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Chị ơi, cho em nộp bài writting task 1-1

Student’s name: Dao Thanh Tra
Class: E61
Writing task 1 ( group 1)
The graph illustrates the trend in the number of accesses to two new music on the website, divided into music choice and pop parade. In general, the number of music choice is more developing than pop parade, and trend in music choice seems to fluctuate.
At the beginning, while the number of music choice looks at quite high, there isn’t special change in pop parade. But at the next day, when the number of music choice varied changeable, the number of pop parade has upward trend.
During the first time, we can see from the graph, the biggest difference between the two type of music at the beginning day, where the number of music choice reached to 120 000s and pop parade just 40 000s. Although the number of parade increase suddenly at next day and get to high result is about 120 000s, it’s lower than music choice, because the number of music choice is 170 000s. However, accesses to pop parade position grew regularly.
In conclusion, the graph clearly shows that music choice position do not have the same access as pop parade to certain number of visits.

Em My lớp E59 nộp bài Writing task 2 (topic 2) ạ^^
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Actually, the national media will be affected if international media dominates the global audience.It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations so inevitably it can attract a large number of people all over the world.As a result, people do not take notice of local media any more.For example, in Vietnam,almost people will choose a Western blockbuster rather than a Vietnamese film. In ad***ion to that, almost on-air TV shows in my country are licensed from other countries to get people attention and enhance profit. By doing that, they directly reduce the variety of local programmes broadcasted in conjunction with placing national media companies at risk.

Moreover, the tra***ional can be changed negatively due to the popularity of international media.Nowadays, we can easily see young people eating fastfood in KFC, drinking Coca-cola or dressing like Lady Gaga, regardless of which country they are.Ridiculously, it can be seen that people are more and more alike! All these transformations in life are the result of the audience's exposure to Hollywood movies, TV shows and sports reports. The loss of media diversity will lead to degradation of culture and to a minimisation of cultural diversity. It is a worrying trend, as people need cultural diversity to preserve and pass on their valuable heritage to future generations.

To put it in a nutshell, I would concede that international media is exporting Western culture worldwide and putting many indigenous cultures at the risk of extinction.Therefore, people must be consious to realize all the negative effects of this and conserve their own tra***ional culture.

em quang anh -e59 nộp bài WT2 (topic 6)
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To begin with , admittedly thanks global language , English is a facilitator of cross-cultural communication between people with different cultural backgrounds . People can exchange knowledge and information needed in many fields such as science, international news, technology … It makes people become more complete in particular and society more rapid development in general . On the meeting between the countries , English, as a working language, increase efficiency and avoid misunderstandings .
Another reason to add to this fact , a number of English words have been borrowed from many other languages, and many English words have been adopted by many languages and are used as part of their own languages. Therefore, many people in different countries already know some of the English. So, it could be the easiest language to learn.
However , advocates of the opposing idea believe that local languages would die out . It led to the downward of the culture because the language and culture have an intimate relationship . This argument may seem quite reasonable on the surface but from my own respective , this practice when we recognize English as a global language , we can rely on its to develop native languages more extensive .
In ad***ion , the development of English is a positive global trend . It connects people and enables them to exchange ideas . Its demand will increase more and more in the future.[FONT=&quot][/FONT]

em Hiếu lớp E61 nộp bài writting task 1

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Em Quân lớp E61 nộp bài Writting task 1:

The graph shows the growth rate in wages of some country over the ten years period from 1993 to 2003. As we can see from the graph from 1993 to 2003, the percent growth in wage always fluctuated. The highest growth rate is in 1998 at 6 percent and the lowest growth rate is in 2003 at 1 percent. 1994 increased 2 percent compared with 1993, 1998 also increased at the same rate compared with 1997 as in 1994 compared with 1993. After 1998 is a continuous decline, from 6 percent in 1998 to 1 percent in 2003, decreased steadily was in 1999, down 3 percent from the previous year. From 2000 to 2002, each year decreased 1 percent from 3 percent in 2000 to 1 percent in 2002, but after 2002 it increased again at 1 percent up to 2 percent in 2003. In general, from 1993 to 2003 had many fluctuated but in 2003 returned to the similar levels in 1993 at 2%. fficeffice" /><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com

Em Hoài Anh lớp E61 nộp bài writing task 1 ạ (group 3)

The line chart above describes the quantity of people using the subway at London Underground Station over the course of a day. As can be seen, the graph indicates a wildly variation in the number from 6 am to 10 pm.

More specifically, starting at 100 units, the number of passengers witnesses a significant growth, reaching a peak of 400 units at 8 am. After that, this figure declines sharply to just over 175 at 10 am. In the remaining of the morning, the passenger number goes up gradually, standing at approximately 275 at noon.

In the afternoon, after rising slightly, the quantity of individuals using the subway at London Underground Station drops suddenly, reaching a bottom of just under 100 at 4 pm. There is then a rapid jump to nearly 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, the number goes down steeply, with only a slight increase again at 8 pm, tailing off at 9 pm.

Given this, it may be concluded that overall, the amount of London Underground Station passengers has fluctuated dramatically. The station is most crowed in the early morning and the early evening periods.

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The graph illustrates the growth of wage of Somecountry between 1993 and 2003. As an overall trend, it is clearly that the growth rate fluctuated during ten years and plummeted to 1 percent in the end of period.
At the beginning, the speed climbed gradually from 2 percent to 4 percent and slumped slightly to under 3 percent in the first stage. It was record that that number leaped to 6 percent by 1998, the maximum of this period and then plunged back to 3 percent by 1999. From 1999 to 2000, there was a slight growth and the intensity was just as a half as in the last year. By the contrast, the graph also record the decline over the next years. At this point, the minimum is 1percent by 2002, equals one sixth than maximum and there was a slow growth in 2003.
On the whole, the graph reveals information about the change of salary during ten years, that number changed unsteadily.

Hi chị, em Phương Hồng lớp E61 nộp bài Writing Task 1 - Group 1 chị nhé:

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The chart illustrates data on accesses to two new music sites on the web in 15 days.

It can be seen from the graph that the overall trend shows fluctuation with slight increase towards the end of the period. On the first day, the quantity of people visited Pop Parade was 120 thousand, which was triple that of Music Choice. The number of visits to Pop Parade decreased smoothly on the next day, and dropped dramatically on 5th day, which was almost half of the first day, slightly over 60 thousand. According to the chart, the people visited Music Choice halved in quantity on 2th day and was triple on the next day, 60 thousand. There was a slight variation in the number of visits to two new music sites from 5th day to 9th day.

From the 9th day onwards, there were some significant changes in the accesses to two new music sites. The amount of people visited Pop Parade climbed sharply to 150 thousand on 11th day, whereas the accesses to Music Choice went down slowly, slightly over 20 thousand. On the next day, there was a marked reduction in the number of visits to Pop Parade, around 80 thousand, while there were 120 thousand people visited Music Choice, 6 times larger than that of the previous day. On 15th day, the amount of visits to Pop Parade reached a high point at 170 thousand, 2,5 times larger than that of Mucsic Choice, slightly over over 70 thousand.

In summary, there was a significant fluctuation in the amount of visits to two new music sites, but the overall trend was upbeat. ​

Mai Phuong - E61 - Writing Task 1 - Group 2


The graph presents information about the changes on wages of some countries over a ten-year period.

According to the graph, the wage reached the highest percent growth at 6% in 1998. The 2nd and 3rd rank was 1994 with 4% and 2000 with 3%. 2002 had the lowest percentage with 1% of growth rate in wages for a period of ten years. 1993 peaked 2% to become the 2nd lowest percent growth and after ten years, it happened in 2003 similarly.

Regarding the speed of jumping, the growth rate in wages skyrocketed 3% from 1996 to 1998, treble the last of the period. However, after reaching the highest growth, during the period 1994 to 1995, the growth rate plummeted 3% dramatically, double the previous period. In contrast, while it picked up slightly from 1999 to 2000, the growth rate rose and fell erratically from 1995 to 1996.

In conclusion, because it climbed for an average of one to two years and then slump markedly so the growth rate is forecasted that it will continue like that for following periods.

Em Việt lớp E61 nộp bài writing task 1 nhé:
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The time of day which people use underground railway most is in the morning. There is increase rapidily between 6am to 8am, with 400 people using the station at about 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 3 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.
In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a quick rise to a peak of more than 350 at 6pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.
In conclusion, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning and early evening periods.[/FONT]