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  1. huyenphamlaw

    huyenphamlaw Thành viên mới

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    Em Vang E48 nộp bài writing. chị xem rùi sửa giúp em nha!

    The table presents information about the percentage use of four different fuel types containing: nuclear, coal and lignite, petroleum products, hydro and wind to generate electricity in five European countries: Germany, Britain, Italy, Sweden, Belgium in 2001.

    There are basic differences in the use of fuel to generate electricity among five European countries. In Germany and Britain, the type of fuel used mostly is coal and lignite. The percentage use of this fuel in Germany is 50% and in Britain is 34%. Meanwhile, nuclear is the fuel used mostly in Sweden and Belgium. The percentage of this fuel in Sweden and Belgium is 45% and 58%, respectively. In contrast, Italy mainly uses petroleum products and hydro and wind to generate electricity. The total of both fuels in Italy comprises 47% ( petroleum products is 27% and hydro or wind is 20%).

    In each country, the percentage use of four fuel types to generate electricity is very different. For example in Germany, the percentage use of coal and lignite is 50% while the percentage use of petroleum products is only 1% or in Italy, the total percentage use of petroleum products and hydro or wind is 47% whereas it is the only country not using nuclear to generate electricity.

    In conclusion, there are many different fuel types which European countries can use to generate electricity and using of fuel types to generate electricity in European countries is very different.
  2. thuhien2606

    thuhien2606 Thành viên mới

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    Em : Hiền - E48 nộp bài WRITING

    The above mentioned table describes the overall picture about the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five European countries in 2001. At the first glance, it is notable that the majority of petroleum products of four countries is very low ,namely 1% and 2%, but in Italy is 27%. In contrast to the type of first fuel,the percentage use of nuclear is relatively stable, the highest is 58% in Belgium, other countries belows 50%, special in Italy this fuel type is not used. Turning to Coal and lignite, the rate in five countries under 50%, particularly in Germany is 50% and at least is 1% in Sweden. Finally, the percentage use of Hydro and wind in Sweden the highest is 40% and the second highest is 20% in Italy and the remaining coutries from 2% to 6%.
    This ends my report.
  3. huyenphamlaw

    huyenphamlaw Thành viên mới

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    Chị Thùy ah, em Minh Huyền E48 nộp bài writing task 1 ạ.
    Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt; mso-para-margin-top:0cm; mso-para-margin-right:0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom:10.0pt; mso-para-margin-left:0cm; line-height:115%; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:11.0pt; font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;} The table illustrates the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five European countries in 2001.
    It can be seen that using of fuel types to produce electricity in Germany, Britain, Italy, Sweden and Belgium has a lot of basic differences. In fact, Belgium, Germany and Britain mainly use nuclear and coal or lignite to generate electricity. Actually, the percentage of using nuclear in Belgium, Germany and Britain is 58%, 29%, 23% and using coal and lignite is 12%, 50%, 34% respectively. Meanwhile, Italy takes advantage of petroleum products and hydro or wind to produce electricity. Indeed, in Italy, using petroleum products accounts for 27% and using hydro and wind comprises 20% whereas the percentage of using nuclear is 0%. Besides, Sweden mostly uses hydro and wind and nuclear to generate electricity (hydro or wind is 49% and nuclear is 45%).
    On the other hand, using fuel types for producing electricity in each country is quite different. For instance, in Germany, the percentage of using coal and lignite is 50% but that of using petroleum products is only 1%. In Belgium, the percentage of using nuclear is 58% meanwhile the percentage use of petroleum products and hydro or wind is the same at 2%.
    Overall, based on the difference in natural con***ions as well as technology qualifications, each country will have a particular proportion in applying fuel types to produce electricity.

  4. TrongE48

    TrongE48 Thành viên quen thuộc

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    Chị ơi, cho em gửi bổ sung bài Speaking (bài mà hết hạn nộp hôm 04.09 ấy ạ):

    http://www.mediafire.com/?16u7ubdu4mytqr6




    1. What changes could happen to the design of the car in the future? Which change will be positive and which will be negative?
    Well, from my own perspective, I believe that cars will have many changes when we look into the vista of the future. They would be flown with foldable wings and moved faster from one city to another using high speed engine. Moreover, it would drive itself and we just relax when we seat in. I suppose that, changes which make we will not care about how to drive can be really endanger in case of they have problems. The changes of appearance and pace can make it better.


    2. Compare the way the average house looks now in your country to how it will look in 10 years’ time. Which one would you prefer to live it and why?
    Alright, in general I would say that, it is difficult for me to answer this question. I suppose that, with the development of the society, new average future house will look magnificent than now. They will be decorated with a larger space as well as more friendly. Absolutely, I prefer living in future house to present one because I will enjoy facilities which provide.


    3. Do you think governments should spend more money researching alternative form of energy? What might be their reasons for choosing not to do this?
    Of course, that’s a great idea. Nowadays, we are depended too much on fossil fuel and there is no guarantee that it will be endless. If we do not prepare for this fact, the worst thing will happen. You know, no energy, no life. Authorities might not research alternative form of energy because of the prevention of the fossil fuel providers. When we have other choice to buy fuel for our engines, it means that their revenue will reduce in long-term. Therefore, I strongly believe that governments must be independent to choose what they should do.
  5. thuy_ed

    thuy_ed Thành viên rất tích cực

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    Buổi đầu là học lý thuyết mà, em sẽ nghe giới thiệu các parts trong speaking module, cách trả lời, những điều cần lưu ý, samples ... nên phải chép nữa >:) hum qua chị lọ mọ muộn quá, sáng nay lại đi muộn :((:((:(( 7h25' mới bình minh, hic hic
  6. thuy_ed

    thuy_ed Thành viên rất tích cực

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  7. bisieunhan90

    bisieunhan90 Thành viên mới

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    E đang ngồi gặm bài E53 cho chủ nhật đây:((, ôi trình độ "nông rân" mà cứ thích học cùng lớp "sành điệu" là khổ lắm c ạh
  8. nguyentuanthanh_ielts48

    nguyentuanthanh_ielts48 Thành viên mới

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    em thành e48 gửi bài writing task1 :
    Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-priority:99; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin-top:0in; mso-para-margin-right:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:10.0pt; mso-para-margin-left:0in; line-height:115%; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:11.0pt; font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;} The table below presents information about the percentage use of four different fuel types which is used to generate electricity in five European nations in 2001. They are nuclear, coal and lignite, petroleum products, hydro and wind and others.
    Five European nations are: Germany, Italy, Belgium, Sweden and Britain. Firstly, the percentage use of nuclear, the rate of using nuclear is highest in Belgium with 58%.Meanwhile, the figures in other countries such as: Sweden, Germany, Britain, and Italy respectively 45, 29, 23 and 0%.
    The next, the table show the information about petroleum products, the proportion of using this sources in Italy is 27%, it is a main types of fuel to generate in Italy, while other countries only produces 2 % or less. In the next column, Hydro and wind, the figures show that Sweden has the top position on this fuel types, the number is 49%.In constrast, this number of using this course in Belgium and Britain is only 2%.
    Lastly, Germany is the leader in the use of coal and lignite to generate electricity, with 50%. Britain is the second with 34%.
    *****m up, in 5 European countries, there are significantly differences in the use fuel types to generate electricity, it depend on con***ion of each country.
  9. cloudy2412

    cloudy2412 Thành viên mới

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    Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 /* Style Definitions */ table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-name:"Table Normal"; mso-tstyle-rowband-size:0; mso-tstyle-colband-size:0; mso-style-noshow:yes; mso-style-parent:""; mso-padding-alt:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt; mso-para-margin:0in; mso-para-margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:#0400; mso-fareast-language:#0400; mso-bidi-language:#0400;} Chị ơi, em Vân E48 ạ. Em gửi lại bài speaking lần trước mà chị bảo là ko down đc về ấy ạ. Chị có thời gian thì chữa dùm e với ạ. Em cám ơn chị nhìu nhìu :P


    http://www.mediafire.com/?oth242xr9a0zmi3


    http://www.mediafire.com/?40atvp7dfb4b8xu
  10. cayngodong2977

    cayngodong2977 Thành viên mới

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    Hờ hờ cuộc đời chán quá :((
    Mất cả đêm làm văn...
    Hôm sau nộp bài được 5 điểm ="= tại saoooo lại thế huhu biết thế làm Anh còn hơn ý
    Cháu đã phụ lòng bác, bác Thuỳ ạ T.T biết thế cháu làm bài tập Anh đã không bị mất 30 nghìn
    Giờ vừa mất 30 nghìn, vừa bị điểm 5 hahaha =.=
    DIE †

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