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Trần Loan - tái xuất giang hồ IELTS 26
Topic (cam 4 test 4)
In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor students behaviour seems to be increasingly widespread problem in many countries, most of which are caused by the attitudes of students. Some governments and educationalists show great concerns about the problems. From my point of view, these problems are aroused by three factors: the development of society, the influence of family and media and the weakness of school education system.
First of all, the rapid development of the society offers more chances for young students to contact the outside world?Ts left-faces. With the lack of social experiences, these youngsters could not capable of distinguishing right from wrong. Therefore, they would pick up bad habits from the chaos society through the real life and mass media, such as drug, criminal, illegal motor race and so on.
Nowadays, parents are too busy so they do not have enough time for take care their kid carefully. The birth rate is decreasing, each family often has only one or two children. Generally, children would be mollycoddled without the wary notices of busy parents. Besides, the family violence is another factor causing problems in schools. This would takes form bad thoughts in children?Ts mind from their parents. Recently, school gunshots hit the headlines frequently, which should partly attributed to family violence.
Finally, the weakness of school education also is factor causing school problems. Some schools only pay attention to students?T achievements in learning and neglecting their moral education. Thus, even the top students also could become criminals when they leave schools.
To solve these problems, I think we should take the following measures. Firstly, school should strengthen students?T moral education, giving them correct directions and cultivating their abilities to tell right from wrong. Secondly, parents should spend more time in answering children?Ts difficulties and troubles when they face. Moreover, schools and parents should combine together in order to provide the best life environment for the country''s future owners.
Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 17:58 ngày 13/08/2008

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Được beautifulso sửa chữa / chuyển vào 20:57 ngày 13/08/2008

Trần Loan IELTS 26
Topic ( Cam 3 Test 3)
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
The international convention on the rights of the child shows that the fifteen- years old or above children who have to work early because of the demands, must be received the special, non-dangerous and non-noxious work con***ions, only work suitable jobs for their abilities. From my point of view, there are some advantages and disadvantages when children are engaged in some kind of paid work.
First of all, there are three positive effects if children earn money through working. Firstly, the sources of their income could support for the poor families?T finance situations, because adults?T salaries don?Tt enough for their basic needs. Secondly, the worked children would obtain many valuable work experiences, so they would be more mature than their peers. On the other hand, they would be more responsible for using money and this is real important factor in the modern society nowadays. Finally, they could express real abilities, even they are only kids, instead of trying to learn in a normal school or a university, which could not discover and promote their abilities.
Besides, there are also some negative effects because they work early. With the lack of social experiences, they could be abused both physically and psychologically. Physically, job violence will hurt their tender body because children are still in the stage of development. Psychologically, physically punishments will hurt children?Ts spirit and make them lost the nature characters of children. Moreover, they don?Tt have enough time for the basic lessons in the school, so they can not get good learning results, which is essential to get good jobs in the future.
In conclusion, children are the country?Ts owners in the future. Thus society and adults must have responsible for providing the best life environment for children, in order to nurture the hidden abilities. And I hope that in the near future, there will not have abused children situations.

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Các trang 36-39 đã được sửa và chuyển vào hòm thư của các lớp. 2 file tourism, PVA bổ trợ cho học viên mới cũng đã được gửi vào hòm thư của I38.
Học viên của các lớp có thể vào để tải bài và đúc rút kinh nghiệm (Đọc tất cả các bài bằng Phương pháp Siêu Tốc ít nhất 3 lần).

Trần Loan IELTS 26
Topic
One day the world?Ts oil and gas reserves will run out. The search for alternative energy sources like wind power, solar power, burning waste and water power are causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intended to replace. In what extent do you agree or disagree? (Academic writing practice)
A body can not survive without blood and an economic also can not operate without energy. With the increasing science breakthrough, more and more kinds of environmentally friendly energy are discovered. Some people think that alternative energy source such as wind power, solar power, burning waste and water power cause as much environmental damage as fossil fuel. From my point of view, such sources need to be encouraged as a means of replacing fossil fuel as they have considerable advantages.
First of all, these sources are essential to replace the running out oil and gas sources. Nowadays, people are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of exhaustion of the oil sources. Besides, environment is polluted seriously by the emissions from oil machines, the oil-overflow accidents on the seas and so on. Old vehicles make air quality in urban areas unpleasant and sometimes dangerous to breathe.
In mentioned sources, single burning waste is causing environmental damage. In the exploitation, transportation and production processes, the burning source such as coal impacts on the air and people?Ts health. Moreover, the burning sources are also limited sources.
Generally, the wind power, solar power and water power are clear energies and unlimited sources. Firstly, these sources don?Tt have emissions in the using process, so they are friendly with the environment. Besides, these are cheap energies, because they exist in nature and the technology for using alternative sources of energy is becoming more and more simple and popular. In the other hand, they are nearly disappear and they are real suitable for many countries where have ready these sources. For example, the Asian countries can use the solar technology and the Europe countries can use the wind power.
Whilst any form of energy that we seek to utilize is going to cause some damage, I feel that wind, sun and water have to be harnessed for the good of the environment. In the near future, these clear sources of energy would be used widespread throughout the world.

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Các trang từ 40-42 đã được sửa xong, thành viên của các lớp có thể tải bài về xem lỗi chi tiết.
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Trần Loan IELTS 26
Topic (Cam 2 test 2)
?oPrevention is better than cure?
Out of country?Ts health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from
treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
Nowadays, in the modern society, each person?Ts health is menaced by the polluted environment, water sources, unsafe food sources, emissions and so on which is causing many diseases and illnesses. The Asian and Europe medicine histories show that the prevention of disease and illness is more essential and important than the cure. Some people think that single government has responsible for the prevention. From my point of view, the prevention must be carried out by many subjects in the society, and there are many policies *****pport it.
First of all, the government plays an important role in the prevention of disease and illness throughout the country. Every year, the governments spend a great amount of money in health care services, specially in the developed countries. For example, the American government spend approximately 4.500 USD on health care per person. The governments not only set up the state hospitals, but also encourage the private hospitals and consulting-rooms, in order to meet the population?Ts demands about the health care. Besides, the government have health campaigns, such as the free health care programs for poor people and children. Moreover, the states also are developing the health education system, the propaganda campaigns, the policies providing clean water, improved sanitation and housing, so as to increase the citizen?Ts knowledge about the prevention.
The prevention not only is the health organizations?T work, but also is the each person?Ts responsibility. If each person have their own health care regimes, the suitable nutrition regimes, maintain healthy behaviours and lifestyles, they would decrease risk of disease. The save more money in the treatment, and they would spend more money on the prevention. So the whole country?Ts health equal would be promoted and increased.
The prevention has to become a habit of each person from youngsters to oldies, because everybody want to grow healthy. In the future, doctors would not have to prescribe, they would make patients to pay more attention to own body care, nutrition and the prevention.

Trang 43, 44a cũng đã được sửa lỗi chi tiết xong.
Những học viên đã đăng bài hoặc chưa đăng bài có thể tải bài về và đọc bằng phương pháp Siêu tốc ít nhất 3 lần để rút kinh nghiệm.