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21. A recent study suggested that in last 20 years, the overall obese patient rate is triple, and one of five people is obese.
22. If a normal gastric of human can store average 1 liter of food or be elastic and widen quadruple, after a gastric bypass, her stomach can just store 200 milliliter, that?Ts mean the width of the stomach is as small as litter finger.
23. After the surgery, she lost weight of 25 kilograms for 3 months. And 64 kilograms may be projected. She hopes she will be getting slimmer to take size 8 instead of size 34 now.
24. Although the surgery helps her lose weight fast and avoid being on the diet hard, it leads to bad complications.
25. Bethany was warned that she just be alive to the age of 30.Weight pressure are killing herself day by day and with the dangers of a heart disease or a diabetic and dangerous others. And hazards found in the surgery may be so much.
26. An important cause has made soaring obese patients is people around them and their looks at obese people jeeringly.
27. When I walked, people called me ?oA pig? and other gross words. It made me feel bad and I just wanted to go fast to the nearest fast- food restaurant to by a lot of food and gas drinks. Eating much helped me hide that terrible feeling.
28. According to studies about recent regime, logical and scientific regimen is considered a force to against tired, recover your health and spirit in the eventful life.
29. The insurers have encouraged to buy the premium for our futures.
30.Preventing diseases must have scientific evidences.
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Được linhnhon sửa chữa / chuyển vào 17:24 ngày 01/08/2008

Bài 1
Total FDI to Vietnamese market in early seven months has exceeded in number of 21 billions USD, seemed to be a record amount of capital for 2007.
According to the data from Statistical Agency, 654 projects, with 44,5 billions USD gross investment, has been ratified for that time. However, Professor. HTV in Vietnam National University, Hanoi, suggested that it should be differentiated between pledged investment capital and factual disbursement capital. In the interview for BBC on 29/7, Mr. Vinh said the ministries announced such data in order to make the cheerful atmosphere but the actual disbursement capital was not much . After formation of the pledged investment capital period, some of the projects hadn?Tt been disbursed because of infeasibilities, and there was not any report on the projects like that. Prof. Vinh also noticed quality of any project was reflected through the matter such as job for native and environmental protection etc. He said:? Vietnam, somewhat, is very compliant for the investors, especially in the economic openning period?.Taiwan is at top of the list of investors, the following positions are Japan and Malaysia. Taiwan, now, has 84 projects in Vietnam with gross investment capital about 8.4 billions USD. *******, the Taiwan leading industrial group as well as the largest foreign partner in Vietnam, is executing two projects including Steel Complex Zone and Sonduong port in Ha Tinh with the first-phase capital of 7.9 billions USD.
In ad***ion, there are some prominent others such as oil refining project, a joint venture among PetroVietnam, Japanese and Kuwait investors, with the cost of 6.2 billions USD, or entertainment place the same as Las Vegas in Vungtau city whose investment capital is more than 4 billions USD.
Bài 2
Russia Government?Ts adviser said the inflation was the matter of Russian economy in the short term. The Government has just raised the anticipated value for the inflation in this year to 11.8 %. Recently, Mr.A.Dvorkovich, a Kremlin?Ts senior adviser, told:? Inflation is the leading-risk for Russia economy in the short term. However, the pressure caused by the inflation tends to decrease slowly, and we hope the rate won?Tt exceed the rate of last year, 11.9 %?. Nevertheless, the inflation rate for this year is possible to be over that value?. In early six months, inflation rate is about 8.7 to 8.9 % whereas this of corresponding period was just 5.7 %. Like other countries, foods and fuel prices have been increased fast in recent months. Many officials blamed the monopoly on foods and fuel on the growing inflation. Prime Minister Putin, in the March Duma?Ts meeting, undertook to decrease the high-price foods proportion by fostering domestic agriculture and keeping inflation rate for whole year under 10 %.
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Hoang Do Hai Yen - ie38
1. According to employees''s commitment to firms, they only work 8 hours a day, 5 days a week, indeed, there are always many different reasons and factors compeling them to spend more time on job.
2. Newspapers and magazines now abound to news and images describing famous people''s private lives in public.
3. In order to complete this project on time, you are better off learning how to manage time effectively.
4. Coping with gasoline price climb, every customers has to take a plan of spending money more economically.
5. Making use of his knowledge and experiences helped him to sign that contract successfully.
6. These model designs expressed her new-found emotion, the feeling of a girl in the first love.
7. Children, who are lazy, have to pay a huge penalty in their future.
8. Falling foul of her current life, she managed to move to a strange place.
9. Reading books give you access to new knowledge and opinion about every field in our life.
10.Your work is incorporating your team member'' s ideas into a speech.

Em Hoài IELTS 26
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Task 1-test2 camb2
The amount of leisure time in a typical week enjoyed by *** and employment status ,1998-99 is shown in the table .
It was right on what we might have been expected ,both men and women of unemployees and retirers had the highest number of leisure time .In which, men on average had 84 hours of leisure and only slightly more than women-about 75 hours .
For the full-time employees ,there was a dramatic decrease in leisure time for both genders .Here too, men enjoyed more leisure timer than women ,approximately 46 hours in comparison to around 37 hours for women.Another markable thing is that there were no statistics presented for male part-time wokers and househusbands whereas female part-timers and housewives enjoyed 40 hours and 50 hours of leisure respectively.
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In general,the chart shows that in almost employment status mentioned,women normally had less 9 hours of leisure than men .That''s maybe partly because women had to spend time on looking after their families besides their time at the workpace.
Task1-Test1 Camb2.
The consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 are shown in the table.
There was a steady increase in the percentage of British households with a number of consumer durables in this period .The most imporant increase was in telephone ownership,rising from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983.Similarly,another substantial increase occured in central heating ownership , rising from37% in1972 to 64% in 1983 .THE PERCENTAGE OF bRITISH HOUSEHOLDS with a refrigerator rose 21% between 1972 and 1983.The figures for British houses with washing machines by 14% over the same period .The statistics also show that the ownership of consumer durables such as dishwashers,televisions and vacuum cleaners virtually unsubstantially increase by 2%,5% and 8% respectively ,whereas videos which has just been used since 1983 occupied 18% of households.
In conclusion ,although over the period there was rises in all of consumer durables mentioned,the most significant rises belonged to the ownership of phones ,central heating , fridges and washing machines .It is probably a clue for improvements in standards of living in Britain and for the consuming trend toward a more and more comfortable and convenient life.
Em gui them 8 cau nua nhe .
1.Attending an English course at LW maybe give Miss Hoa access to confidence in communicating with foreigners and improve her pronunciation.
2.In order *****cceed in english or any other foreign languages ,the question does not merely lie on whether you have a reasonable studying programme or an innate ability of words,but it depends on your patience and your effort as well.
3.I used this key for opening the door by putting it into holekey.
4.Ilike living in countryside because it gives me a feel for how precious a peaceful life is.
5.Vietnamese goverment recently has made a pronouncement on helping truck-drivers with the petrol price.
6.In my opinion ,an excellent architect must be a person who is able to turn a beautiful city into slums and vice versa.
7.Restriction on the inflation rate is effective or not primarily depends on if the goverment introduce proper policies.
8.Any children who descended from a poor ,big family generally have been influenced by their family''s financial burden and it is probably the reason why those children have profound thinks and look older than the others in the same age.

31. When the price of the petrol increased, the Zurich Public Transports Company carried out a social investigation and the result was so surprising. That?Ts 50 percent of residents who were asked, decided to give up their own cars to change to use public transport means, a bicycle or go on foots when the price was 2.5 USD per liter.
32. The foreign investors have found that M&A is an effective way to start in the Vietnam market. They don?Tt need so much time to look for a project or do the administrative procedures. Instead of it, they just waste time to look for their partners without spending preparative steps.
33. None of foods can provide all of nutrition for human body. There is no food which is bad or good for your health, just eat it little or much. So foods that you eat every meal should be diversiform, about over 20 types.
34. A good regime provides needful nutrition for human body in every meal.
35. A regimen should be diversiform and adequate nutrition, most of it is from vegetable.
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Independent speaking question 1 â?o a good son or daughterâ?
In my opinion, a good daughter in a family must have the following characteristics.
First of all, a good daughter must be an obedient girl. It means she is willing to take and follow her grandparents or parentsâ?T advice. It is obvious that the older people have experienced a series of difficulties, hurdles so their advice is usually right in many cases. If she doesnâ?Tt obey, she will tend to do bad things and harm herself, as well as, her family.
Secondly, a good daughter should try to learn hard in order to become an intellectual adult, a good member of society, which is any parentsâ?T wish.
Moreover, a good daughter should be thoughful of others. For instance, she should help her parents with housework when her parents are busy with their work in an effort to manage *****pport their family. In ad***ion, she takes care of all members when they fall ill and give encouraging words and advice to them when they feel disappointed and miserable.
Above all, the most important characteristics of a good daughter in a family is that she loves her family much. Because love is the steadily fundamental basis of a happy family and a family in turn is an important basis of any society.
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My Hanh Ielts 47
Writing 1, Test 1, Cam 3
The first chart shows the number of Japanese tourists who traveled abroad between 1985 and 1995. First of all, we can see this number had increased steadily from 5 million peoples in 1985 to 11 millions in 1990. There was a small decrease in 1991, dropping to over 10 millions, however, this number had risen significantly again, reaching to 15 millions in 1995.
Next to the second chart which shows the Australiâ?Ts share Japanesê?Ts tourist market. In which, the number of Japanesê?Ts tourist who went to Australia was about 2 millions in 1985, and this number had increased sharply until the beginning of 1988. In 1988, it decreased slightly and since 1989, it went up dramatically until 1993, and then it fell again but insignificant.
In summarization, the Japanese tourist who traveled abroad tends to increase more and more, and in which, the number who went to Australia accounted for a large percentage.
Writing 1, Test 2, Cam 3
The amount spent of six consumer goods in 4 European countries was described by the chart below.
First of all, all of six consumer goods which were spent by Britain were higher than other countries. In which, the amount spent on photographic film was highest, reaching to over 170 thousand pounds sterling, personal stereos and tennis racquets were spent lowest, about 150 thousand pounds. Germany generally is the country which spending lowest, it only spends a bit higher than Italy on perfumes and tennis racquets. The amount spent of Italy and France is on average, in which, France spent more on photographic film and CDs but less on personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes than Italy did. Only in case of toys, spending in this two countries is equivalent.
In summarization, there are many differences in spending habit among European countries, so Britain seems to tend to spend more than other countries.
Writing 1, Test 4, Cam 3
The unemployment rate in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999 was described by the chart below.
The graph shows that in March 1993, the unemployment rate in US was 7 percent, comparing with only 2,5 percent in Japan in the same time. However, after that, this situation in US had went against in Japan. The percentage of work force unemployed in US tends to decline gradually since 1993 and reached 5 percent in middle of 1996, while this number increased steadily in Japan, and had nearly doubled after 3 years. Since 1996, the unemployment rate in US had changed with a small range, fluctuating around 5 percent level until March 1999. In Japan, this percentage fell rapidly by over 0,5 percent after March 1996, but just after several months, it went up steadily again with an insignificant fluctuation, and it also reached about 5 percent in March 1999.
In conclusion, the US?Ts unemployment situation tends to decrease while having an increase trend in Japan over period of 6 years. However in 1999, both US and Japan had about 5 percent of their unemployed work force.

Nguyen Hai Nam , IELTS 38. Sent my EX in 30/7/2008.
61.Infact, the food productivity of Viet Nam have increased noticeably since 1990 after the government had innovated the tax policy and technology in agirculture .
62.Nowadays, in the current society abound with bachelors who they haven''t been married with anybody yet.
63.Because he see the love as a game of his life so he is falling foul of the stories in true love.
64.My university, the Ha Noi university of technology were originally created as place of sciential lab where every students is both disquisitional and practised .
65.At this time last year, my parents worried about how I would do in my free time when I lived in Ha Noi alone.
66.Because the cost of food is climbing so some african countries have to trade petroleum for food.
67.If you agree I will trade my laptop for your cell phone because It''''s the most special cell phone I have ever seen before.
68. Next month, I will hual my family''''s fruit to the Dong Xuan Market to trade it for rice.
69.Although he knew he succumbed to leukaemia but he always was jolly and optimistic.
70.A luxury house in the central Ha Noi next to the Ho Chi Minh museum, recently went on the market for one milion dollars.
Được namriver sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:22 ngày 30/07/2008