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    Em la thuy duong, lop ielts 58
    Writing: In some country young people are encouraged to work or travel a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
    Nowadays, in some developing country, the ways of education are different from Vietnamâ?Ts, especially the working or traveling encouragement a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. However, It helps bring not only the advantages but also the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
    The advantages are shown that the experience gets after a working or traveling year. Both working and traveling also bring the society experience. As you work a job, you have to face with not only the workingâ?Ts difficulty itself but also the bossâ?T demand. It is the lifestyle as well as behavior and ways of working. Furthermore, it makes people to grow up more quickly. Imagine that if you only study at the high school and participate in the university immediately, your knowledge will be on the theory. This is not good for the students who will become a mainstay of country in the future. In ad***ion, working lets you achieve the practical experience which you can use for your theory in the future course. At that time, your studying â?~s result will be high although you donâ?Tt spend much time. And a small practice is simple that you will earn some money *****pport the family and yourself. For that reason, I believe that anybody can also see the way of educationâ?Ts advantages, yet what about the disadvantages?
    It is said that the disadvantages are less than the advantage but it still influence on the young people more or less. For example, besides achieving the good experience, you can be affected by the bad action and people. Because of your youth, you may not react against the social evils and sometimes, you gradually become a bad man you donâ?Tt realize. Moreover, the young people are able to be injured to both the body and the mind.
    In summary, anything also has both the advantages and disadvantages. Thereby, before doing something, let consider carefully.
  2. namj58

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    Em la Long Nam, lop ielts 58
    Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
    To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
    Over several decades, crime rate related to violence has tent to increase in many societies and robbed a number of lives simply and regrettably. To prevent this terrible phenomenon, authorities have implemented serious solutions, of which death penalty death penalty was the most controversial. In my view, they should reconsider the actual effectiveness of this punishment and try to find a better direction.
    When performing the act, lawmakers just probably aimed to prevent the violence repetitions in other subjects rather than punish the crime committer or give them guilty. The capital punishment may date back to the ancient times, according to the principal of â?~reason - resultâ?T though the degree of crime has changed considerably. By this way people who intend to harm others would realize the border between violence and killing due to their fear of death penalty. However, the fact did not support the theory when the violent activities are rising rapidly in a large scale as if the law does not exist. One might blame to the bad social con***ions such as lacking education and poverty where criminal atmosphere may discharge at any time. So patently, capital punishment can hardly solve this serious situation, it just displayed authoritiesâ?T irresponsibility. No matter cruel crime people committed, they still are human beings who have gone wrong.
    In many developed countries, especially in European region, death penalty has been abolished for several decades. It is not a random phenomenon when their quality of life is excellent. This can be look upon as models by the proper social con***ions such as good public care and fully education would be the key for decreasing violent crime without capital punishment. Although in some special cases this law remained a certain effect to secure our life. But it should be phased out eventually for a better future.
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    Em la Long Nam, lop ielts 58
    In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
    It is difficult to say whether children should participate in work for payment because it depends on each specific situation. Many children may gain valuable experiences when doing some part time jobs which are relatively simple and safety. But others could encounter physical and mental problems due to engaging in bad working con***ions.
    There is no doubt that a number of children became more mature after taking suitable works during their vacations or even school years providing if it could not much affect to their learning process. In the working environment, children may develop their social skills as some jobs require good contact with customers. Practicing in gift shop or supermarket would give them those opportunities. Besides, they can learn to understand responsibility attitude which is detracted when staying at home. From these points, children would advance in thought and behaviors as well as experiencing more interesting lives.
    On the other hands, there have been alarming facts that children in many parts in the world are exploited cruelly by working in hazardous and heavy con***ions. A lot of cold-hearted bosses hired the future civilians for high profit. They knew that payment for children is much cheaper than adults and children tend to be tricked by attracting terms. Thereby children are easily thrown into workshops and factories, doing dangerous works without insurance or safety assistance. It could be the main reasons for critical public opinion on this issue.
    In my view, children should not be banned to engage in some type of paid work but authorities also need *****pervise working con***ions applying to those vulnerable, or give strict punishment for who intend to use children illegally. In ad***ion, parents and schools should equip their children fully information and skills to ensure that they can protect themselves effectively in the face of potential risk involving with their work.
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    Em la Thuy Duong, lop ielts 58
    Writing task 2: University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disdegree?
    Itâ?Ts extremely perfect if university can accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. There are many advantages in the ways of education, especially in the educated university.
    Everybody also believes that if there is the balance between male and female in a class, it will bring a big benefit for the students. Specifically, it is easy to divide student into the group which will have both the boys and girls. The group works more effective the ones only having male or female. In ad***ion, the balance will help bring a good studied environment , it allow the students to compete between the girls and the boys. It makes them to be aware of the equalitarian society. Also, not only the competition but also the assistance emerges in the class. For that reason, the studied results are improved patently. For example, the class has the same number of male and female, the students will know how to work and support together as an exercise is delivered to achieve the best result.
    Moreover, this brings many benefits for not only the students but also the teachers. Firstly, the teachers can deliver the subject easily for each group to carry out the tutorials while they donâ?Tt have to be interested in the unfairness among the groups. Secondly, the equality allows the teachers to manage all the students more simple. Given that there is only boy in every subject, it is difficult to teach and manage the intelligent and mischievous boys. Finally, the best advantage, all lectures always expect, is the good studentsâ?T awareness although they are not so hard.
    However, not that all university can perform the way of education. The fact shows that the difference between male and female is developing more and more apparently not only in Vietnam but also all over the world. Therefore, if university accepts equal numbers male and female intentionally, there will be a big unfairness in the society. So, for that fact reason, the equality is difficult to become a reality in spite of having many benefits.
    In conclusion, because of the fact, university shouldnâ?Tt accept equal male and female in every subject in my opinion. Nevertheless, if having suitable con***ions and going through the unfairness fact of society, the best way is the equal performance in university.
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    Translation 1:
    Selecting Russia as the focused market of aquaculture exporting
    On March 24th, the Ministry of Agriculture and Rural Development held the cat fish exporting conference to Russia market. At the conference, Mr. Luong Le Phuong- Deputy minister of this ministry-said that the Ministry make decision of selecting Russia as the focused market to export aquaculture products. The Ministry also established the Management Board of cat fish exporting to Russia market. This Board represents for the association of enterprises of cat fish processing and exporting in Viet Nam to negotiate with the Russia partner to reach the agreement on quantity, quality of cat fish and frozen file cat fish. It aims to restrict price dumping competition between exporting enterprises, making quality poor and uncontrolled.
    After running successfully the management model to Russia market, the Ministry of Agriculture and Rural Development will extend the exporting management to selected markets following such as: America, North Africa-Middle East, Latin America, and EU.
    Over a long time of neglect and experience from an intensive bilateral negotiation, Russia enterprises agreed to re-import these products from VN. A first contract, worthing 7,000 tons of cat fish, will be signed in next few days, of which including 5,000 tons of common fish and 2,000 tons of packaged fish.
    Translation 2:
    The Prime Minister ***************: The important starting point for the industry of oil refining and chemical in VN
    In the evening of February 2nd, at the reservoir of oil at Dung Quat oil refining factory (Binh Son district, Quang Ngai Province), the Prime Minister *************** and plenty of leaders from the Communist Party, the Government, central ministries and sectors, provinces attended, cut ribbon of inauguration, witnessed the first products, made from the factory, launched into market.
    By this chance, the general secretary of the Communist Party, Mr Nong Duc Manh, sent a flower basket to congratulate.
    As plan for 2009, the factoryâ?Ts capacity is gradually increased to reach 100% of the designed capacity at the early of August 2009 and the factory is handed over in October 2009. Running with 100% of the designed capacity, it can produce each month nearly 150,000 tons of petrol, 240,000 tons of oil, 23,000 tons of LPG, and other products such as: over 8,000 tons of Propylene, about 30,000 tons of Jet-A1 plane petrol, about 25,000 tons of FO petrol. As schedule for 2009, it will produce about 2.6 million of tons of products in various types.
    With building and putting together in parallel at the construction site, the investor recruited and trained more than 1000 labors, operating machines. Besides, the preparing for production activity, pilot, receiving and operation of the factory were promoted. From May 2008 to present, the investor (Petrovietnam) imported 1500 tons of LPG, over 50,000 ton of diesel oil, and over 160,000 tons of Bach Ho rough oil, serving for testing run and operation of the factory. With the agreement of the Prime Minister, Petrovietnam set up Bim Son oil refining chemical one-member limited company. It is responsible for receiving, management, operation and business of Dung Quat factory effectively.
    At the inauguration, Mr. *************** praised efforts of thousands of local and foreign experts, engineers, who work hardly all day. He also acknowledged the great contribution from local residents in Binh Son district, transferring their land for more space to build this factory. In ad***ion, he assigned Petrovietnam and Quang Ngai province to take responsibility of taking care residentsâ?T life both physic and spirit fields, solve employment issue for them to stabilize quickly their life at the new settlement. He addressed â?It was a factory with modern technology, itâ?Ts invested, managed, and operated by Petrovietnam; and it marked an important starting point for the industry of oil refining and chemical in Viet Namâ?
    After over 10 waiting years, Dung Quat factory has run. The investment for it is more than $ 2.5 billions, its processing capacity reaches to 6.5 tons of rough oil per year, meeting 30% of the oil using need in Viet Nam.
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    Lớp IELTS58, 26 phân tích tiếp cấu trúc 2 bài Writing đạt 8.0 band score.
    Bài 1.

    Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
    Every four years, the whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud of them. These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international tensions in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to control the world?s economy and other governments were fighting over land.
    The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes, when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete pacifically and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events have called the world?s attention to the terrible consequences of wars; thus some leaders have tried to accept agreements to end their dispute and live peacefully.
    Similarly, international sporting events show benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war. For example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger, crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However, when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all their problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with the national colors, use wear the Brazilian team shirt and buy national flags. Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbors together and even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.
    In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as History has shown.
    This is a great essay, the ideas, language, structure of paragraphs and sentences, grammar show high level of English. In my opinion it is Band 8. Keep up the good work.
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    Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
    Today?Ts world has been divided into developing and industrialised countrieswhich the main difference between them is the amount of money that governments apply in important sectors such as education, health and commerce. Most of the poorer nations are buried in debts as a result of their unbalanced finances which are reflect in a failed health care, an unstructured education system and a weak international trade. This vicious cycle will continue indefinitely unless wealthier nations show interest in minimizing the worldwide economic differences, as well as taking more responsibility for assisting unfortunate countries.
    Most of the African countries live in sub-human con***ions because of the extreme poverty, upheaval, hunger, disease, unemployment, lack of education and both inexperienced and corrupt administrations. The devastating consequences of the AIDS epidemic in those countries could improve if the infected populations receive free drugs to control the disease, have access to health professionals and get information on how to prevent its spread. But this can only be achieved through international help programs in which leaders of the world?Ts richest countries donate medicine and also send doctors and nurses to treat and educate those in need.
    Moreover, most of the poor countries rely on selling agricultural products and raw material to rich nations and buying industrialized products from them resulting in a huge financial deficit. Consequently,
    they borrow a significant amount of money from the World Bank to try to improve their broken economies, but sometimes the money disappears with no significant changes and they cannot even pay the interest to the bank. Regarding this issue, last year the G8, which is comprised of leaders of the eight richest nations, decided to forgive billions of dollars worth of debt owed by the world?s poorest nations. In ad***ion, they developed adequate loan programs to financially assist those countries.
    In conclusion, leaders of the industrialised countries play an indispensable role in assisting developing nations deal with essential areas such as health, education and trade. Also, their aid is the key to breaking the vicious cycle, which results in poverty and death.
    This is an amazing essay, looks like Band 8 to me, nothing to improve here.

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    Em Le lơp ielts 38f68
    1. Some opinions on applying information and teachers?T blog in teaching
    1. Some main point on Information Technology in schools and teaching
    Computers, abundance software have become multi-purpose tools applying in fields, researching, productions and lives. However, if functions of computer are probably measurable, launching of the Global network (Internet) are taking huge effect and not measurable. Therefore, nowadays we heard term Information Communicate Technology (ICT) instead Information Technology (IT)
    An Internet computer not only helps us to read electronic newspaper, send email, but also is a channel to link us with world. We can access human knowledge, make acquaint with all together or joint in organizations far from a radiate of the earth. Global network virtually has created a new world including e-learning, game online, forum, social network and electric citizen (blogger)?
    In forums and social networks, everybody probably exchange, share together digital resources and living and working experiences. People can share films, songs, writings and social scientific knowledge, personal express on certain issue? In education field, children?T parents over the country can exchange knowledge and experience about caring their children; teachers can share documentation pictures and films, curriculums and lesson plans all together to build a huge resource to serve for personal teaching. Students can exchange through knowledge on learning and examinations.
    1.1 Some form using Information Technology in teaching
    At present, on the world, it can be clearly distinguish two kind of using IT in teaching and learning, they are Computer Base Training (shortly call as CBT) and e-learning (computer base learning). Including:
    - CBT is method that teacher use computer in class, attaching school equipments as cine-projector (or large screen) and multimedia equipments *****pport transform knowledge to students, and promote strength of computer software such as picture, lively sound, film and picture?Ts documentation, interacting between people and machines.
    - E-learning is method that students use computer to learn themselves curriculums written by their teachers, and watch film about section of their teachers, and directly exchange online with their teachers through Internet. The special point of E-learning method is setting students in centre, students proactive themselves in their learning process, teacher only support the students.
    Therefore, it can see that CBT and e-learning are two method applying ICT on teaching and learning being essence different.
    2. Choosing Russian, the focus market of aquaculture export
    On March 24, The Ministry of Agriculture and Rural development held the cat fish e xport conference to The Russian Market. At the Conference, the deputy Ministry of Agriculture and Rural development, Mr. Luong Le Phuong said, the Ministry has decided to select Russian is focus market exporting aquaculture. The Ministry set up the export cat fish Management to the Russian Market representative Vietnamese enterprise association process export cat fish negotiate to agree with the Russian counter part about production, quality and price of production from cat fish and frozen file cat fish. Its targets include restricting price dumping competition between dominate enterprises making the uncontrollable quality poor.
    After applying the management model in the Russian market, the Ministry of Agriculture and Rural development will expand in application export managements on selected market following such as United State, North Africa ?" Middle East, Latin America and European.
    Even over a long time of neglect and experiencing intense bilateral negotiation, Russian companies agreed to allow Vietnamese production exporting to Russian. The first contract worth?Ts 7,000 tons will be sign in the next few days including 5,000 tons common fish and 2,000 tons packed fish.
    3. Prime Minister ***************: The important starting point for oil chemical
    In the evening February 22, at oil production container of Dung Quat Refining factory (Binh Son dis., Quang Ngai) The Prime Minister and the Party and State leaders and Ministry centre leader attended and province and city in nation wide cut ribbon of inauguration, saw the first kind of production launched to market.
    On the occasion of inauguration, General Secretary of the Vietnamese Communist Nong Duc Manh sent a flower basket to congratulate.
    According to the plan in 2009, the factory will be operated and promote capacity to reach 100% scheme capacity.
    In the plan 2009, the factory will be operated to gradually improve capacity reaching 100% scheme one on August, 2009 and the factory will be handed over on November, 2009. At the 100% scheme capacity, each month the factory will produce about 150,000 tons petrol, 240,000 tons diesel, 23,000 tons LPG and other product such as propylene (over 8,000 tons) airplane petrol ?" Jet A1 (about 30,000 tons), and FO oil (about 25,000 tons). In the expectation 2009, the Dung Quat refining factory will produce about 2.6 millions tons product of oil.
    Along with building and putting together in the roadwork, at that time, the investor also carried out engaging and training just over 1,000 operating workers. It also promotes the preparation for the refining factory?Ts producing, test running, receiving and operating management. From May 2008 to now, the investor (Vietnam National oil and gas Group) imported 1,500 tons LPG, over 50,000 tons diesel, and over 160,000 tons Bach Ho crude oil *****pport the test running, operating the factory. According to Prime Minister?Ts permission, the Group established Binh Son refining oil Company Limited. The company was entrusted effectively receiving, managing, operating and business for Dung Quat refining factory.
    At the meeting, Prime Minister commended thousands of domestic and foreign authorities, engineers?T obstacle overcoming. They have worked with all their might day and night, storm, flood, and unfavorable weather con***ions to people have a modern refining oil factory. The Prime Minister has also acknowledged Binh Son citizen?Ts huge contributions because they conceded their land to build the factory. Besides he directed Vietnam National Oil and Gas Group and the leaders of Quang Ngai province have to look after the people?Ts living con***ions, make employment to people have better living con***ions at the resettling place. He also emphasized: ?oThis is a modern technology factory that Vietnam invested itself, has managed and operated; and it is an important beginning for Vietnam refining oil industry. It has multiform significations such as policy, economy, social culture, and defense security during the national industrialize and modernize process, and it has also showed a correct investing decision of The Party and Government.?
    Therefore, after over 10 years waiting, The Dung Quat refining oil factory started operating and business. The factory has total invested capital is over US $2.5 billions, processing capacity is 6.5 million tons crude oil per year, and it satisfy just about 30% demand for consuming petroleum nationwide.

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