Lớp học tiếng Anh cô giáo PHƯƠNG THÙY (cô Thùy_ED Lò Đúc) - Lớp học TA lâu đời nhất trên TTVNOL từ 2

Chị ơi, chị gửi cái bảng có các mẫu cụm từ dẫn dắt trong task 2 để thay cho kiểu "in my opinion" truyền thống đi chị!

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Em Phương Giang, lớp E43 nộp bài:
Writing chủ đề: How to transplant a tree.
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Trees sometimes need to move to somewhere. This helps the plants have a more suitable location for its growth. How to transplant a tree so that it can still survive.
The first stage is: choose location where the tree will be able to thrive. This place is enough space for plant’s growth. Make sure that it will get enough sunlight and be protected from the wind. The type soil also must be consistent with newly transplanted trees. Then, dig the hole, this hold should be 2 to 3 times larger than the root ball of the tree. Remember that before digging several days, the plants need a plenty of water.
The second stage is: remove the trees. All roots must be cut before the tree is lifted. Protect the root during transport. They must be protected from wind, cold, sunlight and keep moist at all times.
The last stage is: plant the tree. The root system need to be at the same level in the new hold as it is in the ground right now. A layer of organic material 2 to 3 inches deep surrounding the newly planted tree will provide protection and nutrients.
In the end, there is a few things to care. Should transplant a tree in the late fall, winter or spring. Some trees need more sun, some need more shade, some need a lot of water. Fertilization only after at least 1 year when the tree is moved to new location. After all, trees will gradually adapt to new environment and develop normally.


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The bar graph reveals information about the differences of the amount of hours of unpaid work per week between men and women.
As can be seen from the graph, in the household where there is no children, the women just spent time at least in three cases, at 30 hourse per week, because of housework and gardening . In ad***ion, the corresponding figure for men is smaller, at 18 hours per week.
Nevertheless, the diference in the fomer is inconsiderable when comparing to the household with 1-2 children. In this circumstance, women’s contribution to this unpaid job rocket drammatically, and reach at 52 hour per week, approximately twice as much as the previous case. The reason for this could be that the time spent on taking care for children is significant. Meanwhile, men seem to untill remain roughly the same number of hours of unpaid work as in childless household.
Interestingly, when there are the presence of more than three children, men seem to be in freedom in unpaid job. The number of hours male work in the home plummet slightly. In contrast, women's unpaid hours hit a peak at approximately 56 perweek. it is so surprised when the number of hours women work is threefold as much as men’s unpaid hours.
Inconclusion, it could be also noticed that if each household have more younger members, men’s responsibility is lower, while women have to increase their liability more than other case.

Em Trọng E48 nộp bài Writing Task 2. Chị chữa giúp em với, em vẫn chưa hài lòng lắm về bài này.



The issue of global climate change is now not only the interest of any individual but of all countries in the world. Some people think that individual actions to prevent global climate change will have significant impact to the process of changing that. But some of them suggested that individuals can not do anything significantly that only governments and businesses enough power to prevent climate change process is underway. Each point has its own reasons, and standing at each corner will look at issue in different ways.

Each of us has a certain impact on the environment and absolutely, everyday there is a lot of things each of us can do to help stopping climate change. By recycling and buying products with recycled content mean that you saved energy, resources and landfill space! In ad***ion, when you purchase products with the amount of packaging, not only do you save money, but also you help the environment! Moreover, you can plant more trees because that a single tree can absorb one ton of carbon dioxide over its lifetime. Many scientist also advise us that by turning off your TV, computer and other electronic devices can save thousand of kg of each household carbon dioxide each year.

It might also be noted that sometimes there are things that only the involvement of government and enterprises have a significant impact in preventing global climate change. The first thing to mention is, it will be very effective if government policies are strict punishment for businesses who do not treat waste carefully before discharge into the environment. By indicating the result of research environmental programs to help people understand the importance of preventing global climate change, the Government will make all of us from awareness to action more aggressively . More over, businesses must also have responsibilities in this long process. If every business reduce the amount of waste generated during the manufacturing process by using morden technology, will make the environment becomes more fresh, making the process of climate change can be reduced.

From my own perspective, every member of society has their certain impact on the efficiency of the process to prevent global climate change. It is important that we must act jointly to make a better living environment.

Climate change is always a problem which have been mentioned a lot recently. Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that preventing global climate change is not just the responsibility of any individual or corporation, which is the whole world, to act together for our planet more green.

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[FONT=&quot]Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many people children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from school curriculum?
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Subjects like art, sport and music nurture the talents and creativity of students in school. Removing such subjects from the curriculum would definitely have a negative impact on the physical and psychological development of children of that age group. Hence, I would completely reject the idea of removing these subjects, even if it is to fit in important subjects like Information Technology.

Firstly, the purpose of education is not only to develop the academic ability of students but also to nurture their creative talents and sporting abilities, leading to the comprehensive growth of the personality of an individual. If the above disciplines are removed from school syllabus in order to accommodate new subjects, the real purpose of education would be defeated and it would be limited to academic pursuits alone. For example, if schools do not give opportunity to children who are gifted in music, dance and sports to develop their skills, it would certainly stunt the inborn talents. Apart from school hours, they hardly get a chance to engage in such activities. Hence, school authorities should ensure that sufficient time is given to sport, arts and related activities, in spite of the pressure from new subjects.

Secondly, if school hours are completed packed with academic subjects children would hardly get time to refresh their mind. This would mean that creative and recreational activities like music and sports would give them time to unload their pressures of academic studies and examinations. Furthermore, the opportunity to engage in activities of their interest would make education an enjoyable experience for children. For instance, most children are delighted in participating in sports after tedious hours of academic studies. It would also rejuvenate their minds and help them to get back to their studies.

Finally, the study of academic subjects hardly gives any room for developing socialisation skills, team work and leadership qualities. Children acquire such attributes by participating in extracurricular activities. To cite an instance, a team sport like soccer or a musical concert would help children to coordinate team activities and take up leadership.

On the other hand, there are people who argue that there is no harm in dropping extracurricular activities in order to find space for new subjects like information technology. They contend that these new subjects are inevitable for children to develop their academic careers and they should find time apart from school hours to engage in non-academic pursuits. However, this reason does not seem to be very convincing as much of after-school hours are packed with home work or other academic projects. Apart from that, facilities and opportunities for such activities are very limited away from school.

In conclusion, school authorities should find a suitable way to fit in subjects like information technology, without downplaying the importance of arts and sports.


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Em Việt E42
Some people say that the age of books is the past. The information will be presented by videos, computers, television and films. Others think the books and written words will be necessary for spread information and complete education. Discuss?

In recent days, the existence of books has aroused an enormous controversy among the general public. Many people argue that the appearance of internet, television would replace the role of books, while others think that it is not reasonable opinion. In my opinion, it is quite difficult to decide whether *****pport or reject the statement of that issue. This essay will analyze on both sides of the issue.

People in flavor of the assumption above hole some strong arguments for their position. In the first place, many people have a tendency to get information by using modern devices such as internet, video, films and so on because of their convenience. In fact, most of information is uploaded on Internet. Therefore many people prefer using internet to update their information to spending many hours for reading books. Other point to note is that there are many websites such as Nature, Science- online scientific magazines which are allowed to publish professional knowledge. Thereby, people can widen their knowledge in many diversity sources about environmental, medical, technological issues and so on. More interestingly, students can also practise many exercises with lively instructions from many prestigious teachers of many reputation universities on television via educational channels. Students no longer spend a lot of time to read books or go to the centers for learning. *****m up, the reading habit decreases gradually in a large number of young generations.

On the other hand, there are several violent objections *****ch view. In the first place, it is generally point out that book will remain the whole value to the next generation as well as its position to the readers. Reading habit is the good habit which encourages the development of nervous system because it stimulates the activities of neutrons. In ad***ion, it also enables readers to brainstorm throughout thinking, imagine and analyzing process. From the scientist view, reading books is a way to develop the memory ability, and improve people intelligence. In the second place, an increasing of opponents argues that books provide the valuable knowledge with the storage value. Actually, the human being’ knowledge is accumulated day-by-day, and it is transmitted through previous generations to the next ones by writing in the books. Thus, books contain the precious knowledge from the fundamental knowledge to the specialism. Especially, books are necessary for those people who do their research because the information on books is usually censored many times before publishing. Therefore, citing information from books are the most realizable.

In conclusion, as elaborately discussed above, both sides appear to prove their good points. In my opinion, I am in flavor of the idea that books can not replace, and affirm its value in modern society.

em Diệu Linh E48 nộp bài writing task 2. Chị sửa giúp em với ạ

It is irrefutable that individuals , government and large businesses can do to help prevent global climate change and it could be difficult to say action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that governments and large businesses which can make a difference. In the following paragraphs, I would highlight the role of them with my perspective.


There are many different ways in order that the individuals can help to reduce climate change,called greenhouse effect. The first reason that can be seen by every person is that you plant a tree. The following the website ,named www. Arborday.org which is one of famous websites about eviroment , said that a single tree will absorb one ton of carbon dioxide over its lifetime and shade provided by trees can also reduce your air con***ioning bill by 10 to 15%. In ad***ion to this, you can avoid products with a lot of packaging to prevent waste from being created in the first place, which means that there is less energy wasted and fewer resources consumed. One instance of this is that when you purchase products with the least amount of packaging, not only do you save money,but you also help the environment , reducing your garbage by 10% reduces carbon dioxide emissions by 1200 pounds ( Source: Earth911.com ).


On the other hand, government and large businesses helps also to fall global climate change. There are many reasons that can verify this is according to www.acoolerclimate.com is that Local and state governments can do to help decline the climate change, and have increasingly taken the lead on global warming prevention, with more than 225 US cities pledging support for the Kyoto protocol or even more stringent reductions in emissions, despite foot-dragging at the national level. Besides this, the large business also decrease producing carbon dioxide and anaerobic decomposition that produces methane,and they promote recycling.


I’m conviced that all of them is accurate and they need to help each other. In fact that the government encourages citizens to be aware of environmental protection by issuing propaganda, or environmental laws. We protect environment is that we preserve ourselves.

Base on the above discussion and analysis , we can see that global climate change is identified as one of the greatest threats to the planet, so we must support each other to reduce global climate change which means environment to be protected.

Lương Thuỳ Linh - E45
Đề 14:
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the amount of estimated oil production capacity per day for selected Gulf countries in the years 1990, 2000, 2005 and 2010.
As can be seen from the graph, the most obvious trend in several Gulf countries was upward apart from in Quatar that was rather erratic. The overwhelming majority of those countries’ estimated oil production capacity was Saudi Arabia. In 1990, its output capacity was about 8,2 millions of barrels per day, that bigger than the total of the others’ output capacity. This figure was rose sharply to approximately three quarters at about 14, 2 million barrels per day in 2010.
For example, In Iran, the number of estimated oil production capacity has increased steadily from about 3 million barrels in 1990 to just over 4 million barrels per day in 2010. Furthermore, for iraq and Kuwait, the patterns were reserved.
In fact, in the UAE, its output capacity was remained stable at 2,2 million barrels per day between 1990 to 2000, after that rose gradually and reached at just over 4 million barrels per day in 2010.
Overall, the number of oil prodution capacity of Gulf countries will be expected to increase, and Saudi Arabia will remain the position as the overwhelming majority.

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