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[FONT=&quot]Em Việt Anh lớp E61 gửi bài writing task 1, nhóm 1.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]The graph shows the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. According to the graph, we can see that the visits to Music Choice is around 30 each day in the first 11 days while the number of visits to Pop Parade jumps dramatically from 120 to 40 from day 1 to day 9. Surprisingly from day 9, the number of visits to Pop Parade is going up nearly 400% to reach 140 in day 11 and decrease to 80 in day 13 before climbing back again to more than 160 in day 15. Having the same upwardtrend, the number of visit to Music Choice rise rapidly from 22 in day 11 to 120 in day 12. But after the 2 days going sideways (from day 12 to day 14), the number of visit to Music Choice falls significantly to 73 in day 15. On the whole, we can recognize a positive correlation between the number of visits to Music Choice and to Pop Parade.[/FONT]

Em Nam E61 gửi writing 1, nhóm 3

The graph shows the number of passengers using London Underground station in a day. In general, the line chart shows some sharp fluctuations in the quantity of passengers from 6:00 to 22:00.
In the first two hours, the number of passenger increase rapidly at a rate of 400 percent and reach the peak of 400 units at 8:00. After that, the quantity of passengers plummeted dramatically, hitting a low of 175 at 10:00. From 10:00 to 14:00, the figure made a steady recovery, jumping to 300. Over the next four-hour period, the quantity of people fell to a trough of just under 100 units and subsequently bounced back erratically to 380 at 18:00.Suddenly, the number of individuals using subway station plunged significantly, hitting a low of 125 units at 20:00 then slightly shot up again to 160 and decrease gradually in the last hour.
Overall, the number of underground station passengers has considerably fluctuated.
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em Vân E59 nộp bài writing task 2 ạ:


Everything has a good side and a bad side, and interaction between countries, in both economic and cultural aspects is no exception. There is a widespread worry that nowadays, this will lead to a phenomenon cultural assimilation. This issue should be considered and analyzed from multiple perspectives.
According to some people, a closer relationship between countries yields lots of benefit of business. Perhaps this is because of the simple fact that business is becoming increasingly international and goods are produced in one country but sold in many others. Take, for instance, McDonal, a multi-national company does their business around the world. In ad***ion, we can not forget a universal truth that connection between countries has been promoted cultural exchange. Clearly, most of tourists go abroad because of the learned knowledge. In fact, they hope that they can learn variety cultures and acquire cultural quintessence like Beijing opera in China, Japanese tea culture and Thai temples, etc.
On the other hand, there are also some people take the view that exotic cultures cause many effects in countries. It might also be noted that a country’s indentify is significantly change. For example, Eastern culture is a lot of affected by Western culture so Eastern adolescent life’s style is increasingly freedom, even it is not complex with confidential life’s style of Eastern people. This also occurs in the rest of the world.
From my own perspective, many people are very worry about losing a country’s identify in their country which is not unfounded. Obviously, culture is a sacred spiritual food of each country and it should be preserved and kept.
As outline above, a part of increased interaction culture between countries is also somewhat change a country’s indentify.

writing task 2-2: em Kim Dan e59
topic: there is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture contact between countries on a country’s identity. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the global trend has tended countries to connection each other over the world. That leads to effects on identity of a country. There are appreciations that those effects are serious one and may mislay value of identities. That should be seen at several aspects.
The open-door policy tends to global trend. This policy allows citizen of its country to connect with others over the world through business, travel, study abroad, and so on. In one way or another, culture of these countries is affected. Culture is a precious gift created by features of its own country. That distinguishes a country from others deeply. Before travelling to another country, foreigner must find out about indigenous culture first to know new behavior, new lifestyle and completely new culture and may learn them. Culture illustrates a country’s image. Hence, the government and citizen have to pay more attention to protect and preserve their cultural identities. These create beautiful imagines for this country in foreigners’ eyes so they bring many benefits from business and tourism. In sum, everyone always wants to conserver and bring into play their culture to give precious value for others and distinguish from other country’s identity.
On the other hand, life is more and more modern and complex, some features made culture might be eclipsed or even remove such as tra***ion, custom…because they’ve been regarded as stuffy things. People want to learn new things as different culture. In some countries, the locals have become accustomed to exotic cultures through media or direct business. Those may be bad effects because those contrast and against with their cultural identity such as ***, violent. Bad cultures remise and permeate to the locals can take away and forget their country’ identity. However, those are only appeared by some people limited awareness.
Indeed, increased connection between countries in the domains of business and culture can bring advantage and disadvantage. In my point of view, that may be lead to be more advantage because of majority’s awareness about conserving country’s identity.

[FONT=&quot]Em Ngân nộp bài, topic 1:
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[FONT=&quot]Traveling from one country to another has become an inevitable trend of modern world. This tendency is growing dramatically thus leads to two opposing controversial issues. Some pessimistic people assumed that as a result there will be a dispute between the indigenous people and the foreign tourists, while the other supposed that it will be an opportunity for all of us to enhance our knowledge about different cultures in different countries. However it can be seen clearly that traveling still brings benefits through decades instead of creating the conflict like the pessimistic said.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]The first reason offered is that the local people at the destinations has few reasons to deny revenues from tourism. A gorgeous place with unique culture can attractive more tourists and investors both inside and outside the country. Therefore, a hundred of people will take advantage of it as there are more jobs to apply and infrustructure in that place has been improved. Nevertheless, local government and resident should demonstrate goodwill towards tourists to gain those benefits. If this happens, there will be no hostility between them any more.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Eventhough it is hard to completely avoid the discrepancy when there is an interaction between two religion, the residents should realize that once the tourists compassionate and sympathize with the habits and customs of local culture, they will make an effort to preserve instead of destroying it. Travelling, therefore, is a bridge to fill the gap between the problems of race and religion if it follows the right way. Tourists should respect local people and vice versa. Some tensions is maybe accidental and misunderstanding. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Due to the reasons mentioned above, there can be no doubt that tension may occur if there is no cooperation between two countries. Mutual understanding between different cultures, therefore, is essential for developing international tourism.[/FONT]

Em Thùy Linh E59 nộp bài ạ!

One of the most considerable issues today relates to a connection between countries, in both economic and cultural aspects. It goes without saying that this connection has become more intimate day by day. There are some people who presume that this trend put a country’s identity into hazardous situation. In this essay I am going to clarify this idea from multiple perspectives.
On one side of the argument there are some people who argue that it is necessary to carry out developing a closer international relationship and preserving national culture simultaneously. An indigenous culture will bring many benefits to each country. The main reason for believing this is that people can distinguish your country from others. It is also possible to say that an indigenous culture has appealed to a large of number of foreign visitors and yielding high income. Let me take Thai people for example, they put more attention to prevent a culture collapse and preserve their national name called Golden Temple Country. So they always available on the most popular destination for most tourists travelling abroad for learning different cultures and sampling different ways of life.
On the other side of coin, this issue is capable of making the opposing case, even some components of a culture might die out over time. While developing economic and expanding relationship with other country, people have a massive exposure to new cultures. In a negative way, they are gradually assimilated into those new cultures. A particularly good example here is the change about conception of *** in my country, an Orient country. Most Viet Nam people felt embarrassed to talk openly about it. Over time the invasion of Western culture has permeated into the Chinese lifestyle, and the Chinese people have broken many of their time-honoured tra***ions.
As we have seen, it is not easy to find a definite answer to this question. Increased interaction between countries in the domains of business and culture can either strengthen or undermine the identities of countries involved.

[FONT=&quot]Em Đào Tuấn - E61 gửi chị bài writing task 1, nhóm 1.[/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]The line graph compared of the variation trends between two new sites on the Internet: Music Choice and Pop Parade during 15 days. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It can be clearly seen that the general features leaped and dipped erratically amongst them from day 1 to day 15. In this period, the access to Pop Parade site started at 120000 then jumped up to 130000 in day 11 after bottoming out in four days ago. Surprisingly, there was a sharp reduction in day 12 and 13 before reaching a peak at 170000 in the last day. Besides, with regard to the amount of visits to Music Choice site, there was a slight fluctuation from day 1 to day 11 after skyrocketing significantly to peak a high point at over 120000 in day 14 and finally reached a low point at near 80000.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]From the graph, it may be concluded that the changes of joining two new music sites on the Web have considerably fluctuated for a period of 15 days.[/FONT]

em Diệu Linh E59 nộp bài ạ

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At first ,it is important to note that contrary to popular belief, imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties in the food market, leading to the drop in the price of imports.. The supply of products in the market is less likely to be influenced by seasonal factors, and an adequate intake of nutrition is guaranteed for the general population throughout the year, so we can taste a variety of fruit and vegetables from all part of the worlds. Like for instance, about ten years ago , we hardly say kiwi fruit which is from New Zealand, but now it has a place on every fruit stand.

Another fact to note is that many people get employment in this field. Small farmers have a chance to expand globally and it increases the overalleconomy of the country. Finally, it helps in developing good relations between countries which helps in international cooperation and peace. If countries are dependent upon one another’s economic success then armed conflict would be less likely. By adopting an enlightened policy and promoting trade activities with other countries, a country can facilitate the exchange of goods, services and capital with the rest of the world and promote economic development.

On the negative side, some countries might become addicted to importing goods and overlook the possiblity of developing a self-contained economy. Scarcity of resource or lack of technology might disable a country from producing crops to feed its population, but it cannot be taken as an excuse for relying heavily on imports. Government funding in scientific research can make it possible to achieve a breakthrough and increase the yield, thereby resolving food supply crisis.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that countries are therefore advised to promote international trade and to develop their own industries simultaneously. Positive attitudes toward importing goods from other countries demonstrate a government's stanceon the international trade, although the government should also prevent itself from relying on imported goods.

Bảo Châu, E61 group 2 nộp bài ạ
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In 1993,growth in wages was 2%. After one years,it reached 4%, increase 2 times compared with the years before. Beyond there was a little reduction in the period 1995 to 1996, percent of grow rose rapidly from 1996. It made twice times as many as the percentage of the growth in wages in 1998 than 1996, peaked at 6%
However,for the next year,it went down steeply, just 3% in 1999.Afterwards, wages rise slightly in 2000 and than declined steady between the year 2001 and 2002. In 2002, it reached the lowest point at around 1%. Luckily,the growth rate recovered ,regain its previous level in 2003.
On this basic,it can be inferred that in the period of ten years,the percent of growth rate was unstable.

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Em Huyền Nhung E59
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There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here. The first reason why international travel would never be root of conflict that can be seen by every person is that both visitors and locals are nurtured by their strong sense of preserving the national identity. Perhaps this is because of the simple fact tourism makes local people more aware of the value of their cultures, languages and customs; and then, they cannot forget a universal truth that their tra***ions and customs are priceless and irreplaceable. Then, people always welcome warmly all kinds of cultures and appreciate each culture. Hence, respecting different cultures is to respect your cultures, and above all, the acceptance of mutual cultural background is a necessary for cooperation
There is a further more subtle point we must consider is that international travel stimulate the economic development. This is due to the fact that tourists mean a lot of new business opportunities in all over the world. In other word, businessmen invest money to build new recreational centers, hotels, movie theaters, shopping center, and then many local people get a job. In ad***ion, tra***ional products as well as well-known goods are sold not only in the domestic market but also in the oversea market. For example, Hadong silk is the preferred products in European market while Vietnamese people adore Louis Vuitton and Zara Fashion. Actually, using these products make people discovery the origin formation of them and understand different cultures.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that international travel is not the cause of conflict between different countries. Alternatively, this brings close relationship in many fields.