Lịch Kiểm tra đầu vào lớp IELTS mới (Tối thứ 2, Tối thứ 6) địa chỉ gần ĐHBKHN - Lớp Thầy Trần Ngọc V

Em cũng tên là Hương, em hơi đuối khoản viết lách này, hy vọng có công mài ắt có ngày nên kim, thầy sửa giúp em với.
1. For the first time or so of a new company?T business, attracted clients are important and hard work.
2. Businesses can?Tt do anything they can to make profit.
3. Although, at first, a company may sell at a loss to attract more clients.
4. It is a difficult to make decision about successful business strategy of company.
5. They have to discount, free service, good after-sales of service to make their old clients happy and attract more new clients.
6. Small firms have to compete with larger, prestigious firms in business environment
7. But with a company, which the only goal is profit the more is the better.
8. To maintain operations of the company, the managers have to renovate technology, increase productivity, improve service quality, etc.
9. The clients?T satisfaction is encouragement of company.
10. Increasing profit by minimizing cost and enlarge turnover of company.

21. The bank?Ts interest is being interacted by the increased Dollar?Ts price, and then leads to change the trend of investment such as: cash follow is shifting from stock market into bank.
22. There are many securities company has been bankrupt because of going down of stock market and the crisis of economy in the transition period.
23. The Vietnamese Government has been managed to control the index of inflation by surviving the stock market and adjusting financing & wage polices.
24.Nowadays, The Government take more care of the con***ion of working, especially the workers who work in foreign companies, whose always prospered by exploiting workers and holding them in the unsafe con***ion.
25. The Government presents minimal wage policy to improve the standard of living of workers who directly are being affected by escalated of pricing and high inflation in this period.
26. A workaholic businessman tries to use and manage his time in the right way, but the image always dusty and weird.
27. The National resource included the land resource and human resource.
28. The petition of firms to Government is : their expanding sizing has been meet an obstacle by high current land?Ts pricing and too large of living land, has make them stuck in hard payment and increasing bank?Ts debit.
29. The question of temporary unemployment is: people have to change their job for their lives that have to pay more bills with high cost and slippage in prices.
30. People have to manage their budget and try to find out the way to use it better and effective.
31. The administrative reform had helped to changing the way officers using their time packing.
32. Nowadays, people have a sense of making use time for their business and devote more for their careen target.
33. The Education reform is vital, which producing better human resource and changing the way people work.
34. Vietnamese education is facing many issues of teaching and the way of knowledge conveyance comes to life.
35. The old of education in Vietnam made the graduated student face to real tasks with much confusing, who had studied in academy and far-way the fact also.
36. In irony, the ricê?Ts selling price is creasing but the ricê?Ts buying price is standstill.
37. The fever of pricing of rice selling is ?ovirtual? escalated which made of speculation because we don?Tt lack of rice.
38. In America, the farmers get more income from rice crisis; they have not enough rice *****pply, indeed, Vietnamese farmers get nothing changes that see the escalated ricê?Ts pricing in the market with powerless.
39. The developing countries, even developed countries are facing the increased ricê?Ts price and increased beggars, unemployment also.
40. In historically, the process of transforming from developing to developed economy has to face a lot of economic& societal problems such as: high inflation, finance crisis, unemployment; class distinction ..., and administrative mechanism.
Huong-Vua cu chuoi.

Do khi đăng bài, một số phần sửa (đã delete trong Track changes) vẫn hiển thị, nên thầy gửi lại.VUACUCHUOI A workaholic economy1. In the market economy, an increased inflation leads to an escalated living cost.2. The crisis of stock market in Vietnam has taken a lot of people way from their workplaces, who are succumbed to temptation of new- found market.3. The working time and leisure time has been changing from post-war up to now since shifting the type of market as centralized economy into regulated market economy, for instance, we now spend 8 hours on working and more one day- off in weekend (Saturday) in Government offices system.4. In current, People have pushed to bad circumstances such as jobless and hard living by the escalated of pricing which is the consequence of Government?Ts weakness regulation.5. In the factories, employers try to compel their workers take more overtime and not even think about downsizing or expand sizing, to reach their purpose in the short run. 6. With long revolutionizing on working time, we seem got more days-off and holidays, but, the actual working time for one person who has to do for paying all of his bills, is increased much.7. People who have got high education or high position spend more time on working, in developed countries; for instance, they always work for more than one company as part-time job or hold more than one office.8. The employers usually think that they are talent than their underlings, and don?Tt appreciate their contribution because they always are the people, who has got much experiences and worked hard before promoting of the position.9.In current study, I?Tve read in Vnexpress online paper, reported that: the people who got high education will live longer than others because they could earn more money so that have more opportunities to enjoy high heath services.10. In Vietnam, the children are crazy about studying at schools and have to stand high pressure from their parents or so of passing test to entrance a college or a university.Huong women'''' smuggler xin gui bai cho Thay, Gửi lúc 16:21, 21/05/08
vuacuchuoiThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 14:01, 21/05/07Hiện có 44 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12719503

11. The plan of expanding Hanoi capital would create more jobs for young people, who come from countryside, are unemployment or underemployment.12. The underemployment in countryside could make use of their time on working in the big cities as posters, delivers, baby-sitters, charwoman ,..,ect.13. Some farmers who traveling by car, had hit in the idea on creating some trade villages in making souvenirs from natural materials, The souvenirs are exported to many countries such as: Europe market, America.14. In open market now, people have to work hard and spend less time on leisure because there are more opportunities business more problems to face.15. As soon as finishing work in the office, they quickly leave to other places to study or work again, so that they easily are struck in stress or living standstills.16. Job hunter is one of the new businesses now, it helps the employers?T loss of pressure on finding their candidates that pore over to change the job as their favorite or leave for more arable pasture.17. Indeed, there is not much professional company in that new-found pasture and we usually pay a lot of money for that service, Navigos Corporation, for instance, they help to find out the professional , managerial candidates with high cost around 500-1000$ per one.18. Foreign employers always compel their workers or their staff to take overtime working and they are professional in making the best of using labor?Ts power.19. More high salary more pressure and responsibilities we have to get.20. I reserve larger for working under good business climate.Huong-vuacuchuoi Gửi lúc 17:13, 21/05/08
Rive2Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 13:52, 04/11/05Hiện có 128 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12721769

21/5Chao Thay. Em la Le Tung. Em gui 10 cau nho Thay sua.1. Only a generation ago, cultural planners worried about the decreased tra***ional music, shrunk by the movements of international music.2. In the US, many musical artists, who play the guitar, the violin? are unemployed or under employed.3. When people have free time, they often enjoy some cultural types, such as tra***ional music or international music?4. Bookstores often abound with books which teach people to play musical instruments or to practice their voices for themselves.5. ?~Some types of international music, such as hip-hop? may have gained a certain amount of notorieties for its dirty images?T, observed many cultural planners.6. During World War II, music played a role as an anti-war tool, which gained a huge amount of incentives of developmental human beings. 7. Because of a special divine nature, some kinds of music compel people to lose senses and to kill themselves.8. Huge return of CDs-tapes production industry is an important factor in some developed countries.9. ?~The composers will have to pay a huge penalty for illegal music imitation?T, announced by the authority. 10. Young artists are willing to experiment with new music styles.Cam on Thay. Gửi lúc 22:35, 21/05/08
Rive2Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 13:52, 04/11/05Hiện có 128 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12725581

22/5Chao Thay. Em la Le Tung. Em nop tiep 10 cau:1. Drum, for instance, is one of the percussive musical instruments.2. The world musical superstars usually market their images on every means of communication, and all events of their private lives are followed closely by the paparazzi. 3. Most singers probably have a certain amount of fans, several of which could succumb to be mad love of their idols.4. Music seems date back to the times when people firstly used languages as communication equipment in working lives.5. For music, Vietnam may have lagged behind other South East Asia countries for several decades, proved by the fact that no Vietnamese song has appeared on the Asia MTV channel recently.6. Music, favored by audiences, may depend on the products of professorial composers.7. Many music CDs, produced by young and unpopular artists have been handed free to the customers as experimented samples.8. The quest for the reasons why international music becomes so popular all over the world has revealed many other related factors, such as: imported films of goods? 9. Indeed. America has pioneered a lot of international musical movements, such as: hit-hop, pop-rock, blues?10. Thanks to current musical technologies, the latest recording techniques could be able to fix the disadvantages in the voices of some singers. Cam on Thay. Gửi lúc 11:30, 22/05/08
lurangThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 15:03, 23/03/07Hiện có 755 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12727094

Em gửi nốt 10 câu của bài corpus.1. If you don?Tt love to do something, you can?Tt do it well.2. Although it seems dry and boring, you have to be studious.3. After a long time waiting for, they agree to record all their conversations.4. New idea has transformed the way corpus written.5. Youth always feel free to do anything they want.6. The power of strict law can prevent citizens from crimes/crime actions 7. The enquiry has been waited for a long time for an accurate answer.8. The thickness of the dictionary is 3 times than this tome. (nhân thể cho em hỏi: có cấu trúc nào thay thế để cụm ?othe thickness of? ko bị lặp? big/deep/dense could be used in some cases in stead of thick, but in this particular, plz replace by big or nothing in the above modeled type of comparison)9. Vernacular language, which is rich, characteristic and frequent, is a part of real Vietnamese.10. A successfully built computerized database doesn?Tt mean it becomes practical. Và đây là của bài A workaholic economy1. Contend of bad news leads to decreases in citizens?T beliefs.2. Stock market which now filled with red numbers is an outstanding example.3. Investors spent all their time on Vietnamese stock market have worried about VN-Index which has noticeably shrunk to approximately 400.4. But the stagnating stock market isn?Tt the worst.5. Most Vietnamese people have bothered themselves about current high inflation.6. As prices climb, everything becomes eventually expensive.7. People are compelled to spend more money on living.8. Employees have complained that their real wages couldn?Tt be enough for their life.9. Some citizens have responded to improvements in economic climate by stashing gold, foreign currency or goods as much as possible.10. But this way is appropriate only for the rich. 11. Workers whose little salaries reserved largely for consuming can?Tt save anything so their lives are hard.12. We wonder when the Vietnamese economic recovery, is.??? Possible??13. There?Tre several reasons for high inflation.14. The extra supply of money and the lost efficiency of monetary policy are the main factors pushed inflation to go up.15. The famous economist Q.Tobin said that sometimes we consider trading inflation to some percent of GDP. 16. Vietnamese did, but now there obviously has no incentive to do that.17. The current government has gained a mount of notoriety for the negative signals about economics.18. Economic planners now manage to cope with inflation.19. However, in the short run, they clearly seem losers.20. Although TV broadcast and newspapers abound with their solutions, they haven?Tt been more profitable. Gửi lúc 14:48, 22/05/08
TranNgocVuiThành viên rất tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 10:09, 03/07/07Hiện có 237 Đã được 3 người bình chọn (3.67) ID bài viết: 12727545

Miss Hương độ này chăm chỉ đấy. Những bạn khác nên hoàn thành phần bài tập giống Vuacuchuoi nhé. Translator or Interpreter = Second author.The fastest and best solution for IELTS and TOEFL_iBT is translation and interpretation. Lecturer: Trần Ngọc VuiPhone number: 04. 7641 600 or 0912 613 556 Gửi lúc 15:43, 22/05/08
tieuca07Thành viên mới,Thành viên từ 10:56, 29/02/08Hiện có 163 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12730306

Em là Nguyễn Ngọc Tú, em nộp bài ạ!Giờ em rảnh rồi em sẽ nộp bài đầy đủ và sẽ hoàn thành các bài đã thiếu. 1/ Starting next July, Vietnamese pupils who want to study higher must pass a university examination, attracted thousands of pupil every year.2/ The control of time is the first and the most important steps *****ccess.3/ They should study hard with a plan, referred by teacher or older brother or sister, who passed the exam with good marks.4/ When they get good marks, that accepted by an university or a college, they will begin a new school year in September.5/ It is difficult to students, who come from the countryside, caused by expense of subsistence is higher than their income.6/ When the subsistence expenses increased too high, many students may be leave school to earn money for subsistence.7/ Petroleum is a reason that everything has increased in price.8/ The price of petroleum is raising up to $130 each tank, prompting firms to increase retail price.9/ Although the price of food product has increased in big cities, the countryside, labour costs are not changed. 10/ The new wave of the price broke out, this was warned as a big disadvantage to farmers, who have been expecting an adjustment from the government. Gửi lúc 22:36, 22/05/08
ngnhatanhThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 21:55, 04/12/07Hiện có 219 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12730443

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương, em xin nộp:1.One wrong decision of news e***or can bring his newspaper to be discre***ed even bankrupted.2.News e***or is such a professional and managerial job that it is only for person who must not only be a good educated man but also have rich experiences of life.3.Building house on embankment, which disfigures and threatens to the safety of embankments, is common in some countries.4.Dwellers in one collapsed building informed that his house was shaken and collapsed quickly just a few seconds after the earthquake really began.5.Conservative e***or who doesn?Tt allow students to study at his newspaper house is standing next to the line door with a glass of cherry wine in hand.6.Cause of stressful job, the news e***or sometimes open widely his office?Ts windows to have few minutes relaxing with breezes and scent from almond trees outsides.7.The content of an article anyway still direct readers?T attentions to the way that journalist want.8.An outstanding example for workaholic man is that the lexicographers pore over weighty tomes daily.9.Underlings of a strict manager often pay a huge penalty for their tardy work.10.The fist success was a strong incentive for Mr. Hung to continue his way he chose.P.S: Tí quên em xin nghỉ thứ 6 24/5 nhưng em vẫn sẽ hoàn thành bài tập đầy đủ. Được ngnhatanh sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:53 ngày 22/05/2008

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Em cũng tên là Hương, em hơi đuối khoản viết lách này, hy vọng có công mài ắt có ngày nên kim, thầy sửa giúp em với.1. For the first time or so of a new company business attracted clients who are important and work hard.2. Businesses can?Tt do anything to make profit.3. At first, a company may sell with losses to attract more clients.4. It is a difficult to make decision about successful business strategy of company.5. They have to do discounts, free services, and good after-sales services to make their old clients happy and attract more new clients.6. Small firms have to compete with larger, prestigious firms in business environment7. But with a company, which the only goal is the more-is-the better profit. 8. To maintain operations of the company, the managers have to renovate technology, increase productivity, improve service quality, etc.9. The clients?T satisfaction is encouragement of company.10. Increasing profit by minimizing cost and enlarging the turnover of company are good ways. Gửi lúc 09:26, 23/05/08
vuacuchuoiThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 14:01, 21/05/07Hiện có 49 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12736305

21. The bank?Ts interest is being interacted by the increased Dollar?Ts value, and then leads to change the trend of investment such as: cash follow, shifting from stock market into bank.22. There are many securities; the company has been gone bankruptcy because of going down of stock market and the crisis of economy in the transition period.23. The Vietnamese Government has managed to control the index of inflation by saving the stock market and adjusting financing & wage polices.24.Nowadays, The Government take more care of the working con***ions, especially workers who work in foreign companies, whose always prospered by exploiting workers and holding them in the unsafe con***ions.25. The Government presents minimal wage policy to improve the standard of living of workers who are being directly affected by price escalation and high inflation in this period.26. A workaholic businessman tries to use and manage his time in the right way, but the image always dusty and weird.27. The National resource included the land resource and human resource.28. The petition of firms to Government is that their expanding size has been met/faced an obstacle by high current land?Ts pricing and too large of living land, has make them stuck in hard payments and increase bank?Ts debts. 29. The question of temporary unemployment is that people have to change their jobs for their lives that have to pay more bills with high costs and slippage in prices.30. People have to manage their budgets and try to find out the ways to use them better and effective.31. The administrative reforms had helped to changing the way officers using their packing time. 32. Nowadays, people have a sense of making use of time for their business and devote more for their clear??? target. 33. The Education reform is vital, producing better human resource and changing the way people work.34. Vietnamese education, facing many issues of teaching and the way of knowledge conveyance, comes to life.35. The old of education in Vietnam made the graduated students face to real tasks with much confusion. Those had studied in academy and far-way the fact also.36. In irony, the rice?Ts selling price is creasing but the rice?Ts buying price is standstill.37. The fever of the rice-selling price was ?ovirtual? escalation, caused by speculation because we don?Tt lack of rice.38. In America, the farmers get more income from rice crisis; they have not enough rice *****pply, indeed, Vietnamese farmers get nothing changes that see the escalated rice?Ts pricing in the market with powerless.39. The developing and even developed countries are facing the increased rice?Ts price and increased beggars, unemployment also.40. In historically, the process of transforming from developing to developed economy has to face a lot of economic& societal problems such as: high inflation, finance crisis, unemployment; class distinction..., and administrative mechanism. Huong-Vua cu chuoi.

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Em tên là Toàn. Gửi thầy 8 câu (thiếu mất 2 câu bù vào ngày mai). Mới viết lần đầu, nếu sai sót xin thầy thông cảm!!
Topic : "The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money"
1. Nowadays, thanks to the development of science and technology, people have become more vibrant, dynamic, creative, adaptable,... and even more intelligent, so they can be good at many careers, not one; therefor, people gradually tend to have several careers or ways of earning money - a new fashion in most of humans today.
2. In fact, a lot of singers, devoting all their life to music, can be songwriters, actors, etc... It can be taken as singer is "right hand job" and the other are "left hand job".
3. Most examples in real life; collected, carried out and analysed by a group of 10 students; show that careers of a person have closet relationship, such as a person who works for art often teach in an art school.
4. Almost people maintains that they have a main career, the other only help them to earn more money to cover their everyday needs.
5. On the contrary, some people work many careers, which don''t have any relationship. It can be explained that they have aptitude and ability for different horizons in real life.
6. There are many benefits this new fashion gives people - have different careers - such as money, wealth, social status,... but the most important is that it helps people to become more dynamic, push them to devote more diligent themselves to life, etc...
7. But when people have many careers, they can''t have enough concentration to work any careers, so naturally they will lose efficiency
8. In irony, a batch of people in society, rising dramatically, consider this fashion as a way to show off their talent.

Được ngnhatanh sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:09 ngày 24/05/2008

Mr. Toàn lười biếng quá? 2 câu = 2 phút viết theo công thức hôm trước thầy nêu ra.
Bắt đầu từ tuần này, mọi học viên phải làm đủ 70 câu/1tuần.
Mr.Toàn cố gắng trả nợ nhé.

Em xin nộp bài ạ! (Thầy sửa nhanh em còn nộp bài mới)
11/ For the first day about of new cultivation, the land is ploughed by tractors, substituting for cattles which used for along time ago.
12/ It is wonderful application of technologies, because the time on plough has been shrinking from three days with cattles to a day with tractors.
13/ Although the output of work has increased, but it was too bad with cattles, killed because has no work to do.
14/A generation ago, electric energy, as one of the most luxury goods which was used in companies and only used for the rich because the fee per power machine was expensive.
15/Today, with the development of tecnology, electric energy can be easy produced with a suitable fee.
16/ The electric generator, invented by AB, has been in sevice to humans, produced elecctric by the convertibility petroleum into electrical energy.
17/At the moment, in Viet Nam, the used of electric generator has been popular because it is small, light and easy to use, even it can be brought for picnics.
18/ The HCM´s ideal, who leaded VN to freedom, has been broadened a new horizon for me.
19/ AB has seens service in Vietnam´s army, the country which was imposed HCM´s ideal scrambling for independent.
20/ Indeed,the application of Chlorine element on treatment of water has been broadened largely water industry, improved the nacessary of this specific adaptable element.
Thanks for your reading!

Em nộp bài với ạ.
topic: "Hanoi''s development" (tự nhiên hứng chí nghĩ ra)
1. Capital of Hanoi called ?oCity of peace? has long been in noble Vietnamese history.
2. In 1010, King Ly Thai To moved capital from Hoa Lu to Dai La, the old name of Hanoi, in order to use its position.
3. The name Hanoi meant ?othe city between 2 rivers (Hong river and Day river)? has emerged since 1831.
4. Now the square of Hanoi is equivalent to Singapore.
5. Booming population and developing economics have set Hanoi to building many new plants to meet the demand.
6. So Hanoi is broadened dramatically by new project of Government.
7. The project disturbed specific citizens from their normal lives is on the way to fulfillment.
8. Thus, Hanoi can be as imposing as one of the biggest cities all over the world.
9. Since the turn of the century, Hanoi has been bigger and bigger than ever before.
10. Hanoi is hoped that on the horizon is dynamic city.
Hic, sao ngắn thế nhỉ?
Được lurang sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:27 ngày 24/05/2008