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The graph compares the people using two new music webpage in fifteen days period of time namely music choice and pop parade. At the first glance, it can be clearly seen that at the pop parade’s site it almost has more visits than at music choice’s site.
Starting with the pop parade website, on the first day, it’s about 120.000 people visit on this website and after 2 days it’s still remained flat. In contrary to music choice website, it’s a fluctuated trend. It’s about 40.000 visitors on the first day but decrease to half on second day then increase to 60.000 visitors on third day.
On the next 6 days, there is a significant drop on both music lines on the Internet. The amount of visitors fall down to the lowest point on 7th day with music choice webpage is 20.000 while on the pop parade webpage it is approximately 30.000.
After 9th day, both music choice site and pop parade site have the fluctuated trend. On pop parade site, from 9th day to 11th day it’s a drastic increase but noticeable decrease on 12th and 13th day then recovers and reaches the peak at last day. Similarly, on music choice site, it’s nearly flat from day 9 to day 11 then rise strongly to reach the peak on 11th day with 150.000 visitors. After that, generally, it’s a slight decline till the last day.
This ends my report here.

Em Thùy Linh E53 gửi bài Writing ạ [r32)]

Đề bài 1: The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph compares the number of people accessing to the new Music site and Pop site in the first 15 days on the Internet. In can be clearly seen that the Pop Parade had been highly appreciated over the Music Choise even there was a fluctuation in both lines. In the first day of the survey, there was a significant figure of the people visiting the Pop Site compared to the other. There was about 120.000 Pop Site visiters while Music Site has only 40.000. A day after, the number of both sites has slightly been reduced. However with unknown reason, there was a jumb from 20.000 to 60.000 visiters to Music Site in the third day before a stably fluctuation until the day of 11th. In contrast, from the day of 3nd to 7th, there was a notice dive of people visiting Pop Site from 120.000 to the figure of only 32.000. After a slight increase, there was a dramatically soar to 150.000 Pop site visiters while there was no remarkable changing number in the other site. However, Music Site had a dramatically skyrocket of accessing people in 3 days after. It was reached the peak at 125.000 visiters while there was a erratical rise and fall of number in Pop site. In the last 15th day, Pop Site had been reaching the peak with the figure of 170.000 compared to 75.000 Music site visiters.
This end my report here.

Em gửi bài Speaking ạ
PART 1
1, Do you work or are you a student?
(Yeap) Well to be honest, after studying Mathematic and Computing in the Hanoi University of Science, I’m a Sale manager at an IT company located in Hanoi at present.

2, Why did you choose that course or job?
Well, you might not be aware that in fact, my father has chosen it for me. Well, when I was a small child, I used to draw anytime. Frankly, all of my paintings were related to fashion. So you know, my dream at that time was being a famous fashion designer. However, my father did not listen to my career choice. He said that IT would bring me a brighter career in the future. Finally, I agreed with him. Yeap, so you know, I’m working in IT field right now.

3. What is the most difficult thing about your study or job?
Well as you can probably guess, doing business in IT recently has faced to many difficulties. Yeap, my personal sale target every year is about 2 millions dollars while all banks in Vietnam are minimizing their IT expenses. Therefore, there are many un-predicted difficulties that I can not describe in detail. However, the most difficult thing in my Sale position is how to persuate my customer to sign in contracts, as much as possible.

PART 2
1, Describe your dream job
Well to be honest, if I had a chance to change my job or my career, I would like to be a fashion designer. That position used to be my dream job when I was a little girl. (Yeap), let’s imagine what I would do. In spite of the fact that I have to go to work at 8AM in the morning, if I was a fashion designer, I would get up late. Yeap, maybe 9.AM is oke. After having breakfast, I just went to my fashion store to complete all my designs. Well, there I could surf Internet to see all up-to-date fashion trends in the world or I could adjust some of my draft designs. Or I could meet some of my customers, listen to their requirements or complete their orders. In the evening, I could take part in some fashion show in Hanoi or I could travel to HCM city to meet beautiful models or my friends working in fashion field. My earning would be treble with a lot of enjoyable stories. That’s my childhood dream job.

PART 3
1, Do you think science subject are more useful than art subject??
Well obviously, I suppose that each subject has each own supporting effects depending on different jobs. If you would like to be a scientist in the future, you would prefer science subject to art subject. It will be in contrast if you are working in art environment. However, I would say the most fundamental would be that science subject in general would bring you basic knowledge while art subject would give your life more affections.

2. Are students mature enough to choose what to study themselves or should their parent decide for them?
Well in my opinion, I could say that students in general have enough ages to decide what they could study or learn after listening to their parents’ . There are many bad circumstances show the fact that many parents have decided to choose career target for their sons or daughters without any discussion. Well you know, there are a big gap between two generation. So, students must have their own idea and discuss with their parents. Finally, students would choose their own future.

3. In your country, does having a university education help you into a better career?
Well, I could say that, from all basic knowledge I can get from the Unisversity, It can only bring me a career. However, if I would like to have a better career, I think it depends on my exerting all my strength. In order to gain a high level in the career, we should try our best to improve ourself to get more expericences in working. So, a University education does not bring me a better career. It depends on my own.

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Part 2: Describe an interesting competition or sporting event you have witnessed.
I would like to tell you about an absorbing basketball game that I have had seen when I was a school girl. The teams were my Nguyen Du high school team and Quang Trung team. The game held in a small stadium. It was quite short and only had 2 halves. I could remember that the Nguyen Du team had play appealing obviously.
All the members seemed to be full of energy and enthusiastic. During the game, the atmosphere in the stadium was so exciting. Everyone was shouting, whistling, cheering and just making noise. I was cheering for my high school team and my friends were whistling so loudly so that people started looking at us. I felt embarrassed as well as find it’s really interesting. At the end of the game, my school team had win and we made up our mind that we should have a small party. We stopped at snack shop and got some drinks and a snack. I guess that I will ever forget that game.

Part 3:
1/ What are the best way to keep fit?
From my own perspective, there is a range of ways to keep fit. The first thing I should mention is that having a healthy life style is the most important key. I mean, doing exercise everyday, having a positive attitude and a healthy diet can lead you to be good at physical and spiritual.
2/ Do you think the most people consider exercise a chore or do they find it fun?
In fact, in all honesty. I think I would have to say that it really depends on
Individual’s aim. As a matter of fact, some people regard it as an activity in order to reduce strain or prevent illness. However in my point of view, as a chore or a fun, doing exercise everyday is such a good activity for everyone.
3/ What is the most popular form of exercise in your country?
Well as you can probably guess nowadays there is variety of forms of exercise, but in my point of view, playing sport such as football, volleyball, aerobic... is the most popular form. As well as, I think it’s really suitable and entertainment for almost of people.
HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
1/ Do you think people in your country are less healthy than they used to be?
From my own perspective, here in Viet Nam, people are less healthy than they used to be. With the modern technology, people tend not to do manual activities than in the past. As well as this, pollution, disaster and quality of food are the most concerns for healthy of people. Even though people now have a good attitude, they find it’s essential for doing gym or exercise.
2/ How can we encourage people to stay healthy?
Well, there are a number of actions that should be taken. In my view, I think advertisements are some of biggest ways people are influenced either for or against something. The appealing ads on TV or maybe even hold a public competition where the winners get a monetary prize, that would work, for me at least.
3/ Should government intervene to force people to be healthier?
Sure, obviously, in order to have next generations who will be healthier and stronger, government should improve their attitude about a healthy lifestyle and encourage them to do more exercise. In ad***ion to this I can also add that, this also is a right way to protect a country and people.

chị ơi, bài của Huệ - E53, đề 1 ạ

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There was a constant in the visits of Pop Parade, approximately 120,000 in the first three days. Its figures exponentially collapsed in the next four days and reached to bottom at the seventh day, by 30,000. After slightly recovering from the seventh to ninth day, the Pop Parade’s visitors soared dramatically to the eleventh day. Although there was an erratic fall the in the next two days, the number of visits reached a peak of 160,000 in the last day of period. In contrast, the visits of Music Choice were only 40,000 at the beginning of period. It markedly varied in the first four days and be gradually fitful to the eleventh, then shoot up and exceed to the visits of Pop Parade at the twelfth. However, it dropped sharply to the vicinity of 70,000 at the finishing of survey period.

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chị ơi, em là Lê Quang Hưng - E53
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The line graph reveals that there is a number of differences between the people using the subway system in London perday from 6.00am to 22.00pm. It can be clearly that this trend fluctuates dramatically during this time.
Between 6.00am to 8.00am, there was a sharp recovery in the figure of passengers and in fact, reached a peak of 400 people at 8.00am. Since then, these figures dropped significantly to 180 people in the two next hours. Throughout 10.00am to 14.00pm, the slight increase was maintained. In the two following hours, the number of people collapsed markedly to their lowest of 100 people at 16.00pm. It started to steadily shoot up from 16.00 pm to 18.00pm and reached another peak of approximately 390 people, after that declined gradually to 130 people at 20.00pm. From 20.00pm to 22.00pm, the number of passengers using Underground station in London rised and falled erratically around 150people.
This ends my report here.
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còn đây là bài của bạn Nguyễn Hồng Hạnh - E53, chị ạ

The line graph illustrates the differences about the number of people using the London subway per day between 6.00am to 22.00pm. It can be clearly that this trend rises and falls erratically during this time.
According to the information shown in the graph, the passenger figures were just over 100 people reported at 6.00am. Thereafter, in the first two hours, this figures shot up dramatically and reached a peak of 400 people at 8.00am. However, there was a significant decline in the number of people between 8.00am and 10.00am. During the four next hours, the number of passengers increased slowly, before slumping rapidly and sinking to a low of 100 people at 16.00pm. It then leaped steadily for 2 hours buts dropped again from 18.00 pm to 20.00pm. At the end of each day, the passengers using Underground station remained at the same level of approxomately 150 people.
This ends my report here.