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You are right, I can replace it with the new one like this:
"Children always trend to behave like their parents Whose they regard as the heroes without awareness of their parents'' shortcomings"
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Bluesky
Được blueskyk7418 sửa chữa / chuyển vào 18:38 ngày 19/04/2006

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Human Nature
According to Pierre Jouventin, there is no longer frontier between men and animals. Animals own themselves human nature like the capacity of memories. There is only a difference by degree and not by nature.
Indeed, Pascal Picq and Yves Coppens proved that a large part of human nature was common to the primates, sharing food and self-awareness for example.
Besides, the philosopher Dominique Lestel believes that culture exists at the very beginning of animal?Ts life. For example, Ivory Coats?T chimpanzees use stone hammers to crush the walnuts, which is required many years of training. Therefore, animals are able to invent by training.
That is why, Mr.Lestel, unlike the ethnologists?T thought, maintains the animal?Ts subjectivity

Human Nature
According to Pierre Jouventin, there is no longer a biological boundary between men and animals. Animals do possess some human characteristics such as capability of memorizing. The difference between the two is by only degree, not by nature, Jouventin said.
Indeed, Pascal Picq and Yves Coppens proved that a large part of human characteristics are common to the primates like food sharing and self-awareness.
Besides, the philosopher Dominique Lestel believes that culture exists at the very beginning of animalâ?Ts life. For example, Ivory Coatsâ?T chimpanzees use stone hammers to crush walnuts, which requires many years of training. Therefore animals are able to invent things if provided adequate training. That''s why Mr.Lestel, unlike other ethnologists, maintains a subjectivity attitude toward the animal kingdom.

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Benefits and problems of globalisation
The rapid and huge increase in the amount of economic activities taking place all over the world had an enormous impact on the workers and their communities. And globalisation is hot problem in debate .
In its simplest sense, globalisation can be defined as increasing global interdependence. Beside, despite the benefits of global process, the economic interdependence of countries have downsides. Admittedly, each one side has own merits.
To a start, it?Ts hard to reject the benefits of globalisation bringing to international economy.The international economy has grown faster than ever seen. The development rates in developing countries rapidly rise, such as India, China, Singapore just give a name.
Globalisation could eliminate the barrier of economy , by increasing the direct investment in developing country, especially foreign investment sources. Furthermore, the development of economy could not only improve living standards ,but also eliminate poverty. It is a huge change in many aspects, society, culture and humans. Morever, globalisation meaning the trade liberisation could connect many countries in the world in one prospering environment.
On the other hand, globalisation could make some countries become the influent economy. It?Ts so-called new form of colonialism by economy. The economy of poorer countries are put under control of the richer ones through the investment sources or funding.
Besides, the interdependence of economy affect some social aspects, tra***ional cultures are incorporated and are faded in. For example, Oriental countries recently are influent by Occidental Civil, and the tra***ional cultures existed for a long time ago are destroying .
Globalised competition can force the increasingly movement of people to richer countries , so-called ?~ brain-drain?T , when the qualified-professionals and high-educated are moved to the developed country to high salaries and a better living standards. This creates severe skilled labour shortages in developing countries.
In conclusion, globalisation is by no mean a new phenonmenon. It has been taken place through the world as the recorded history. This process is unstoppable, nonetheless, we can only put it under the control to balance between benefits and harm.
Được _Vit_Bup_ sửa chữa / chuyển vào 23:06 ngày 22/04/2006

The rapid and huge increase in the amount of economic activities taking place all over the world had an enormous impact on the workers and their communities. And globalization is hot problem in debate . The number of economic activities which have taken place rapidly and increasingly all over the world had enormous impact on the workers and their communities. Recently, globalization is one of hot problems in debate.
In its simplest sense, globalization can be defined as an increase of global interdependence<=not sure what do you mean here).Beside that, despite the benefits of global process, the economic interdependence of countries has downsides. Admittedly, each one side has own merits. (I cant understand what do you want to say in this paragraph)
To a start, it?Ts hard to reject It can?Tt be denied that the benefits of globalization bringing to international economy. The international economy has grown faster than ever seen. The development rates in developing countries rapidly rise, such as India, China, Singapore just give a name.
Globalisation could eliminate the barrier of economy , by increasing the direct investment in developing country, especially foreign investment sources. Furthermore, the development of economy could not only improve living standards ,but also eliminate poverty. It is a huge change in many aspects, society, culture and humans. Moreover, globalisation meaning the trade liberisation could connect many countries in the world in one prospering environment.
On the other hand, globalisation could make some countries become the influent economy. It?Ts so-called new form of colonialism by economy. The economy of poorer countries is put under control of the richer ones through the investment sources or funding.
Besides, the interdependence of economy affect some social aspects, tra***ional cultures are incorporated and are faded in. For example, Oriental countries recently are influent by Occidental Civil, and the tra***ional cultures existed for a long time ago are destroying .
Globalised competition can force the increasingly movement of people to richer countries , so-called ?~ brain-drain?T , when the qualified-professionals and high-educated are moved to the developed country to high salaries and a better living standards. This creates severe skilled labour shortages in developing countries.
In conclusion, globalisation is by no mean a new phenomenon. It has been taken place through the world as the recorded history. This process is unstoppable, nonetheless, we can only put it under the control to balance between benefits and harm.
Chữ đc highlight màu vàng là câu của bạn và chữ màu xanh và đc bold bên cạnh là phần mình sửa, mình nói thật là mình không thật sự hiểu ý của bạn nên phần còn lại mìnhchưa sửa hết đc, nếu bạn có bài bằng tiếng Việt hoặc bạn có thể nói qua cho mình biết để nắm ý chính của từng đoạn văn, mình sẽ sửa cho bạn.

Theo mình nghĩ nếu là essay thì bạn viết hơi dài một chút(not recommend)

Please give comment to my writing.!!!
Writing skill của mình còn hạn chế.Làm ơn giúp mình sửa 1 bài ''COURSE MOTIVATION'' này với bài mình đã check but still remaning errors.(Xin vote 5 sao)
Rất vui vì đã có những topic như vậy.Mong được cùng bạn vit chia sẻ những kinh nghiệm và học hỏi của các bậc tiền bối.
Every advanced student needs an acvanced education.From my idea,Saxion University is one of the best school for developing academic knowledge in Euroupe.I have a desire to appy for the core-course delivered by the Saxiong university to get a Master degree in Business Administration.
The Saxion University is known to be our school''s partnership for 10 years.As such,we have a good relation in education training,exchanging program and many students from the school of business studied here.Many of them returned to Vietnam and were employed at the foreign companies.I highly speak of the Deventer''s academic programme''s available.Applying for study in the Neitherland is to see a new way of working,way of thinking.It''s true to say that a new cultural and new civilization.
Academically,im in the last year in the school of business.I''ve been provided a variety of subjects,namely Business and economic laws,macro-micro economic,monetary,currency,tax,financial management,marketing mix,promotion,Business english and a wide range of informatic skills etc.
Personally,im a man of curiosity,self confidence,self motivation and self determination.I''ve set a specific plan for applying to Saxion University and further more if possible i''ll get a ph.D.So give me a chance and i''ll be one of your elite student.

Em chỉ check ngữ pháp thui, còn
EM thấy chưa thuyết phục về văn phong
bác định viết thư apply thì viết ấn tượng thêm chút đi
bác nhờ Thầy cô nào trẻ nhiêttịnh xem hộ xem sẽ có hiệu quả đấy

Hiện nay em đang fải viết 1 cái personal statement nhu kieu marketing ban than mình để làm hồ sơ qua UK học
Bác nào có kinh nghiệm chỉ bảo em zới
Thanks các bác trước ..he he

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