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    Dear Sir,
    Here is the vision 2 of writing task 1.
    Writing task 1- Cam1-test1.-Vision 2
    The result of a adults education survey is described 2 charts below. The first graph lists 7 reasons which people are interested in education and that adults of payments for courses are in pie chart.
    We can see that the reason to meet people is much less considerable at 9%, and 12% people join courses to be able change their job. It is very clear that Interesting in subject is the most important criteria which meet their demands of studying. And just under, people deserve to gain qualifications at 38%, but other reasons such as: to improve, prospects of promotion or enjoy learning/studying and helpful for their current jobs is fairly constant around 20%. On the rest of the survey result, we can reveal that the most of proportion of payment comes from their -selves at 40%; The lowest percentage of the costs is 25% belonged to Taxpayer and 35% of payment is employer.
    In conclusion, we can see that there are variety reasons that make people favor with education and they have to pay some costs for their courses.
    Thanks and have a nice lunchtime!
  2. keitel

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    I''m Le Thong, ielts26
    1. Illegal gold exploitation led to loss natural resource, environmental pollution and caused a lot of serious social problems in some regions
    2. Radiation has applied widely in agriculture, health treatment, and military equipments. In agriculture, it use to treat paddy and genetic formation
    3. Vietnam had got a loan from Asia Development Bank for sanitary and water supply plan in rural town, and a part of this loan will be used to buy equipments and traffic
    4. A lot of countryside will be improved living con***ion if local committee does the project well
    5. Success and failure of this project much depend on participation of rural people
    6. Today, many Vietnamese families are practice family planning. They have be aware clearly that having many children and poverty are go with together
    7. Due to influence of En Nino phenomena, last days, the weather was hot and lack of rain. Electricity cut off frequency and they always announce its cut off
    8. The change of weather has not forecasted in over the world and the Asia region, Vietnam is also prepares solution to decrease damage due to bad weather in rainy and stomp reason.
    9. We are more and more be aware clearly about environmental importance to human exist and development
    10. Until the two months, with general effort, we have established cooperation middle and long-term programs
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    Em là N.N. Tú
    Lớp IELTS26
    Thầy sửa giùm em bài Writing.

    Cam2, P2, WT1, No6 (p.51)
    The amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different status in 1998 ?" 99, was described by the Chart below.
    It can be easy seen that in the first group, employed full-time, men enjoyed approximately 50 hours of leisure, while women had approximately 38 hours of leisure. There was no information of men in the both of the employed part-time and the housewives, however, figures of female were given quite clearly. Compared with women in Employed full-time, Female employed part-time was just over about 40 hours. On average, housewives enjoyed approximately 50 hours of leisure. There were no reasons for explaining of the absence of men in these groups.
    In the unemployed and retired, especially, there were similar between these group that men and women enjoyed approximately 85 and 78 hours of leisure, respectively. Ad***ion, these groups ware had maximum of leisure time.
    In conclusion, the Chart showed clear leisure time enjoyed by men and women, and the male leisure time was higher than female. And female leisure exited in all groups, while was three groups for male.
  6. cuongpharma

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    Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-25/06-C1T2W1:
    The process through which the Australian Bureau of Meterology goes to collect up-to-the-minute information on the weather to produce reliable forecasts is described in the diagram below. It is clear that this is a closed process consisting of 4 steps. Collecting incoming imformation from satellite, radar and drifting buoy is the content of the first step. Step 2 is the period of analysing and forecasting the raw figures of the above step. During this progress, whilst imformation from drifting buoy is only used for drawing synoptic chart, things getting from two other sources can be used twice. Satellite and radar provide data to creat correlatively the satellite photo and radar screen, they also contribute to draw the synoptic chart. After that, all results of analysis and forecasting are income resources for the next step, preparing the broadcast. The last stage will be finished after the weather forecast news is shown on the tv and radio or throught recorded annoucement.
    That''''s all for today !
    I have to sleep early in oder to palpitate with the first semi-final match of Euro cup 2008 because i have an important bet.
    Bless on me!
    Được cuongpharma sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:44 ngày 25/06/2008
  7. vuacuchuoi

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    Dear Sir,
    Here is my free writing.
    VUACUCHUOI.
    Many thanks.
    20. My friend blamed me on missing train, actually I had to wait her for packing her goods for a long time and we came lately.
    21. We can see that in each period of development process, consumerâ?Ts price often blow up and push people to meet a lot of hurdles.
    22. There was a typhoon in China last night, which blown off many roofs and broke trees down, and enormous establishments were destroyed.
    23. Zimbabwean government is managing to blow the strike of people out, which is consequence of weak government administration and control.

    24. National library is the best place for study and besides that u can borrow books from its store with variety kinds of book in many fields.
    25.Men love breaking their promise as much as football and car
    26.An assembly is complete system, in which a chain or a machine is suddenly broken down,so that affects on whole system until
    recovery.
    27. The hackers always break into wealthy account aboard and steal money to buy or exchange via online markets.
    27.The USA broke war out in Vietnam and took advantage of Dien-authorities to treat against Vietnamese
    28.In the past, if a son had decided to marry without his parentsâ?T approval, he could have been broken off his family.
    29.Teenagers often wish that they could break loose their parents as soon as possible but they can not predict such unexpected issues.
    30.The trainees always get confusion in breaking in their tasks in new jobs because they didnâ?Tt experience much before.
    31.The international grants from NGOs bring to poor areas educational and developing opportunities, somehow they help improve a part of the standard of living in these areas.
    32. An old solder, who had experience long time in Vietnam- UAS war, brings back his poor long days in talk show on VTV3, makes many people touched.
    33.Both fatherhood and motherhood have responsible for bring children up.

  8. TranNgocVui

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    + Thầy đã sửa bài chi tiết cho mỗi thành viên đăng bài tại các trang 14, 15, 16, 17 và đã gửi vào 4 hòm thư:
    ielts26 ielts26 <ielts26@gmail.com>,
    ielts_47@yahoo.com,
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    Các bạn kiểm tra lại những lỗi mình bị sửa có in màu để dễ phân biệt.
    + Do khoá học chỉ kéo dài trong 6 tháng, học viên bắt buộc phải có đủ 6 kỹ năng: Đọc, Nghe, Nói, Viết + Word Impression nên các bạn phải luyện tập Viết, Nói chăm chỉ + Ôn bài. Sau 6 tháng, dựa vào các Quy Luật đã được hướng dẫn, học viên có thể tự học vì đã đủ Số lượng từ + Kinh nghiệm luyện tập hàng ngày.
    + Trước khi viết để tránh lỗi sai các bạn nên:
    1. Đọc lại toàn bộ 17 trang thầy đã sửa và chuyển vào hòm thư của các lớp.
    2. Đọc kỹ một số bài văn mẫu
    3. Thực hiện tích luỹ cấu trúc (Đã hướng dẫn trên lớp)
    4. Đọc kỹ đề bài trong sách IELTS
    5. Viết dàn Ý
    6. Trong 1 tuần (tính từ 27/06/2008) mỗi học viên phải viết ít nhất 4 Writing Tasks trong Test 1, Test 2 của Cambridge 3, soạn ít nhất 2 dàn ý Speaking (theo phương pháp đã hướng dẫn kỹ ở trên lớp). (Không cần viết lại lần 2, thầy sẽ giao viết lại sau.)
    7. Trong tuần tới, thầy sẽ hướng dẫn cụ thể Quy Luật NKTH trong tiếng Việt và cách ứng dụng.
    + Mọi thành viên nên học tập tấm gương của cuongpharma, Bạn này vừa chạy thể dục vừa cầm sách để luyện tập.
    ban đầu trình độ của cuongpharma chưa được sau A - Khi tham dự và lắng nghe buổi đầu gần không hiểu gì, không biết Verb nằm ở đâu - đến nay có tốc độ, và chất lượng viết khá tốt so với trong lớp.
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    THÔNG BÁO
    Thầy Trần Ngọc Vui
    khai giảng lớp mới IELTS38_f66​
    + Thời gian: 6h15-9h tối thứ 3 ngày 01.07.2008
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    Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-26/06-Making sentences:
    1.Perharps, every pupils, studying at the school named Chu Van An, one of the most eminent of Vietnamese teachers, always feel proud of being there and must try with all their hearts to catch up with this honour.
    2.Yesterday, after being painfully lost at the match with a team having significant lower level, national footbal federation immediately blame for the poor level of the coach but don?Tt realize the core reason lieing in the overload situation of players after a too long and harsh national championship.
    3.To impede wokers of building company destroying the oldest house of the city, many demonstrators set a human barrier.
    4.Presumably the director-general involves by no mean with the notorious corruption, he can not continue holding the post as chief of boards of directors.
    5.Cause of the insularity of several senators, Departement of Foreign Affairs of United States still consider Vietnam as a nation having religion issues necessarily be paid attention.
    6.Althought dialects can cause many confusions, even fatal mistakes at times, but they bring the fascination to a language.
    7.For the recent times, the world?Ts gold and oil markets have been fluctuateing so enormously that even experienced investors could not guess what would occur in the next period.
    8.Andrei Arshavin, the main factor helped ?oRussian Bears? to get on the semi-final round for the first times, said to the press that Russian team would raise their formation not too hight cause of the efficiency in the reaction type of the Spanish.
    9.In the second semi-final match on early morning of June 26, 2008, the apeareance of two teams: Spain, the most stable team and Russia, the most progressive team made it be the most expected match.
    10.However, in despite of whatever result of the match, Russian?Ts success in the European championship 2008 is an unimaginable achievement, deeply impressing the signal of Guud Hiddink, a foxy coach.
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