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Em Cẩm Tú E51 nộp bài Writing ạ!

There is no denying that everything has more than one face and a mobile telephone is no exception. It has brought many benefits but it has also had negative effects.

A mobile phone plays an important role in our lives, it helps us to communicate with others easily and quickly. Especially it is very convenient for everybody who has to move frequently. Along with the development of technology, the features of mobile phones are rich and modern, such as messaging, using dictionaries and maps, photographing; furthermore with connecting internet, we can surf web or chat. What a great thing because all those features are packed into a tiny phone.

However, the impact has not all been positive because a mobile phone can make people distractingly, particularly when they are driving. This easily leads to the unfortunate accidents. Listening to music from cell phones has become popularly but using it too much at loud sound is very harmful for our ears. Mobile phones transmit and receive electro-magnetic waves which do not only harm the nervous system and eyes, but also affect genital organs. Dr. Charles Gerba, an expert is at the University of Arizona, USA, found that a mobile phone is an ideal habitat for many types of bacteria that cause dangerous diseases and one fifth of them are not impacted by common antibiotics

I can not imagine what would happen with our lives without the presence of cell phones, although they give no less harm, from my own perspective I still believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In ad***ion, , using mobile phones by corect ways to reduce their disadvantages is extremely important. In some cases, we should decline cell phones using time and the best approach is to increase the distance between the user and the electro-magnetic waves by keeping your phone in bags, away from the body.

Em Linh E51 nộp bài ạ
Nowadays, mobile telephone gets more and more popular with everyone. It becomes an dispensable equitment with many people. Althought we use it everyday, there are few people who know effect of mobile telephone. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;}
There are several obivious benefits which everybody know. Mobile telephone is a technological equirment which people use to contact with each other. Due to mobile telephone, geographical distance is abridge, people gets in touch with their relatives easily although they stay away. Sometimes, people travelling alone feel safer when have a mobile phone because they can call to require help whenever. Other positive aspect is listening to music, taking photo, playing games, sending and receiving mail. However, only modern mobile telephones have those function.
The impact has not all been positive. There are much discussion about harmless of mobile telephone and the most common criticism is damage to brain. According to some online newspaper, when putting mobile telephone next to head, mobile telephone make brain consume more seven percent of energy. Next, using mobile telephone before sleeping make you sleep difficulty and feel headache. It is reason why you are tired and reduce concenstration on the next day. Besides, it is also effect ability to birth with men. If men often put mobile telephone in pocket of trousers, they are inanimate easily. Another negative effect is worry. People are often scare of being stolen mobile phone on the bus. A final drawback is that there are some false mobile telephone which cause accident to user such as: fire, burst, ect.
Mobile phone is a useful modern technological equitment but based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the disadvantages of having mobile outweigh the advantages. However, now, mobile phone play an important role in our life and I believe that if use mobile reasonablely, people will limit disadvantage of mobile phone.

em thành e48 nộp bài speaking :
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[FONT=&quot]Well you know, along with the rapid development of the society, remarkable changes take place in the car industry. That’s why I believed that the design of the car in the future could be more comfortable and modern. In my opinion, two of the future designs of cars are: using solar power and having capable of flying. Firstly, I think a future car should be used by solar power, because our natural energy sources are going to exhausted. Moreover, solar power is a clean source and environmentally friendly. Secondly, I strongly believed that in the future, a car could be used like a small airplane. It means we can use our car to fly. However, It’s very difficult to control the transport systems in the sky, we will have many trouble such as the accidents or terrorist attacks.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]To be honest, you know, in Vietnam the average houses are usually built quite irregular. The construction of a house depends on the owner’s taste rather than overall logical architecture. You may think how the house can change in 10 years’ time, I guess it will more beautiful, facilities and save with dome. Moreover, I think overall architecture will be better, the buildings with logical architectural and planning composition will replace the old buildings. In ad***ion to this, inside the house, all things are an automatic system, we can have a comfortable life in our house. That’s why I really like a future house which is very convenient.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]3. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] Well to be honest, I really think that the government should spend more money to research alternative forms of energy. In the future, when the population is going to increase more and more and the natural source is not enough for us. We need new forms of energy, it can be nuclear, solar power. Moreover, along with the rapid development of the society, remarkable changes take place in science. Nowadays, we have more research which is significant, many times more effective than previous century. That’s why I strongly believe that we will find the new forms of energy source. *****m up, I think our human beings should pay more and more money to research for a much better source of energy
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Em Linh Lan E 51 nộp bài ạ - Task 2 : Mobile telephones

There is no denying that everything has more than one face and the mobile telephone is no exception. Mobile phone was invented in 1980s and then has rapidly become one of the most essential devices of modern world. However, mobile telephones also bring some negative effects to people who use them.

There are several obvious benefits of this handheld device, such as convenient and fast connecting, easily transferring information, time – saving… The mobile phones allow people to communicate faster than older methods. Therefore, time losses waiting for information can be considerably reduced. The most advantage of mobile phones compares with desk phones is that you can take it along everywhere. A mobile phone can help you more initiative in getting in touch with your family, your friends or your partners. Especially in emergency situations such as losing your way, vehicle breakdown or sudden accidents… cell phones all the more indicate their great effects. At that time, when finding a public phone is difficult, a mobile phone can be a savior for people.
Another positive aspect is that people can use the various attached applications of mobile telephones, for example camera, voice recorder, music player, stopwatch, radio… The most excellent invention of the latest mobile phones is that they are not just only mobile phones. You even can use a cell phone like a mobile office or use internet to check mail, surf websites or chat with your friends everywhere, everytime with your mobile phone.

The impact has not all been positive, mobile phones have also brought some negative influences. The most common criticism is the diseases which related to the radio waves. According to many scientific researches, radio waves of cell phones infect to skull, brain, nervous system, eyes, face cells, skin around ears…
Another negative effect is communicable diseases which are considered that originate from bacteria on mobile phone’s keyboard. A research of Portugal scientists show that 94.5% of test pieces has dangerous pathogens.
A final drawback is that using mobile phone while driving can cause traffic accidents. According to the research of Carnegie Mellon University, The United States of America, the control ability of people’s brain decreases 37% when they using cell phones. It is the reason leading to neglect and risk of having accidents. Talking on a cell phone while driving increases the risk of accidents four times, and texting increases the risk twenty – three times.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that mobile phones bring much more convenience to people. If we use mobile telephones properly, the advantages of them can outweigh the disadvantages and bring us more and more benefits in our daily life.

BÀI CHUẨN BỊ CUẢ LỚP E52 cho thứ 5 (08.09.11):
Học viết writing Task 1 về miêu tả quy trình (cả lớp xem và mang giáo trình academic writing từ trang 32-52); chữa bài Reading comprehension 6B-10B
Lớp nộp vở làm bài VOCAB từ 1B-10B

BÀI CHUẨN BỊ CUẢ LỚP E49 cho thứ 3 (06.09.11):
Lớp học tiếp bài Unit 4 ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY - chữa dịch Việt - Anh, nếu còn thời gian học Unit 12 IELTS SKILLS [r2)]

UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 09/2011:​

[r32)][r32)][r32)]LỚP KĨ NĂNG TỔNG QUÁT + pre. IELTS:<FONT class=imageattach face=[/IMG]ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
@} Giúp bạn lấy lại từ gốc rễ kiến thức Ngữ pháp – Phát âm – Từ vựng – Thao tác dịch thuật cơ bản trong tiếng Anh
@} Là khóa học chuẩn mẫu cho đối tượng ôn thi Cao học & Nghiên cứu sinh
@} Là khóa học kĩ năng dìu dắt những người bắt đầu học ôn IELTS
@} Là khóa học hiệu quả, học viên sẽ học dưới sự nghiêm khắc của GV kiểm tra, đôn đốc, thu bài vở hàng ngày, kết hợp học và chữa bài online

Trong quý 3/2011, Mrs. Thuy_ED có dự kiến khai giảng lớp SKILLS + pre.IELTS mã số E54 & E55 với lịch như sau:

[r32)] Lớp mã E54
* Thời gian học: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 3; 5.30-7.00pm thứ 4; 7.30-9.00pm thứ 6
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 20/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 4,5 tháng
* Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 4,5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

[r32)] Lớp mã E55
* Thời gian học: 2.00-4.00pm thứ 7 & Chủ nhật
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 24/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
* Học phí: 8.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

[r32)][r32)][r32)] Lớp IELTS TARGET BAND 7 + (Mã: E53)

ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
@} GV cung cấp tất cả kĩ năng làm bài thi từng kĩ năng thành phần trong kì thi IELTS
@} GV luyện tập cho HV nói trôi chảy, phát âm chuẩn, như phong cách người bản xứ
@} GV cùng HVthực nghiệm, chia sẻbài viết IELTS
@} GV cùng HV luyện tập làm các đề thi IELTS cập nhật nhất
@} GV cung cấp cho HV theo yêu cầu nguồn tài liệu ôn thi IELTS dồi dào, phong phú nhất

[r32)]Lớp mã E53:
* Thời gian học: 3 buổi 1 tuần gồm: 7.30-9.00pm thứ 4 và 8.00 - 9.30am Chủ nhật + buổi học Speaking nhóm nhỏ HV được chọn giờ khi đăng kí: 5.30pm thứ 5 hoặc 10am thứ 7 (lưu ý: giờ chọn ưu tiên cho những HV đăng kí sớm nhất, trong trường hợp thời điểm bạn đăng kí, 1 ngày học lựa chọn đã full, bạn phải chấp nhận ngày còn lại)
*Dự kiến khai giảng: 07/09/2011
*Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
*Học phí: 9.000.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

ĐỂ GHI DANH VÀO LỚP HỌC:
Các bạn vui lòng qua đóng học phí trực tiếpvới GV: Mrs. Thuy_ED tại địa chỉ lớp học: 103-khu 18- Ngõ 108 Lò Đúc – HN (trước khi qua các bạn hẹn trước qua ĐT để tránh vào giờ dạy của GV)
hoặc
chuyển khoản qua TK của GV: TK Techcombank Hà Nội: 14024431228016 - chủ TK: Nguyễn Phương Thùy (sau khi CK, các bạn nhắn tin vào ĐT của cô giáo tên đầy đủ, số ĐT, đ/c email của người học).
Chú ý: Tất cả các lớp nhận những học viên đăng kí = đóng học phí sớm nhất và không nhận thêm khi lớp đã đủ sĩ số.
Cảm ơn sự quan tâm theo dõi của các bạn! Hy vọng được học cùng các bạn với tinh thần hợp tác [r2)][r2)][r2)]

Mình vừa gửi trả lớp E49 bài chữa WRITING đợt 7 nhé, cả lớp check và chép lại vào vở, thứ 6 nộp lại cho cô giáo nha [r32)]

Chị ơi lớp E51 còn một bài online gì nữa hả chị và khi nào phải nộp ah?

Chị ơi, em nộp bài speaking online, làm chống cháy c ạ
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[FONT=&quot]Well to be honest, I think I would really say that I’m actually quite keen on watching television. I guess the reason why I am a fan of watching television is because it brings not only lively sounds but only honest images. Example, I can study cooking, watch films and see scenery around the world on TV. In contrast, sometimes I listen to the radio when I am doing housework or sitting on bus. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Do you like sending letter or text message to your friends?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Well in truth, in general I would say that I am actually quite keen on [/FONT][FONT=&quot]text message to my friends. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]To be more precise,[/FONT][FONT=&quot] text message is quicker and more convenient than sending letter. In fact, my friends can receive and reply messages absolutely. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]3. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Which do you prefer talking people on the phone or talking face to face?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Of course, I think I would have to say that I am keen on[/FONT][FONT=&quot] talking to people face to face[/FONT][FONT=&quot].[/FONT][FONT=&quot] This could be because I can see expressive face and know feelings of opposite people. In ad***ion, I feel comfortable and can talk everything when I direct to communicate to people. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]4. [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Do you like buying things in shop or buying things in the internet?[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Well in general I would say that I am quite passionate about buying things in the internet. This could be because I can stay at home and buy things whenever I want. In fact, I can see information about prices, features of products, so I can save time to compare them without going to shops.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Describe some exciting news that you heard or read about? You should say:[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]When you heard/ read about the news[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Where you heard/ read about it[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]What the news was[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And explain why you found the news exiting.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I guess I could begin by saying something about some exciting news that I heard, and I think I would have to talk about famine at Somalia. As you know, a week ago, when I watched news on TV at home, I heard over 3000 people died because they did not have foods in a long time. Moreover, 70% of Somalia citizen are being hungry and living in refugee camp. Many children are becoming skinny and malnutrition. United Nations are inviting donations from everybody in the world. I am obsessed by this information and many pictures about thousands are dying of hunger. I am aware that I am having a happy life and we should help poor people.
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The table reveals information on the type of the fuels that European countries use to generate electricity in 2001. Each unit was measured in percent.
Apparently, it can be seen that there was a significant change in the proportion of use four different fuels of all countries. Actually, the most dramatic changes are evident in Belgium, Italy, Sweden, Britain and Germany. Belgium had by far the highest using fuel for nuclear rates, with 58%, closely followed by Sweden with 45 % and Germany with 29% and Britain with 23%. Nevertheless, Italy had the lowest rate with 0 %.
Another striking feature is that Germany was the highest rates country of coal & lignite with 50 %, while the percentage of Britain was consistently 34%, standing the second biggest proportion, preceded by the rates in Belgium and Italy. Noticeably, the rate of Sweden appeared to be the lowest with 1% respectively.
A interesting thing is that the percentage use of petroleum & products of Italy was much less than another countries. Italy led with 27%, followed by Britain, Sweden, Belgium ( with 2%). In comparison, Germany at a lowest point of 1%.
Another outstanding feature is that hydro & wind used to generate electricity of Britain and Belgium appeared to be by far the lowest percentage, making up only 2%, while the number of Sweden, Italy and Germany was 49%,20% and 6%, respectively.
Noticeably, the percentage use of other fuel types to generate electricity in five European countries in 2001 . The number of both the Sweden, the Italy and the Britain was above 40%. In fact, these numbers were 44%,42% and 39%, respectively. Conversely, Germany and Belgium ‘s percentage appear to be by far the lowest with 13% and 26%.
In conclusion, the table may well reflect that the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five European countries in 2001.

em Diệu Linh E48 nộp bài writing task 1 chị ạ

The table shows that the percentage of four different fuel types used to generate electricity in five European countries in 2001.The percentage of four different fuel types was varying from country to country, they are nuclear, coal & lignite, petroleum products, hydro &wind and others.
Nuclear fuel is used mostly in Belgium and Sweden in which occupied highest 58% and 45%, respectively .In contrast , Italy did not use nuclear fuel , the proportion of holding nuclear fuel in Germany and Britain accounted for a medium.In ad***ion to this, the percentage of using coal & lignite fuel appropriated a half in Germany and lowest in Sweden, approximately 1%. The petroleum products was not popular in countries, they accounted for a small amount. In fact, the percentage of using petroleum products occupied highest in Italy, approximately 27%. In the rest of countries, the proportion was from 1% to 2%. With hydro & wind fuel , the percentage of using them occupied nearly a half in Sweden, next it is Italy about 20% .Germany, Britain, and Beligum used them with low rate, 6%,2% and 2% respectively. Most of countries usually use other energy sources. The percentage of using other fuels fluctuated around 40% in Britain, Italy, and Sweden and that accounted for 13 % and 26% respectively in Germany and Beligum.
Overall, the resources are faced the risk of depletion nowadays, so countries are gradually finding and using clean energy sources to replace. Using of different fuel types are promoted in countries from 2001 to date.