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    Thuy Quynh TF5cn_1st June.1_The Damsan epic was written by Ede, which is one of the ethic minority groups in Tay Nguyen province. It is the earliest existing epic that was passed down orally by generations. The interesting epic, talks about a perfect hero, Mr. Damsan, who devotes his life to conquering nature. He chooses to risk death in order to make the cultured society, and he was dead in the fight with the godless of sun. The Damsan epic not only exhibited to aspire to conquer nature of human but showed a rich Ede oral tra***ion of myths, legends and folklore. 2_ To Huu poet had a foot in both the Revolutionary and romantic poetry. The Revolutionary poetry reflected magnanimousness of the resistance wars to against French colonialism and America Empire. On the other hand, the romantic poetry praise of the country''''''''s beautiful sceneries and the new labourers. 3_ The Vietnamesecoal.Coal in one form or another has long been in noble service to humans, it is black gold in every countries. It is the most important fuel for cooking and heating in many countries. It also is called black gold.In Vietnam, coal has so much in Quang Ninh province with a great quantity in the form of open-cast mines and underground. In the present, The coal has exploited since many years ago, but there is daily much coal. The coal not only meets country?Ts demand but it is exported and contributed in national budget about 30billion used every year.However, with excessive state of mining, the coal is became exhausted. On the horizon, Vietnam may be country that import coal from China. So we have to work out adaptable the mining plan. On the other hand, we also care about environment to protect mineral resources Thúy Quỳnh Gửi lúc 22:09, 09/06/08
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    dragonsoftThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 16:43, 09/06/08Hiện có 6 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12888571

    Trainee: Vũ Văn LuậtClass: BPD+IELTS10 sentences those use verbs in "Airports on water" passage. 1. These topics are difficult for discussing in public.2. ThaiBinh River built up my village.3. The formidable flow of this river has worn these outcrops down.4. Our lives always change day after day.5. Nowadays, the changes in relationships between countries are improving faster than ever.6. More than 1000 English words were created by William Shakespeare.7. Why do you interest in our daily works?8. This work is a bit of my duty that I have to overcome.9. The scientists are studying the ways that they can endure life-span.10. Fighting flights are rumbling in the firmament. Gửi lúc 23:01, 09/06/08
    minhminh166Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 18:22, 06/06/06Hiện có 22 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12888747

    A visit to the country sidecountrysideNo one likes to stay at home on holiday, especial when weather is fine. Last August, we decided to go to country sidecountryside on holiday one day. The only difficult was that other millions of people also have the same idea. We left the city slowly, followed a long car chain, but finally we reached quite country road and then stop at empty farm. We brought so much of food and got it out of the car. Now everything was already, so we sat down near a path at the foot of the hill. How peaceful it is in the cool grass until we heard sound of the bell at the top of the hill. What we saw made us pick up all things and run back to the car. There are about 200 sheep coming towards us down the path. The MoonScience has told us about the moon such much that easily image how does it looks like. Surely that is not advantage place, because there is no air or water so has no life of any kind. There are not sceneries too. There are only plains with high mountains. Above, the sun and stars shine in a dark sky. If you step out of the mountain, it means you move from severe cold to great heat. This severe weather continuously breaks stone on the mountain surface. The Moon is also quite world because sound wave can be only transmitted through air. But opposite side of sky foot, you will see familiar scenery. Our Earth is lighter than any star. From this distance it looks like a huge blue, green and brown ball. [TOEFLibt_5cn][MINH MINH] Được minhminh166 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:46 ngày 09/06/2008 Gửi lúc 23:19, 09/06/08
    minhminh166Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 18:22, 06/06/06Hiện có 22 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12888776

    Quai'''''''' sao em gui di roi ma k thay bai dau nhi?! A visit to the countrysideNo one likes to stay at home on holiday, especial when weather is fine. Last August, we decided to go to countryside on holiday one day. The only difficult was that other millions of people also have the same idea. We left the city slowly, followed a long car chain, but finally we reached quite country road and then stop at empty farm. We brought so much of food and got it out of the car. Now everything was already, so we sat down near a path at the foot of the hill. How peaceful it is in the cool grass until we heard sound of the bell at the top of the hill. What we saw made us pick up all things and run back to the car. There are about 200 sheep coming towards us down the path. Gửi lúc 23:22, 09/06/08
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    Hic, bai kho qua, cuoi cung cung xong 10 cau thi da het gio nop bai. Thoi cu gui vay. Em la Hoai lop ielts _c38 1.My parents are interested in studying as in entertainment though I don?Tt like these 2.He is working with breakneck speed to catch up his friends because they have done before 3 hours. 3.Sence that serves as the platform for picture should be colourless.4.When I was ill my mother usually squeezes orange and cook soup for me.5.Childrend always come back home when their clothes are stuck with mud .6.Skin will have tend to buckle if we don?Tt take care it because many factor effect to it such as sunshine, smoke, dust.... 7.The earthquake has settled some house in the city but no one die.8.Fishman in this island usually dive in the seabed to find pearl and coral.9.Water is inevitable for life 10.Silt and mud deposits will settle down seabed when fishman shifted stones to find pearl. Gửi lúc 00:31, 10/06/08
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    Đặng Lam Sơn toefl5cn 1week221.In the light of these problems, some organizations have attempted to fix errors of this scale.22.other group like DVDs, including Eg Alex, Dr 007,Prof DVD in Hanoi University of Technology, try to assemble questions to form a new scale.23.Their scale has become a widely used measured of population concentration in the air in contemporary investigation.24.They revised and built this scale on the base of EPS with fixed problems just discussed.25.They recognize that population level involves number of company in that area and some recent researches indicate that expulsion smoke channel of companies defecated too many poison substances.26.This new scale permits investigator can compute insalubrious and salubrious objects to environment.27.Thus, it helps researchers gain much more thoroughly information than fathoming in small sectors.28.The Scale also takes into consideration whether and population density in different regions.29.System of questions in the new scale is used in feature areas and provides more elaborate con***ions of region to clarify result.30.This new scale fixed some significant omissions from EPS. So it is used widely in research. And it is a normative form for factories must have when acting. Gửi lúc 05:09, 10/06/08
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    Trần Loan IELTS 26 2nd 9/6 - 15/6Topic ?o Neighbourhood?We must talk about our family. How many do families live in the knowledge and the solidarity? We don?Tt think of our family but families live around us. We can invite the entire world in our home by television but we don?Tt want to invite neighbourhoods, who live near our home, in home to talk dearly. We don?Tt have enough time of our close relatives but we spend much time to see strangers on television. Even in our family, we don?Tt have enough time for us to see close relatives with smiles. How do we have solidarity and happiness in those families? This bad event is strange attitude that often happen in the modern life.Somebody neglects relatives in family after wedding day. It isn?Tt real life. So why do we face difficulties and why do we feel lonely? We must understand difficulties by natural and we don?Tt have any way to escape them. And there are difficulties by result of human?Ts illusion. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào... Gửi lúc 09:13, 10/06/08
    quylun87I''m a daLABer babyThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 21:16, 12/09/07Hiện có 935 Đã được 8 người bình chọn (4.25) ID bài viết: 12892578

    Entry for June 10, 2008 Nguyen Viet Ngoc Tu TOEFL 5_cnExamining market U should use less subject of Gerund.Examining market is a significant part of marketing which is a scientific subject that any economical students must study, including 2 contents: examining market and building market strategies. Examining market means that examine both outer environment factors of business as well as inner environment factors. The correlation between 2 types of environment factors is closely because they have impact each other. First, outer factors that have indirect impact on business are factors of population, economics, politics, laws, culture, society, industrial market, and natural con***ions... Because businessmen can''''t change the impact of those factors, so they must self-value those to find out strong points and weak points as well in order to avoid haplessness and make the most of opportunities. Second, inner factors that have direct impact on business are the competition of opponents (which take part in sharing market), capability of own business (include asset, human power,...), and customers (examining major subject). In order to examine these factors, researchers designed tables that include questions, which they want to ask respondents about the domains of subjects. Questions are usually in a form of choosing that respondents can only tick an answer in 4 selections (A, B, C, D) or tick False/True for each question. Each one is assigned a certain score that then is totaled with score of other answers. The finally score is used to value examining result. Beside, researchers can add some opening questions at the bottom of the page where permit respondents write in personally ideas, however, they can be not asked to answer if they don''''t want. Adding takes into account the liberation of boring questions. Thereby, researchers gain much more insight into market factors that they care. In different markets, examining tables is revised and built in a variety of ways to fit in with market con***ions. So, examining is carried out in a certain time period before deciding whether trade or not. Shady is here
    G morning, teacher. This is my writing for writing task 1 - test 3 - book 1 - page 72. I''''m La Trang.
    The habit of consuming fast foods in Britain is shown in the charts below. The first chart reveals the amount of money per week spent on them. And the trend in this consumption is described by the graph.
    According to the column chart, the expending habit is separated from personal income. There fore, hamburgers are the most favourite fast foods for high and average income. Pizza, cost appropriately half of hamburgers in the high group, is the second popular fast foods for them. However, it seems considerable in comparison with the others for which pizza is the less favourite. As oppose to this behavior, fish and chips on which the average spend most money as compared with other groups, are most general in the low as compared with another past foods. But the account of money they spent on them is only equivalent to the high group one.
    The graph shows that the consumption of fast foods changed significantly from 1970 to 1990. In 1970, position of pizza was the lowest. The position of hamburgers is higher but the grammes of them were equivalent 30% of fish and chips. However, the grammes of hamburgers had grown strongly while this number of fish and chips decreased steadily. They were equal in about 1982. Then hamburgers were at the highest position and tend to go up. Although pizza increased more slowly, its graph had crossed the graph of fish and chips in about 1988 and obtained the 2nd position in 1990.
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    Lê Vân _ Ielts 47 Ngày nào e cũng viết nhưng ko thể 0nl để gửi bài cho thầy đc (lí do như e đã trình bày) Tính tổng tất cả e nợ thầy 8 ngày, hôm nay e mứoi type đc 50 câu = 5 ngày thôy, mai e send tiếp 30 câu nợ và bài ngày mai Thầy sửa giúp e ạ
    In heavy debts, you get less quality of writing.You should compare the writing with to others?T.
    1. The life has not been as simple as had been hope. 2. Titanic ?" the legendary ship ?" was sinking back into the sea, after an awful accident. 3. In her imagination, taxiway is the place in which extremely hazardous. 4. In a deep and dark **** of this mountain, a giant monster is here to stay. 5. I have never seen anybody could build a strong house without strong foundations. 6. Seabed always is the mysterious and full attraction spot. 7. Civil engineers are determined to take legal proceeding against their boss because he punished them without any reason. 8. This work is understandable through a two-stage sequence by everyone. 9. She has a secret drawer to store every important paper. 10. They saw the movie, called ?oswapping game in love?, together on last Sunday. 11. He didn?Tt face any encounter in his road *****ccessfulness. 12. In new computer, they were obliged to assure that don?Tt use unfamiliar dialect in meeting. 13. He always promises with his girlfriend, that never make their love be faded. 14. Incredibly that she abandoned her rich boyfriend just to love another chic guy. 15. When she was coming, the room was probably ablazed, maybe she born to shine. 16. None of the candidates really qualify for this post, causing government has to give up the choosing meeting. 17. She had a giant pressure in both her job and her family. 18. Many things made by JoPob ConcressCongress were being denied. 19. Lohat dislikes living with her conservative husband, although he?Ts a rich man. 20. The gold rings making process had much progress since they use ABC in manufacturing. 21. Nobody can make a define definintion that this bowl is a valuable antique. 22. Most of cruel people never believe that ?odiamond cut diamond?. 23. Some ?obig fish? of Monaco are going to enlarge their area operation. 24. He found his little lover is a dangerous member of a black gang. 25. The old man standing near red chair isn?Tt ???26. Sometimes, I think that in the day no far, I?Tll take part in the Automobile industry. 27. He is as cruel as a fox, but he doesn?Tt suck their blood, he sucks their soul. 28. She ?~s a special with many ambitions to pain Pink on everyone ?Ts life. 29. He doesn?Tt want to devote, but he did for her. 30. Somebody is whistling in the dark, it makes a ghastly scene in her amazing. 31. He has to engage with the girl, who not had his heart. 32. When the tide?Ts coming, all of theme will die. 33. The entourage is encouraging the little princess within some candies. 34. Don?Tt pose nose into someone?Ts business if they don?Tt so close to you. 35. When the monster was reborn, the worse disaster in the world?Ts history will happen. 36. He ?~s the brutal husband who hit his wife in her face by a kettle. 37. If the missing is a pencil and you are the sharpener, I will love you, But you aren?Tt. 38. He talks with everybody about her biography, which isn?Tt very nice, on purpose. 39. In the context of ?omoney ?Ts social?, many young girls sold their body to have some money. 40. This application form was endorsed at a restaurant ?~s dinning-table by the high manager. 41. Teaching method remains as the backbone of the Education. 42. Nobody enables him to destroy environment by his factory?Ts smoke. 43. While lifestyle factors still remain important, almost people chose private living style. 44. It?Ts meaning they always just insist on benefit of themselves. 45. The urbanization with a break neck speed made no little of people feel there are something is changing, and not as safe as before. 46. Nicotine is a habit-forming dope, but sometimes we have to use it to relieve pain. 47. In 197x, Vietnamese Farmers had always worked hard in poor working con***ion. 48. She took absence from her jobs, simply because she can?Tt continue stand her boss. 49. He secretly drug-trafficker in many years without anyone?Ts knowledge. 50. Regardless public opinion, he still asks for her hand. Gửi lúc 18:27, 10/06/08
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    I''''m Hien, 2st June_Toefl IBT_5cn.Chuc thay giao buoi toi vui ve. 11. The Social Readjustment Rating Scale is used to measure life change as form of stress.12. The survey has shown that neurotic individuals have a tendency to be more vulnerable to many kinds of physical illness and many types of psychological problems as well.13. In the light of the events broadcasted on TV last week, a numbers of researchers have attempted to develop improved versions of the new social Readjustment Rating Scale developed by the two English scientists.14. The researchers took part in the Life Experiences Survey, asked respondents to indicate how stress had impact on them.15. Researchers computed positive change, negative change, and total change scores in order to gain much more insight in how stress had impact on respondents.16. By thinking carefully about many relevant events, his wife gains much more insight in her husband?Ts personality.17. The survey assembled by a number of famous researchers took into consideration many facets of stress.18.The witness provided many elaborate descriptions of the criminal that help to decrease ambiguity in the case.19. The statements of the witness led him to be inconsistent to what he said before.20. The inadequate descriptions of many relevant events made the items more ambiguous. Gửi lúc 18:36, 10/06/08
    eyaayeThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 23:45, 20/03/08Hiện có 382 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12898275

    Trần Loan IELTS 263rd 9/6-15/61. The equity social policies hold different meanings for different people classes, but then they also help economy maintain healthy development.2. Government encourages everyone to contribute to the stock market in order to attract unused money in economy and increase country?Ts gross income.3. Social was greatly displeased at some preschool teachers conducts when they mistreated pitiable children.4. If chairman kind with employees, he always has faithful to his company of employees.5. Education is the key to open hopes and development chances for everybody, whom can?Tt differentiate them from a developed country or a developing country.6. The modern parents often let their children ride for everyday and don?Tt care what happens when their issues stay at home without adults7. Some Vietnamese students sit in class as parrots and they don?Tt know how to say their say.8. Some people are just ships that pass in the night, their love start developing and these call ?olove at fist sight?9. Murder, after left that house, put a slipped knife into his pocket when the guy saw some polices.10. The hot weather and the noisy place took a great deal out of many people in the city last week. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào... Gửi lúc 22:16, 10/06/08
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    Trần Loan IELTS 264th 9/6-15/6Topic ?o habits and health?Many people often say ?oI isn?Tt in habit of having breakfast?, ?o I isn?Tt in the habit of sleeping in midday?, ? Surely, they don?Tt know that is bad habits. According to a medical scientist, habit is the second constitution, it means that human want to have constitution, they need to have healthy habits.Many people often eat fast, walk slowly, talk too much, while we need eat slowly and chew carefully. Many people have preconception ?owe shouldn?Tt drink while we eat?. This is basic wrong in nutrition. We should drink a cup of cold water, fresh milk without sugar, beer or red wine. Try to eat timely everyday. The family meal need have to appear of members because this is moment to improve relationship between everybody.Early, people?Ts acts are compelling. If they are repetitive, they become habits and fall in line with our nature, even we don?Tt think about them. Successful creating healthy habits help people to save energy and protect healthy effectively. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào... Gửi lúc 22:17, 10/06/08
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    Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương-ielts26-10/06:1.A person, having a single career, is defined as he or she has specific skill or the knowledge on only one field, on that he or she bases to earn money.2.Having only a profession will make people spend all their time to develop their skills that can help them to be one of the best or to reach con***ions of higher positions.3.Nowadays, in the economy developing with a breakneck pace, despite of what education level you have or what position you are now in, you have to study and work hard or will be left behind.4.The higher and stricter requirements of recruitments, set up by the selection companies, are to reject any unable candidates right at the beginning and indirectly force the others to train themselves to be exceptional candidate.5.In several employers?T opinions, employees, being the multi-careers people, usually do not pay much attention to their jobs and will be sacked.6.While prices of everything are raisingrising rapidly and causing life to become harder, having more than one way of earning money may be a good chance to live today.7.In Western society today, perhaps cause of stressful jobs, there are not-very-low rate of people who like to work at two or more places on a same day in order to get back their balances of life.8.On the theory, a person, having two works, has to separate himself to finish all his jobs so that he will find difficult to be good at all fields.9.It is no exciting to be a multi-careers persons because little of them, having two careers, success in both their two fields.10.To not only have financial success but also be professional worker, you?Td better choose only one field of life on that you both do business and study. Gửi lúc 23:24, 10/06/08
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    June 10Em viet ma tu thay no lung cung qua'''', nhung cung k biet lam the nao hon. hic hic An interesting lessonWe were about to gather up our things and come back to our car then a man appeared. He looked really fret and asked angrily us if we know or not this is private land. He showed at poster: must be not camp. Although our daddy apologized he still seems to be not satisfied and asked name and address. Through stretch of road we were so ugly that could not speak any more. This not interesting thing damaged a wonderful day in countryside. Through rest of days in week we wondered then what would happen. Next Sunday we stayed at home though weather was fine. About middle afternoon, a luxury car stopped before our house. We were surprise when saw some people were preparing to camp in our small garden. Our daddy was angry and go out to ask what they intend to do. You can image his surprise when he recognizes that it was the man who took our address last week. Both of them were laugh and my daddy welcomed the strength guests into house. Rear time we became close friends but we were taught a lesson that we never forget. Gửi lúc 23:45, 10/06/08
    E la Hoai c38 gui 10 cau hum nay a.
    1.Unhealthy eating habits cause to create risk of disease.
    2. People, who work in office, lack of fitness and big mind.
    3.My boss enables me to go to company late because I am taking care of little child.
    4. Young is period well-being in our life. Because we have heath and love.
    5.The fundamental con***ions of study English are hard work and practice everyday.
    6. You can create of health by gym and health eating habits.
    7.Vitamin have favourable health but if you use more vitamin it will to be harmful health .
    8.We can promote health if we maintain health behaviours and lifestyles.
    9.Goverment has endorsed some policy to create health for their citizens, who live in pollution environment.
    10. Poor working con***ions cause staffs to stick on or leave from company.
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    1. Thầy không sửa bài cho bất cứ ai, trừ trong TOPIC này.
    2. Những ai không đăng đủ bài, và khi kiểm tra cuối kỳ có học lực yếu sẽ bị chuyển sang lớp thấp hơn hoặc bị cho nghỉ học.
    3. Hiệu quả của việc viết đều đặn là rõ ràng, mặc dù xuất phát điểm của nhiều người như Mr. Cuongphama chưa được sau A, những buổi đầu còn tưởng không tham dự được, thì đến nay các bạn có thể đọc bài viết của Mr Cuong để tự xem xét lại quá trình phát triển của mình.
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    Em nop bai cung mong duoc sua nhung chi la HI VONG thoi. Vi rat nhieu nguoi nop va so luong bai cung nhieu nua; chua ke thay lai han hep thoi gian. The ma thay` lam that. Thank you so much! Thay co len!(co kien nhan sua bai)
  9. beoackhip

    beoackhip Thành viên mới

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    Hi, teacher.I am Beo con_3st June _Toefl IBT-5cn
    21. The possible contaminating effects of the studentsõ?Ts laziness may obscure the meaning of learning English.
    22. The Respondentsõ?Ts self-reports permit the computation of many relevant events which helps researchers gain much more insight into how accurate their assumption is.
    23. Many significant omissions from old versions have been added to form a new version widely-used.
    24. The new book is more easily used because there is an extra section tailored to comment just for contemporary readers.
    25. We now have ample evidence that neurotic patients have a tendency to recall more sadness and despair than others.
    26. The assumption constituting the correlation between the old strategy and the improved one seemed to be inaccurate and ambigous.
    27. It is prudent to view the accident occurred last night as a political matter rather than a mere accident.
    28. Stress of hard working and joblessness are considered to generate suicide frequently happened in Japan- the 2st big country on economy in the world.
    29. My cousinõ?Ts courageous action saving the babyõ?Ts life merited praise.
    30.There are a variety of ways to decrease air population such as planting trees, cleaning the streets,õ?Ư
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    I''''m Nguyễn Việt Cương-Ielts26-this''''s my writing task of C1T1W1: (11/06)
    Results of an adult education?Ts survey are described in the charts below. The study decision?Ts causes are listed in the bar chart and the opinions of study fees sharing are drawn in the pie chart.
    From the bar chart, you can see that meeting people was the lowest reason with the rate of only 9 percents. Meanwhile, 40 percents of total answers, about interesting in subject, were the most frequent reason to study among adults. With only 2 percents lower than the top, gaining qualification was the second reason for adults to decide to have more education. Having the same level around 20 to 22 percents was three different tends of thinking. They were that finding out helpful for current job, improving prospects of promotion and learning enjoyment. And the last reason, reaching ability of changing jobs, was only 3 percents higher than the lowest one.
    Next in the pie chart, it was clear that only two fifth of total education costs were thought to be paid by individual. And the other part should be shared successively 25 percents to taxpayer and 35 percents to employer.
    Được cuongpharma sửa chữa / chuyển vào 13:58 ngày 11/06/2008
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