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  1. locomotive

    locomotive Thành viên mới

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    09/12/2007
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    Nguyen Bao Khanh ielt38
    1.not event humans have right and left-handed characteristic like the apes
    2.Dr Thanh Tung sai National University has studiedleft-handedness on business.He noted that the handedness and learning E priority is itself systematic
    3.the research enable student to have caparity to learn themself and caregorise the smugger who disguise in levels of students
    4.Indeed,about 6percent student believe that VietNamese Government must research carefully about policy of univercities especially in several cuontrysides
    5.The procurer and terrorist,OsamaBinladen was caught at VN
    6.This film reflects HoChiMinhâ?Ts life
    7.Learning go with practicing make student fast progress
    8.With a magnifier,detective Conan found the clues in this case
    9.As a result of lazing,iâ?Tm fail this exam
    10.He is so sad,he must have been lovelorn
    Thay check ho em
  2. eyaaye

    eyaaye Thành viên mới

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    20/03/2008
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    Trần Loan IELTS 26
    Task 2 Test 3 Cam 2
    topic
    Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
    The capital punishment is the death penalty for convicts cause of their crimes. In the history, most societies had the capital punishment and it also was used *****ppress political opinion divergence. The agree people acclaim ?owe reap as we sow?, the opposing camp censures that this penalty is too barbarian. After all, each country has the most effect solutions to prevent crimes. We should consider for the advantages and disadvantages of the capital punishment.
    The capital punishment is essential. Firstly, it has effect to deter other criminals. It is useful to impress people, in order to make them fear the law. Simply like the administrative punishment about driving through a red light or going back up the street makes people to calculate carefully, let alone the death penalty for a sell-drug criminal. With the majority, it is a warming and deterrence severely. Because, nobody does not fear the death. The death penalty contributes to close the law and tighten the rules. Secondly, this is law of cause and effect, "an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth". With murder, that behaviour must be revenged by other people, if they are not victim?Ts friends, relatives, it must be state. Finally, the capital punishment is a penalty to prevent and oppose criminals. With the special serious and dangerous criminals, the applying this death penalty into theses criminals is necessary. For example support this opinion, in Houston, Texas state, in 1981, there is the highest rate of murder in United States, 701 cases, it is higher than total the north Carolina. But, in 1982, this state ratified the capital punishment. The number of murders fell to 261 cases in 1996, fewer 63 percentage. Many dangerous criminals, such as terrorists, murders and so on, may escape from prison and become hazardous for people?Ts lives. The strict and clear law system helps people?Ts lives maintain the social order.
    But besides, many people think that the capital punishment is too harsh. A person, when was executed, would not have opportunity to return the life and to start life afresh. In other hand, equally, there are some casuists and human also have mistakes. So there would have wrong verdicts. Specially, a death verdict executed would have chance to fix because victim died. In ad***ion, there are many sorts of penalty, such as imprisonment, re-educating or apprenticeship courses to equip prisoners with necessary skills when they leave the prison. And an important thing, the rate of criminal still don?Tt decrease in the countries, which have the capital punishment. Some Western scholars ever said that murderers and drug traffickers must be executed but however there are also murderers and drug traffickers in the real life.
    In my opinion, I agree to maintain the capital punishment. We have to protect the liberty and right to live of people and the death penalty doesn?Tt violate the right to live of accused and these accused refused their right to live. The drug traffickers, unless they were executed, are still alive and effect to a generation, even many generations. So, in the future, the capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
    Bài này em viết một lần rồi nhưng hôm nay em viết lại, không biết là có khá hơn bài trước không nữa. Thầy xem hộ em với nhé, bài trước hình như em đăng ở trang 25 hay 26 thầy ạ.
    Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 07:25 ngày 19/07/2008
  3. beoackhip

    beoackhip Thành viên mới

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    I''m Lưu Hiên_Toefl IBT- 5cn
    Independent speaking Question 2 ?oClimate?
    Some people enjoy living in a locaton that has a warm climate all year. Other people like to live in a place where the seasons change. In my opinion, I like to live in a place that has four alternating seasons: spring, summer, autumn and winter. Because each season has specific characteristics, that makes my life colourful and meaningful.
    For instance, spring - the first season in a year is considered to be the season of reproduction and development of plants, animals. In spring, life becomes more beautiful with a lot of flowers in bloom, birds singing on trees, drizzling rain, ?The beauty of spring make me love life more and more.
    In summer, I can spend my holiday going travelling with my family or my friends. In hot weather, I go to sea, drink cold juice and enjoy ice cream.
    I love autumn because in autumn, air is fresh and surroundings become more quite and peaceful.
    The thing I like best in winter is Tet holiday. On Tet holidays, I can spend much more time to go to visit my relatives, neighbours and friends.
    Above all, I love to live in a place where the seasons change because I can enjoy the whole beauty of life.
    Thay ui em dot nhat la viet topic, em chang nghi duoc may.huhu.
    Thay sua dum e voi thay nhe.
    (Hiền_Beo con)
  4. minhhanh85

    minhhanh85 Thành viên mới

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    17/06/2008
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    My Hanh Ielts_47
    Writing task 1, Test 3, Cam 2
    Looking at the first chart, we can see everyone travelled abroad mainly to making holiday, going business or visiting friends and relatives. In which, the number of peoples who travelled abroad with enjoying holiday reason was highest, had increased steadily from 15246 in 1994 to 20700 in 1998, rising by 5454. Following by business reason, with gradual increase in the same period, from 3155 to 3957. The number of peoples who travelled abroad to visiting friends and relatives had a slight decrease between 1994 and 1995, from 2689 drop to 2628, however, after that, increasing steadily again from 2628 in 1995 to 3181 in 1998. At last, other reasons only account for little number, and changing irregular among years over the period 1994 to 1998.
    The second chart shows that everyone tend to prefer going to Western Europe than North America and other regions. Indeed, the number of peoples who going to this place had increased significantly in 1994 to 1998 period, reaching to 24519 compared with 1823 in North America region in 1998. There was a bit higher number for travelling to other regions than to North America, increasing from 1782 in 1994 to 2486 in 1998.
    In conclusion, in 100000 sampled peoples, everyone seems to like going to Western Europe to enjoy their holiday more than other regions and for other reasons.
  5. minhhanh85

    minhhanh85 Thành viên mới

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    My Hanh Ielts_47
    Writing 1, Test 4, Cam 2
    The figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 was described by the table below.
    First of all, we can see a considerable increase, but fluctuating significantly among years from 1930 to 1980 in US, and it is also the place where had the highest number of prisoners, reaching to 140000 peoples in 1980. The number of peoples in prisons have increased steadily from 30000 to over 80000 in 1980 in Great Britain, and this is the lowest number among five countries. In Australia and New Zealand, this number was equivalent and had increased gradually over the period 1994 to 1970, however, having a remarkable difference in 1930 and 1980. The figures for imprisonment in Canada decreased with a small fluctuation from 120000 in 1930 drop to about 90000 in 1980.
    In summarization, the population size among countries must also be taken into account when comparing, however the crime situation in US seems to be the most worrying trend.
  6. luan55

    luan55 Thành viên mới

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    18/07/2008
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    thanh luan ielts 38.nho thay check dum em may cau dich.
    -not even the humans possess such decided left-handed and right-handed as the apes.
    -professor THANH TUNG at National university has studied the research business on left-handed
    he noted that this asymetry and learn english preference is itself systematic
    -the studies help to possible student will be taught themself and classify smuggler,pose as
    student classes
    -in fact, about 6 per cent the student believe that vietnam''s govement must be careful study confronted with policies of the university,note some of rural
    areas
  7. henkelhn

    henkelhn Thành viên mới

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    27/06/2008
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    Thanh_Toeflibt_5CN
    Bus is a travel quite public in many cities in all over the world. In Ha Noi, that is true. So government helps cost that its ticket fare is very cheap and stable, about 3000VND/person that everybody can move by bus, although cost of oil petroleum is high increasing. Behind, priority people for example student, wounded soldiers, the disabled, etcõ?Ư get preferential cost that help them to save travel expenses. In other hand, bus not only contributes to reduce traffic jam in rush hour because reduce particular vehicles, but also decrease air pollution and economic cost of expen***ure to export fuel of government. There is also a small reason about bus advantage that you can find place or travel around Hanoi is not difficult and not expensive because the bus always go on fix route. There are much bus advantages so that you should always use bus to economic spending for you and for country.
  8. bechamhocTA

    bechamhocTA Thành viên mới

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    19/07/2008
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    Nguyen Bao Khanh ielt38
    1.Studentâ?Ts learning now is often controversial
    2.The disposition of woman who is pregnant is abnormal
    3.This game reflects Mike Tysonâ?Ts power
    4.the aspiration of Ho Chi Minh is VietNamese independent
    5.With 7.0 ielt certificate,my dream ia make possible
    6.The irregula of securities market turn poor people into rick people
    7.The origin of explosive is China
    8.The biggest archievement of VietNamese football is sivel medal
    9.The trend in education now is make student learn by themselt
    10.Instead of using motobike,he decide go to school by bus
  9. valneyofsanake

    valneyofsanake Thành viên mới

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    10/12/2006
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    1) The law code in VVV do not help the public life so much, the worst thing is money can turn black into white here.
    2) I had been doing the exercise for one hour so I decided to turn to X for Y, as a result I found out a correct response.
    3) My mother does not enable us to play violent games. Because she think it affect our brain but sometimes I still play it , made me to feel more brave.
    4) Recent there are a lot of course, conduct people which lost their power of speech in communication, are opened in the imperfection school.
    5) A last time of his life, he liked a stone statue, neither eating, drinking nor talking with anyone so his family was very worried for him.
    6) After I ate a roasted chicken, a chicken fried with lemon sauce and a plain boil chicken, I discover a truth that all of dish, which make from chicken, are very delicious.
    7) The miniskirt tend to be more common than trousers, vice versa the tendency fashion in 1950s people liked bell-bottoms, which explain that cloth less than prior.
    8) Farmer in QuangBinh was best effort to till fields but still take up only one-second of total field in here.
    9) The emissions, which make many developed country are puzzling, they spent a lot of money for the case.
    10) One of the most eminent of banking academyâ?Ts students, Lee, stated that: he could become a director of a big banking company when he is 22 years old, so in order to reach the goal, he is being hardwork.
    em duong thuy dung ielts 26 gui bai thay
  10. tienganh2

    tienganh2 Thành viên mới

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