Khai giảng các lớp TOEFL iBT, IELTS, Dịch Thuật mới thông tin chi tiết giữa trang số 98 - Thầy Trần

Trần Loan IELTS 26
Task 1 Test 3 Cam 2 (page 73)
The results of survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-1998 is described in the first chart. Their destinations over the same period is listed in the second chart.
The first chart showed that there were four major reasons to visits abroad by United Kingdom residents between 1994 and 1998. In which, the number of travelers abroad for holiday purpose was the highest rate and it rose markedly from 15, 246 visitors in 1994 to 20,700 visitor in 1998 among 100,000 people asked. Besides, the business and visits to friends and relative reasons were also increased steadily but inappreciably when compared with the holiday purpose and they were smaller than the amount of traveler abroad for holiday reason about 7 times.
Moving on to the second chart, there is an also increased change in the destinations of visits abroad which people tend to prefer for traveling. The region, which appear to be more popular among the travelers, is Western Europe. Indeed, while only 19,371 of travelers preferred in that area, there was an increase in 1998. North America and other areas also had the attentions of many people. In 1994, there were only 919 going to North America and 1,782 to other areas. These figures increased to 1,823 and 2,486 respectively. In short, Western Europe is the most interesting destinations of visits abroad by United Kingdom residents whilst North America and other areas follow behind.

Tất cả những thành viên đã đăng bài từ trang số 22-26 vào hòm thư của các lớp. Thầy đã sửa xong và chuyển vào 4 hòm thư: I26,38,47 và T58.
Lớp I38f66 sẽ khai giảng buổi thứ 3 vào tối ngày CN (13/07/2008) những bạn đến muộn giờ học hôm tối thứ 3 nên đến sớm. Thầy thường giảng lại Quy Luật NKTH và Quy Luật Phát Âm vào đầu giờ.
Mọi thành viên nên tích cực đăng bài và rèn luyện Speaking tại câu lạc bộ của lớp vào sáng CN (9h-11h) hàng tuần.

Thay sua gium em 10 cau voi.Le Thu Huong,IELTS26,38
67. HT Company?Ts survey shows that consumers require a greater degree of honesty with them.
68. Women?Ts part is care for their family, so they have taken on many hard responsibilities.
69. He isn?Tt acquainted with our family, so he shouldn?Tt interfere in our family?Ts privacy.
70. The hunt is on for the cause of increasing crime in young people in society now.
71. Smoking too many cigarettes per day has become a serious matter for us all.
72. It is hard to wean children off playing games on the Internet which can affect their behaviour.
73. Encouraging of parents will motivate children to try to study better, against children who aren?Tt frequently cared by their parents.
74. The development of computer has far reaching effects to children?Ts thinking.
75. It is not usual for a child who knows literacy when he is about 3 years old.
76. Nowadays, there are many picture books of Japan which landed in Vietnam. They look very marvelous but the pictures make the language redundant
Được thuhuongXmas sửa chữa / chuyển vào 20:45 ngày 11/07/2008

1. After a bad day, his compliment caused me faith in the future.
2. The result of inquire into homicide of Bean suggested that his declaration did distort reality, and we can to conclude Bean killed Mary to appropriate Mary?Ts property.
3. With faith you might as well tell ?onothing is impossiblê?.
4. All animals we catch in the hunt will almost certainly to get stuffed, and we can sell in the market.
5. Ronaldo don?Tt want to stay to play for MU and went on to say ?oI?Tm a slavê?. It?Ts a ridiculous behaviour with a football player have a salary 120.000 pound per week.
6. In this time with 50 point we can say that MU will almost certainly became the champion of Premier league 2008.
7. Football was originally created and played in a small town of England but today Football is the most popular game in the world.
8. All of directors, managers and supervisors in the company held the first meeting to solve the problem ?odemand to raise salary for employees?.
9. White House says that the test rocket of Iran menaces the security of America and from this point America will develop rocket shield to defend national security.
10. Oliver Kahn, captain of Bayer Munich, say that ?o we had seriously underestimate of force of MU, and we have lost the Cup?.
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Em la Hanh Ielts_47
Writing task 2, test 2, cam 1
Nowadays, the gap between rich and poor countries are widening more and more. It as a result of economical unfair developing process among parts of the world. So, integrating and globalisation are tending to become a popular and active trend, wealthy nations should share their wealth for poorer countries such things as food, education and so on. In poor countries, particularly in Africa, famine keeps taking place, of course, famine always goes with diseases, they lack of food, medicine and other essential social facilities and services, and their life standard also lowest in the world. Food is the most essential thing in such places, the wealthy nations can help them by aiding, all or a part, organizing and sending charities to help them prevent and cure diseases, especially in Africa-where had highest affecting HIV viruses rate-moreover, to help them except and change the older social practical, such as superstition, curing by magician without go to the hospital, treating unequal or so on, to enhance the quality of life. Growing education is also a way to develop country, rich nations should help poorer countries by such ways as support co-ordinated education systems, provide the way of organization, training methods, or may give scholarships for good students to study in foreign countries. Growing education goes with growing economy, and these countries tend to develop gradually. Of course, rich nations also gain benefit from this, because of poor and developing countries always are their largely consumption market. However, none help other forever, so beside helping of wealthy countries, the poor countries also try them best to find out the way to develop whole aspects of life and improve their population standard. It is also the responsibility of government of these in looking after their citizens themselves, because they are who voted to lead their countries, so they have to look after who believed in them.
In conclusion, it is clear that the help of wealthy nations is an welcome and important resource for developing of poorer countries. And they should continue share and help the peoples who poorer to set up an more equal and civilized society.

I''m La Trang - IE 26
WT1 T1 CAM1
The results of a survey of adult education are described in the chart below. The reasons that adults decide to study is revealed by the column chart. The figures in the second chart answer for the question that how people think the costs of education should be shared.
In the first chart, there are clearly three groups. Group one, including being interested in subject and to gain qualifications, is the most frequent reasons. They cover about forty percent each one. Group two, in which each cause is equivalent to a half of each in group one, is less popular. And the least frequent reasons are in group three. Its figure is only about a quarter of the group onê?Ts.
In the second chart, the biggest part of costs, covering forty percent, is paid by individual. The people surveyed also thought that thirty five percent of costs should be shared for employers. The taxpayer paid other, approximated to twenty five percent.
In conclusion, the charts reveal a range of different reasons for studying of adult and the way they think the costs should be shared.
WT2 T1 C1
A number of different types of music exist in the world to day. People need music as much as they need food or clothes. Whatever tra***ional music of a country or the international music heard everywhere nowadays, both of them are important.
People do need music for their lives. Firstly, music makes the lives more beautiful. They can hear or play music for relaxing. Today, in Vietnam, musical instrument, musical training and karaoke are popular. Parties without music are boring because people can?Tt dance. If they do not sing, too, they will only eat and drink and talk and the parties will be quiet. Besides, each country has a national song, separating it from others.
Secondly, music is good for soul. It encourages people whenever they feel down. When I have a stress, I always hear Beatles?T songs, sung that ?~hey Jude, refrain, don?Tt carry the world upon your shoulders?T and recently feel better. Music also makes babies more intelligent and it is even used as a medicine.
For the question that which is more important, the tra***ional music or the international music, I don?Tt think which is more important. In my opinion, both of them are important. Tra***ional music which has long been in the country?Ts history, keeps a big role of national culture. It is different and characteristic so that it is hard to play or understand. However, it a national proud that people miss so much when they go abroad.
Nevertheless, the tra***ional music is replaced by the international music day by day in many countries and areas. The international music seems popular and widely flexible. With a range of types, they are played all over the world and easily appropriate with every favorites. For example, the teenagers like teen-pop while the olds like country; the uptown people listen to classical music while the downtown play hip hop and so on.
Yet both of them are useful to make life better. So whatever types of music, the more we favor it or the more positively it affects us, the more important it is.
In conclusion, there are strong demands of people for music. All types of music are important in our lives.
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WT2 T3 CAM2
Someone believed that without capital punishment our lives were less secure and crimes of violence increased. He also thought that capital punishment was essential to control violence in society. However, I don?Tt agree with him.
Firstly, capital punishment seems not human. People don?Tt like wars, diseases, traffic accidents which kill a number of people. Day by day, doctors manage greatly to save a life, peace lovers do their best to prevent wars. These reveal that peoplê?T lives is considerably valuable and therê?Ts no reason to take someonê?Ts life.
In ad***ion, the valuation of capital punishment in protecting peoplê?Ts lives and controlling violence in society is quite tiny. On the face of it, killing criminal person makes their lives safer but they couldn?Tt kill all crimes. Moreover, no one could assert that therê?Tre no new crimes after killing all existing crimes. Some people also think that the punishment is useful in educate others but it seems impossible. Crimes have died. Although they have known the most clearly about the terrible of death, they couldn?Tt tell it to anyone.
Besides, therê?Tre many efficient ways to make our lives safer and better in which developing education is one of the most significant. Media, journey and many factors in society also contribute importantly in this task. Sometimes, life in prison, quite terrible without freedom, is more meaningful in educate people. At least, people finishing the prison time could talk about it to others.
I believe that the role of capital punishment in society isn?Tt as major as someone has thought. If society is developed so that all people have full educations and comfortable lives, there will be no crimes.

11. The Titanic is a film does to base on a reality history about the accident of Titanic ship in 19 century.
12. Of course, we can use money to buy anything to life but we canâ?Tt use money to buy the real love.
13. We have usually says that a un-success is a starting point to get a chain of success in the future.
14. In Hotel industry, potential employees must meet 3 standards: strong leadership, to be follower and creative.
15. The Italia football team have been roundly censured in the press because they canâ?Tt protect the World Championship.
16. The company XYZ was finally close down after 2 years loss commercial.
17. Children under 18 year olds are banned to use alcohol under the term of Children Licensing Act 1990.
18. Itâ?Ts hard to see competence of a student if you donâ?Tt use a test to estimate.
19. We can assuming that you have 5 pencil in the box, and you take one pencil to present Amy Thatcher, so now how many pencil remain in the box?
20. If the company can further expansion, the stock price will up 20% another.
21. All of parent want their children must be aware of the ideas â?o study hard and get good grades and you will find a high paying job with great benefitsâ?.
22. Today, 9/7/2008, approximately 600.000 students participate the university examinations for group B, C, D.
23. Given that, Microsoft had bougth up Google, we can say it''s a biggest merge company in the world.
24. This progamme are being seriously considered by the manager team.
25. The target of Vietnammese Government is co-operating fully, long stable and direction future.
26. The vespa seductive were created masquerading a bee.
27. Victory of Turkey in match with Croatia might merely be one of many wonderful victory in football.
28. Swat complete with gun and tear gas grenade had solved 15 hostage from Taliban.
29. Peter obliged to go to school although he don''t want.
30. In winter, the bear sleep, and the progress exchange of bear is pretty slowly to come the finally of winter.

Những thành viên đăng bài tại trang số 27 có thể vào hòm thư của các lớp để tải bài về xem các lỗi chi tiết.
Tối nay lớp I38f66 khai giảng buổi thứ 3, và học trong quyển Cam 1. Khi bạn mua sách không cần mua đĩa (Do thầy tặng).
Thầy sẽ hướng dẫn 2 Quy luật cơ bản vào đầu giờ học.

31. I agree with Mr Bean on the project contruction TRUNG hotel in the future.
32. Truong Thanh Group attempts to expansion further the allocate camion chain in the north in Vietnam.
33. Althougth, i ask about the result of his project investment many times but he still beat around the bush.
34. All of press in French blamed mr Dominique(French football team coach) on the unsuccess of team in Euro 2008 because the team has expressed a face desparing, it''s not suitable with a ancient champion.
35. The project ANZ will bring many benefits to all of investors if the contruction hopital chain in Tokyo successed.
36. When the Cathrina Storm abated, the damage result is 900.000 peoples die and the storm has blow off 500.000 cars and 700.000 houses.It''s terrible.
37. Yesternight, 2 thieves had breaked into Pele''s house, a they had taked some value facilities after that they runned into the garage and backed out Pele''s Mercedes Bens and quickly escape.
38. When i wacth "Tom and Jerry" in the tivi, it bring me back my tender age.
39. The carelessness in maintain petrol station has bring blow up in 2 near roads .
40. All students brush up on their documents before the examination start.

Le thu huong, IELTS 38

77. Today many parents spoil their children too much; so many children tend to turn aside their study without reward.
78. Nowadays, women have still played a major part in modern society.
79. The research results of Dr.Huong were clear and consistent: game online has bad affects children?Ts behaviour.
80. My books are often too many pictures. Therefore, they usually make me distract.
81. To many young people, passing in a university is their greatest target.
82. Fire is a divine gift which god presented for a human being.
83. Today, Ha Noi has many changes about every aspect, such as substitute the modern building for old buildings.
84.That was 100 years after Colombo discovered America, many people landed there and its economy developed more quickly than ever
85. People really have had more opportunity to free from dangerous diseases since scientists came up with methods to treat cancer.
86. Vietnam lagged behind other countries in modern technology and standard of living
Được thuhuongXmas sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:40 ngày 13/07/2008
Được thuhuongXmas sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:19 ngày 13/07/2008