrition regulations are also important, compared with the exercise. Nutrition provides nutrient for our body by food. Nutritionally, in order to have complete nutritive, body need to be provided sufficiently necessary vitamins. If our body doesn?Tt have full nutritive, it weakens, that calls malnutrition.+ The change in regimen and the supply complete nutritive will change health, treat many diseases, which have cause of wrong nutrition regulations. The unequal nutrition regulations can bring about serious diseases, such as obesisity or osteomalacia, and many problems concerning with psychology and deed.+ And more, if we eat unhealthy elements (lead, mercury or dioxide), we can die of poisoning. It depends on dose.The spirit healthThe spirit health has been defined as the good spirit and emotion situation of the individual. On the other hand, if the spirit feels comfortable, it is unsure about is the spirit health.If we feel self-confident, can face to stress situation, maintain relationships comfortably, have an independent life and can restore after difficulties, all of them are signs of a spirit health. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào... Gửi lúc 10:15, 12/06/08
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    Em Nhan lop IELST 26 gửi thầy 10 câu ngày hôm nay và 5 câu nợ hôm trước 1. In American view the role of Vietnam is increasing, they are as interested in Vietnam as Thailand.2. The formal prime minister Vo Van Kiet was one of the best leaders of Vietnam; he was a pioneer in the industrialization and modernization. . 3. Yesterday, The formal Prime minister Vo Van Kiet was died in Singapore, he died in his 86 years.4. Vo Van Kiet, whose real name was Vo Van Hoa, he was born in 1922 at Ben tre province, and in 1938 he joined revolution. 5. Stock market is a difficult place for new investor to earn money. 6. Foreigner investors are as interested in making money as protecting business environment.7. Consumers hope that by the true action of the government price of goods will be reduced in next month.8. General Director of World Bank told that WB is willing to help Vietnam again inflation and protect ecosystem economic.9. The earthquake reached 7.8 on Richter scale in Tu xuyen caused 85.000 people died.10. Inflations up to 16 percent in nearly month 2008 cause the government to reduce target development economic in 2008 from 9 percent to 7 percent.11. Earthquake is inevitable in Japan. All building in here builds from special material, which can defend earthquake.12. He played a trick her to use up 100. 000 USD.13.The Dung quat oil filter factory is 90 complete; it will be produced the first tone of oil in January 2009. 14. There are many differences between world cup and Euro, World cup is larger than Euro, world cup include 32 football teams come from 32 countries. They represent for 4 continents. Euro is only 16 teams 15. England football team did not archive enough point to join Euro 2008. Football experts forecast that Netherlands will become a new championship. Gửi lúc 16:02, 12/06/08
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    This is my writing task 2 - test 1 - page 32 - book 1. For different culture and people?T favorites, today, diversity of music isn?Tt unknown or unimaginable. The types of music are too much for anyone to know all details of them. But it is quite easy for him to list not only some most popular types of music, for instant, country, rock, pop, dance?, but also some most famous singers or bands of every time such as: The Beatles, Michael Jackson etc. Music, in one form or another, has long been in noble favorite to people. Although it isn?Tt so long as a story, it could tell a small but exciting story like a real one. People also used to play happy music in happy times in order to make it hotter, for instant, birthday, party, wedding, anniversary, etc. Sad music is played in sad times to make it not worse. It could be said that whenever you are, there?Ts a song appropriated with your status. Besides, music, known as ?~medicine for soul?T, is really good for mind. It could heal the hurt or make someone downing up. When you?Tre hopeless, they tell you that ?olet it be? or: ?oDon?Tt lose your way with each passing day. You?Tve come so far, don?Tt throw it a way.?. In fact, music is a method in medical terms for helping adults in coping with stress and making babies more intelligent. Nowadays, according to Thomas Friedman, ?~the world is flat?T meant that the borders of every field are unclear. So there?Ts a fact that international music, listened everywhere, has been replacing tra***ional music day by day. Tra***ional music, an important part of each national culture, has existed for a long time. It is a characteristic, which keep them different from others, therefore, people can boast from that. In the cultural sense, tra***ional music seems more important than international music which keeps them as same as the others. Some national cultural management even worried about that international music is a part of the plan for beating their nation. However, music isn?Tt as politic. People enjoy a type of music only when it may share their feelings or when they find the meaning of songs, which make them better. Thus, the difference of time, distant, language is nothing. So in human sense, it isn?Tt necessary to know which tra***ional music or international music is more important. Music, a creation of people, is really a magic sound connecting people all over the world. Whatever tra***ional or international music, there?Tre a number of types of music provided for your choice. So please select one appropriated to experience its wonder. - Trang La - Được lurang sửa chữa / chuyển vào 18:28 ngày 12/06/2008 Gửi lúc 17:06, 12/06/08
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    Page 9 (Part 2).Nguyễn Hạnh Trang - Lớp 26 và 4708/06/2008- Vietnamese universities are difficult place to get on if you are only clever.- He played a trick against his lover to get married, his main purpose is higher position in her father?Ts company.- Almost people are trying to save the Earth but the small rest are wearing them down.- Because my company has people rarely, my director has to serve as manager.- The main economic problems in almost nations are inflation, which tend to become hyperinflation.- At the moment, members of bridges in HN are buckling because of hundreds of truck per day.- Air con***ioners are able to give us flexible air, in other hand; they cause dry skin for female.- Cutting Government spending and raising interest rate are temporary solution to control market prices.- A new project is shown that building highest Vietnamese tower, which hills up to 138 meters.- Dramatic foreign investment in stock markets deflected domestic investors and lager in almost Vietnamese economy.- For several months, grass has laidacross her garden when she came back from summer holiday.- The farmers, not professional scientists, created machines, which separate seed and covering, - The Government is finding the way to reclaim history structures to get highest effectively.- They usually use sponge with shower gel to wash their babies but nearly research shown that it could hurt children?T skin.- Titanic, a giant ship of 18th century sank, and there is one of terrible calamity until now.- English, when understood myself, has clearly meaning but translating on another language, for example Vietnamese, becomes hardly to understand.- To get the pets meaning the owners are as interested in it as in babies.- Because of exploiting so many resources offshore, they make mainland settle slowly. Mấy hôm nhà em mất mạng, bây giờ mới gửi được cho thầy.Nhờ thầy sửa giúp em ạ. (Độc nhất VN) Series hàng trăm mẫu nc hoa Ngoại dành cho Ô tô, Phòng ngủ, Tủ quần ao..kiểu dáng cực đỉnh(lọ nc hoa, vòng cổ, sticker,...)Bán giá gốc hàng cty chính hãng! Đa dạng: 50k, 100k, 200k, 300k, 400k.. LHệ :0908 346 008http://muare6.vinahoo.com/ThoiTrang/1672586.ttvn Gửi lúc 18:39, 12/06/08
    tieuca07Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 10:56, 29/02/08Hiện có 231 Đã được 1 người bình chọn (5.00) ID bài viết: 12916516

    Em là N. N. TúLớp IELTS26Thầy sửa giùm em hai bà Writing task 1, Cam1. Cam1,PWT2, No4(p.51) In the Australian Bureau of Meteorology, the process of up-to-the-minute information and reliable forecasts on the weather was illustrated by the diagram below. It can be easy seen that the process has four steps. First of all, information has been collected by incoming-information machines as the satellite, the radar buoy. This information was recorded in several forms: photos, screens and charts that transmitted directly to analysis and forecast machines. For the second step, it is the process of analysis and forecast information that analyzed byspecial machines as: the satellite photo, the radar screen and the synoptic chart. The scientists have been worked very hard to produce reliable forecasts. The next step, all data will be treated against and have e***ed before broadcast in the final step asthe TV, the radio, the recorded announcement. To conclude, these processes are quickly and produce reliable forecasts, thus we can immediately up-to-the-minute climate changes. Cam1,PWT4, No3(p.91) The popular development of the Choleywood village in the middle of the 19th Century was describedby the map below. This process was shown through 4 development lines from 1868 to 1994. As the map was shown that the population was no changed in the first point, from 1838 to 1883. In the second point, from 1883 to 1922, this developing population was endured to the South of the map. In this period, a railway was built across through the residential area in 1909, and the population was three times than the first point. The next point, people have moved to the East of the map and developed for 48 years, from 1922 to 1970. At the end point of this period, was signed by the building of the motorway in 1970. In the final period, people have went to the North of the map, followed by the trend of motorway and have lived there. It is also be shown that the population has developed in two sides of roads, has crowed round the cross-points between these roads. In conclusion, the development of the population the roads parallel, and people will have dwelt nearly roads. A slim girl with shrewish mind. Ha hachó sủa mặc chó sủa, đường ta ta cứ đi Được tieuca07 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 19:16 ngày 12/06/2008 Gửi lúc 19:01, 12/06/08
    eyaayeThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 23:45, 20/03/08Hiện có 430 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12917797

    Trần Loan IELTS 267th 9/6-15/6Topic ?oThe oriental medicine?In Vietnam, the oriental medicine, term is parallel used with the tra***ional medicine, shows medicine from China and Vietnam, compared with the Western medicine (the modern medicine).The oriental medicine argument is based on the cornerstone of antique China philosophy: yin and yang, five basic elements. If yin and yang, five basic elements equal, body is healthy, the treat disease restores the equal state of those elements, (while The western medicine is based on knowledge about surgery, physiology? and many achievements of modern science).The treatment of oriental medicine includes the acupuncture method, drugs are drank, for external application and even massaged.The acupuncture method is based on needles system, which is described in detail with hundreds of dangerous spots on body. The dangerous spots concern organs in body. In order to treat disorder in what organ, this method meddles in correlative spots and some other spots if necessary.The China tra***ional medicine was passed from China and was developed by Vietnamese herb doctors. The tra***ional medicine was discovered by Chinese. The famous Vietnamese herb doctors, who were ancestors of Vietnamese medicine, were Le Huu Trac and Tue Tinh. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào... Gửi lúc 21:27, 12/06/08
    beoackhipThành viên mới,Thành viên từ 18:43, 26/05/08Hiện có 66 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12918604

    Hien_4st june_toefl ibt_5cn.Chuc thay buoi toi vui ve.E gui bai hoi muon, nho thay sua dum e nhe.Thanks thay so much.31. The monitor supposed the Beauty Rating Scale to find the most beautiful girl in my class. 32. The scale assigns numerical values to 10 major items that are considered to be able value both outside beauty and inside heart accurately.33. In responding to the scale, all of the boys are asked to display how they think about each girl.34. The person then adds up the numbers associated with each item checked.35. My e***or is so busy that she doesn?Tt have time to help her son with his English composition. Her lazy son doesn?Tt do well on his essays so now he needs some tutoring in English.36. When a person lit up a cigarette, someone will ask him/her to stop smoking, that makes him/her get sick of this restriction. Most of smokers think they should be able to smoke wherever they like in public. But non-smokers also have their own rights. They hate breathing other people?Ts smoke. The smokers and the non ?" smokers hope that someday there will be a smokeless cigarette, which will make everyone happy.37. Nowadays many tourists like to go to exciting cities such as Rio, Amazon,? because they can see beautiful scenery, carnivals, fantastic museums, have a good time in excellent trains and meet a lot of friendly people.38. Before an outbreak of any war, women and children of the poor country are the most unfortunate and miserable people because they must face many severe risks and unmet protection.39. There is nobody more miserable than civilians living in war. They must suffer psychological distress that the war causes. Many people flee their homes, children are separated from parents, boys are forced into combat, and a lot of women and children die due to/ because of violence, terrible poverty,?40. There is an increasing number of people died due to the big earthquake happened in Tu Xuyen province in China. Gửi lúc 22:38, 12/06/08
    minhminh166Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 18:22, 06/06/06Hiện có 61 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12919081

    June 12 Examination dayThe most nervous days of students lives are the final exam. Although prepared carefully a month before, hopes were mixed fears on the day of examination. students, who studied lazily before, also stay up late to prepare for the exam tomorrow.A studious students probably feels self-confident at the first time. All students are worried about whether exam questions would be difficult or not. Except lazy students, most of them look forward to the examination days.Unlike other days, examination days are usually quiet. People glance their lessons the last time before going to the hall. Before the bell ring the rest of minutes as gold and diamond. Because it is the last chances to check and repair. Those last minutes sometimes help you to get much more points.It is indeed this is the nervous examination day for studious pupils. Gửi lúc 23:22, 12/06/08
    minhminh166Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 18:22, 06/06/06Hiện có 61 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12924023

    Miss Minh Minh should put your sadness aside and focus on some short time and long-time targets. The life?Ts still beautiful. I hope u?Tll recover a-s-s-p.These day, I felt so tired? I was too busy.. Things came repeatedly.. I couldn?Tt have time to breathe? I dun like to b like this. Actually, this situation made me feel down? Besides, I couldn?Tt control losing weight. A year ago, I couldn?Tt deny that I had an idea of losing weight in mind. But now when it becomes true, I feel terrible? I?Tm afraid of eating everything, then lose weight so fast? I?Tm wondering can I live like this for how many days? God, save me!!! My world changed so quickly?. A year ago, may be I was the perfect zero? I had nothing.. everything went wrong! After coming back from Taiwan, I nearly had all I want? (is it because of my truthful prayers beside Love river?), but?it made my life disordered? I?Tm the ambitious girl? I?Tm ambitious *****ccess in life, to have an happy house, also the important thing is to have my angel I love?. If I wanna have all, I must be busy, must try 2 or 3 times more than I tried? I let myself into a difficult situation?. But I?Tm also a restive girl? I agreed to this challenge. After hardship period, may be will I have a beautiful life?? and is it the result I should have? I just wanna stop to have time to look back all thing I have done, to refresh myself, especially is to have time to relax? but I wasn?Tt allowed to do that? why? Have u ever understood me, mom? U always says that u don?Tt need me to earn so much money, that u just want me to have a happy life, to have a house to live, to have a bed to sleep, and to have a man who always takes care of me.. that?Ts enough! But why u always makes me do everything I dun want? I just wanna relax, u don?Tt let me have time to do? u see, I?Tm so tired!...even though I know, all thing u did is the best for me? Ma, thanks u so much! But do u see its time for me to have a decision by myself???... u r the person who I must think so much! Nhà em treo ảnh Bác Hồ/ Bên trên là một lá cờ đỏ tươi/ Ngày ngày Bác vẫn mỉm cười/ Bác nhìn chúng cháu vui chơi trong nhà/ Ngoài sân có mày con gà/ Ngoài vườn có mấy quả na chín rồi/ Em nghe như Bác dạy lời/ Cháu ơi đừng có chơi bời đâu xa/ Trồng rau, quét bếp, đuổi gà/ Thấy tàu bay Mỹ thì ra hầm ngồi/ Bác lo bao việc trên đời/ Ngày ngày Bác vẫn mỉm cười với em. Gửi lúc 12:53, 13/06/08
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