Khai giảng các lớp TOEFL iBT, IELTS, Dịch Thuật mới thông tin chi tiết giữa trang số 98 - Thầy Trần

Chào thầy!!!!
em là sinh vien hôm CN mới tham gia lớp ielts38 của thầy, em có 1 số ý kiến sau:
Thứ 1: em vào muộn mất 1 buổi và buổi CN cũng vào muộn mất 15-20 phút, như 1 số bạn vào sau, bọn em chưa nắm được một số các quy luật thầy nêu..Nên em nhờ thầy, có thể giảng lại hoặc cho bọn em một số tài liệu có liên quan đến mấy quy luật đó được không??như quy luật đọc hiểu siêu tốc và nghịch kiếm
Thứ 2: vào hòm thư chung của lớp em thấy 3 thư với topic lần lượt là R1, T1, C4; R1T1; 38 trang tu va cau truc..Đây có phải là tài liệu phục vụ cho việc đặt câu và dịch rồi nộp cho thầy như các bạn lớp cũ vẫn làm trong topic này không???
Là sinh viên mới, nên mong thầy giúp đỡ để bọn em không thiệt thòi hơn so với các bạn khác

Em là Nguyễn Thanh Vân, lớp IELTS38.
1. Electric energy has leapt to H?Tmong ethnic group?Ts lives so help them have a life-enhancing technology.
2. Once the after-glow appeared in the sky, she had been looking toward her motherland.
3. They gathered round the smoundering flame to prevent the fire from being blown out and talked about life after death.
4. People can?Tt live after five minutes without breathing
5. The new software version inludes a more robust anti-virus solution so that your computer will be protected from viruses, spywares and other malicious progams.
6. Today, almost hotels handle out free some intersting gift for their customers.
7. The volunteer group did not work property since the misconceptions about its aim and it was another 2 years before a new leader reformed the whole group.
8. It is likely that a part of our youth in country sides will be lagged behind the others because of unpopular media coverage.
9. Because of this inflammable bamboo house, we must place at least 3 fire-extinguisher in it.
10. All their terms are generally consistent with my con***ions so I have just applied my CV.
Thầy check hộ em nhé.

1. The Blackberry mobile have leaped to my life after the loss of my nokia mobile
2. When I go to school, the first day, we studied how to control pencil at will to write letter.
3. the guard of the hotel can observe all people in the hall was through the camera place on the wall.
4. the match between MU and Chealsea could be speed up by a goal of any club
5. The chairman of chealsea use the biggest prize to concentrate the spirit of all football players begin the C1 final match.
6. Pepsi lagged behind Coca cola in advertise they products into Vietnam market.
7.In 1990 the mobile phone did not cath on in Vietnam until after 1998
8. We can affirm that Michel will be the champion in F1 race because Fernaldo can?Tt came up the result of Michel
9. The studies it was probably store some important information about the alarming rate of loss of rainforest.
10. In the face of the love between A and B, it?Ts likely that B do not remain any sentiment with A.
thầy check hộ e nhé

le thu huong, ielts26
47. students who want to enter Technology of Ha Noi university need more than just conventional ID card- their identities must be authenticated by a special hand scanner.
48. In many developed countries, a lot of new technologies have been application. Following this, key alone is insufficient to get someone in the door.
49. Some banks in Vietnam, before entering the building, customers have to present their face of scanning.
50. All of treatments are applications of tuberculosis, which are a little known before.
51. In use more than a decade at some high security government institutions in Vietnam, this new technology now is rapidly popping up on the market of Vietnam.
52. These security systems operate by storing all details of patients who have come here.
53. Nokia N72 is currently the most widely deployed type of mobile phone of NOKIA.
54. Government have just introduced a new policy, and it will be pilot beginning next month.
55. Face scanners are now application in Noi Bai airport to match passengers with luggage.
56. Crime, which increase higher and higher, raise thorny questions about security of all people in society

Em la Hanh ielts_47
Writing task 1, test 3, cam 1
The amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain was described by the bar chart. Firstly, high income groups spending on fast foods more than other groups, especially on hamburgers, reach to over 40 pence per person per week while on fish and chips and on pizza are both under 20 pence. In average income groups, spending on hamburgers was also highest, about 33 pence per week, followed by fish and chips at 25 pence and at 10 pence on pizza. Low income groups tend to favour fish and chips more than other fast foods with approximately 20 pence per week on them, then at 15 pence spending on hamburgers and about 8 pence on pizza, was also the lowest number.
The graph, first of all, shows that in 1970, fish and chips had been more significantly consumed than hamburgers and pizza. However, since that time, the consumption of hamburgers and pizza tend to increase steadily over 20 years from 1970 to 1990, while the consumption of fish and chips has decreased gradually between 1970 and 1985, and had a slight increase since 1985.

Bài này của em chưa được thầy sửa

Còn đây bài C2T4W1:
The figures of imprisionment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 were drawn in the table below.
It?Ts clear that United States markedly had the highest amount of imprisonment, usually being at least approximate 100,000 prisoners and peaking in 1980 at about 138,000, a long distance with other four. Meanwhile, Canada, the only country having closest numbers to USA, shown a bit decreasing trend althought in 1930 and 1950, it was on top. For the two countries Australia and New Zealand, their incarcerations in 1930 were about 70,000 with Australia and 100,000 with New Zealand, equal to the USA?Ts number at this year. But these figures suddenly felt down together to the level around 50,000 in 1940 and also were raising gradually for the next period. However, in 1980, while New Zealand?Ts data was still continueing raising, Australia?Ts one was, one more times, suddenly slumped. Finally, datum of Great Britain show that it was the nation having the least imprisonment but the use of this legal punishment here had a slowly but steadily raised tendency.

Em là N. N. Tú
Lớp IELTS26
Thầy sửa gùm em 1o câu sau:
1/ The first paragraph shown that the Human Genome Project, compared with Apollo program that landed a man on the moon, will be new hope to rescue patients such as in rheumatoid arthritis, and some psychiatric illnesses.
2/The propose of this audacious project is that to map and analyse every single gene of human and also claim that the medicine will be transformed and will reduce human suffering.
3/ The third paragraph shown that, at the moment of conception, a babe will be received a system gene of its parents.
4/ It also shown that the human genome could be described by genetic text, containing over 3 billion letters, that would fill about 7000 volumes.
5/ In the fourth paragraph, it was unlucky if someone has received a gene error in a single word, that may be a cause of the increased fatal diseases such as thalassaemia.
6/ some examples were given in the next paragraph, proved that the diseases could be recued by genetic technology used and could get perfect babies.
7/In the mid-1980s, when were successful in deciphering disorder-related genes, we have also desired to deciphering all of human genes.
8/The success of this project could bring us wrong in conception, that only standard genes could be existed and others will be destroy, and may be a reason for new oppression and extinction.
9/ This project also shown that, gene is not the factor of the intelligence or the height of human, it is a result of the interactions between genes and environment life.
10/The final paragraph was covered by doubts of the right and the moral in the application of gene technology.

Nguyễn Hồng Nhung - IELTS 38
1. Mary?Ts mother used the bell to awake her every morning.
2. When the popular media leapt to life, we had both advantages and disadvantages.
3. The method of learning E through book and workbook is no longer main in the education today.
4. John?Ts behaviour at the party caused me to confuse.
5. I can substitute for you in this part until you comeback.
6. If you eat candy in the evening, you?Tll have enamel eaten away.
7. Vietnam lagged behind others country in electronics industry.
8. My folder contains MVs with high qualify comes to 40GB.
9. Lucy prevented me from going ahead when she looked hazard in front of.
10. This movie was adapt form and content for habits and customs of Vietnamese.

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Nguyễn Hồng Nhung - IELTS 38
Bài trên là bài hôm trc con viết nhưng chưa post dc
Đây là bài hôm nay.
1. Nobody can forgive her for lying to go out with boyfriend when everything was in a stir and a jumble.
2. Fans of Justin held the first meeting in Jam restaurant to talk and show their love for him.
3. Everybody has a right to defent themselves and from this point onward, I believe that he?Ts totally innocent.
4. The tenor of this movie seems to be base on the novel of Marc Levy.
5. The moral strength is a core of the soccer teams.
6. Entrusting Jolle with this work seems a serious underestimate about her work experience.
7. It is difficult to realize that the most flaw of Betty is too wary.
8. Under the term of urban infrastructure develope committee, you must meet certain standard to tender for building this apartment.
9. Vietnam is strengthen co-operating fully with China to step up the economic development.
10. Given that GPD has increased ten times now, so Vietnam still have a long way off others country in the world.
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Trong hòm thư của Ielts38f66 đã có bài R2T2C1 dành cho những bạn mới tham gia buổi khai giảng lớp IELTS ngày thứ 3 hôm qua. Chủ nhật tuần này lớp sẽ học buổi khai giảng đợt 3 (Trong đầu tháng 7) để hình thành lớp học.
Ngoài ra, thầy đã sửa chi tiết các bài ở các trang 19, 20, 21 và gửi vào các hòm thư của 4 lớp.
I38, I47, I26, T57.
Những thành viên đăng bài nên vào đọc để rút kinh nghiệm cho chính mình.
Những bạn mới nên tích cực luyện đặt câu với cấu trúc trong hòm thư và một số bài văn mẫu.