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  1. lurang

    lurang Thành viên mới

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    G morning, teacher. This is my 1st writings in week from 6 to 13th June.
    I''m La Trang.
    1. Natural settlement, recognized to be inevitable, has to be taken carefully in account in building this important giant development.
    2. River deltas, known as the most fertile and appropriate areas for agricultural trees, however, their outline changing day by day.
    3. The motor way 80 kilometers long and 15 meters wide which was supposed to be finished by the middle of last year, now is only 25% complete thus the building engineers isnâ?Tt so interested in its pace as in its size.
    4. The giant dumper trucks imported last month, hoped to serve as the best and fastest transfers, have been rumbling dangerously across our city.
    5. Because of the heap of boulders and rocks piled on the top, the trip couldnâ?Tt avoid the sinking fate when it was only 5km offshore.
    6. The significant economic project that has been created at the poor area is meant to improve it in an attempt to make even development.
    7. Soft clay dredged from underground used to be a good material allowing people to make dishes.
    8. Although workers protested against new director, this canâ?Tt stop the employer from opting for him.
    9. Unfortunately, the crisis has represented an equivalent of a 20-year growth so that reproducing economics now is a tricky task.
    10. Either administrative or economic methods, used in order to deal with the inflation, seem temporary and useless.
  2. Shikimaru

    Shikimaru Thành viên mới

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    Đặng Lam Sơn Toefl 5cn 1week1
    1.Mr Shiro and mr Hawk developed the Environment Popullation Scale(EPS) to measure CO2 concentration in the air.
    2.The scale assigns numermical values to 10 levels of concentration of cacbon dioxyde that express popullation rate in the air in some large cities.
    3.To estasblish level of popullation investigator must ask people in that area to indicate how they feel about their environment during a certain time period.
    4.The person who was asked then adds up the numbers he thinks can fit to the scale.
    5.These Scales and similar scales have been used in thousands of studies by researchers all over the world.
    6.Overall, these studies have shown that the places with higher scores on this scale tend to have more people having lung cancer and illness relating skin as well.
    7.More recently, however, experts have criticized this research ,citing problems with the methods used and rasing number of questions to create more accurate scale.
    8. First, EPS measure poplulation in the air has been shown to be inaccurate.
    9.We now have evidence that the desirability of life con***ion affects adapatational outcomes more than containmate air that they require.
    10.Thus, it seems prudent to view the EPS as a measure of deverse level of air population, rather thn as a measure of con***ion life ?"related population.
  3. minhminh166

    minhminh166 Thành viên mới

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    07/06/08
    Before I have never thought someday I must leave my house in order to live at other region. But changing situation varied that my mind. For job, more exactly for better job chances I should leave. My major is business management that is quite ambiguous. If I do not have a high diploma, it will be difficult to get a job. So I decided study abroad.
    Now I have just several days before leave my dear country. It is place where I was born and grown up. I take pride in my country. It is famous for scenery, black coal. I do not forget my house is among border town, crowded and hurry, friendly neighbors.
    Where I go to is nice island belong to Chinese. Climate in there is fine and their custom is close to Vietnamese such as food, culture, fashion and so on. I think it will easily get accustomed to live there. New school is larger than my old university so much. It is very beautiful because one side is coast, opposite side is mountain. Many of couple go to here to take wedding photos.
  4. Shikimaru

    Shikimaru Thành viên mới

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    Đặng Lam Sơn 2week 1(em viết tranh thủ hết trận BĐN vô địch.hehe)
    11.Second, the EPS fails to take into account differences among people in their subjective perception of how noxious influence of popullattion is.
    12.For instance, while dust air may deserve a popullation value of 9 for most people, a particular person who acquainted like worker in factory, it may generate much less influence and merit a value of only 5.
    13.Third, many questions listed in EPS are highly ambiguous,leading people difficultly to answer, making inconsistent answers.
    14?.. As you can see, EPS have may questions that are described inadequately, producing considerable ambiguity about how exactly they feel about their environment.
    15.Forth, the EPS does not sample from the domain of con***ion life of people who are interviewed very thoroughly.
    16.Do the amount of questions listed on the EPS show statement of con***ion of air popullation that people in typical area live?
    17.Studies examinate again this scale and explore that questions have found nany signficant omissions.
    18.Fifth, the correlation between EPS scores and income rate of people in an area may be inflated because a poor family affects both feeling to air popullation and their sefl-reports of hard ship position.
    19.Hardship situation have a tendency to represent unpleasantion about qualify of the air than others and have more syptoms of paining in lung and skin than others.
    20.These tendencies can show a little about some of the correlation between high score in EPS and high illness may simply reflect the effection of finace situation./
  5. eyaaye

    eyaaye Thành viên mới

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    Trần Loan IELTS 26
    1st week 1 June
    1. Nowadays, when the life is too busy, everybody seldom dine in with their family and they don?Tt care for relationship between members in family.
    2. The nearly studies foud that the US president?Ts actions sometime contrast with their words in the military policies, economy policies and social policies
    3. When children make a mistake, parents should show them how to repair a mistake instead of angry with them and hit them.
    4. A collection of photographs about the war in Midle East was on display in the exhibition hall in order to protest the unjust wars of US military.
    5. The boss was aware that he was being intrigue against but he had no means of finding out exactly how and by whom.
    6. The modern people often pay a cheque into their account in order to easier pay in diffirent places while they don?Tt need carry cash.
    7. If we quarrel with our neighbours, we don?Tt have any around people?Ts help when we face to difficulties.
    8. Children in highland have set their heart on learning words but their family don?Tt have enough money for them to learn and schools also lack.
    9. Architects have a smack at assembling a part into the contructure of bulding but this has not been as effective as had been hoped.
    10. Some wonen is mistreated by ****man in their family but they still stick it out until there are meddles of the social communitys.
  6. vuacuchuoi

    vuacuchuoi Thành viên mới

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    Dear Sir,
    I send my homework with topic bellow
    ( flow up " airport on water" reading passage)Pls, correct my mistakes.
    Many thanks.
    The matter of using and reclamation of Cuu Long river delta.
    Cuu Long river delta is the biggest delta in Vietnam, with a total area of nearby 4 millions hectors, occupies 11,9% total area of Nation. There are 16,1 millions dwellers and occupies 21,1% total of nation?Ts population.
    Cuu Long river delta contains most of plain land, which is in sphere of influence of Cuu Long river?Ts branches (both upper and low delta) and rest of it (the alluvial areas is in river line)
    The upper delta is quiet high (higher 2-4 meters than sea level), but still be sunk in rain season. There are a lot of large water bogs on the most of its surface, which are deeply sunk in water in rain season and become crack-stagnant bogs in dry season. That is a large land, thinly populated, and not is exploited much yet.
    The low delta is lower, usually is influenced by tides and sea waves. The river gatê?Ts water levels are changed as breakneck pace; the tongues of salt water soak into land. Besides, some kind of lands on 2 river banks and coastal sand outcrops, there are water stagnant areas and alluvial grounds, higher 1-2 meters than this deltâ?Ts surface, are appeared in rain season.
    The alluvial delta on river line, although located on out of river?Ts sphere of influence, still was created by river alluvial such as: Dong Nai river delta, Ca mau delta.
    The wild world of Cuu Long River is very various and also meets a lot of hurdles.
    In there, base on wet tropical climate, the nearby Equator?Ts properties are present clearly. The interlacing River, stream, drainage canal system dissects this delta in squares and causes its travel easily.
    In the fact that, the biggest obstacles are long dry season, the deep soaking of salt water; the increasing concentration of salt and alum in land, also weather disasters sometimes happened.
    Although, this delta has created by alluvial, its characters are very complex. There are 3 main kinds of land. The best quality land is sweet alluvial, around river, is running as bands of Tien river and Hau river. Alkaline land occupies the largest of total area of this land; places zone areas, Dong thap Muoi, Ha tien, Can tho, for instance. Salt land places in South Pole Ca Mau and band of coastal Go Cong, Ben Tre. The main obstacle to cultivate is lack of nutrition; especially it is extremely tough and hard to run out water.
    The creature is also important source of this delta. Its floristic composition contains 2 parts, are Mangrove forest and Indigo forest. About fauna, fishes and birds are more valuable than others.
    The sea source is very various with hundreds fishing grounds with wealthy sea food.
    Cuu Long delta is more advantage than Red river delta. However, the using and reclamation in there is very vital and becomes an urgent requirement to turn this delta become a economics zone of Nation.
    The most urgent issue of Cuu Long delta is sweet water. The noticeable limitation in using delta is soaking salt and alum. So that, they need water for wash out salt and acrimonious in dry season.
    To cope with dryness, which causes evaporating of salt and acrimonious, sweet water sources are from river or underneath, served as special meaning. They always lack of water in dry season. The local people use many ways to wash out alum and salt and get a given result. The best solution is device this delta into smaller areas where they should provide enough water for washing out process; at the same time, combine with create new rice generation, which could stand alum and salt in normal con***ion to water.
    So or the west-south mangrove forests, may step by step create shrimp grounds, plant aegiceras, mangroves, simultaneous combination of protect environment and eco-system; reclaim the total area of alum and salt ground, with purposes create alluvial grounds to plant sedge, rice, fruit trees.
    These using and reclamations always associate economics activations of local people. The traces of war still exist. The mono culture status is still popular. It means that they need a transforming in economy mechanism, break the mono culture practices, speed up plant high valuable industrial crops, don?Tt lose the sight of combination between grow aquatic products and developing processing industry. The policy for sea area is guideline in organizing economy that they have to combine sea surface and island; archipelago and continent to create a united-economics.
    VUACUCHUOI
  7. vuacuchuoi

    vuacuchuoi Thành viên mới

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    I am Ms.Thanh Thanh-toeft 5CN-316
    Thay sua bai gium em nhe, cam on thay rat nhieu ah!
    1. In winter, we keep warming body by wearing so much thick clothes that help we are not cold when we are outdoor.
    2. The human is different animal that we use pan, air controlõ?Ư to make cool in the summer and in winter we wear jacket to keep warm the body.
    3. The body temperature of human always certain at 37oC during the year, except when our healthy is not good.
    4. Human counteract the environment by swear in summer and shivering in winter.
    5. The most basic mechanism of Vietnam economics is market mechanism, is oriented socialism and is controlled by government.
    6. The colleagues educate large amount of graduation student that replace the people retire every year.
    7. Vietnamese education needs improve to match changing of demand activity of economics because most of graduate students usually donõ?Tt satisfy formers request and is reeducated by the formers.
    8. The wearing safety helmet request takes place every where in Vietnam that help to reduce to injured brain injure by accident with traffic people, however, that does not decrease amount of accident happing daily.
    9. Through propaganda, most of people have mind to executively strict the wearing when they participate in the traffic jam.
    10. After the request of wearing MBH is given that the amount of MBH is bought to increase more 100 to 200 percentages than before.
    11. The wearing MBH not only help more save people than that also reacts hot in summer and cold in winter, so that the wearing MBH is necessary for every body.
    12. When animal feel that the danger is coming, they usually raise their fur of feathers to save themselves.
    13. Temperature in the water is less below than in the air, so marine mammal must have a thick fat to keep warm when they are under the water.
    14. The blubber of whale and seals are function keeping warm the same as the feathers of land animals.
    15. The marine mammals breather by gill instead of by lung
  8. beoackhip

    beoackhip Thành viên mới

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    I''m Luu Thi Hien- Toefl IBT_5cn_1st June
    1.Mr Nguyen Van Long ?" Hoa Binh city?Ts chairman ?" had to answer many queries of the other committee members about embezzling ten million dongs in the city?Ts budget.
    2. People learning in Toefl Ibt class taught by Mr Tran Ngoc Vui range from students to company staffs.
    3. Foor farmers dwelling in remote regions have gradually moved to modern cities in order to earn money.
    4. The girl baby left in forest by her parents lived together with wild animals and had almost no contact with human world.
    5. The Characters?Ts emotions portrayed in the novel recently published move the readers to tears.
    6. Economy reseachers may easily see the causal relationship between the modern economy and the development of science and technology.
    7. The members received signals made by the leader with fireworks suddently stopped making a raid on the enemy base.
    8. The vietnamese peoplê?Ts smile giving rise to feelings of friendship, good will always make a strong impression on foreign visitors.
    9. The young wife frowned to anger at her husband?Ts bad behaviour injured her heart
    10. The aggressive attitude of the criminal answering to the queries of the judge made his punishment heavier.
  9. hien48

    hien48 Thành viên mới

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    Em chào thầy! Chào các bạn nhóm toefl và ielts. Phải gần 2 tháng nay rồi em không vào topic mà bây giờ vào thấy mọi người sôi nổi quá. Thế này em phải vào thường xuyên để được motivate mới được.
    Hôm 31/5 vừa rồi đi thi về em có gọi điện cho thầy rồi, nhưng mà em nghĩ là mình vẫn nên chia sẻ lên đây một chút kinh nghiệm đi thi Toefl cho các bạn khác đang chuẩn bị thi, mặc dù là bây giờ em chưa biết điểm, cũng không tự tin vào điểm của mình một chút nào.
    @ các bạn đang học lớp toefl của thầy Vui: Đây là trích đoạn email tớ gửi cho các bạn trong nhóm toefl của tớ, mong là những kinh nghiệm này sẽ có giá trị đối với các bạn:
    "Sau 2 tuần không găp mọi người trong nhóm toefl và tập trung vào học hành (nhưng trên thực tế lại chỉ ngủ nghỉ, ăn uống và buôn chuyện), hôm 31/5 vừa rồi Hiền đã thi toefl.
    Về nội dung bài thi của Hiền như sau (mặc dù bây giờ không còn nhớ gì mấy)
    - Reading: Có 3 bài readings nhưng giờ H không còn nhớ gì nữa cả vì mới vào H đã bị distract và bị miss mất 2 câu cuối của reading 1. --> lỗi này rất lớn và tớ sẽ phân tích sau.
    Tóm lại, đối với H thì phần này khá là khoai, từ mới nhiều, có những bài chia đoạn hơi ít nên hơi khó theo dõi vì nội dung 1 đoạn dài quá, đồng thời câu hỏi cũng dễ bị đánh lừa (có những câu H trả lời rồi nhưng không chắc chắn).
    - Listening: Có 9 listenings
    Tốc độ bình thường (lecture nhìn chung là như OG), từ mới hơi nhiều, có một số bài nghe khó vì từ mới nhiều, nhiều minor details --> cái này dễ chết lắm, vì phải take note rất cẩn thận.
    Câu hỏi không quá khó, chỉ làm mình bực mình ở chỗ mình take note nhiều details quá nên sau đó bị mix thông tin lung tung, một số câu trả lời không chắc chắn. H sợ nhất các câu về attitude (câu có tai nghe ấy)
    - Speaking:
    + Task 1: What do you do to relax?
    + Task 2: study by attending frequently in the lectures/ by going out of class. Which would you prefer?
    + Task 3:
    reading: School intent to close health care center to cut expense for operation, because there is new hospital near school.
    Listening: man and woman discuss this intention
    --> nghe rất rõ
    + Task 4:
    Reading: consensus in psychology
    Listening: give example to illustrate for the reading
    + Task 5:
    Listening: discussion between 2 people about woman''s problem: she want to apply to study in Mexico, but she is still in 2 years-term president for a student club.
    --> nghe rõ, mỗi tội H trả lời ào ào luống cuống giải thích về problem quá nhiều time, còn phần 2 nói prefer cái nào H chỉ có mấy giây để trả lời.
    + Task 6: Botany class: give 2 examples of new plant effects to the habitant: grow new plant in jungle and in desert
    --> Hu hu, trả lời rất dở hơi, ấp úng nhiều, vì không biết tên 2 cái cây đó (mãi nới nói được là first tree và second tree), take note cũng không chi tiết nên không nhớ hết information.
    - Writing:
    + Task 1: strugeon jumping
    Reading: 3 points of strugeon jumping: function to avoid predators; function to communication; may be have no function and it is just historical remains through the evolution.
    Listening: Give details and examples *****pport for the first two points, and contrast with the third point in the reading passage.
    --> Nếu H nghe đúng thì chắc trả lời cũng ổn
    + Task 2: agree or disagree: "It is better to solve problem by own knowledge and experience than to ask people for advice"
    --> Đề này nhìn chung không khó, nhưng mà H làm hơi chậm, không kịp time để check chính tả, đoạn conlusion viết dở tệ vì chả nghĩ đc interesting idea nào cả."
  10. haquynhpham

    haquynhpham Thành viên mới

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    Dear Sir Vui
    This is the first time to write about English story I hope that I have a little mistake in my words and in sentences. Thanks for your helping me to figure out many things all over the world and create many ways to learn English effectively. Thanks!
    Beowulf_ Ngoc tram!
    Today we have just learnt the epic poem Beowulf. I and all my members in my class enjoyed the lesson with my lecturer, who is handsome and interesting person, is Tran Ngoc Vui, graduated from Foreign Trade University in 1990. He teaches us about Beowulf with feeling very highly enthusiastic so this is a reason to make me want to relate the epic poem Beowulf to you. I can sum up the important point in epic poem Beowulf, is an Anglo- Saxon epic poem, the most important work of old English literature. Although the date of the poem is unknown, the earliest surviving manuscript is believed to date from the start of the eleventh century after Viking invasion. The manuscript, written in the Anglian dialect, is in the British Library in London. On the basic in this text, Beowulf is generally considered to be the work of an anonymous between the late seventh century to the early ninth century Anglian poet who blended the value of the pagan hero with the Christian values of his own country and time
    I love warrior in Beowulf, who is perfect person, combining extraordinary strength, skill, courage and loyalty, and chooses to risk death in order to help other people, and he faces inevitable death with heroism and dignity. All these to create me many feeling and many crazy things to help me learning English.
    Writing is short but now I have to go to bed because of late night. I have to get up early next morning to learning English. See you later!
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