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1st times Week 4 May. (1-10 sentences).
2nd times W4M (11-20)......
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Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương em xin nộp bài:1.In this day and age, a host of factors pushes economies all over the world to be recession.2.The news e***or hits on the idea of computerizing all printed newspaper from the past to now in order to systematize events.3.Nowadays, many companies and corporations are more willing to experiment with working through internets that is cheaper and quicker than normal.4.The local television station has been being censured roundly for broadcasting unrealistic news last Monday.5.Adapting from chief of executive officers of local newspaper, the notorious love scandal of news e***or is private and doesn?Tt involve with his work at the newspaper.6.Contribution of news e***or to his newspaper is not enough to prevent board of directors from taking him away from workplace.7.The world spread bilaterally *****ch two bad and good parts that there are always good and bad news together on the public mediums.8.News e***or falls foul of being compelled to have sensational articles everyday.9.It is no coincidence that managers of almost offices, firms or companies that affect public awareness are also members of governmental organizations.10.Working population of this poor province no one do not know the luxury, five-floored building of provincial television station?Ts director. Gửi lúc 22:49, 24/05/08
ngnhatanhThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 21:55, 04/12/07Hiện có 252 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12748315

chao thay, em la Nguyen Thuy Linh, em xin gui bai` 1. On the horizon, cosmetic surgery has been both in noble service to female and man.2.Technologies, in one form or another, has rescued people from hard works.3. Biological technology is one of the most widely used at the twenty-one century.4. A USB could store more programs and information hundred of times-rather than floppy disk.5. Today, whit a telescope mirror, people can research many stars staying a thousand years of light from us.6.there might appear very kind of dangerous bacterial viruses warned by scientists.7.By the time of the dry spell, the world?Ts economic will have had a depression again because of the commerce collapsing.8. For the twenty years since the seism, Tu Xuyen ''''s economic recovery hasn?Tt gained.9. The secret of the ancient palace detained the prince lies in a cruel old witch.10. To day, scientists continue to experiment with embryo and clone to find the dose of immortal medicine. Gửi lúc 00:23, 25/05/08
justalieThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 08:42, 25/05/08Hiện có 5 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12749549

Em chào thầy và cả lớp ạ!Em là Phương Dung, thành viên mới của lớp. Đây là 10 câu đầu tiên của em. Mong sẽ được sự giúp đỡ của thầy và mọi người1. Nowadays telephone and television signals can be carried across nations, therefore we just need to sit in our homes, turn on the cable TV and enjoy the most interesting international channels such as HBO, CNN, etc?2. Computer, one of the greatest inventions of human, has been noble service to many companies. 3. As one of the most effectively searching website, Google helps many students do their exercises more easily.4. Mr John, managing a leading company in software industry, wants to hire a versatile person to be his secretary.5. Gender equality recommended in UN?Ts agendas has long been a big target of development in many developing countries.6. The uses of IT developing with miraculous speed have been broadened dramatically in many fields such as medicine, biology?7. Owning a cell phone of small but elegant design enables to store thousands of MB data programs and progress information is one of the youth?Ts expensive hobbies nowadays. 8. The camera used to obtain the beautiful photos saving our childhood memories was lost without any reasons.9. A new generation of 40 feet container was emerging that could allow us to transport very heavy and long goods such as trucks across nations.10. The missile manufactured by NASA has ten of times faster speed than other missiles launched in a specially secured area of America with the witness of leading international scientists. Gửi lúc 09:00, 25/05/08
eyaayeThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 23:45, 20/03/08Hiện có 317 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12749770

em là Trần Loan. mong được sự giúp đỡ của thầy và mọi người.11. People today are less polite than they used to be, for example, people are eating during walking in the street, they kiss and embrace in the public, they push on to buses and trains.12. Many employers nowadays use psychological tests to select employees.13. Getting the right person for the job is obviously good for employers, but it is also good for employees, because they will be happier in a job that suit their personality.14. The student is likely deriving more advantages from the knowledge of English than the knowledge of one other language15. English is becoming the common languages of all educated men16. English is also gives the key to the latest scientist discoveries of the two advanced nations of the modern world17. For the travelers and the man of business, no languages is more useful than English, which is the mother tongue of about 200 millions people and is acquired for commercial and literary purpose by an immense number of the foreigners18. There are more 3000 languages in the world today, but about 6 languages are the major languages in the world19. English language is the mother_ tongue and the official language on one-fifth of the land of the world20. Education is to draw best in children and develops their faculties Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào...Được eyaaye sửa chữa / chuyển vào 09:43 ngày 25/05/2008 Gửi lúc 09:41, 25/05/08
ngnhatanhThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 21:55, 04/12/07Hiện có 252 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12753053

Em tên là Toàn. Xin gửi bài tiếp!! Topic : "Should people spend most of their time on computers?"9. Computers - intelligent machines - going back or so to the 18th century - has long been in efficient service to humans; so it seems, today, people are becoming increasingly spend more time and dependent on computers rather than working studiously their job.10. Nowadays, most young people spend their time, reserving largely for surfing internet - a "virtual world, so they entirely forget the real life they are living. It?Ts taken as the law of diminishing returns as these people will lose efficiency and neglect their job, so they could be made redundancy in the long term, even they are more likely *****ccumb to many diseases such as headache, short - sighted, be dazzled,...etc.11. There are many benefits that computers give people. The uses of computers have been broadened dramatically by new technologies: a lot of programs in computers - helping people to listen to music, relax, watch movie, internet - the vital part of life - connecting all the world together only by mouse clicks, attracting many humans, in particular young people, today. 12. Therefore, people find it difficult to keep their eyes looking at screens of computers.13. Computers could function billion of times faster than an average person?Ts brain, as foreseen scientists, so in the horizon, computers will gradually stand for people?Ts position.14. So people should make use maximum of their abilities, live more dynamic, realistic rather than depending and spending time so much on computers.15. Because, one of these days, computers may control them. Gửi lúc 18:55, 25/05/08
lurangThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 15:03, 23/03/07Hiện có 778 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12753754

Em Lã Trang (từ sau cứ nik này là em, khỏi xưng tên nữa, thầy nhé). Em cũng có ý kiến là: thầy hãy thông báo thời gian cụ thể, ví dụ "10pm hàng ngày tôi sẽ online chữa bài, đề nghị các bạn gửi trước giờ đó" => thì như thế mọi người biết đường mà sửa soạn. Vả lại bài chữa cũng ko bị vụn vặt mỗi lần 1, 2 bài. topic: motorbike in vietnam.1. Because of its versatility, motorbike traveling over whatever good or bad roads in Vietnam is one of the most widely used of personal transports here.2. Its cost, which was exorbitant in the 1980s, has plunged since a new generation of cheap motorbike, provided by Chinese nearly everywhere.3. Flexible motorbike, from which some people earn their living by carrying anything across nation?Ts areas, is a signal showed a dynamic life.4. Yet motorbike is useful, some people want to dispose of them due to its exhaust fumes.5. Motorbike has been affordable and roads become small and bad haven?Tt improved so traffic jams happen every time.6. Because motorbike could function simply, people drive carelessly enough to have accident.7. Social managements worried about traffic accident surged have test with their ideas in which helmet seems a good one.8. In deed, most of them haven?Tt obtained what the managements wanted, as Vietnamese people didn?Tt use to execute the rules.9. Cheap motorbike reveals the market economics?T strength which gives people chance to use better and cheaper goods.10. Now scientists continue to experiment with new types of motorbike which more friendly with environment. Gửi lúc 20:51, 25/05/08
Rive2Thành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 13:52, 04/11/05Hiện có 128 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12754380

25/5Chao Thay. Em la Le Tung. Em gui Thay 10 cau. 1. Foods, including meats, vegetables? have long been in the most important service to the existence of many species on Earth, for instance, the human being.2. The rich have produced the huge amount of food, which is imposed as the main source, feeding most of the world?Ts citizens.3. The uses of the improved planting technologies in the undeveloped countries have broadened the area of producing food, leading directly to destroy many tropical forests, the priceless natural resources.4. The share of food and education from wealthy nations to poorer ones could be a fantastic dose, helping the poor to escape from year-by-year conservative economies. 5. In developed countries, the scientists, controlled closely by the authorities are working with the latest genetic techniques, improving the quality and quantity of the popular plant in order to make more food to people.6. The economic planners from wealthy countries could help the government in the poorer ones understand the unbalances in economy, one of the most harmful obstacles against the development.7. It is a surge in the perceptual ability of citizens about their responsibility to the nation well being, finished after a long education process, helped by the experts in the United Nations Organization.8. Rice producing, a tra***ion, going back to the ancient times, is improved in a new way: the peasants incorporate in working to get more profit.9. ?~The cost of producing a ton of rice in the poor countryside rockets quickly because the fertilizer output decreased.?T the Minister explains, ?TFortunately, we have already made some essential solutions.?T10. The looseness in the land-organizing pattern helps many farmers to lose their living area, compelling them to attend to the bottom class in society. Chao Thay. Gửi lúc 22:12, 25/05/08
cuongpharmaThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 15:16, 25/05/08Hiện có 6 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12754594

Em là Nguyễn Việt Cương đây, bây giờ trở đi em sẽ gửi bài theo nick này:1.Local authority usually boasts of devoting many activities to the tra***ional music but the fact doesn?Tt fit it.2.Tra***ional music is understood as all types of music inventing by our previous generation in the past.3.Given that, tra***ional music disappears and there is only the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays, it will be really an extreme loss for our next generations.4.Tra***ional music has a high potential power that helps itself exist although perhaps it doesn?Tt fit the rapid lifestyle nowadays.5.Modern musical instruments not only are adapted with tra***ional music but also bring to it newer nuance.6.Since tra***ional music conservation programs are not efficiency, budgets for them are shrunken.7.Rigi***y in performance is a character appearing in some tra***ional music.8.All conservation programs about tra***ional music must be adapted to the-more-is-better criterion.9.Culture tourism perhaps is a good way to conserve all historically heritages including tra***ional music.10.With almost people, tra***ional music is really an invaluable divine immaterial estate of previous generations. Gửi lúc 22:31, 25/05/08
eyaayeThành viên tích cực ,VietnamThành viên từ 23:45, 20/03/08Hiện có 317 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12755879

em là Trần Loan.21. According to On Gia Bao, the prime minister of China, today, the number of victims, who were died in the earthquake in Shichuan province, were risen to 60 thousands people and could increase 80 thousands people.22. Scientists are working on programs to predict when an earthquake will occur.23. They hope to develop a warming system that can be used to predict the earthquakes in order to safe our life.24. One parent in the south of German is denounced because they sold their child with only a eurodollar.25. if you want Ha Noi to be a hearth of our country, develop, and catch up with international, there are other factors like Ha Noi people and folk custom 26. In summer, children will not go to the school and death of drowning situation will rise.27. The development countries control many sides of life, from a jean to fast food Mc Donald, from MTV music to Oscar, even many games.28. They had to abandon on their village after only a historic flood.29. Nowadays, many musicians who compose songs were often neglected in their singing, a job requires an carefulness.30. Petrol?Ts price rises, traffic jam situation often happens so citizen must cut down spending in order to save cost. Làm sao sống được mà không yêuKhông nhớ không thương một kẻ nào...

Em la Le Thong xin nop bai cho thay, mogn thay sua giup
Chemical fertilizes was the great invention, in one form or another, has been noble service in agricultural filed. The use of chemical fertilizes as the part of chain of agricultural production to increase crops productivity. The 20th century, chemical fertilizes was widely used and became cheaper by the new technology. In the developing countries, use of the chemical fertilizes as important factors to decrease hungry and poor such as Vietnam. But in recent time, many researches in throughout the world have been proved that use a lot of chemical fertilize is toxic for human and other animals, particular pernicious toxicity and caused the cancers. So, use of chemical fertilizes has limited in many countries, the developed countries have the lead

Chương trình lớp IELTS_26 sẽ luyện tập đồng thời 3 kỹ năng trong giai đoạn đầu.
Những người mới học thiếu một vài bài trước đó sau khi luyện tập khoảng từ 1 tuần - 2 tuần + Nắm chắc một số Quy Luật có thể tải bài về để tự đọc và tích luỹ một số bài chưa học.
Hoặc khi học hết 1 quyển Cambridge khác cũng là lúc những bạn mới này có đủ khả năng để xem lại những bài cũ (Đã có bản dịch hỗ trợ).
Trong quá trình học, nếu gặp khó khăn có thể gặp thầy để trao đổi trực tiếp.

Em tên là Toàn.
1st times Week 4 May
Topic: The position of women today.
16. Women have long been served as wives - cooking, cleaning house, carrying for their children - in family rather than working to earn money that belongs to man.
17. It''s taken as women spend their time reserving largely for families; besides, they seem nearly not to form any relationships in society; therefore, they gradually become passive and depend on men. It was in the past, but now, this view has been changing.
18. The position of woman has been changed markedly for in the 30 years since the end of the dry spell (the war ended in 1975).
19. Today, women, taking part in many different diversified activities in society than ever before, spreading around the work with man, shouldering more important responsibilities than man, even standing for men, take on state affairs in some countries.
20. It can be explained that, nowadays, thanks to women''s rights, women are being treated of the same rank as man ; "all things being equal".
21. Women, also educated well, access to new technologies, so they , becoming more dynamic and creative, can contribute the more-is-better their abilities to nation, it led to the important of women today.
22. Women always are good at pastures involved in carefulness, meticulousness, skillfulness, friendliness,...etc such as tailor, cooker or teacher; but in fact, women today can do man''s job - for example: worker, director, manager...- which need the health, firm stuff and intelligence.
23. For family, not only working to earn money as man, they also know the way to co-ordinate "one side is family, one side is work", so they can shoulder well these responsibilities.
24. They can make use of time maximum they have, arrangement time more suitably than men, and they are less likely succumb fatigue or stressful job.
25. Although the position of women has changed dramatically, each woman always be tied to family because the sacred mission of a woman is a wife, a mother, a sister,...etc.
26. It''s no surprise as in some families, women have higher position than man, on the contrary, even women earn money to bring up their children and man at home to care for them, so it easily led to broken home, in irony, only a reason: the inversion of women''s position in family.
27. All reasons above reveal that women are important and on the horizon, the position of them surely will become higher with every passing day!
The end!!!
Được ngnhatanh sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:38 ngày 26/05/2008

Phuong Dung Ielts26
2nd time week 4 May
Em gửi tiếp 10 câu ạ.
11. At the turn of the 18th century, the great industrial revolution happened in England led this nation to be the most develop in the world.
12. Due to the skilful leadership of management board, ABC company overcame its dry spell and has gradually regained market share and especially customer?Ts belief.
13. The cost of 1 hour playing golf is equivalent to his 1 week salary, it is so expensive that he has never dared to dream of.
14. The environmental specialists have been calling the manufacturers to experiment with the environment frienly machines leaving as little as possible rubbish.
15. After becoming one of the most succesful hardware company in the world, ABC has widened its horizons to manufacture software assessed very potentially.
16. In this game, the gifts are arranged in a random disordered fashion that players can?Tt guess what gifts they would receive.
17. Mr John decided to change his job because in the new position he is receiving 5000$ a week as compared with 1000$ in his old company.
18. Chameleon uses its special ability - changing its colour instantly *****itable for surrounding environment ?" to search for food and avoid its foe.
19. Mr Banksy, the most famous grafiti artist in the world, now has a new commission ?" a big picture on the giant wall the Israelis are building around the West Bank ?" for which his fee is more than 1 million dollars.
20. Think of our modern life that even the humblest household objects use microprocessor, we can be served everything we need just with the push of a button.
Được justalie sửa chữa / chuyển vào 11:49 ngày 26/05/2008

Bài này của em chưa được sửa

Họ tên : Đoàn Tuấn / Học viên lớp IELTS26
1st time W4 May
Em gửi bài viết , thầy kiểm tra cho em nhé . Tks/ Tuấn
1+2. Dancing, of course in one form or another, has long been service to human being.
It can be as imposing as sport dancing the dynamic activities or as quick as motor racing.
3+4. The nose cones of fighter plane have been broadened rapidly by new application safety helmet ?" more than over 100 million unit used in Viet Nam, as a most model by young people in this year 2008 when Viet Nam make great advances in economics.
These could fully protect heads by means of undestroyable materials, searching and finding by vast professional and top searcher team.
5+6 M.Tam could run hundreds of times faster than tomorrow?T top-ranking athlete in Olympic Beijing . A new record of M.Tam is the surge in stock market that has set investor to investing all their funds to meet it.
7+8 The use of flower as art, a tra***ion spins back at least to Hung King times, is also booming as huge as Big Bang, lighted a galaxy. Flowers, for in the 20 years since the end of the dry spell, were became one of the most successfully fine art.
9+10 In effect , H.Q.Huong versatility sing a folk song, lighted a celebration of VietNam-Japan relations concert. In the singing process, she fascinated audiences by her deep voice.

Lã Trang. 3rd time w4May
21. Technical analysis which consists of many model and programs processing information well has spunk back at least to the World War I time.
22. Applications of the analysis haven?Tt functioned appropriately for specific security market in which Vietnamese is an outstanding example.
23. 2006-2007, the bonanza of security market, nearly everywhere, it seemed, men and women were talking about securities.
24. The dry spell of stock market called ?obear market? replaced ?obull market? at the end of 2007.
25. Economics will change from stagnant to dynamic when obstacle lying in conservative management policy is deleted.
26. Chronic shortage of capital of small and medium enterprises in Vietnam thanked to the improvements in economics climate has decreased.
27. At the turn of 20th century in Vietnam, approximately a quarter of clothes were hand made by tailors.
28. Bulb, in one form or another, lighted vastly more light is wondered a great invention.
29. Doctors have tested tiny glass beads taking radiation doses inside the body for fashioning of cancer cells.
30. There was a beautiful imagination in which many birds performed a symphony of music.
31. Electric currents traveling over metals for instance copper wire can also carry telephone signals across nations.

em là N N Tú.
em nộp bài: 10 câu hôm nay và 10 câu hôm qua.
21/Today, the modem computer, appeared in the mid-20th centery, comes to life as a means of communication.
22/Virus computer, has been discribled as a worm of computer, destroyed databases and also stole documents have been attribute of virus computer.
23/ From database errors, in one or another ways,the hacker was imposed to has been sticking virus in coputers, criminated information or destroyed database of computer.
24/ Trojanses, as one of the most dangerous viruses, not only has attributes like another viruses: destroyed databases and stagnated system, but also they stole secret databases.
25/ Viruses, base on the carelessness and unpractically of people, all basedates could be traveled over to hacker´s computers with a click of mouse.
26/ Several viruses attracted to computer but did not destroy computer, by a trange way, they only hid all forders and documents, so that we could not search or look for imformation, belived they were deleted.
27/ Every year, Repair and recovery process of data have had more money than building ten five-stars hotels.
28/ With the development of internet, set up it from 1858, is a working ideal climate of viruses, especial IM (instant messager), such as BxxB virus, surging in top viruses, spreaded faster than all of viruses have ever been before.
29/ Only An hour, thousands of computer were attracted by this virus, all working was stopped to have been waiting for repair.
30/ Antivirus Program, developed parallel with virus, but is a enemy of it.
31/ Today, there are hundreds of antivirus program which are advertised with the best control, but programs made from Russia, Germany, US?are holding a large market share.
32/ Antivirus program is always update the databases, added detection of new viruses, helped people feel safe.
33/ Bitdefender antivirus program, voted number one by customers, but this program make computer run slower than others.
34/ So that, many antivirus softwares lighter, utulised not much capacity of RAM, have been broadened drammatically such as Kapersky, Symatec, Avira?
35/ Copyright software have long been stolen, in poor countries such as Viet Nam, by hacker.
36/Another people do not want to use software outlaw, they can set-up a trial antivirus software for a free time.
37/Avira, as one of the widely used of trial softwares, is the most popular and it can be auto update each three days.
38/This program is quite soft, protected all most of virus, but sometimes its could not protect some virus, caused by this trial has not full protection.
39/Antivirus Professional R. Tom recommended that each computer should be setup two antivirus softwares, it would be stronger and more safety at work.
40/Today, we should be caution not only viruses but also antivirus programs, many viruses could be hidden inner these softwarees.
Cám ơn thầy!

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Các bạn nên tải phần sửa bài chi tiết trong hòm thư của lớp về và tìm lại bài viết của mình trong đó để rút kinh nghiệm.Em tên là Toàn.1st times Week 4 MayTopic: The position of women today.16. Women have long been served as wives - cooking, cleaning house, carrying for their children - in family rather than working to earn money that belongs to men.17. It''''s taken as women spend their time reserving largely for families; besides, they seem nearly not to form any relationships in society; therefore, they gradually become passive and depend on men. It was in the past, but now, this view has been changing.18. The position of women have been changed remarkably for the 30 years since the end of the dry spell (the war ended in 1975).19. Today, women, taking part in many different diversified activities in society than ever before, spreading around their work with man, shouldering more important responsibilities than men, even standing for men, take on state affairs in some countries. 20. It can be explained that, nowadays, thanks to women?Ts rights, women are being treated of the same rank as man ; "all things being equal".21. Women, also educated well, access to new technologies, so they are becoming more dynamic and creative, can contribute the more-is-better their abilities to nation, it led to the important of women today.22. Women always are good at pastures involved in carefulness, meticulousness, skillfulness, friendliness,...etc such as tailor, cook/ cook = dau bep/cooker = pan or teacher; but in fact, women today can do men''''s jobs - for example: worker, director, manager...- which need the health, firm stuff and intelligence.23. For family, not only working to earn money as man, they also know the way to co-ordinate "one side is family, one side is work", so they can shoulder well these responsibilities. 24. They can make use of time maximum they have, arrangement time more suitably than men, and they are less likely succumb fatigue or stressful job.25. Although the position of women has changed dramatically, each woman always be tied to family because the sacred mission of a woman is a wife, a mother, a sister,...etc.26. It''''s no surprise as in some families, women have higher position than man, on the contrary, even women earn money to bring up their children and man at home to care for them, so it easily led to broken home, in irony, only a reason: the inversion of women''''s position in family.27. All reasons above reveal that women are important and on the horizon, the position of them surely will become higher with every passing day! The end!!! Được ngnhatanh sửa chữa / chuyển vào 15:38 ngày 26/05/2008 Gửi lúc 10:51, 26/05/08
justalieThành viên mới,VietnamThành viên từ 08:42, 25/05/08Hiện có 10 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12758500

Phuong Dung Ielts26 2nd time week 4 MayEm gửi tiếp 10 câu ạ. 11. At the turn of the 18th century, the great industrial revolution happened in England led this nation to be the most developed country in the world. 12. Due to the skilful leadership of management board, ABC company overcame its dry spell and has gradually regained its market share and especially the customer?Ts belief.13. The cost of 1 hour playing golf is equivalent to his 1 week salary, it is so expensive that he has never dared to dream of.14. The environmental specialists have been calling the manufacturers to experiment with the environment friendly machines leaving as little as possible rubbish. 15. After becoming one of the most successful hardware company in the world, ABC has widened its horizons to manufacture software assessed very potentially.16. In this game, the gifts are arranged in a random disordered fashion that players can?Tt guess what gifts they would receive.17. Mr John decided to change his job because in the new position he is receiving 5000$ a week as compared with 1000$ in his old company.18. Chameleon uses its special ability - changing its colour instantly *****itable for surrounding environment ?" to search for food and avoid its foe.19. Mr Banksy, the most famous graffiti artist in the world, now has a new commission ?" a big picture on the giant wall the Israelis are building around the West Bank ?" for which his fee is more than 1 million dollars.20. Think of our modern life that even the humblest household objects use microprocessor, we can be served everything we need just with the push of a button. Được justalie sửa chữa / chuyển vào 11:49 ngày 26/05/2008 Gửi lúc 11:40, 26/05/08
lurangThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 15:03, 23/03/07Hiện có 781 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12759162

Trích từ bài của lurang viết lúc 22:20 ngày 24/05/2008: Em nộp bài với ạ.topic: "Hanoi''''''''s development" (tự nhiên hứng chí nghĩ ra)1. Capital of Hanoi called ?oCity of peace? has long been in noble Vietnamese history.2. In 1010, King Ly Thai To moved capital from Hoa Lu to Dai La, the old name of Hanoi, in order to use its position.3. The name Hanoi meant ?othe city between 2 rivers (Hong river and Day river)? has emerged since 1831.4. Now the square of Hanoi is equivalent to Singapore.5. Booming population and developing economics have set Hanoi to building many new plants to meet the demand.6. So Hanoi is broadened dramatically by new project of Government.7. The project disturbed specific citizens from their normal lives is on the way to fulfillment.8. Thus, Hanoi can be as imposing as one of the biggest cities all over the world.9. Since the turn of the century, Hanoi has been bigger and bigger than ever before.10. Hanoi is hoped that on the horizon is dynamic city. Hic, sao ngắn thế nhỉ?Được lurang sửa chữa / chuyển vào 22:27 ngày 24/05/2008 Bài này của em chưa được sửa Gửi lúc 12:59, 26/05/08
bananatuanThành viên mới,Thành viên từ 13:00, 26/05/08Hiện có 6 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12759471

Họ tên : Đoàn Tuấn / Học viên lớp IELTS26 1st time W4 May Em gửi bài viết , thầy kiểm tra cho em nhé . Tks/ Tuấn 1+2. Dancing, of course in one form or another, has long been service to human being. It can be imposed as a sport dancing like a dynamic activitiy or as quick as motor racing. 3+4. The nose cones of fighter plane have been broadened rapidly by new application safety helmet ?" more than over 100 million unit used in Viet Nam, as a most model by young people in this year 2008 when Viet Nam make great advances in economics.These could fully protect heads by means of non-destroyable materials, searching and finding by vast professional and top searcher team. 5+6 M.Tam could run hundreds of times faster than tomorrow?T top-ranking athlete in Olympic Beijing . A new record of M.Tam is the surge in stock market that has set investor to investing all their funds to meet it. 7+8 The use of flower as art, a tra***ion spins back at least to Hung King times, is also booming as huge as Big Bang, lighted a galaxy. Flowers, for in the 20 years since the end of the dry spell, were became one of the most successfully fine art. 9+10 In effect , H.Q.Huong versatility sing a folk song, lighted a celebration of VietNam-Japan relations concert. In the singing process, she fascinated audiences by her deep voice. Gửi lúc 13:31, 26/05/08
lurangThành viên mới ,VietnamThành viên từ 15:03, 23/03/07Hiện có 781 Chưa có ai bình chọn ID bài viết: 12760644

Lã Trang. 3rd time w4May21. Technical analysis, which consists of many model and programs processing information well, has dated back at least to the World War I time.22. Applications of the analysis haven?Tt functioned appropriately for specific security market in which Vietnamese is an outstanding example.23. 2006-2007, the bonanza of security market, nearly everywhere, it seemed, men and women were talking about securities.24. The dry spell of stock market called ?obear market? replaced ?obull market? at the end of 2007.25. Economics will change from stagnant to dynamic when obstacle lying in conservative management policy is deleted.26. Chronic shortage of capital of small and medium enterprises in Vietnam thanked to the improvements in economics climate has decreased.27. At the turn of 20th century in Vietnam, approximately a quarter of clothes were hand made by tailors.28. Bulb, in one form or another, lighted vastly more light is wondered a great invention.29. Doctors have tested tiny glass beads taking radiation doses inside the body for fashioning of cancer cells.30. There was a beautiful imagination in which many birds performed a symphony of music.31. Electric currents traveling over metals for instance copper wire can also carry telephone signals across nations. Gửi lúc 15:59, 26/05/08
tieuca07Thành viên mới,Thành viên từ 10:56, 29/02/08Hiện có 190 Đã được 1 người bình chọn (5.00) ID bài viết: 12760702

em là N N Tú.em nộp bài: 10 câu hôm nay và 10 câu hôm qua. 21/Today, the modem computer, appeared in the mid-20th century, comes to life as a means of communication.22/ Computer virus has been described as a worm of computer, destroying databases and also stealing documents, have attributed as dangerous computer virus. 23/ From database errors, in one or another ways, the hacker was imposed to spread viruses in computers, criminated information or destroyed database of computer.24/ Trojans, as one of the most dangerous viruses, not only has the attributes like another viruses: destroyed databases and stagnated system, but also they stole secret databases.25/ Viruses, base on the carelessness and impractically of people, all database? could be traveled over to computers hackers with a click of mouse.26/ Several viruses attracted to computer but did not destroy computer, by a strange way, they only hid all fodders and documents, so that we could not search or look for information, it believed that they were deleted.27/ Every year, Repair and recovery process of data have had more money than building ten five-stars hotels.28/ With the development of internet, set up it from 1858, is a working ideal climate of viruses, especial IM (instant messages), such as BxxB virus, surging in top viruses, spread faster than all of viruses have ever been before.29/ Only An hour, thousands of computers were infected by this virus, all working was stopped to have been waiting for repair.30/ Antivirus Program, developed parallel with virus, but is an enemy of it.31/ Today, there are hundreds of anti-virus programs, which are advertised with the best control, but programs made from Russia, Germany, US?are holding a large market share.32/ Antivirus programs are always updated the databases, added detection of new viruses, helped people feel safe.33/ Bit defender antivirus programs, voted number one by customers, but this program make computer run slower than others.34/ So that, many antivirus softwares lighter, utilized not much capacity of RAM, have been broadened dramatically such as Kapersky, Symatec, Avira?35/ Copyright software have long been stolen, in poor countries such as Viet Nam, by hacker.36/Another people do not want to use software outlaw, they can set-up trial antivirus software for a free time.37/Avira, as one of the widely used of trial softwares, is the most popular and it can be auto update each three days.38/This program is quite soft, protected all most of virus, but sometimes its could not protect some virus, caused by this trial has not full protection.39/Antivirus Professional R. Tom recommended that each computer should be setup two antivirus softwares, it would be stronger and more safety at work.40/Today, we should be caution not only viruses but also antivirus programs, many viruses could be hidden inner these softwares. Cám ơn thầy!