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Dear Sir,
Here is my writing task 2 -version 2.
Pls revise it for me.
Many thanks!
VUACUCHUOI
VERSION 2 (writing task 2 of Childrenâ?Ts thinking)
Children play a role as bridges, which are sensory connecting among familyâ?Ts members. Despite of the fat that, the motherhood can make a decision in having or not babies, the fatherhood have to take the responsibility for bring them up for several reasons, are below:
Firstly, in the nature of science, a babyâ?Ts genes are created by genes structure from both mother and father which made up XX genes of fatherhood and XY genes of motherhood. That means the baby consist of genes and vein from the father that means the father contributes in creating process a baby. Besides, creating child or girl scientifically depends on the fatherâ?Ts genes, not is the fault of motherhood as long existing erroneous conception. Somehow, the fatherhood is in charged in making decision having a baby or not.
Secondly, both motherhood and fatherhood take part in bring a baby up in both mind and physical. A well-baby is who grows up in full house with mother and father, where the father could teach him keep strong in mind and trend him the lifestyle; the mother could teach him how to love others and keep peaceful in spirit. As we see, the father always does strictly and the mother performs more smooth and tender for making the baby up; also is basis of developing a full personality. The baby, who is born or grow up in incomplete house, could meet some given disadvantages both in mind and physical. For instance, He always feels inferiority complex, not enough strong decision because of having not fatherâ?T strict or not enough sensitive or tender performance because of having not motherâ?Ts love.
Finally, in legal site, the fatherhood has to take responsible of bring babies up and takes part in caring them. In other site, human rights, the babies are the buds to keep continuous our generations, preserving and developing all the result of last generations. From esthetic, a man always has to be in charged with what he has done and performs a lifestyle which largely affect on growing a baby up. Especially in Asian societies, people believe in â?ocause and effectâ?, that means the way you treat your soon as the same the soon does so, if you treat him in good way you will receive the better way, which he loves and takes care of you and contrary.
However, thank to developing of science, the motherhood could have a baby without contribution of fatherhood on other form. That means, the motherhood can go the genes bank and buy the manâ?Ts genes, formally, which always is good genes and clear source to avoid the inbreeding, so that the unknown father has not responsible for looking after the baby.
In conclusion, the fatherhood is as important as the motherhood in making decision have babies and bring them up. The contribution of fatherhood in creating process a baby is indispensable. The father builds house; the mother creates the peaceful space and the babies as virtual bridges who bring their parents closer to each other.

Em Toàn lớp IE 26 gửi bài viết ngày 17/6

27. Citigroup is one of biggest financial group in the world, it operated an enormous bank and six investment funds, last fiscal years total revenue of it were $ 120 billion, net profit up to $ 10 billion that increased 20 percent compare with previous year.
28. Citigroup employed over 3000 permanent full time staff, 500 part-time permanent employees and 200 casual staff in last year, total people work for head office and all branch of Citigroup is about 120.000.
29. Citigroup was established in 1900 by Mr. Onel, initial capital was only $ 10.000 but now market value of Citigroup is $ 1.000 billion.
30. In the first period Citigroup has experienced difficulties in American in providing big long term loan for client.
31. During over 100 years ago, Citigroup has faced on many serious financial crises, especially in 1970s, it caused they lost a half of properties. Announce
32. Yesterday Mr. Le Anh Dung speaker of Ministry affair of Vietnam announced that *************** Prime minister was going to American from 24 to 28 of Jun, 2008 in order to improve cooperating economic and encourage American investor to increase investment in Vietnam.
33. National central conference is designed to provide the best meeting facilities in Hanoi.
34. General Motor decided to cut down 10.000 employees to reduce labor cost in order to again effect of arising inflation.
35. In this conference we focus on discussing about solution for unemployment in the contex of inflation.
36. I and my wife make plant for our holiday in summer I like go to the Nha trang but my wife likes go to the Dalat.

Em gửi lại bài, keke. Viết hơi lung tung.
1. The price of Gold has risen $11 last night to achieve 884 USD/oz. The reasons for the surge rangeg from the depreciating of USD. In ad***ion, acording to the figures, which has been proclaimed that inflation rate in 15 countries use EURO reached the highest level in more than 10 years in May. On the other hand, after the forecast with optimism about the probability of rise interest rate, the president of FED declares his organization hasn?Tt got any plan for it.
2. Stock market starts a new week with optimism of investors when State of Bank made a declaration obout vibration amplitude of interbank rate.
3. In every country, a significant number of people are behaving diffently because of gas prices.
4. The role of every people in environmental protection is difficult but inscapable. But in developing countries, almost people who are always anxious about destitution instead of seeking solution to environment troubles
5. The world?Ts production of rice is set to descrease rapidly in recent years. One of main reasons is the lack of land for agriculture lead to seach for alternative energies.
6. The developed countries around the world are desperate to reduce the amount of fossil fuels they use so they can meet their CO2 targets.
7. The providing such thing as food and education is the responsibility of government of every nations to look after their citizens themselves. However, every policy of nation needs time to come into reality effect, especialy in developing country.
8. We can?Tt deny the role of wealthy nations to share their wealth among poorer nation because wealthy nation?Ts investment and humanitarian aid from non-governmental organizations will not only help people in poor nations escape from the life below the poverty line but also help them to perform their plan in long-term.
9. Behind non-organization?Ts activities always pregnant with danger and risk about politics and religion what can effect to lead to political crisis, sometimes economic crisis as colour revolution in Ukraina.
10. The factors influence shortage of land in every countries in the world include the effect of natural disaters occur in many regions in the world, especially in developing countries where is source of rice supply.

I''m Le Thong, ielts26
Chemical fertilizes was the great invention, in one form or another, has been noble service in agricultural filed. The use of chemical fertilizes as the part of chain of agricultural production to increase crops productivity. The 20th century, chemical fertilizes was widely used and became cheaper by the new technology. In the developing countries, use of the chemical fertilizes as important factors to decrease hungry and poor such as Vietnam. But in recent time, many researches in throughout the world have been proved that have useed a lot of chemical fertilize is destroy land fertilization and toxic for human and other animals, particular pernicious toxicity and caused the cancers. So, use of chemical fertilizes has limited in many countries, the developed countries have the lead.

Dear Sir,
I''m sorry for not writing in these days. My examination season haven''t finished and I''m having an considerably important exam on this Friday.

Trainee: Vu Van Luat
Class: IELTS C38
10 sentences those use verbs in "Implementing the cycle of success: a case study" passage
1. The server farm systems are difficult to configure and operate so we have to employs professional staff.
2. DragonSoft Corporation will be opened in Sep 2010.
3. Ta Quang Buu Library is in the centre of Technology Universityâ?Ts campus to provide the best available E_Library for students studying in Vietnam.
4. I had to experience difficulties in the early of my young to earn my living.
5. As a result of studying english I have more and more opotunities to win foreign projects.
6. In order to develop the country, we have to build good education system for our generations in approaching the world knowledge.
7. In order to have an economically viable compay organization model, we must scan thoroughly our management system, producing process and marketin system then we can find out the best ways to reach our objectives.
8. we have decided to implement ISO-2007 that related to security.
9. Compared to our house, the hers is much bigger.
10. These changes also made the world improve much in technology.

Trần Loan IELTS 26
3rd 16/6-22/6
Task 2 Test 3 Cam 1
Topic
News e***ors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
News plays an important part and can?Tt lacks in the success of television and newspaper. News e***ors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. In my opinion, there are 3 factors to influence these decisions.
The first factor is the newness of news. News must to brings the most new information about the events, which have just occurred, to viewers and readers. A news, when was broadcasted or printed, was old, the audience don?Tt care for that news, because they knew those information from other television channel or newspaper. That thing gradually lose viewers and readers, that would influence the profit of that television channel or newspaper.
The next factor is the preference of news. The more important news would be broadcasted before. For example, at the moment, there are a new information about a music show and information about a famous person, who has just died, so the sad news need to has preference. News must is ordered *****itable sequence, such as to emphasize the important of each news.
The third factor and it is the most important factor. That is the quality of news. News must is fully accurate, objective and honest. One famous newspaperman said that: ?oThe professional conscience of newspapermen doesn?Tt enable to broadcast or print the unquantifiable news?. Both the image newspaper form or the word newspaper form, bad news or good news have implications. Bad news have effects not only on viewers, but also on many people, who concern those bad news. A false report would have influences on prestige and honor of a person or a group. Even only a not exactly news, the oil price will rise tomorrow, and suddenly, today, hundreds of people stand in line to buy oil. The psychology of customers is effected. Besides, good news have positive effects on social. That thing help people to have a more healthy life and to have a sense of life. For example, a news about the fight to save the planet from environmental pollution will encourage everybody to have positive actions, in order to save environment.
The freedom of speech doesn?Tt mean that information aren?Tt selected. When news e***ors know way to select information, that will attract attention of customers and public opinion. That is major purpose that television and newspaper want to do.
Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:52 ngày 21/06/2008

Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL 5_cn
Inflation
Inflation is a rise of prices of goods and services over time. Inflation rate is shown through the Consumer Rice Index (CPI) and the GDP deflator (Goss Domestic Goods). As a whole, the high rates of inflation are caused by increasing of the sums of the social demand that exceeded the supply, led to the pressure of the rising prices. Another cause is the production cost made the social supply is reduced.
The price of anti-inflation polices will accelerate unemployment rates, so one question is purposed that should we try to abolish the inflation or to adapt to it? Anyway, it must have methods in order to reduce inflation rate *****it the demand of the economic growth as well as social pressure.
There are many methods that the government carried out in recent time. First, it?Ts scarce monetary policy which limited the money supply, leading to lessen the capability of cre***. For example, in recent times, the central bank raised core interest rate to 14%. Thereby, the loan interest in commercial banks is adjusted not over 21% (not over 150% the core interest), so this will restrict the need of consumer and interest cre***. It is clearly that the high loan interest makes the business difficult to conceive of capital. Although banks don?Tt plan to trick their customers but they must increase loan interest to help settle down the cre*** costs. Second, control the spending of national budget. It means we must reinforce to collect taxes, reduce unnecessary interest items, especially limit the supplying of money and so forth. Third, carry out saving money policy. As the usual, the core interest change also altered the deposit interest. Now, banks take part in ?ointerest racê? in order to attract customers along with many promotional services?Fourth, the government can also adjust exchange rate (decrease the exchange rate) by foreign exchange policies. But at the time, the method appear to be not have efficient because the society is falling into the most dollar using statê?
In short, anti-inflation or not is the decision of different national and it bases on national target and its economic con***ions

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I''m Nguyễn việt Cương-ielts26-18/06-C1T2W2
Nowadays, besides a series of development?Ts achievements in different fields of lives, there is a fact that some nations are several times wealthier than others. As a part of reducing this distance, poorer nations should be aided with things such as food and education from wealthy ones or not. Considering to the history, it seems that it is not only the requirement but also the responsibility and humanity that developed countries have to do. As we know, almost nations, now being brimful with richness, invaded others, the poor ones today. That caused two opposite consequences. With mother countries, resources and slaves, robbed from colonial countries, were one of the main driving forces and foundations contributing their development of economy, society, science and so on. Owing to it, they had chances to develop ahead one step more than others. But with the colony nations, being suppressed and plundered for decades, even hundred years, they had no change to develop on own way but were forced to establish societies absolutely serving mother countries. And of course, after having the freedom, they had to begin everything from the start line. In ad***ion, one more reason for developed countries to share their wealthy among developing and undeveloped countries is the more connective characteristic of the world?Ts economy, in that, if there are any troubles happening to interference in the development of one or some countries, it will not affect only among these nations but involve with many nations concluded developed countries.
However, on the other hand, if we are in role of poorer nations, there will appear several issues. The governments of these nations have to realize that they, not anyone, must be the main forces in the progress of raising their countries up. Basing on the aids is not usually the good way, cause of con***ions paralleling with them that may cause some harms. Perhaps, best choice in this situation is that they have to base essentially on their own internal forces, and combine with outside helps, carefully chosen. And there is another solution that poor nations could use to both develop country and reduce dependence on rich nations. That is the overall scheme, named ?oSouth-South co-operation?, relying on that undeveloped and developing countries could co-operate with each others.