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(Bố mẹ mà đối chữ Hà thành chữ Vui có phải giờ thành siêu nhân rồi không nhỉ)
71. Getting parttime job are difficult place for Vietnamese students, who have less experiences and contacts.
72. The tall building was built up by the middle of last year, has sunk back into the land after the aggressive storm.
73. A wall, 1 kilometer long cover around our headquarter building with a total area of 0.1 hectare, is being created here.
74. The company, that won contract for works, need to bear in mind financial capacity to deal with newly resulting matters.
75. To make more strategic decisions about long exiting possibility of just launched products, it is important to cause selective customers to be interested in their new characteristics.
76. The neighboring people of the factory protested against it?Ts irresponsible action, which is dumping directly industrial rubbish in river.
77. Some lazy students have been made redundant for 2 months, one in three students, who take part in Ielts class with Mr Vui so others have to try their best to avoid the same sacking fate.
78. The developing of 12th floor of tall building, a new play ground of dynamic youth today, is 90% complete.
79. Everyday, a serious motors, buses, trucks, so on rumble across A1 motorway, which tends to be sunk and crack.
80. Making sentences with each of new word and structure will become the foundation for better imagination and later writing and speaking skills

Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL 5_cn
The Earth is coming hotter and hotter and global warming maintained in several recently years. This warming occurs for many reasons such as firewood gathering, increasing population and industrial wastes flow from factories and exploiting areas. First, firewood gathering often occurs in countries where have large wood areas and in which many people used major wood to cook instead of other fuels. And this activity caused the erosion that contributes to increasing of storms in many countries, especial countries near the sea. Second, the population remain increase and this issue depend a lot on the sense of human that left over from the sense of previous generations in some countries. Finally, increasing filthy gases in becoming a global problem and paid attention on by many people because they directly influence on human life. Everyday, in over the world, human activities eliminate the large amounts of harmful gases to the air. Those gases polluted the atmosphere as well as damaged the live environment that play a key role in social developing. More dangerous, those activities take place in everywhere uncontrolled. So, how to keep the Earth from those consequence? It may be need vary human sense and attitude toward this global issue and must have enough time to do anythings!

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4/6Chao Thay. Em la Le Tung. Thay sua giup em 10 cau.
1.To make right decisions about the extent and type of newspaper deliverance in a particular region, it is important for directors to understand the favor and route?? of customers.
2. One tool for assessing the impact of bad news on the economic system is through the responses of audiences.3. It has been proved that to provide good news of exceptional individual mirror will bring enormous potential for newspapers in attracting money from the rich.4. On the other hand, providing bad news of crimes will not assist the young to positively understand about real life and this may lead to other crimes or negative development in personality of children. 5. The find for readers?T favors is a useful starting point for reporting news as it emphasizes the role of audiences in obtaining knowledge and knowing the truths.6. To make any prediction about readers?T favors, every director always has a group of journalists, who are very hard working in searching for any changes of social problems.7. First attempts to get risk of bad news in newspapers are impossible because not only the directors but also the readers want them; they are always lack of information.8. Random changes in audiences?T favors, which are unpredictable in general, may cause a newspaper to be stopped and its director to be fired. 9. Taking only the role of a director into account, what is reported, good or bad news, indeed, does not all belong to the leader because strength of communication media nowadays is enormous.10. Sometimes, right information is less likely *****rvive on newspapers because readers often prefer trivial events of their stars more, either good news or bad news. Gửi lúc 10:00, 04/06/08
hutthuockoThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 23:20, 25/05/08Hiện có 26 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12842678

(4/6/2008) Emlà Lê Quốc Việt Hà, lần chước em đã gửi bài qua hòm thư của thầy, nhưng không biết thầy nhận được chưa, hôm nay em gửi lại và thêm vào đó em viết 1 bài essay nhỏ nhỏ, thầy chữa hộ em plz!!31. We who have been learning in Happy?Ts class for a month, attempt to catch my target is achieve 8.0 ielts?Ts band score.32. In the family, when woman gets higher salary than man their lifes will drop to the hell, so their happiness will be fallen aparts.33. You should try to learn harder when you study in university climate if you want to apply for senior jobs at big company in future.34. A reason in success of old men got married with young beautiful women was so difficult to explain to sentences, Dr Ha said that.35. Dr Ha said ?othe main reason when young beautiful girl applies for offer of successful old men?Ts marriage is the fat wallet??? and I was a victim?.36. In learning, students must use of daydreaming skill to studying better; on the other hand, it is helpful in their future.37. On the horizon when the technology rises far away, at that time, the micro laptop will be out of the poor?Ts reach.38. People usually tend to take some image of landscape and townscape, which they come to visit.39. Human thinks in the near future, when Television and Internet develop, so books and literature will leave out human?Ts daily life, but not at all, nowadays it still be a source of inspiration for writer and it has been existing very clear .40. Literature and high weight tomes are usually ignored by a new youth generation beside that they don?Tt know they are wasting a huge human?Ts information.
Còn đây là bài essay của em, nói về việc không đồng ý khi giáo viên bắt học sinh viết nhật ký, và coi đố là bài tập về nhà
1. Your writing skill is bad because of no structure and good ideas.
2. If you dislike the target of writing, you could focus on some Tasks 1 or 2 in the Cambride books. You are free to write them.
3. You can consider the way,
Miss Nhan wrote ?othe Writing Task 1? well.
Em chào thầy, em là Nhàn, em và 1 bạn nữa mới đi học lớp thầy 1 buổi hôm thứ 2, do chưa hiểu rõ yêu cầu của thầy nên em viết lại bài học hôm trước trên lớp, thầy xem và sửa giúp e, Today, fast foods are more and more common in Britain not only with high-income people but also low-income. The amount of money per week spent on fast foods was shown in the chart below and the trends in consumption of fast foods were shown in the graph. As you see, high income and average income people particularly like hamburgers. The high-income groups spent more than 40 pence per person per week and the average group spent nearly 35 pence per person per week for hamburgers. However, fish and chips are not equal compare they?Tre spending of these two groups. If high-income group prefer pizza to fish and chips, the average income people prefer fish and chips to pizza. Low income group like fish and chips, they spent nearly 18 pence per person per week for it. All their consumption for food is about 40% of high-income consumption. About the trends in consumption of fast foods, hamburgers increase rapidly over the years. The consumption increased from nearly 80 gram in 1970 to 500 gram in 1990. In ad***ion, pizza also gradually increased during the period 1970 to 1980. The consumption slightly increases but from 1980 to 1990, it surged up evenly. From 1970 to 1985 the fist and chips consumption decreased lightly but from 1985 it began to increase. In general, the consumption of high income an average income group plays important role in the consumption of fast foods in Britain. They spent much for hamburgers that make the trend in consumption of hamburgers increase rapidly. Although, the low-income people spent most for fish and chip but its consumption still decreased. Consumption of pizza also increased but lightly.
Every single day, when the sky is dark, you sit alone and think about everything, happened twenty four hours before. You want to write down your mind, ??? Vietnamese translation???. It called diary which you write everything it memories???? and follow your entire life. Something is your secrets and private corner, which you want to keep it your mind and then you write in your diary. One girl said ?oA journal was a friend that was always there and always a comfort. In bad moments, ???? wrote and usually ends up feeling better. It reflects back to her things that she could learn about her world and herself. It represents a private space in her life, a beautiful solitude. She thinks it made her a better writer in general?.First of all, in my opinion that is trust, it always is close friend, although when you are sad, happy, angry, lonely and confused. Unusually some friends come and share with you when you happy but they will leave you when you have troubles. I think it?Ts not at all, some friends very ???? Disorder arguments? and make ???? feel better when you feel disappointed. May be this lady doesn?Tt find out her real friends, but if there were one (or more) when she needs help, her diary would became waste paper. Good friends will very pleasant to pick you up and make you gain belief for your life when you fall down. Don?Tt look after a friend, a diary makes you feel sadder and regret your times.In ad***ion, writing journal is not wrong, may be for someone it?Ts really exciting and they can write their dairy along time, they are sure their writing skills will up to higher lever. It is trust, but I?Tm sure you are wasting of your time, if you want a higher writing skill, why you don?Tt read and pore over weighty tome which was written by famous writer. When you have some problems and it makes you sad, I recommend you to take some funny books to read. For me it?Ts really ???. Or you can write down in paper something you would like to do in your future, and concentrate on reaching your target.Eventually, follow my opinion, we should write essay. It?Ts more factual than dairy, through writing essay and you can research many topics we take care of these. Gửi lúc 19:27, 04/06/08
hutthuockoThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 23:20, 25/05/08Hiện có 26 Chưa có ai bình chọn
Cho Thành viên này đang bị tạm khóa đến 22:57, 07/06/08 vì: Spam tại f544Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 00:01, 11/04/02Hiện có 88 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12843776

Up ung ho di... up up up... My love Gửi lúc 21:47, 04/06/08
cuongpharmaThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 15:16, 25/05/08Hiện có 65 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12844694

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương-Ielts 26- bài tập ngày 04/06:1.Festival Hue 2008, an annual event holding once per 2 years, started by a culturally imposing opening ceremony, tilted ?ocultural heritage with the integration and development?.2.The middle land of Vietnam, an extreme climate and little resources area, has now a chance for developing economy with a tourist plan, named ?omiddle land road of heritage?.3.Dalat, a valley being absolutely inside Labiang Plateau, charms tourist by its peaceful and romantic beauty of landscape over that anyone lingers not to leave.4.With an imposing scene of thousands of mountains protruding highly from the seabed, Ha Long bay is worthy of being one of the new 7 Wonders of Nature.5.3S, three abbreviating letters of phrase ?oSun-Sand-Sea?, is the criterion for the ability of one place becoming a tourist destination.6.Nowadays, a new type of combining travel has been set to cope with mass requirement of tourists such as medical travel or sporty travel and so on.7.To attract more tourists coming to Vietnam in longer period of time, this no-smoke industry of Vietnam itself has to have more newly artificial products replacing several out of date patterns.8.There are always many interesting in discovering Hanoi in such several fields like culture, architecture art, lifestyle?, even with a local citizen.9.a tourist??? likes to have a whole sight of Hanoi, hiring a pedicab and traveling through narrow and old streets of the ancient areas are really a good idea with low fee.10.Closer discovery of Hanoi is nothing more than eating and drinking, an idiosyncratic culture establishing with the thousand years history of Hanoi. Được cuongpharma sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:14 ngày 04/06/2008 Gửi lúc 23:10, 04/06/08
tieuca07Thành viên mới,Thành viên từ 10:56, 29/02/08Hiện có 215 Đã được 1 người bình chọn (5.00) ID bài viết: 12845531

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Em là N.N.TúLớp IELTS26Em xin nộp bài ngày 01-06 71/Smoking is not only known as playboy style, also it is known as a danger of life. 72/On the face of smoking phenomena in public places, it seems the way to blockade of stress, according to smoker groups.73/It could not be more trivial topic to mention until scientists found reasons of the deaths related to smoking.74/There were many discussions to obvious bad influences of smoking to human, seems we are still disregarding the serious harmfulness.75/Although people have known the smoking could be affected to others beside, but they considered as worthless influences.76/They were accounting for their individual acts that they have a right to smoking; it is a freedom because there is not any law, promulgated by government, to prevent their habit.77/Nearly, the government of many countries has promulgated new law, prohibited strictly smoking in public places.78/Also, in EU, Tobacco companies have to warning images on the boxes, described the lung has been affected by smoking.79/In Viet Nam, the country is using largely cigarette, assumed as about 7 million people will be killed by their smoking, according to WHO.80/Profit and easy management are reasons that tobacco industry could be stronger development in VN, ignored all warning of scientists. ngày 02-06 81/Manifestation of water pollution, a larger amount of bizarre deaths of fishes associated to reasons that these lake were too dark and foul smell, was proposed in chemical journal.82/Recent researches have shown that manufactories, not pledged affecting to environment, are reasons of pollution. 83/A substantial proportion of scientists of environment central, agreed of government of local, engage in to treatment these lakes.84/A project has developed in order to cope with waste of manufactories that did not regulate of strict manufactures.85/A penalty for these companies has been promulgate, closed and stopped manufactories, of intense pleasures, people in area have offered a half of billion dollar for scientist. 86/Anticipation of the trend in business and using right capital are methods of doing efficient businesses, manifested in success of contemporary businessmen.87/Today, women have became more success in working, separated off working in office with housework were reasons for their success.88/The death of John F. Kennedy, as opposed by a fortune-teller, would be still secret of history.89/ Tomorrow, petroleum was obtained $130 each tank, the government has advised to save on fuel, encouraged scientists to research new fuel.90/Beside save on fuel, saving electric energy is important problem, all rivers are dried, reasons for water power machines acted with 70% capacity of its. ngày 03-0691/Mr Stephen Howarth, 18 years old, is living in Bolton, seems to be blind, went on his own from station to house at night.92/That was the first experiment consequence of new Gene method in the world, carried out by professionals of Moorfields Eyes Hospital.93/Stephen has been determined blind by RPE65 gene error, so that he only sees muddy on strong light and If there is not method to recover his eyes, he will be endless blind.94/Stephen with 2 volunteers agreed to infuse with new virus production, this virus, carried a gene, was copied exactly RPE65 gene.95/Several months after, an investigation of eyesight was shown that state of tow in there volunteers were more better but not worsen while state of Stephen`s eyes was get better than before.96/As in the dream, he could went out without assist of anybody in the city at the night.97/Now, he can distinguish the light from traffics and cars or road signs, even a chink on the wall in his Doctor?Ts house.98/The First step of this success will be broad evolved a new cure trend, blind-men can be hoped to seeing everything in future.99/Further, scientists want to investigation with children, because disease can be improved better if it is discovered early.100/ All mentions above were shown that the diversity of biology technologies was successful application. ngày 04-06101/About 70 years ago,Tasmanian tiger, the fierce marsupial tiger, looks like the dog and has stripes like zebra, was extinguished by Australian.102/This species has first occurred in Australia and Papua New Guinea, but among 2.000 to 200 year ago, they disappeared in Australia delta, and only found in Tasmania island, South of Australia.103/On the 1800s, Tasmanian tiger was accused of killing sheep, so that, farmers used shotguns, toxic drugs.. to wipe these tigers out.104/In 1936, after along time taken flight, the last Tasmanian died, and these species was reported extinction in 1986.105/People, felt regret so pushed these animals to extinction, coming back to life of Tasmania tiger project has been begun in 1999.106/ Scientists of Australia`s museum (Sydney) were hoped to recreate a Tasmanian marsupial Tiger in next 10 years.107/ Mr Mike Archer, director of museum, said that: ?ofinal objective of our is contribution gene code and produce a population of Tasmanian tiger, can live in normal nature.?108/At that time, scientist of Australia`s museum used ADN from death body of a young female tiger, maintained in ethanol.109/With many failures and attempts, scientists have had X and Y chromosome of these tiger.110/In 2002, scientists have gained along step, when used those AND to contributing some genes of Tasmanian tiger, acted likely as ADN still living.111/If the contribution of all gene code is success, a animal owner will be used to growing up embryo of Tasmanian tiger.112/Until now, after 70 years of extinction, Tasmanian tiger has had a change for coming to life, by using mouse embryo as owner.113/This is the first time ADN of animal extinction can be functioned into lively body, assisted new horizon for dinosaur, an enormous animal was extinction.114/A sample of Tasmanian ADN, a Tasmanian tiger more than 100 years, has injected into embryo of mouse.115/They found that ADN of Tasmanian tiger can be developed in mouse body, this result promised to open new gene technology developing.116/When experiments with mouse are success, the next steps, Scientist will apply this technology on Tasmanina Devil as only owner.117/The Tasmanina Devil has size like dog but stocky and muscular, while Tasmanian has stripes fur, Devil Tasmanina has black fur with white patches.118/ Devil Tasmanina tiger has many characters similar as extinct Tasmanian tiger, so that it is the best choice of owner to coming back Tasmanian tiger to life. 119/Scientists found that, at the moment, while the change of extinction of species are increasing at high warning, this study is important to understand the species of extinction, from that point, we can approach their diversity biology.120/However, what is happen with our world if this study is success, should people do with Dinosaur? It is very important if Dinosaur is recreated, because as predicted as enormous size and very fierce animal, they will be dangerous for our life. Cám ơn thầy đã sửa bài. Được tieuca07 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 00:24 ngày 05/06/2008 Gửi lúc 00:23, 05/06/08
lurangThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 15:03, 23/03/07Hiện có 880 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12847442

G morning, teacher. I''''m La Trang. This is my 2nd writings in week from 30th May to 5th June.Topic: reading culture.16. Reading book, defined as a characteristic of being creative and qualified, now happened to be more popular in Vietnam.17. On the face of it, there couldn?Tt be a drier or more boring activity than reading book and in fact, it makes many people fall asleep.18. But readers accounted for their love that books provided them with the peace and emotion in mind, the great daydreams and the answers for their questions.19. Although other cultures has grown significantly through a variety of modern equipments such as TV, computer, cinema, etc, they couldn?Tt prevent reading culture from attracting people.20. Even the boom of internet has enable readers to have electronic book, an ever-new type of book, which is easy to be brought to everywhere. 21. Though people had much greater sensitivity of virtual elements, readers also sustained such their hobbies, which likely insulated them from others.22. In spite of being isolated, readers are not necessarily described as deviant people.23. In recent years in Vietnam, as we can not only see books sold everywhere, but also see people reading either in any time or in anywhere, it could be thought that ?oreading culture? is burgeoning intensely.24. People possessing an array of books in one hand, seem like bookworms and in other hand, are considered as symbols of knowledge.25. Indeed, a substantial proportion of readers don?Tt know the concept of their books because haven?Tt read them before. 26. They can?Tt select or evaluate a potentially interesting book and moreover they thought gullibly that possessing books was only a marker of status in society.27. In ad***ion, a lot of books, generated instantly in order to relax, are in accordance with the taste of the number of people who define reading as a tend.28. The careful investigation of books shows many spheres or types of them in which a host of readers have considerable regards to children books. 29. They, who always linger over the sector for children in bookstore, argue that stories which are taken to be in lives out of the ordinary, are, therefore, fantasy and occur endlessly as opposed to the fact.30. Last month, some publishers engaged in the cultural conferences and workshops have contrived a new bizarre and idiosyncratic type of book.31. They improved that book market now flourishes enough to come to constitute an association of publishers.32. It was a positive manifestation of how reading culture developed; however, it was too early for cultural researchers to presuppose that reading culture would boom.33. The anticipation had parallel with several dissertations on subject of reading culture of students from University of Culture.34. More creative and much greater sensitivity, which people aspire to, are certain characteristics of readers who thrive on books.35. Yet reading book isn''''t as a travel in guided group so readers can encounter a number of feelings depended upon themselves. Gửi lúc 09:17, 05/06/08
teppi3000Thành viên mới,Thành viên từ 17:35, 03/07/07Hiện có 496 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12847914

Em chào thầy, em là Nhàn, em và 1 bạn nữa mới đi học lớp thầy 1 buổi hôm thứ 2, do chưa hiểu rõ yêu cầu của thầy nên em viết lại bài học hôm trước trên lớp, thầy xem và sửa giúp e, Today, fast foods are more and more common in Britain not only with high-income people but also low-income. The amount of money per week spent on fast foods was shown in the chart below and the trends in consumption of fast foods were shown in the graph. As you see, high income and average income people particularly like hamburgers. The high-income groups spent more than 40 pence per person per week and the average group spent nearly 35 pence per person per week for hamburgers. However, fish and chips are not equal compare they?Tre spending of these two groups. If high-income group prefer pizza to fish and chips, the average income people prefer fish and chips to pizza. Low income group like fish and chips, they spent nearly 18 pence per person per week for it. All their consumption for food is about 40% of high-income consumption. About the trends in consumption of fast foods, hamburgers increase rapidly over the years. The consumption increased from nearly 80 gram in 1970 to 500 gram in 1990. In ad***ion, pizza also gradually increased during the period 1970 to 1980. The consumption slightly increases but from 1980 to 1990, it surged up evenly. From 1970 to 1985 the fist and chips consumption decreased lightly but from 1985 it began to increase. In general, the consumption of high income an average income group plays important role in the consumption of fast foods in Britain. They spent much for hamburgers that make the trend in consumption of hamburgers increase rapidly. Although, the low-income people spent most for fish and chip but its consumption still decreased. Consumption of pizza also increased but lightly. Gửi lúc 09:58, 05/06/08
quylun87I''m a daLABer babyThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 21:16, 12/09/07Hiện có 912 Đã được 8 người bình chọn (4.25) ID bài viết: 12852472

Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL_5cn I am interested in oral tra***ional songs that reflect abundant countryside life of other people in Vietnam. The author of these songs is unknown, so they are called anonymous compositions. They are usually in the form of oral songs and were composed in dialect. Each countryside area has various oral songs. Because, those songs were sung by children, they were considered children?Ts songs. Those songs are short, rhyming words and easy to remember. They reveal not only daily life of peasants such as farm workers, but also their sadness and happiness. Even they mentioned about criticisms or eulogies of somebody. All of that are their attitudes toward life and society where they live. Those children?~s songs were accessible everywhere in countryside of Vietnam. They sing wherever such as in the fields, in the grasses farming, playing (with children) or resting. However, now they are not as spread out as previous period. So there is a few surviving songs now. Anyway, those songs retain literary and historical values to Vietnamese people that nobody can deny.A festival will be taken place in Hue, which was recognized to cultural heritage of the world by UNESCO, from June 3rd to 11th. I haven?Tt had in foot in Roma, the city of Italy, where have many romantic place and antique structures. Ho Chi Minh, the greatest man in Vietnamese history, devoted all his life to fighting for freedom and independence of Vietnam people, and now it was used to name the largest city of Vietnam, Ho Chi Minh city. I take pride in the pagan heroic tra***ion and historical thickness of Vietnam, the country where I was born and will live throughout my life. Shady is here

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Em nhàn mới học lớp IELTS T26 của thẩy, em gửi thầy 10 câu ngày 5/6/20081.Caring about of speculation, the price of USD in the market has increased and it is highest in 3 weeks. 2.In 10 am this morning in the Asia currency market 1.553 USD change to 1 Euro, increased 2% compare the yesterday. 3.This morning, many people in Hanoi flock into the currency exchange to buy USD in contrary with trying to sell USD for two month ago. 4. Many people told me that they tried to buy USD because they worried about fluctuation of inflation, which will reduce the value of VND. 5.In order to extend scale production, our company need to employee 20 workers, 5 drivers, and one inventory accountant, and all people will work for our factory in Phonoi Industry Park. 6.On 7 Jun EURO 2008 is going to opening, with the attempt of 16 football teams come from 16 countries. EURO 2008 will be eventful and unexpected. 7.Michel Platini is a French footballer, who has highest score in the history of EURO. He has 9 score after 2 times attempt EURO. 8.In this summer, We are going to spend one week for holiday in Sapa, everything has been prepared, and we hope that our holiday is very interesting. 9.I have given you all information about new job, if you have any question please contact with me to discussion 10.The ministry of education recognized that there was an error in the answer of physics in high school examination. But the speaker of the ministry said that, this error was not serious. Gửi lúc 17:24, 05/06/08
justalieThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 08:42, 25/05/08Hiện có 35 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12853618

Mấy hôm nay máy nhà em hỏng nên ko có gửi bài, mà hình như dạo này bắt đầu lười rồi, huhu, phải chỉnh đốn lại mới đc. Phuong Dung Ielts267th times 5/6 61. To make economic decisions about continuing or stopping producing a product that is in the decline phase, it is important to research thoroughly on ability to improve it.62. Population viability analysis is an effective tool to assess the impact of exploiting nature resources in a certain region on the ecosystem there. 63. Many species became extinct or have chance of extinction because of uncontrolled cutting down of forests for timber.64. To make a prediction about the successful ability of an economic project, we have to consider it from many sides such as turnover, profit, present value, etc?65. Phong Nha ****rn that has recognized as a world culture heritage has enormous potentiality to attract tourists coming to Quang Binh province.66. The policymakers usually want the macroeconomic variables fluctuate slowly and stably because they decide the stableness of the economy.67. Although Tad and Rin ?" two most beautiful horses in his farmstead ?" descended from a male, they look not identical at all. 68. Taking the viability in severe weather con***ions into account, tiger is one of the champions because it has a highly adaptable ability with the change of surrounding environment.69. Taking the ability of passing through the entrance exam to university of her son into account, John?Ts mother just gives a sign.70. When evaluating the effects of a project, beside individual benefits, we have to bear in mind its social benefits as well as the impacts on surrounding environment. Gửi lúc 19:20, 05/06/08
ngnhatanhThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 21:55, 04/12/07Hiện có 347 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12855001

Trần Ngọc Hà Ielts 26 date 0506Lần trước topic ko mở được nên e send bài vào mail, chắc thầy chưa check mail, em copy lại từ 51 - 60 luôn vào đây. 51. The sun in cool, peaceful and fresh air in the nice morning taking light ray doses inside chick in a door and makes dankly unclear house brightly-lit.52. She wakes up suddenly because an odd dream in which she had become one of the most cruelly strong killers, and was arranged in a random disordered fashion.53. The director has made three employees redundant because they used the number of hours work as their leisure and relaxing and, at the same time, given a mirror for others adjusting their behavior accordingly.54. A host of factors pushes company into the top of the dry spell and, at the same time, takes employees away from the work place and compels them to live from hand to mouth.55. Diminishing returns ???? takes place by uncomfortably increased salary for employees who now are spending as much enthusiasm on the job as their lovely worked natures. (tự sang tạo từ thấy banana wá Find ideas first, then define good structure in English for it.)56. She hasn?Tt got on shortlists in working for ABC join venture company interview because her answers are not tired to the employers questions.57. With ?osay it your way? slogan, Viettel company in known as a defining supplier of ?oappreciate service? vision that their products are appreciated to be good for lower incomes and poor students (^_^ caí này cũng banana. Banana or apple means nothing, the skill and daily rule are more important!!!!!) 58. On the horizon are Vietnamese female students getting on job in senior management in both the private and public sectors in which provide a range of opportunities for them to have high wages, comfortable lives and go abroad.59. The united sense of Vietnamese people ( Chỗ này cũng tự chế nữa) as invincible strength, a tra***ion going back at least to France against War (^_^), has won any aggressive designs of the enemy.60. Nothing can prevent them from uniting against the common toe and constructing and reinforcing country more and more powerfully6 1. As more sentences are made by me, imagination of words will become useful further that helps me fell comfortable in how to learn E with Mr Vui (^_^).62. In general, to make financial decisions about investment and useful capital of business in the current economic climate, it is necessary to predict the successful proportion of these decisions.63. One useful tool for assisting teaching and studying of all education grade is practical lessons, which can combine theory and practice and provide a range of opportunities for students to prove themselves.64. Taking the weightier competitors?T jobs into account, he may less be a matter of chance unless he can make strong felling for employers by special and impressed CV.65. In the first day at school, children can not avoid difficulty of making friends with others and climate but it is early challenge that makes them mature.66. The lose of ability of any senses can cause human shirking out of everyday life and they only live from day to day in lonely world, in which they feel safe.67. When teaching the children a natural lesson she knows that these lessons can assist efficiently developed brain of them and, at the same time, they are educated in how to protect wildlife, environment, and even themselves.68. When changing concentrated export strategy is made by strategic brain planners, the current economic recovery to be confident of success in long term.69. Catastrophes such as flood, epidemic or tornado on Asian may reduce dramatically a number of tourists and make travel industry in this country into poverty stricken con***ion.70. To make promotional tour for new launched products we need to have the detailed plan and bear in mind ad***ional expen***ure, which can contribute directly to price of product. Gửi lúc 22:18, 05/06/08
cuongpharmaThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 15:16, 25/05/08Hiện có 65 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12855245

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-05/06n the occasion of the World Environment Day (WED) June 5th, Mr. Ban Ki Moon, secretary-general of United Nations, called up all the Earth?Ts citizens to co-operate in protecting environment with spirit: ?oBoth we each is a part of the solution. Whether you are a person, an association, a company or a government, there are many ways that you can do to decrease your carbon-steps. Overall, everything must be from our heart?. This year, slogan of the WED is ?oQuit the habit! Toward a low carbon economy?. Among world environments?T issues, the increase of greenhouse gas has been being taken as the biggest trouble about human actions affecting environment. According to scientists, the density of carbon dioxide gas, in the atmosphere, has reached the level of 387 part per million (ppm), 40 percent higher than Industry Revolution times. This has been also the highest level for 650.000 years. While the increase rates only had been being 1,5 ppm for each year from 1970 to 2000, but it was 2,14 ppm in 2007.Recognizing the climate change as the danger of our age, United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) asked nations, companies and all the people in the world for paying attention to greenhouse gas issue and look for solutions releasing it.WED honours inventions, plans fostering low carbon economy and lifestyle such as: improving energy-efficiency, using replacement energy sources, preserving forests or consuming friendly with ecosystem. An official anniversary of WED will be held in Wellington city, New Zealand. Gửi lúc 22:42, 05/06/08
Rive2Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 13:52, 04/11/05Hiện có 171 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12855818

5/6/08Chao Thay Vui, em la LeTung. Em gui thay 10 cau ve bai W2T3C1. Thay nho sua gium em. Em cam on.1. Some publishers, which have huge sizes and enormous profits, could produce several different newspapers and books in a single day, while others, which are less famous, may produce only one in the same day. 2. Taking only the uncertainty of favors in different classes, genders or generations of people into account, it is appropriate to report both good and bad news in a single newspaper to satisfy everyone.3. Small number of political, educational or social events cannot fill a certain amount of one fifth of a general newspaper?Ts pages; the directors therefore try to stack extra pieces of advertisements or pseudo adventurous stories to attract readers. 4. Try to think that if there are 20 events and only one of them is about funny or ridiculous subjects, readers may firstly spend time concentrating on this one and sometimes forget other important information.5. For most common press, it is certainly unlikely to report all good news or bad news in an individual magazine because this can cause low profit or being discre***ed, respectively. 6. Variation in information, collected handles a demand to publishers on having variable types of magazines, which are signed clearly for different ages. 7. The loss of strict communication regulations from the authority, associated with limitations in reporting negative or sensitive information, may cause misunderstanding in speech freedom rights.8. Subjects of catastrophes such as fire, flood, drought, epidemic, often become high-consuming events, but the uncertain forecasts, accompanied from experts sometimes may cause unnecessary fear in a part of population. 9. When allowance is made for two ad***ional elements of limiting subjects, chose such as the law and readers?T favors, it may seem easier for directors to report whatever they want.10. Indeed, scientific evidences show that we should not bear in mind the negative effects of the repetitions of criminal events, popular in newspaper nowadays, to psychological health or personality of people, especially to children. Gửi lúc 23:37, 05/06/08
vuacuchuoiThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 14:01, 21/05/07Hiện có 83 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12858796

POPULATION VIABILITY ANALYSIS The National environmentõ?Ts day! Nowadays, the Environment phenomena such as: heating global, global glass-effect, icing smelt, disastersõ?Ư are more and more considerable than others. The environmentalists are exerting to conserve and try to prevent from destroying of humane developing. We had logged an enormous hectors of forests for timber, stolen already lager wild ecosystem and ignored the help voicing from wild world, where animals and arboreal had been losing their own generation lands. The valuable and rare species bit by bit, day by day, are disappearing from our earth. Some species were ??? in some past decades but extinct already now. There are a lot of environment organizations have already established and make a warning about natural disasters, which voicing to appeal to Nationsõ?T consideration of our living environment. Today, Vietnam is greeting the International Environmentõ?Ts day with a lot of positive activation toward the hot environment phenomena. We conduct a big parade, road show on Hanoiõ?Ts roads to announce people about coming disasters and make more awareness of our environment status. Now, we review the history of International Environmentõ?Ts day. Since the years of 1960s, the regression of environmental signals were arisen clearly, people started awaking their bad effects to our environment. Humane and Environment Global summit was taken place in Stockholm (the capital of Sweden) 2 days in June, 5th -6th , 1972, a result of new awareness, was the first action which marked the general exerting of humane unions to solve environmental issues. In that summit, Environment global program was also established in June, 5th 1972. Since then, United Nations chose the date -June, 5th annual is the National environmentõ?Ts day and encourage people, Nations and organizations in the world, that implement activations to improve the environment in right their Nations in that day. In Nations, the cerebration activations have to paid attention to Policy circle and impulse policy activations with purposes to persuade these Governments to sign Commitments and agree with Agreement of Environment protecting. The United Nations, each year, choose a city, takes place global highlight activations to cerebrate this day and give a main message which is going to convey through whole activations of this year .In these days, people who come from every-Nations in the world, are received a official message from United Nationsõ?T General secretary, in which state environment issues and general protecting environment status in the whole world. Since 1987, in order to encourage the sense of responsibility of environment protecting from people, United Nations has mobilized a Global 500 award, is taken place in right environmentõ?Ts day in right city which had chosen, is centre of The ceremony in the world. Annually, The United Nations chooses the people who had a big contribution in environment protecting activations to give prizes of Global 500 Award. From 1982, Vietnam also responds of activations to cerebrate this day in whole nation. Annually, Environment bureau/ Environment Ministry often combines the related offices to mobilize and carries out nationwide, with various activations such as: Clean living environment campaign, clean working environment,.., and chooses a location where takes place the significant activation of Nation. Annual cerebration always attracted by different classes of people, also offices and unions such as: Government offices, official representatives, International organizations, Embassies locate in VN, pupil, people-social unionsõ?Ư.Em gui thay bai PVA.THỏƯY CHECK DTM TR' NH?!THANKS A LOT!VUACUCHUOI Gỏằưi lúc 10:40, 06/06/08
tieuca07Thành viên mỏằ>i,Thành viên tỏằô 10:56, 29/02/08Hiỏằ?n có 215 ĐÊ 'ặỏằÊc 1 ngặỏằi bơnh chỏằn (5.00) ID bài viỏt: 12861298

Em là N. N. TúLỏằ>p IELTS26Em nỏằTp hai bài Writing task. PWT1, No1(p.31) The results of a survey of adult education were described by the charts below. Reasons for study were given in the first chart and the cost of each course was given in the pie chart. As can be seen from the first chart, reasons for study, people who joined to meet people, were equivalence of 9% of minimum point. Just over, 12%, were given by people, who want a change in jobs. More real objectives, which fluctuated around 20%, were the number of people, who wanted to enjoy studying, improve prospects of promotion and assist to their current jobs. The maximum value, 40%, belonged to people, was most interested in the subjects. And just under, 38%, people wanted to gain qualifications. The data from pie chart reveal that, people have had to pay about 40% cost, approximated 2/5 cost. Part remain of cost belong taxpayer and employer, respectively, 25% and 35%.It can be concluded that people joined the course of adult education have many objectives and they have to pay for this course. PWT3, No2(p.72) The amount of money per week, spent on fast foods in Britain, was given by the chart below. The trends in consumption of fast foods, during the period from 1970 to 1990, were described by the graph. The first chart as comparison of expen***ure on fast food were shown??? by income groups. For people who have lowest income, they spent about 18 pence for Fish and Chips whereas approximately 7 pence and 14 pence for Pizza and Hamburgers. Compare with Low Income, people have average income have a higher expen***ure, approximated 11 pence, 25 pence and 33 pence for pizza, Fish and Chip, and Hamburgers. It can be seen that, for high-income people, expen***ure on Hamburgers is highest and doubled than other fast food. As described on the consumption of fast food 1970-1990 graph, Pizza was always lowest consumption but it increased steadily. As can be seen, although Fish and Chips were popular fast food but its consumption fluctuated from 200g to 300g ranges. Specially, Hamburgers has increased dramatically from under 100g in 1970 to more than 500g in1990. Also, this graph showed tow particular points in which Fish and Chips with hamburgers have the same consumption, about over 210g, in1982; compared Fish and Chip, Pizza had the same consumption point (about 220g) in 1988.It can be concluded that high income People have highest expen***ure on fast food and Hamburgers is the most favorite fast food. CĂm ặĂn thỏĐy 'Ê sỏằưa bài! Gỏằưi lúc 14:20, 06/06/08
lurangThành viên mỏằ>i ,VietnamThành viên tỏằô 15:03, 23/03/07Hiỏằ?n có 880 Chặa có ai bơnh chỏằn ID bài viỏt: 12863021

Good afternoon, teacher. This is my writing task 1 (pg 31, test1, book1)Ah, I''''m La Trang. The results of a survey of adult education are described in the charts below. The column chart explains their decision to study. Their opinions about sharing the costs of education are drawn in the pie chart. In the 1st chart, it reaches the maximum 40% of the reason õ?~interest in subjectõ?T. Itõ?Ts a positive signal but besides, thereõ?Tre also 38% of adults surveyed want to gain qualifications. Others popular reasons which occupy approximately 20% ones, consist of õ?~helpful for current jobõ?T, õ?~to improve prospects of promotionõ?T and õ?~enjoy learningõ?T. The chart hits the minimum 9% of meeting people. On the face of it, it seems funny. However, we shouldnõ?Tt lose sight of the fact that meeting and talking to others are necessary demands of people. This chart showed clear reasons, that adults decided to study, are useful to account for the results of their study. In ad***ion, for sharing the cost of each course, adults think that the individual should pay 40% of cost. Employer pays 35%. Itõ?Ts an appropriate rate because after studying, employee is better and more qualified. But it may be a bad situation if the employee quits his job. The other 25% of cost should be paid by taxpayer in order *****stain social equality. ĐặỏằÊc lurang sỏằưa chỏằa / chuyỏằfn vào 17:07 ngày 06/06/2008 Gỏằưi lúc 17:06, 06/06/08
teppi3000Thành viên mỏằ>i,Thành viên tỏằô 17:35, 03/07/07Hiỏằ?n có 496 Chặa có ai bơnh chỏằn ID bài viỏt: 12863279

Em nhàn lỏằ>p IELTS 26 gỏằưi thỏĐy 7 cÂu ngày hôm nay, em nỏằÊ lỏĂi 3 cÂu vơ cặĂ quan bỏằi ,VietnamThành viên tỏằô 21:55, 04/12/07Hiỏằ?n có 347 Chặa có ai bơnh chỏằn ID bài viỏt: 12866412

07/June/TOEFL_5CN/ MINHMINH Pupils are accused of having no knowledge about national history. Even if fact they are aware much more of Chinese history because there are many interesting Chinese historical movies that have been boarded on Vietnamese television channels. I am one of those who dislike history and my reason is it did not interest me and I did not know how important it is. A part from, my historical courses were so boring. Parents and teachers always told me to spend a lot of time on studying math, physics, and chemistry because I was thought thatõ?Ts good at them so I should concentrate on passing university exam. Now, most adults worry about younger peopleõ?Ts historical awareness. They attempt to improve situation by more many show games, TV programs and so on. In school, the teachers talk much more about role of studying history. In my side/opinion/views, the more mature I get, the much more like history. So luckily my darling likes history very much and has a wide knowledge of social sciences. Gỏằưi lúc 01:11, 07/06/08

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71. Getting a part-time job is difficult for Vietnamese students, who have less experiences and contacts.
72. The tall building was built up by the middle of last year, has sunk back into the land after the aggressive storm.
73. A wall, 1 kilometer long cover around our headquarter building with a total area of 0.1 hectare, is being created here.
74. The company, that won contract for works, need to bear in mind financial capacity to deal with newly resulting matters.
75. To make more strategic decisions about long exiting possibilities of just launched products, it is important to cause selective customers to be interested in their new characteristics.
76. The neighboring people of the factory protested against its irresponsible action, which is dumping directly industrial rubbish in river.
77. Some lazy students have been made redundant for 2 months, one in three students, who take part in the Ielts class with Mr Vui so others have to try their best to avoid the same sacking fate.
78. The developing of 12th floor of tall building, a new playground of dynamic youth today, is 90% complete.
79. Everyday, a serious motors, buses, trucks, and so on rumble across A1 motorway, which tends to be sunk and crack.
80. Making sentences with each of new words and structures will become the foundation for better imagination and later writing and speaking skills
Được TranNgocVui sửa chữa / chuyển vào 10:53 ngày 07/06/2008

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11. Most of the Vietnamese old literary works that reflected the real living of society, was written in Nom writing.(characterize)
12. Han writing was an old Chinese type of writing was used the most in dependent of North period in Vietnam.
13. The first Vietnamese independent provenance was written and read by HCM President in The Ba Dinh Square in 1945.
14. HCM is the greatest man in Vietnam, came from such a poor family in Nghe An.
15. In winter, wild gooses emigrate to Southern avoid the cold climate of North and they come back again when spring comes.
16. The teachers have a foot every- area, from delta to highland, to teach pupils.
17. The workers produce the necessary products *****pply to market.
18. I learned how to make Chung cake in the Tet holiday by my parents when I was a child.
19. Tonight the 3 of June, Hue Festival 2008 is going to open, expected to be a imposing and qualitative festival.
20. There are 23 Nations, above 60 art associations and 7000 artists that participate in the Hue Festival 2008.

Phuong Dung Ielts 26
The 8th times 7/6
71. The ABC company has researched the market thoroughly before launching new products in attempt to meet the customersâ?T demand; as the result, it market shares are increasing at a breakneck pace.
72. The headquarter building of the pizza company, one of the leading company in its field, is 80% complete and will be finished by next December.
73. Thanks to the hardworking study, Mr Cuong, who is always highly appreciated by Mr Vui, our teacher, has improved his English at a breakneck pace.
74. Many countries, studying the lesson of monetary financial crisis of Thailand in 1997, have kept close control of their financial markets to avoid the similar fate.
75. The marketing managers are usually as interested in the advertising campaigns as in quality of their product.
76. The technology research and development group of Havard University has opted for a more aggressive approach for the new machine, providing the users the utilities that have never had before.
77. According to an article, many people thought him being crazy when Mr Duc, the manager of Hoang Anh Gia Lai club, decided to cut down a rubber forest with a total area of 5 hectares to build the football academy but they were not too surprised because Mr Duc had been always the person like doing the sensational things.
78. The joint venture enterprises are the challenging but attractive places for newly graduated students because of their competitive environments.
79. It would have been possible to not do anything and let him get certainly resulting mark; but his friends together helped him overcome his difficulties and get enough mark to pass the entrance exam to university.
80. The fertility of the soil in Mekong delta, built up by Mekong River, has made it become the biggest granary, providing most of exporting rice of Vietnam.

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-07/06: Thày cho em đem một ít không khí Euro 2008 vào lớp nhé:
THE DEATH TABLE OF EURO CUP 2008
It could be said that it was the unluck of destiny or fate. Before the draw, happened in Nyon, Switzerland, people had imagined about it: Italia, the present world champion, France, the former world and europe champion, Holland and Rumania, unlucky heroes had made the seism at World Cup 1994 in USA, all now appear in one table. While Czech and Holland usually have encounters at outer processes of competitions, but Italia and France often face each other at final rounds. On last days of Euro Cup 2000, they ?ohad fought till death?, and at last, Italians had lost the championship, caused by a private mistake. Up till 6 years after that, they met each other again at the lager final round- World Cup 2006- and Italian were out of debt with French, also cause of the private mistake of a deep blue shirt counterpart. Zinedine Zidance had been censured roundly after the butt on Materazzi, which made France being lost painfully. The hostile, therefore, is hilled up and this year, one more times, they have to weed each other out right at the first rounds.
Coach Raymond Domenech of France is now not out of talent, even he has best talents of the world. The lacking of Zinedine Zidance is filled by stars such as Vieira, Makelele or Ribery, ?olittle ZiZu? with lighting speed. There are many new factors joining the deep blue shrt team that make fans feeling secure. Meanwhile, Holland appears in this table C with the status of first candidate for both the top position of the table and the championship. That is no doubt. But if anyone among these 3 teams has to be ?ospectator? right after the table round, fans will really regret.
Được cuongpharma sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:42 ngày 07/06/2008