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    Em Ha Giang - E51 nop bai chi nhe

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the environmental pollution. Most people are worried about the serious troubles with our environment and find the way to solve it. Three of the main problems are land pollution, air pollution and water pollution.

    Firstly, we can easily to see the land pollution. Most of the problems with environment come from people. The reason that can be seen by every person is that cutting down trees can lead to soil erosion. Besides that, everyday, people waste million tons of rubbish such as plastic bottle, nilon, paper, industrial rubbish… It makes to full of rubbish on land-fill site. I strong believe that we can handle this problem by plant more trees, reduce waste and recycle rubbish, produce biodegradable objects… It not only helps us decrease land pollution, but also supports us save money.

    In ad***ion, we must care about the air pollution. Every body know that motorbikes and cars emit dangerous gases, and that cause polluted atmosphere and cancer. Investor know that buildings and factories will make greenhouse gases. People is facing with global warming by the changeable weather. Therefore, the best way to improve the air pollution is using public transport more often, buying cars with less polluting engines, buying fuel efficient cars…

    Finally, water is becoming extremely polluted. The main effect of pollution and others environmental problems on water are contaminated rivers, melting ice caps. Moreover, droughts and floods are occurring unusual. These can be dealt with by applying waste treament systems on all factories. The government can charge pollution factories high taxes.

    From what has been discussed, we may finally draw the conclusion that the environmental pollution is increasing. The government should take care as soon as possible and I believe that the most important thing to solve these worse problems is changing our habit.
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    Em Huy Tùng E51

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the polluted environment. This problem affects land, air and water. Therefore, this essay will discuss these affections and the measures that can be taken to solve them.

    I believe the main problems on land are deforestation, soil erosion, litter on the street, land-fill sites full of rubbish… Firstly, trees are cut down in the upstream will cause the flood, drought and other natural disasters. Secondly, soil erosion reduces the agriculture land, so food will be less. In ad***ion,
    [FONT=&quot]land - fill sites full of rubbish occurs as the result of using plastic packaging. Perhaps the most helpful thing we can do tackle these difficulties is to plant more trees, to reduce waste and to recycle rubbish.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]The ways in which air is affected are as follows. [/FONT]The first problem is smog of manufactories which can take part in air pollution and adverse effect for human healthy. In ad***ion, greenhouse gases can lead to move upward earth’s temperature and influence strongly to the multilateral of environment. Finally, the warmer of earth changes the normal con***ion of many biological in the world. I believe the best way to reduce these problems is by turning off lights or appliances when they are no longer in use, using renewable form energy, and using public transport more often…
    The main effects of pollution and other problems on water are floods, droughts, contaminated rivers, melting ice caps… These can be dealt with
    [FONT=&quot]by raising the awareness of people, advocating public response to the program against pollution.[/FONT]
    It is crucial that these measure are taken in order to ensure a healthy future for our planet.
  3. paun53

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    Em Linh Lan - E 51 nộp bài ạ:


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    Along with the rapid development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that environmental pollution. Nowadays, environmental issues are becoming serious problems that many countries have to face. Pollution occurs not only in the water, but also in the air and the land. There is no doubt that all types of pollution influences human living environment. Therefore, researches to find out solutions are now being considerably invested in many countries.

    From my own perspective, air pollution is the most considerable problem because of its wide and permanent impacts. There are many phenomenons which have concern with air pollution, such as smog in the cities, toxic fumes, greenhouse effect, global warming… The affects of air pollution in humans are negatively detrimental to health. Smog and toxic fumes lead to higher rate of dangerous respiratory diseases such as lung cancer, bronchitis, chronic cough... Greenhouse effect and global warming cause flood, forest fires. According to the researches of many scientists, the major reasons of air pollution are from human activites such as burning of fuels, natural gas, coal and oil, tobacco smoke… Therefore, the best solutions to deal with this problem have to begin from human awareness. Some effective solutions are being applied in many countries, for example reducing industrial exhaust, charging polluting factories high taxes, using less-polluting energy …

    It might also be noted that water pollution is also a considerable trouble not less than air pollution. There is no denying that the affects of water pollution are more and more critical with nature environment as well as human living environment. Floods, spread of waterborne illnesses such as dysentery, intestinal infections; lack of water for household and irrigation are consequences of water pollution – causing activities. The most highly recommended solutions to solve water pollution are prevention and cleanup water resource as soon as possible, by realistic activites such as conserve clean water, disposal of toxic chemicals from industrial wastewater before draining it to river, lake…

    There is a further more subtle point we must consider is land pollution problem. A sizable percentage of researchers have the idea that the main cause of land pollution is the large amount of waste from urbanization, industrial and agricultural production. Trees and plants can not grow in pollution soil. Moreover, the toxic chemicals can change the structure of the land and lead to death of many essential organisms in it. Consequently, variety of solutions are being executed to decrease land pollution, including using biodegradable and reusable objects instead of plastic ones, planting more trees, reducing waste and recycling rubbish…

    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the effect of pollution can cause ecological imbalance and harmful influences for human health. Air pollution, water pollution and land pollution have concern with each other, cause various consequences to the environment. This problem is quite alarming and it is high time for us to implement simultaneously the solutions in order to reach long – term effects.

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    Uả, bài đó chị chữa xong lớp em trước lớp E51 mờ, hay chị quên ko gửi nhở, để chị check lại :-ss
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    Chài, bao h mình mới viết được như các bạn ấy nhỉ :(
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    Em chưa nhận được c ơi:), cơ mà c chưa bảo nộp vở writing và speaking của lớp em cho c
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    Chị Thùy ah, em Huyền và Vang E48 xin phép chị bọn em phải nghỉ học tuần này vì phải thi ở trường chị nhé. Em tiếc lắm í. Em cảm ơn chị nhiều.
  8. thuy_ed

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    Em check pm nhé, chị vừa gửi tin nhắn riêng cho em đấy!

    UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 09/2011:



    [r32)][r32)][r32)]LỚP KĨ NĂNG TỔNG QUÁT + pre. IELTS:<FONT class=imageattach face=[/IMG]ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
    @} Giúp bạn lấy lại từ gốc rễ kiến thức Ngữ pháp – Phát âm – Từ vựng – Thao tác dịch thuật cơ bản trong tiếng Anh
    @} Là khóa học chuẩn mẫu cho đối tượng ôn thi Cao học & Nghiên cứu sinh
    @} Là khóa học kĩ năng dìu dắt những người bắt đầu học ôn IELTS
    @} Là khóa học hiệu quả, học viên sẽ học dưới sự nghiêm khắc của GV kiểm tra, đôn đốc, thu bài vở hàng ngày, kết hợp học và chữa bài online

    Trong quý 3/2011, Mrs. Thuy_ED có dự kiến khai giảng lớp SKILLS + pre.IELTS mã số E54 & E55 với lịch như sau:

    [r32)] Lớp mã E54
    * Thời gian học: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 3; 5.30-7.00pm thứ 4; 7.30-9.00pm thứ 6
    *Dự kiến khai giảng: 20/09/2011
    *Thời lượng khóa học: 4,5 tháng
    * Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 4,5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

    [r32)] Lớp mã E55
    * Thời gian học: 2.00-4.00pm thứ 7 & Chủ nhật
    *Dự kiến khai giảng: 24/09/2011
    *Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
    * Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

    [r32)][r32)][r32)] Lớp IELTS TARGET BAND 7 + (Mã: E53)

    ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
    @} GV cung cấp tất cả kĩ năng làm bài thi từng kĩ năng thành phần trong kì thi IELTS
    @} GV luyện tập cho HV nói trôi chảy, phát âm chuẩn, như phong cách người bản xứ
    @} GV cùng HVthực nghiệm, chia sẻbài viết IELTS
    @} GV cùng HV luyện tập làm các đề thi IELTS cập nhật nhất
    @} GV cung cấp cho HV theo yêu cầu nguồn tài liệu ôn thi IELTS dồi dào, phong phú nhất

    [r32)]Lớp mã E53:
    * Thời gian học: 3 buổi 1 tuần gồm: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 4 và 8.00 - 9.30am Chủ nhật + buổi học Speaking nhóm nhỏ HV được chọn giờ khi đăng kí: 5.30pm thứ 5 hoặc 10am thứ 7 (lưu ý: giờ chọn ưu tiên cho những HV đăng kí sớm nhất, trong trường hợp thời điểm bạn đăng kí, 1 ngày học lựa chọn đã full, bạn phải chấp nhận ngày còn lại)
    *D kiến khai ging: 07/09/2011
    *Thi lượng khóa hc: 5 tháng
    *Hc phí: 9.000.000 VND (gm hc phí 5 tháng hc trc tiếp cùng GV trên lp + các đơn v hc Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

    ĐỂ GHI DANH VÀO LỚP HỌC:
    Các bạn vui lòng qua đóng học phí trực tiếpvới GV: Mrs. Thuy_ED tại địa chỉ lớp học: 103-khu 18- Ngõ 108 Lò Đúc – HN (trước khi qua các bạn hẹn trước qua ĐT để tránh vào giờ dạy của GV)
    hoặc
    chuyển khoản qua TK của GV: TK Techcombank Hà Nội: 14024431228016 - chủ TK: Nguyễn Phương Thùy (sau khi CK, các bạn nhắn tin vào ĐT của cô giáo tên đầy đủ, số ĐT, đ/c email của người học).
    Chú ý: Tất cả các lớp nhận những học viên đăng kí = đóng học phí sớm nhất và không nhận thêm khi lớp đã đủ sĩ số.
    Cảm ơn sự quan tâm theo dõi của các bạn! Hy vọng được học cùng các bạn với tinh thần hợp tác [r2)][r2)][r2)]
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    Sơn - E52 nộp bài !
    Note : em không chắc bài viết có đúng hết hay không >:), nhưng em bảo đảm bài nói em đọc không sót chữ nào ^^

    link nghe : http://www.mediafire.com/?5ljxw227r8nrxbd

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    Well you know, the housework always requires a lot of time and effort. I need to start by pointing out that there are a lot of work to be name housework as sweeping and cleaning floors, cleaning kitchens and bathrooms, garbage, tree care, washing clothes. .. you need to know that I do not like doing housework and I do not frequent do housework. In fact, my mother is a regular doing housework.

    which job do you least enjoy doing in the house ?
    job that I least enjoy doing in the house is wipe the floor, And I guess this is probably because I found that having to run all three floors and wipe it off three floors (including stairs) is a job that requires a lot of time and I often ignored some places not so often wipe so my mother often scolded.

    which job do you most enjoy doing in the house ?
    job that I most enjoy doing in the house is washing clothes, the actual work that is packed all the dirty clothes in the washing machine and then press the button and wait a while, you can bring the clothes to exposed to the sun , which is a job does not require much time and quite gentle.

    How much time do you spend doing housework ?
    I do not spend much time on housework, usually about 1-2 hours a day, Of course I think I’d have to say that my mom who regular do housework and I guess I could also remark on the fact that she make them very good.

    Did you help with the housework when you were a child ?
    Yes, I did .
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    In large numbers around the world , people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern that children are gaining experience of work environment. In the past in America, children were valuable worker. Some people believe that the ages of fifteen or sixteen are the best years for young to commence work for money . However, enrolling younger students in works at an earlier age bring with it several advantages and disadvantages .
    First of all, environment build skills. Very young children learn communication skills and work skills when they realize their problem and solve them .It is a well-known fact that the younger an individual is, the easier it is for him or her acquire knowledge and information. Handing everyday task teaches organization and time management skills. Children learn that chores have to be complement before they can play, or after ? And young student is therefore in the best possible position to learn new information and this will put them in a much stronger position for success in later schooling years.
    On the other hand, [FONT=&quot]there are many children who want to finish high-school and find a job, just to be financially independent. But there are have many social pitfalls that young people who lack experience is susceptible to entangle (is easy to stuck) .Therefore, they accept to work in bars or restaurants where [/FONT]concentration of social ills like drug, prostitution……
    In conclusion, children should not work for money all the time. A happy life needs balance. But if they can successfully handles tasks at work, they will handles life better too. They will know the satisfaction of doing a good job , be involved in family life , become more confident and responsible adults.

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    [FONT=&quot]1- [/FONT][FONT=&quot]The age at which children are allowed to work for money caries from country to country . While some people believe it is wrong, others regard it as a valuable opportunity to gain experience of the work environment.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot] In large numbers around the world , people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern that children are gaining experience of work environment. In the past in America, children were valuable worker. Some people believe that the ages of fifteen or sixteen are the best years for young to commence work for money . However, enrolling younger students in works at an earlier age bring with it several advantages and disadvantages .[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]First of all, environment build skills. Very young children learn communication skills and work skills when they realize their problem and solve them .It is a well-known fact that the younger an individual is, the easier it is for him or her acquire knowledge and information. Handing everyday task teaches organization and time management skills. Children learn that chores have to be complement before they can play, or after ? And young student is therefore in the best possible position to learn new information and this will put them in a much stronger position for success in later schooling years.[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]On the other hand, [/FONT][FONT=&quot]there are many children who want to finish high-school and find a job, just to be financially independent. But there are have many social pitfalls that young people who lack experience is susceptible to entangle (is easy to stuck) .Therefore, they accept to work in bars or restaurants where [/FONT][FONT=&quot]concentration of social ills like drug, prostitution……[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]In conclusion, children should not work for money all the time. A happy life needs balance. But if they can successfully handles tasks at work, they will handles life better too. They will know the satisfaction of doing a good job , be involved in family life , become more confident and responsible adults.[/FONT]
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