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    THẦY ƠI EM GỬI THẦY 10- CAM3- THE SCIENTIFIC METHOD
    THE SCIENTIFIC METHOD.
    1. The deductive method means: we give a statement or prediction and then give deductive arguments and interpretations in order to prove the statement rightly. Contrary to inductive method is which we give a lot of examples and evidences that are in the light of an expectation and finally is concluded a formal statement.
    2. Gene structure is a complex helix and the links which connecting each nuclear in its structure are unshakeable.
    3. Vietnamese economy is going down, it affect on whole field which are joining it; in the sphere of influence of regression, many firms are going to blind alleys on the way to trend and search for investing sources.
    4. In the medicine field, the antidote which origin from nature, are high appreciation and using popularly.
    5. The universities?T entrancing tests are always rigorous and make student have to try the best and study hard for preparing carefully to reach their goals.
    6. The Judge is a person, who above all must be unbiased, unprejudiced, and definitely is a wise knowledge person.
    7. Some Vietnamese firms believe innocently that they could gain on foreign aids or investments from big international group, but actually lose of the sight of hidden conspiracies from them.
    8. One man in Mexico hit of the idea of making chewing gum, which came to our life popularly, made of firstly from sapodilla plum without any taste and scent.
    9. Oversea student have to meet a lot of inevitable hurdles during the very first days in new environments.
    10. The foreign companies seem to be fascinating for people who seeking a professional and high competitive environment, but indeed these request the staffs who can work under high pressure and initiatively.
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    ID bài viết: 12929677

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    Dear Sir,
    I am the Queen of Banana land!
    I send to u first 10 sentences of week 2nd in June -" children''''''''s thinking"
    Pls check and correct them.
    1. The essence of recent high inflation is not based on weak finance forecast, but actually is caused by weak adjusting of Government.
    2.The Zimbabwean Government claimed that they could not control the cash valuation and decided floating it.
    3. An eminent person is who always definites defines his targets in clear segments and try his best to reach the goals.
    4. Women usually are more interested in deductive than men.
    5. The people, who have perplexing thinking about urgent issues, always get confusion and make decisions wrongly.
    6. Studying too much and not enough vocation at primary schools, stolen childhood time and growing nature of children.
    7. Children world is absolutely different for adult world, in which a full house means: havethere are a pet, flowers, parents, in a house how many foots feet to go to other children''''''''s houses????, but in rest one, a rich house meansinclude: it costs million $, have has a car and full furnituresfurniture.
    8. Three year- old is the best period for starting language and communication, when the brain is wider and wider, easily get signals from outside without carefully sifting.
    9. the swapping spheres of seniors in a international company is served as important meaning, that give them more chances to show their-selves and perform their capabilities in administration.
    10. inIn sciences such as: math, physic, chemic, or so on, are not familiar with deductive reasoning, indeed they prefer accurate and clear result.
    Em viet voi khi di hoc ve de luyen lai tu, nen cau khong duoc dai va nhieu y.
    Goodnight!
    Vua cu chuoi
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    ID bài viết: 12929780

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    Trích từ bài của lurang viết lúc 17:18 ngày 10/06/2008:
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    G morning, teacher. This is my writing for writing task 1 - test 3 - book 1 - page 72. I''''''''m La Trang.
    This writing task was checked and It gets no fault. Congratulation !!!
    Plz keep writing gradually. You could reach your targeted band score.
    The habit of consuming fast foods in Britain is showed in the charts below. The first chart reveals the amount of money per week spent on them. And the trend in this consumption is described by the graph.
    According to the column chart, the expending habit is separated from personal income. There fore, hamburgers are the most favourite fast foods for high and average income. Pizza, cost appropriately half of hamburgers in the high group, is the second popular fast foods for them. However, it seems considerable in comparison with the others for which pizza is the less favourite. As oppose to this behavior, fish and chips on which the average spend most money as compared with other groups, are most general in the low as compared with another past foods. But the account of money they spent on them is only equivalent to the high group one.
    The graph shows that the consumption of fast foods changed significantly from 1970 to 1990. In 1970, position of pizza was the lowest. The position of hamburgers is higher but the grammes of them were equivalent 30% of fish and chips. However, the grammes of hamburgers had grown strongly while this number of fish and chips decreased steadily. They were equal in about 1982. Then hamburgers were at the highest position and tend to go up. Although pizza increased more slowly, its graph had crossed the graph of fish and chips in about 1988 and obtained the 2nd position in 1990.
    @ someone who asked me about writing last night: hiz, I''''''''ve been waiting for your contact and share since then.
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    bài này của em ở page 6, chả thấy thầy sửa :((
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    ID bài viết: 12930206

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    Trần Loan IELTS 26
    8th 9/6-15/6
    Task 2 Test 1 Cam 1
    Topic
    There are many different types music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the tra***ional music of a coutrycountry more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
    Music has always been a source of happiness to all men on the earth. Nowadays, many different types of music are existing in the wourldworld, such as rap, rock, ballad, pop and so on.
    Without music, the world would indeed be a dull place. Even nature is full of music. There is music in the movement of the wild, the sea, as well as the trees. Music is very important for people?Ts happiness, thathappiness, which is hard to deny. Music appeases people?Ts sadness and fills them with gladness. It is for reason that music is played even in hospitals to encourage patients?Ts spirit. Because music has the abilities to make people happy, it contributes greatly important part in the humans?Tshuman?Ts success in life. A happy man is a good and hard worker. He works happily among people and always earns thrtheir good_willgoodwill of everybody. People like to make friends with him and to employ him in all kinds of work. Thus his life always happy and succeed. Music has greatly value in humans?Tshuman?Ts happiness, so we need music.
    The tra***ional music has a greatly important lacationlocation in a country. Those are creams, which are conserved and summarized from far, far away. We can say that the development on tra***ional music is cornerstone of the development of culture, music in each country. Culturally, the tra***ional music of a country is more important than the international music. But nowadays, with the process of integration, the tra***ional music has more and more few listeners, especially young people. They can?Tt stand to watch a play, but they can listen to the international music wherever and whenever. The enjoying music depends on hobbies, enthusiasms and even levels of different people. Beside the development of international music, the cultural managers and people also need to preserve the tra***ional music and to develop it, so as *****it the modern life.
    Music isn?Tt purely for relaxation because it is culture. Music is the ?omagic? medicine to treat almost of spirit and body wounds. Both the tra***ional music and the international music are very important while humans?Tshuman?Ts life is materializing.
    Làm sao sống được mà không yêu
    Không nhớ không thương một kẻ nào...
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    ID bài viết: 12930987

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    Đăng Lam Sơn toefl 5cn 2 week 2
    1.The much-anticipated expansion of the western Hanoi capital is unfolding in accordance with demands of developing industry.
    2.It is openinngopening up to enhance the prospects and square of 1000 years of culture capital.
    3. Long preserve of handicraft, Hanoi capital became a treasury of tourism and trade in late 20th and early 21st centuries.
    4. As early 2007, Vinaconex(one of the largest construction groups in VietNam) blasting through the abudantabundant area of eastern Hanoi to build many corporative houses.
    5.They discoverieddiscovered many vestiges of 15th century in the vicinity of Red river.
    6. As widely planting cereal and cash crop for agriculture developed, Red river delta became the largest rice producer in pacific area.
    7.The building a lot of houses there led to discovery of old vestiges around xyz and attractivedattractive reasearcherresearcher to find them.
    8. although operations of researcher was enduring, but they did not get many evidences to prove that it is vestige of 15th.
    9. Archaeologier Archaeologists and other researchers frorm all parts of Vietnam flocked to the xyz to find tract of Le King.
    10.At the height of this finding in 2007, the previous people went to there were about 100 researchers, and more than half of them was concentrated in the newly built house of Shiro.
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    Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL_5cn
    Pan for gold
    Everyday, many boats carried a lot of people to there to pan for gold along Lam River in Nghe An. This fact influenced on the environment and the human life.
    Panning for gold made the river transfigured, led to changes of flow (specifically, the water flow was faster and faster). Thereby, giving rise to large lands crumbled, even influenced on traffic. Although it''''s the area that is under public ownership and control, but there are no little individuals and groups to pan without permit. In some cases, it along with the giving a hand of local administration made the fact more terrible.
    The noise from panning areas impacted on daily life of people who living alongside the river. Especially at the height of panning for gold, they can work all day. More dangerous, the using toxic chemicals to keep out sediments, made polluted the water as well as the air, and was the reason ofcaused breathing diseases.
    Increasing gold price that was a much-anticipated phenomenon in recent time made gold one of the most wanted metal and stimulated much people to take part in panning. It became increasingly attractive them than ever. So, the local administration of Nghe An increased the control in an effort to manage the exploitations and ward off the harmful effects on the environment and the human.
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    ID bài viết: 12934750

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    14/6
    Chao Thay, Em la Tung. You have to write your full name and the name of class
    Em gui hai bai luan. Thay sua giup em.
    1) W1T4C1
    The map shows the development of Chorleywood, a village near London, with the increased population since the middle of the 19th century.
    Firstly, from the late of the 1860 to 1883, Chorleywood?T population was only a small group, living near the main road. There were 2 main roads, running across the village, yet the residence of people was only in a small area, which was far from the upper road.
    In the period, spanning from 1883 to 1922, a new railroad was built and taken into working in 1909. This new railroad lied seemly in the south of the town, near the old residents?T area. As a result, the population widened to the south, forming a larger community, living near the Chorleywood station. Before the modern motorway was built, from 1922 to 1970, Chorleywood?Ts population continued to broaden more. Their home concentrated along with the railroad and this broadening took place in 2 directions on one side of this railroad.
    Lastly, from 1970 to 1994, when the modern motorway was constructed, the size of Chorleywood?Ts community have a surge and people tended to move near this new way to live. They stayed not only in one side, but in both sides of the motorway.
    In conclusion, due to the arrangement of many kinds of road, the village of Chorleywood has developed significantly in the size of their living area.
    2) W2T4C1
    Bai viet roi loan y.
    Khong co dan y chi tiet.
    Su dung tu trung lap.
    While the idea of having a single career is seemly an old fashion, the new idea of having several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be continued through life become more fashioning. Each of these views has its own justification.
    On the one hand, having a single career with a job, and sometimes in a singleone company is certainly conventional and has its own majority accounts for . majority. Indeed, people, taking only with one job, have a lot of time, concentrating on this one. They will have to train themselves to be better qualified in one subject and prove that they are appropriate for only one work, so it sounds much easier than the counterparts who want to have many jobs at the same time. Moreover, when the more-is-better culture remains popular in many corporates and a worker?Ts contribution to a firm is measured through the amount of working time, a hardworking worker will be more profitablehave more chance of in having working promotion.
    On the other hand, there are many good argumentsopinions, that proving that having several multi-careers and education should be continued through life is much betterbettering lifetime.. Nowadays, people seem to have a more general professional education because of the science and economy development of science and economy. So, people apparently have more choices. While information becomes easily to obtain through the internet, people today can study at their home with a single computer. This helps him them widen his their knowledge and find it more easily to know his their abilityabilities. Rather, people now do not have to go to the company companies to finish their worksto work lifetime. Using the latest technology like computer, mobile-phone, he can easily make contact with client, send and receive stock information or finish his work at home and then, send them to his firm quickly and safely. Carreer???
    Time, lost wasting for traffic jam, moving and so on will be minimal. Moreover, when people has many jobs, he employees tends to improve his quality and so full-life education is a certain thing, essential for all people who want to increase their level of knowledge.
    In conclusion, I find that having single career or multiplesingle or multiple carreers one belong to each one?Ts ability or mind.depend on each person?Ts views. The harder the worker is, the more knowledge experiences he wants to that employees obtain and so that, education through life will become more common in our population.
    Em thank.

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    ID bài viết: 12934876

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    Thay xem lai cho em. Hinh nhu bai 2/6 em chua duoc sua. Em cam on.
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    Em LE TUNG, lop IELTS26. Gui bai ngay 2/6.
    10 sentences for W2P3C1:
    1. Bad news, such as: crimes, disaster, are these days more considerable social phenomena than most people have thought of in the previous days.
    2. On the face of reporting events, there could not be a more profitable method of using hot news like stars?T daily activities.
    3. Since new directors have had significant difficulties, attracting the audiences, it might be easier for them to use latest news, bought from paparazzi with certain fees.
    4. Finding it difficult in accounting for such imposing events, some directors go back to a simpler way of choosing issues to report, that is, making use of the papers?T area for advertisements.
    5. Indeed, because there is always interesting news, parallel with boring one, good information, along with bad one, the role of a good director is to control what news will be reported for highest incomes.
    6. Sometimes, a certain newspaper is famous for reporting bizarre and strange actions of stars, which happen to beis defined as deviant in our society.
    7. An experienced director has an ability abilities of presupposing both the positive and negative responses from his audiences to quickly adjust his newspaper system.
    8. Director relationships arise from both the scrambling for the audiences and incorporating to catch up with the latest events in a balance between fame and wealth.
    9. A right journalist by definition has a mission to reflect objectively the reality of social life, but this simple idea is affected by many factors like the readers?T hobbies.
    10. A substantial proportion of the population of modern society enjoys hard-core news, forgetting the deep truth that they are in a part of a huge communication system, which sometimes does not care about the reality of life.
    Wait, a short text for W1P1C1:
    Shattered ideas without cohesion.
    The two charts describe the results of an education survey of the adult. While the first gives some reasons of studying, the second graph reveals that in what way education cost should be shared, according to general ideas of people.
    For reason to study, the largest part of adult of about 40% think ofconsiders the subject interest or being better qualified. In contrast, only around 10% of people, surveyed suggest that it is a chance to meet new people or to change their existing jobs with exact figures of 9% and 12%, respectively. Lastly, three medium sized groups of just above 20% share their ideas of studying in different reasons: being useful for their current jobs, improving the view of promotion or simply enjoying learning.
    The second pie chart shows the idea of adult of how their education cost should be shared. A majority of 40% think that it belongs to each person?Ts responsibilityresponsibilities, that is, in individualistic methods. Exactly a quarter of all suggest that the costs should be imposed into tax fees, paid by taxpayers. The rest one third of the totals of one third think ofin total see their employers?T responsibilities.
    In conclusion, although there are significant differences among the reasons for study and ways that the course costs should be shared, most adult think that they study for their own and they themselves can manage to pay studying fee themselves.
    That''''''''s all.
    Nho thay sua giup em. Em cam on.
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    ID bài viết: 12937827

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    G9, teacher. Tell me the the code like W2,T3, C1
    This is my 1st writing in week from 13th to 19th June.
    Topic: two ways of education.
    It could be said that development bases on education. Education, serving as the biggest problem of all societies, however, is proceeded in some different ways.
    Some educators teaches students the most clear and particular methods which is are popular and useful in practice. It?Ts the shortest way so as to reach a goal and also efficiently saving money and time. However, the students are incapable of reasoning.
    The developed societies know that essence of education lies in teaching the general way to do something instead of particular and specific one. It means that capable of reasoning is the most important intention of teaching. It appears to waste time on teaching and learning them. Yet the reason is that fundamental principles are always true although anything nothing ?? changes.
    Indeed, everything is changing day by day so if you?Tre good at only one method, you?Tll soon have difficulties.
    According to the recent manual survey in labour market, employees who trained general ways have spent more time than someone anyone to be taught specific approaches and skills. But they?Tre more flexible in handling problem thus more successful in their careers.
    After all, most of educators conclude that they are to teach crucial knowledge. Before this comes to life, managers suggest an efficient way to manage that employees with fundamental knowledge are given the novel task of working, and others are given other normal works.
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    Lưu ý:
    1. Một Writing Task 1, 2 phải viết lại ít nhất 3 lần
    2. Thầy đã gửi một số bài mẫu vào hòm thư của lớp IELTS47, thành viên của lớp này có thể xem và tích cực viết bài.
    3. Những bạn mới học trong từ 1-4 tuần được phép viết free-writing.
    4. Những người học từ 1-2 tháng trở lên phải viết bài theo các chủ đề và tích luỹ kinh nghiệm qua những bài sửa.
    5. Mọi thành viên khi đăng bài phải nêu rõ tên, lớp, Mã số đăng bài ví dụ: W1T2C2...
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    Em Toàn Lớp IELTS 26 gửi bài ngày 17.6/2008
    37. In order to improve education quality, ministry of education decided to implement some new policy.
    38. After 20 matches 16 football team were divided into 2 categories, Category A was for Winner team, Category was for loser team.
    39. Organization structure of all most of middle company often only 3 levels of management, director, manager and team leader.
    40. He recognized that he stole $ 100.000 from Southern bank, all most of amount he gave for his girlfriend to buy a new house, but he don?Tt know that she gone away with other man.
    41. Pupils who passed the exam were divided into three categories, category A was for pupils like physical subject, category B was for pupils like social subject, category C for the rest.
    42. Ministry of education has raised an initiative in which entrance examination combine with high school final exam.
    43. The life of all most poor people in countryside of Vietnam is below the standard, their land has been transferred to industry zone, unemployment is increasing, men must be leave their village to city to look for a job.
    44. Benchmarking teachers is one of the most important solutions to improve education quality in Vietnam.
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    Em là N. N. Tú
    Lớp IELTS26
    Thầy sửa giùm em bài task1
    Cam2, PWT1, No5(p.27)
    The percentage of households with consumer durables, owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983, was given by
    the table below.
    It is immediately apparent that the greatest increase was the telephone, rising from 42% in 1972 to 77% in
    1983. The second of consumer durables, the central heating was approximately doubled from 39% to 64%
    in this period. The lower percentages, the refrigerator and the washing machine rose 21% and 14%
    respectively. It can be easy seen that the television with the highest proportion, more than 93%, increased
    slightly from 93% to 98% in this period. In 1978, 3% of the dishwasher was started recording, occupied
    5% in 1983. Especially, the information of the vacuum cleaner was just recorded from 87% in 1972 to
    95% in 1982, and no noticed for the stop in 1983, while the video was begun recording with 18% in 1983.
    In conclusion, while the telephone and the refrigerator was climbing to maximum, the telephone was
    assumed as the most consumer durables used.
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    Chao thay. En la Le Tung. Em viet bai W1. hay sua giup em. Em cam on.
    W1T1C2:
    (234 words)
    The table describes the changes in the household durables, owned in Britain during the period, spanning from 1972 to 1983.
    The clear trend of all is that the percentage of householdsâ?T durables increased steadily in these 21 years. Stayed at the original second-lowest part of 37% in 1972, central heating had become much more popular in 1983, with the rate of 64%, just under doubling. Similarly, beginning with the third-lowest position of only 42%, after about one fifth century, telephone took the third-most common of 77%, increasing 25%. Television seemed to be greatly stable at the highest rate of popularity for all this period and only rose inconsiderably with 5% from 93% to 98%. Three less common than television but still in the list most-wanted household goods, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine rose slightly with 8%, 21% and 14 %, respectively. Only introduced in 1976, dishwasher was apparently unfamiliar with people until the last yearâ?Ts survey and had the lowest figure of all, only less than 5%. Interestingly, the latest-born entertainment tools like video, first came to life in 1983, immediately appeared in just under one fifth of families in Britain in the same year.
    In conclusion, there are significant changes of household durables, owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983, however, more and more families bought equipments, such as television, telephone, central heating, refrigerator, etc, which served directly to their daily living.
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    Ngó qua vài bài của một số bạn gửi ở đây, có 1 số nhận xét:
    - Đa số là không có các kỹ năng cơ bản tối thiểu nhất về ngữ pháp, từ vựng, cách dùng từ, kết hợp câu... nên viết câu riêng rẽ còn sai chính tả, ngữ pháp nhiều lắm;
    - Câu cú rườm rà, lủng củng, rối rắm, phức tạp kiểu chắp ghép, râu ông nọ cắm cằm bà kia (rất nhiều người có thói quen vác từ điển Việt Anh tra từ rồi tương bậy vào thì bó tay);
    - Vẫn bê nguyên tư duy của người Việt, lối nói tiếng Việt để vận dụng vào viết tiếng Anh theo kiểu dịch ngược word to word. Một lỗi ko thể chấp nhận vì người Anh ko thể hiểu đc cách diễn đạt V-english như thế. Một hạn chế cực kỳ lớn, một lỗ hổng nghiêm trọng trong phương pháp vận dụng Dịch thuật để học các kỹ năng khác mà thầy Vui "sáng tạo" ra;
    - Không biết trong số những người đang tập viết trên này có được học chưa hay là học rồi mà vứt béng những lý thuyết cơ bản sơ đẳng nhất, những yếu quyết nằm lòng để có 1 bài viết tốt. Có ai biết hay nhớ thế nào là Topic Sentence, Supporting Sentences, Concluding Sentence, Unity, Coherence,... không?
    Ko có nền tảng, cơ bản thì có học đến 10 năm cũng vậy thôi, ko thể nào tiến bộ được đâu, càng học càng thấy stupid đi
    Học ngoại ngữ ngoài cần cù thì còn cần có phương pháp học đúng đắn và tư duy tốt nữa. Những phương pháp, kỹ năng đấy đã được đúc rút trong hàng trăm, hàng ngàn cuốn sách, giáo trình danh tiếng bán đầy ở các hiệu sách giảm giá 40% đấy. Chứ ngu ngơ đếch biết gì mà lao vào học theo những phương pháp "sáng tạo" mới kiểu "kinh dị" mà ngay đến các giáo sư Cambridge, Oxford cũng phải ngả nón chào thua thì bao giờ tiến bộ được?
    Chán
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    em thấy bất bình quá. sao có thể vào topic của người ta và nói linh tinh như vậy cơ chứ, không thể chịu được. em mà biết tên này là ai thì... thì.... em chưa biết sẽ giải quyết thế nào....
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    Trần Loan IELTS 26
    4th 16/6-22/6
    Task 2 test 4 cam 1
    Topic
    The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
    The jobs choice not only is important to each individual, families, but also concerns the social benefit. The jobs choice not only relates to habit but also depends on abilities, quality and personality. Many people want to have a stable job. But another people said that idea would old in the future and they think must to have several careers or ways of earning money. In order to get suitable jobs, the con***ion need to has knowledge and education will be something that continues throughout life.
    When people only have a single career, they will concentrate on this job. They will have more time to create, and to work very well, because that is sole way to earn money. And when they only concentrate on a job, they will have enough time for study other jobs. For example, one bicycle repairer, when the factory dissolves because more and more there are fewer people that use bicycle, wouldn?Tt know what to do in order to has money, even he couldn?Tt design his house.
    Society is developing fast. It requires people to know everything, so as adapt oneself to circumstances. One person has several careers so he earns money easy. They are able to work in a wide variety of positions. Yesterday, he was a singer, but today, he can is a actor. But besides, if they know many things, may be, they aren?Tt really proficient at something. They may be some limitations with highly technical jobs such as science or research.
    If they have only a single career or several careers, education still plays an important role in getting jobs, Most of jobs, today, require level, even unskilled worker. Education helps people to secure lucrative employment. In the world of today, almost every kind of employment requires some understanding of a few basic principles of science, mathematics, economic, engineering or some subjects on the part of the worker. Thus, the better education a person has better prospects, that he has of securing attractive positions in the various professions. Even, nowadays, the big companies are competing with one another to recruit students before graduated from university.
    Having a single career or having several careers aren?Tt important as how they to do. Society always respect people, who work hardly. Education will help them, so education is not an end, but a means to an end. People need to improve knowledge everydays in order to become successful people. The concept of education holds different meanings for different people and groups, but the values of education don?Tt have changed over time.
    Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:45 ngày 21/06/2008
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