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Em tên là Toàn. Gửi thầy 8 câu (thiếu mất 2 câu bù vào ngày mai). Mới viết lần đầu, nếu sai sót xin thầy thông cảm!!
Topic : "The idea of getting a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion is that people should have several careers or ways of earning money"
1. Nowadays, thanks to the development of science and technology, people have become more vibrant, dynamic, creative, adaptable,... and even more intelligent, so they can be good at many careers, not one; therefore, people gradually tend to have several careers or ways of earning money - a new fashion in most of humans today.
2. In fact, a lot of singers, devoting all their life to music, can be songwriters, actors, etc... It can be taken as singer is "right hand job" and the others are "left hand job".
3. Most examples in real life; collected, carried out and analyzed by a group of 10 students; showed that careers of a person have the closest relationships, for example: a person, who works for art, often teaches in an art school.
4. Almost people maintain that they have main careers, the other only help them to earn more money to cover their everyday needs.
5. On the contrary, some people work many careers, which don?Tt form any relationship. It can be explained that they have aptitudes and abilities for different horizons in real life.
6. There are many benefits this new fashion gives people - have different careers - such as money, wealth, social status, but the most important is that it helps people to become more dynamic, push them to devote more diligent themselves to life, etc...
7. But when people have many careers, they can?Tt have enough concentration to work any careers, so naturally they will lose efficiency
8. In irony, a batch of people in society, rising dramatically, consider this fashion as a way to show their talents.

Được ngnhatanh sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:09 ngày 24/05/2008
Em xin nộp bài ạ! (Thầy sửa nhanh em còn nộp bài mới)
11/ For the first days of new cultivation, the land was ploughed by tractors, substituting for cattle which used for along time ago.
12/ It is wonderful application of technologies, because the time on plough has been shrunk from three days with cattle to a day with tractors.
13/ Although the output of work has increased, but it was too bad with cattle, killed by no work???.
14/A generation ago, electric energy, as one of the most luxury goods which was used in companies and only used for the rich because the fee per power machine was expensive.
15/Today, with the development of technology, electric energy can be easy produced with a suitable fee.
16/ The electric generator, invented by AB, has been in service to humans, produced electricity by the convertibility petroleum into electrical energy.
17/At the moment, in Viet Nam, the used of electric generator has been popular because it is small, light and easy to use, even it can be brought for picnics.
18/ The HCM´s ideal, who leaded VN to freedom, has been broadened a new horizon for me.
19/ AB has seen services in Vietnam?Ts army, which was imposed HCM´s ideal scrambling for independent???
20/ Indeed, the application of Chlorine element on treatment of water has been broadened largely water industry, improved the necessary of this specific adaptable element.
Thanks for your reading!

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương em xin nộp bài:
1.In this day and age, a host of factors pushes economies all over the world to be recession.
2.The news e***or hits on the idea of computerizing all printed newspaper from the past to now in order to systematize events.
3.Nowadays, many companies and corporations are more willing to experiment with working through internets that is cheaper and quicker than normal.
4.The local television station has been being censured roundly for broadcasting unrealistic news last Monday.
5.Adapting from chief of executive officers of local newspaper, the notorious love scandal of news e***or is private and doesn?Tt involve with his work at the newspaper.
6.Contribution of news e***or to his newspaper is not enough to prevent board of directors from taking him away from workplace.
7.The world spread bilaterally *****ch two bad and good parts that there are always good and bad news together on the public mediums.
8.News e***or falls foul of being compelled to have sensational articles everyday.
9.It is no coincidence that managers of almost offices, firms or companies that affect public awareness are also members of governmental organisations.
10.Working population of this poor province no one do not know the luxury, five-floored building of provincial television station?Ts director.

chao thay, em la Nguyen Thuy Linh, em xin gui bai`
1. On the horizon, cosmetic surgery has been both in noble service to female and man.
2.Technologies, in one form or another, has rescued people from hard works.
3. Biological technology is one of the most widely used at the twenty one century.
4. A USB could store more programs and information hundred of times-rather than floppy disk.
5. today, whit a telescope mirror, people can research many stars staying a thousand years of light from us.
6.there might appear very kind of dangerous bacterial viruses warned by scientists.
7.By the time of the dry spell, the world''s economic will have had a depression again because of the commerce collapsing.
8. for the twenty years since the seism, Tu Xuyen ''s economic recovery hasn''t gained.
9. The secret of the ancient palace detained the princes lies in a cruel old witch.
10. To day, scientists continue to experiment with embryo and clone to find the dose of immortal medicine.

Em chào thầy và cả lớp ạ!
Em là Phương Dung, thành viên mới của lớp. Đây là 10 câu đầu tiên của em. Mong sẽ được sự giúp đỡ của thầy và mọi người
1. Nowaday telephone and television signals can be carried across nations, therefore we just need to sit here, turn on the cable TV and can enjoy the most interesting international chanels such as HBO, CNN, etc?
2. Computer, one of the greatest inventions of human, has been noble service to many companies.
3. As one of the most effectively searching website, Google helps many students do their exercises more easily.
4. Mr John, managing a leading company in software industry, wants to hire a versatile person to be his secretary.
5. Gender equality recommended in UN?Ts agendas has long been a big target of development in many developing countries.
6. The uses of IT developing with miraculous speed have been broadened dramatically in many fields such as medicine, biology?
7. Owning a cell phone of small but elegant design enabling to store thousands of MB data program and progress information is one of the youth?Ts expensive hobbies nowaday.
8. The camera used to obtain the beautiful photos saving our childhood memories was lost without any reasons.
9. A new generation of 40 feet container was emerging that could allow us to transport very heavy and long goods such as truck across nations.
10. The missile manufactured by NASA has ten of times faster speed than other missiles lauched in a specially secured area of America with the witness of leading international scientists.

em là Trần Loan. mong được sự giúp đỡ của thầy và mọi người.
11. people today are less polite than they can used to be, for example, people these day eat while they are walking down the street, they kiss and embrace in the public, they push on to buses and trains.
12. many employers nowaday use psychological test to select employees.
13. getting the right person for the job is obviously good for employers, but it is also good for employees, because they will be happier in a job that suit their personality.
14. the student is likely derive more advantages from the knowledge of English than the knowledge of one other language
15. english is becoming the common languages of all educated men
16. english is also gives the key to the latest scientist discoveries of the two advanced nations of the modern world
17. for the travellers and the man of business, no languages is more useful than english, which is the mother_tougue of about 200 milions people and is acquired for commercial and literary purpose by an immense number of the foreigners
18. there are more 3000 languages in the wold today, but about 6 languages are the major languages in the worl
19. english lnguage is the mother_tougue and the official language on one-fifth of the land of the worl
20. education is to draw best in children and develops their faculties
Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:43 ngày 25/05/2008

Em tên là Toàn. Xin gửi bài tiếp!!
Topic : "Should people spend most of their time on computers?"
9. Computers - intelligent machines - going back or so to the 18th century - has long been in efficient service to humans; so it seems, today, people are becoming increasingly spend more time and dependent on computers rather than working studiously their job.
10. Nowadays, most young people spend their time, reserving largely for surfing internet - a "virtual world, so they entirely forget the real life they are living. It''s taken as the law of diminishing returns as these people will lose efficiency and neglect their job, so they could be made redundancy in the long term, even they are more likely *****ccumb to many diseases such as headache, short - sighted, be dazzled,...etc.
11. There are many benefits that computers give people. The uses of computers have been broadened dramatically by new technologies: a lot of programs in computers - helping people to listen to music, relax, watch movie,...; internet - the vital part of life - connecting all the world together only by mouse clicks, attracting many humans, in particular young people, today.
12. Therefore, people find it difficult not to keep their eyes looking at screens of computers.
13. Computers could function billion of times faster than an average person''s brain, as foreseen scientists, so in the horizon, computers will gradually stand for people''s position.
14. So people should make use maximum of their abilities, live more dynamic, realistic rather than depending and spending time so much on computers.
15. Because, one of these days, computers may control them.

Em Lã Trang (từ sau cứ nik này là em, khỏi xưng tên nữa, thầy nhé). Em cũng có ý kiến là: thầy hãy thông báo thời gian cụ thể, ví dụ "10pm hàng ngày tôi sẽ online chữa bài, đề nghị các bạn gửi trước giờ đó" => thì như thế mọi người biết đường mà sửa soạn. Vả lại bài chữa cũng ko bị vụn vặt mỗi lần 1, 2 bài.
topic: motorbike in vietnam.
1. Because of its versatility, motorbike traveling over whatever good or bad roads in Vietnam is one of the most widely used of personal transports here.
2. Its cost which was exorbitant in the 1980s has plunged since a new generation of cheap motorbike provided by Chinese nearly everywhere.
3. Flexible motorbike from which some people earn their living by carrying anything across nation?Ts areas is a signal showed a dynamic life.
4. Yet motorbike is useful, some people want to dispose of them due to its puffs of exhaust fumes.
5. Motorbike has been affordable and roads become small and bad haven?Tt improved so traffic jams happen every time.
6. Because motorbike could function simply, people drive carelessly enough to have accident.
7. Social managements worried about traffic accident surged have test with their ideas in which helmet seems a good one.
8. In deed, most of them haven?Tt obtained what the managements wanted as Vietnamese people didn?Tt use to execute the rules.
9. Cheap motorbike reveals the market economics?T strength which gives people chance to use better and cheaper goods.
10. Now scientists continue to experiment with new types of motorbike which more friendly with environment.

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Chao Thay. Em la Le Tung. Em gui Thay 10 cau.
1. Foods, including meats, vegetablesõ?Ư have long been in the most important service to the existence of many species on Earth, for instance, the human being.
2. The rich have produced the huge amount of food, which is as imposing as the main source, feeding most of the worldõ?Ts citizens.
3. The uses of the improved planting technologies in the undeveloped countries have broadened the area of producing food, leading directly to destroy many tropical forests, the priceless natural resources.
4. The share of food and education from wealthy nations to poorer ones could be a fantastic dose, helping the poor to escape from year-by-year conservative economies.
5. In developed countries, the scientists, controlled closely by the authorities are working with the latest genetic techniques, improving the quality and quantity of the popular plant in order to make more food to people.
6. The economic planners from wealthy countries could help the government in the poorer ones understand the unbalances in economy, one of the most harmful obstacles against the development.
7. It is a surge in the perceptual ability of citizens about their responsibility to the nation well-being, finished after a long education process, helped by the experts in the United Nations Organization.
8. Rice producing, a tra***ion, going back to the ancient times, is improved in a new way: the peasants incorporate in working to get more profit.
9. õ?~The cost of producing a ton of rice in the poor countryside rockets quickly because the fertilizer output decreased.õ?T the Minister explains, õ?TFortunately, we have already made some essential solutions.õ?T
10. The looseness in the land organizing pattern helps many farmers to lose their living area, compelling them to attend to the bottom class in society.
Chao Thay.

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương đây, bây giờ trở đi em sẽ gửi bài theo nick này:
1.Local authority usually boasts of devoting many activities to the tra***ional music but the fact doesn?Tt fit it.
2.Tra***ional music is understood as all types of music inventing by our previous generation in the past.
3.Given that, tra***ional music disappears and there is only the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays, it will be really an extreme loss for our next generations.
4.Tra***ional music has a high potential power that helps itself exist although perhaps it doesn?Tt fit the rapid lifestyle nowadays.
5.Modern musical instruments not only are adapted with tra***ional music but also bring to it newer nuance.
6.Since tra***ional music conservation programmes are not efficiency, budgets for them are shrunken.
7.Rigi***y in performance is a character appearing in some tra***ional music.
8.All conservation programmes about tra***ional music must be versatility adapting to the-more-is-better criterion.
9.Culture tourism perhaps is a good way to conserve all historically heritages including tra***ional music.
10.With almost people, tra***ional music is really an invaluable divine immaterial estate of previous generations.

em là Trần Loan.
21. according to On Gia Bao, the prime minister of China, today, the number of victims, who were died in the earthquake in Shichuan provice, were rised 60 thousands people anh could increase 80 thousands people.
22. scientists are working on programs to pridict when an earthquake will occur.
23. they hope to develop a warmming system that can be used to pridict the earthquakes in oder to safe our life.
24. one parent in the south of german is denouced because they sold their child with only a eurodollar.
25. if you want Ha noi to is a hearth of our country, develop, is widier and catch up with international, there isn?Tt lose Ha noi people factor and folk_custom factor
26. In summer, children will not go to the school and death of drowing situation will rise.
27. the development countries control many sides of life, from a jean to fast food Mc donald, from MTV music to Oscar, even many games.
28. they had to aband on their village after only a historic flood.
29. nowaday, many musican who compose songs was often negligent in their sings, a job requires an carefulness.
30. petrol?Ts prise rise, traffic jam situation often happen so citizen must cut down spending in oder to save cost.